高三英语一轮复习读后续写练习+意外之下她成为赛道上的闪耀之星+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习意外之下，她成为赛道上的闪耀之星1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Thesunwassettingovertheschool’sfootballfield,castingagoldenglowonthelastdayoftheannualtrackandfieldmeet.ThestudentsofCrestwoodHighweregathered,theireyesfixedonthetrackwherethefinaleventofthedaywasabouttotakeplace—the4×400mrelayrace.Theracewashighlyanticipatedandtheschool’spridewasattachedtothisgame.Thecompetitionwasfierce,andtheracewasexpectedtobeanail-biter.Thefirstthreelegsoftherelaywereabouttobegin,andtheteam’sstarrunner,Jake,wassettoruntheanchorleg(最后一棒).However,asthestartinggunfired,agaspwentthroughthecrowd.Jakehadtrippedatthestartingline,fallinghardandscrapinghisknee.4续写原文CoachHarrisrushedtoJake’sside,hisfaceamaskofconcern.Jakewasinpain,buthiseyeswerefilledwithdetermination.“Icanstillrun,”heinsisted,butCoachHarrisknewbetter.Theracewastooimportanttoriskinjury.AsthefirstrunnerfromCrestwoodtookoff,CoachHarristurnedtotheteam.“WeneedasubstituteforJake,”heannounced.Theteammembersexchangedglances,butnoonesteppedforward.Theywereallawareofthepressureandtheresponsibilitythatcamewithrunningtheanchorleg.5续写原文Then,fromthesidelines,afigureemerged.ItwasEmily,theteam’sequipmentmanager,whohadneverbeenpartoftheraceteambefore.Shewasknownforherdedicationtotheteam,butherathleticabilitieswereuntested.“I’lldoit,”shesaid,hervoicesteadydespitetheuncertaintyinhereyes.CoachHarrislookedather,surprisedbutgrateful.“Areyousure?”heasked.Emilynodded,hergazeresolute.“I’vebeentrainingwithyouguyseveryday.IknowIcandothis.”6段首句Paragraph1：Asthethirdrunnerhandedoffthebaton(接力棒)toEmily,shewasinfourthplace,withasignificantgapbetweenherandtheleadingrunner.Paragraph2：Thecrowdwasonitsfeetnow,thecheeringdeafeningasEmilyinchedclosertotheleader.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了在克雷斯伍德高中年度田径运动会的最后一天，激动人心的4×400米接力赛即将开始。队中明星选手杰克原本负责跑最后一棒，然而发令枪响时，他在起跑线摔倒受伤。教练哈里斯急需找人替代杰克，此时，一直默默训练的设备管理员艾米丽挺身而出，主动要求参赛，尽管她从未正式参加过比赛。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:

Asthethirdrunnerhandedoffthebaton(接力棒)toEmily,shewasinfourthplace,withasignificantgapbetweenherandtheleadingrunner.当第三棒选手将接力棒交到艾米丽手中时，她处于第四名，与领先选手之间有着明显的差距。这差距让艾米丽心里“咯噔”一下，紧张感瞬间袭来，她不禁怀疑自己的决定是否正确。但就在这千钧一发之际，她听到了看台上同学们震耳欲聋的加油声。那声音仿佛有一种神奇的力量，瞬间点燃了她内心的斗志。艾米丽深吸一口气，目光紧紧锁定前方，脚下步伐加快，像离弦之箭般冲了出去。她拼尽全力，每一步都充满了力量，汗水顺着脸颊不停地滑落。尽管身体的疲惫感逐渐加剧，可她始终没有放慢速度，一心只想追赶上去。11续写思路分析Para2：Thecrowdwasonitsfeetnow,thecheeringdeafeningasEmilyinchedclosertotheleader.此刻，全场观众都站起身来，欢呼声震耳欲聋，艾米丽一点一点地逼近领先者。她的双腿仿佛不知疲倦，每一步都蕴含着无尽的能量。她心中只有一个信念：为了团队的荣誉，一定要赢！随着距离终点越来越近，竞争也愈发激烈。艾米丽和领先选手几乎并肩齐驱，难分高下。在最后的冲刺阶段，艾米丽爆发出了全部的潜力，她咬紧牙关，用尽全身力气向前冲。终于，她率先冲过了终点线。全场沸腾，队友们激动地跑过来，将她高高举起。艾米丽躺在队友们的臂弯里，眼中闪烁着激动的泪花，她知道，自己的勇敢尝试和不懈努力，为团队赢得了荣耀。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现AsthethirdrunnerhandedoffthebatontoEmily,shewasinfourthplace,withasignificantgapbetweenherandtheleadingrunner.ThisgapmadeEmily'sheartsink,andawaveofnervousnesswashedoverher.Shecouldn'thelpbutdoubtifherdecisiontostepinwasright.However,atthatverymoment,sheheardthedeafeningcheersfromthestands.Thesoundseemedtopossessamagicalpower,instantlyignitingthefightingspiritwithinher.Emilytookadeepbreath,hereyesfixedfirmlyonthefront,andthenshedashedforwardwithquickstepslikeanarrowleavingthebow.Shepushedherselftothelimit,everystepfullofpower,andsweatrolleddownhercheeksnon-stop.Althoughthephysicalexhaustionwasgraduallyincreasing,sheneversloweddown,determinedtocatchup.14范文呈现Thecrowdwasonitsfeetnow,thecheeringdeafeningasEmilyinchedclosertotheleader.Herlegsseemedtireless,eachstepcarryingboundlessenergy.Shehadonlyonebeliefinherheart:towinforthehonoroftheteam!Asthefinishlinedrewnearer,thecompetitionbecamefiercer.Emilyandtheleadingrunnerwerealmostneck-and-neck.Inthefinalsprint,Emilyunleashedallherpotential.Shegrittedherteethandpushedforwardwithallhermight.Finally,shecrossedthefinishlinefirst.Thewholestadiumeruptedintocheers,andherteammatesrushedoverexcitedly,liftingherhigh.Lyinginthearmsofherteammates,Emily'seyessparkledwithexcitedtears.Sheknewthatherbraveattemptandunremittingeffortshadbroughtglorytotheteam.15升级版范文呈现AsthethirdrunnerhandedoffthebatontoEmily,shefoundherselfinfourthplace,trailingsignificantlybehindtheleadingrunner.Thelargegapmomentarilysentajoltofdoubtthroughher,causinghertoquestionherimpulsivedecision.However,theresoundingcheersfromtheenthusiasticcrowd,whichseemedtoreverberateineverycornerofthestadium,immediatelyrekindledherdetermination.Withadeepbreath,Emilyfixedhergazeintentlyonthefinishlineandboltedforward,herstrideslongandpowerful.Ignoringtheburningsensationinhermusclesandthesweatblindinghervision,shepressedonwithunwaveringresolve,drivenbyanunyieldingdesiretoclosethegap.16升级版范文呈现Thecrowd,nowfullyontheirfeet,eruptedintoadeafeningroarasEmilygraduallyclosedinontheleader.Witheverystep,herdeterminationbecamemoreevident,herlegspropellingherforwardwithanalmostsupernat