应用文写作-外教老师请助我一臂之力推广家乡特产+讲义 高二上学期1月期末英语试题

应用文写作假定你是李华，想拍摄一段短视频，向外国朋友推销你的家乡特产。请给你的外教Tom写一封邮件，内容包括：1.请他帮忙修改英文解说词；2.请他帮忙为视频录音；3.表示感谢。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：拍摄视频shootavideo；特产specialproducts；解说词narration；录音recording注意：1.词数80词左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearTom,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua写作提纲第一段：开篇表明写信目的，简要提及自己正在拍摄关于家乡特产的短视频，引出下文请求。第二段：详细阐述两个请求，即请外教帮忙修改英文解说词和为视频录音，说明这两个帮助对视频的重要性。第三段：表达对Tom的感谢，期待他的回复。短语：shootashortvideo（拍摄一段短视频）promotespecialproducts（推销特产）Englishnarration（英文解说词）accurateandfluent（准确且流利）native-likepronunciation（地道的发音）makethevideomoreappealing（使视频更具吸引力）facedifficulties（面临困难）polishthenarration（润色解说词）uniquespecialproducts（独特的特产）culturalconnotations（文化内涵）语言积累I'mcurrentlyengagedin...我目前正忙于...I'mwritingtoaskafavorofyou.我写信是想请你帮个忙。Iwouldbeextremelygratefulifyoucould...如果你能...，我将不胜感激。Thenarrationplaysacrucialrolein...解说词在...中起着至关重要的作用。Yournative-likepronunciationwillsurelyaddcharmtothevideo.你地道的发音肯定会为视频增添魅力。I'vemadesomeeffortsinwritingthenarration,butI'mnotquiteconfidentaboutit.我在写解说词上花了些功夫，但我对此不太自信。I'mlookingforwardtoyourprofessionaladvice.我期待着您的专业建议。Itwouldbeagreathonorformeifyoucouldparticipateinthisproject.如果您能参与这个项目，对我来说将是莫大的荣幸。Yourhelpmeansagreatdealtome.您的帮助对我意义重大。Thankyouinadvanceforyourkindassistance.提前感谢您的热心帮助。写作示范一DearTom,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I'mLiHua,andI'mcurrentlyshootingashortvideotopromotethespecialproductsofmyhometowntoforeignfriends.I'mwritingtoaskforyourhelp.First,I'vewrittentheEnglishnarrationforthevideo,butI'mnotsureifit'saccurateandfluentenough.So,couldyoupleasesparesometimetoreviseit?Second,yourexcellentpronunciationiswell-known.Iwonderifyoucoulddotherecordingforthevideo.Thenative-likevoice-overwillsurelymakethevideomoreappealing.Yourhelpmeansagreatdealtome.Thankyouinadvance,andI'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,

LiHua写作示范二DearTom,Hello!I'mLiHua,andI'mreallyexcitedaboutaprojectI'mworkingon.I'mmakingashortvideotointroducetheuniquespecialproductsofmyhometowntotheworld.However,I'mfacingsomedifficulties.I'vetriedmybesttowritetheEnglishnarration,butI'mnotconfidentinmylanguageskills.Isincerelyhopeyoucanhelpmepolishit.Also,Iknowyouhaveawonderfulvoice.Itwouldbeagreathonorifyoucoulddotherecordingforthevideo.Yourvoicewilldefinitelymakethevideomoreattractive.Thankyousomuchforyourtime.I'meagerlywaitingforyourresponse.Yours,

LiHua写作示范三DearTom,I'mLiHua,andI'mwritingtoaskafavorofyou.I'mshootingashortvideotopromotethespecialproductsofmyhometown,whicharefulloflocalcharacteristicsandculturalconnotations.Thenarrationiscrucialforthevideo,butI'mnotsatisfiedwithmywriting.Iwouldbeextremelygratefulifyoucouldhelpmemodifyit.Besides,Ithinkyourexcellentpronunciationandintonationcanbringthevideotolife.So,couldyoudomethehonorofrecordingthevoice-overforit?Yourhelpwillmakethisvideomoresuccessful.Thankyouinadvance,andI'mlookingforwardtoyourkindreply.Yours,

LiHua参考答案DearTom,Eagertoshootavideotopromotemyhometown’sspecialproductstomyforeignfriends,I’mwritingtoconsultyoutoperfectit.Firstly,whatupsetsmeiswhethermynarrationisaccurate,vividandauthentic.Soitwillbeverykindofyoutocorrectthemistakesandpolishmynarration.What’smore,IhavenoconfidenceintheEnglishrecording,whichIthinkmayresultinmisunderstandingformyinaccuratepr