高三英语一轮复习读后续写练习：邻里间的情谊：从陪伴到+“祖孙”+情

高考英语读后续写语篇练习邻里间的情谊：从陪伴到“祖孙”情1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Mydadisatruckdriver,andwhenIwaslittle,hewasgonemostofthetime.Somymomwasalmostlikeasinglemother.MyparentsandIlivedinasmallhouseinBrighton,Colorado,wherewehadabigyard.Wemovedthereonmythirdbirthday.MyfirstmemorywasourneighborArlenehandingmestrawberriesfromhergardenthroughaholeinthechain-linkfence.Sheandherhusband,Bill,livednextdoor.Arlenespentalotoftimeworkinginthegarden,andIwasalwaystalkingtoherfromouryard.Iwasachatter-box.IthinkwhatdrewmetoArleneandRillisthattheynevergottiredoflisteningtomegab(闲聊).IalsothinkArlenesawalotofherselfinme-wewerebothlonely,anxious-andthatmaybewhyshealwaystookthetimetolistentome.Billtoo.Itwasawonderfulconnection.4续写原文Oneday,myparentsaskedBillandArlenewhetherthey’dwatchmewhiletheywentoutonadate.Thisworkedwellforeveryone,soitbecameasomewhatmonthlything.Infact,ArleneandBilldidn’thavekids.Theyhadaspareroomintheirhouse,whichbecame“myroom”.Ihadacabinetandboxesoftoysandbooksinthatroom.ArleneandIwoulddocraftstogether.Billtaughtmehowtorideabikeandlaterhowtodrivethelawntractorandeventuallyacar.Hewasalwaysfixingsomethinginhisgarage.Iwouldwanderovertotalktohim,andhewouldalwaysstopandlistentome,justlikeArlenedid.WhenIwasaboutfive,Ihadanidea.MyparentswerewatchingTVwhenIspititout:“WhatifIacceptedBillandArleneasmygrandparents?”MyparentssaidIcouldgooverandaskthembymyself.5段首句Paragraph1：Thenextday,Igotupearly,readytovisitBillandArlenefirst.Paragraph2：ThenIrealizedthatIshouldencouragemorestudentstotakepart.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8作者的父亲是卡车司机，常不在家，母亲独自承担照顾家庭的重任。他们搬到科罗拉多州布莱顿的小房子后，邻居阿琳和比尔走进了作者的生活。阿琳在花园劳作时，作者常与她聊天，两人关系亲密。父母外出约会时，会请阿琳和比尔照顾作者，作者还在他们家有了专属房间。五岁时，作者突发奇想，想让阿琳和比尔当自己的祖父母。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Thenextday,Igotupearly,readytovisitBillandArlenefirst.第二天，我早早起床，迫不及待地想去拜访比尔和阿琳。一路上，我的心像揣了只小兔子，怦怦直跳。到了他们家门口，我深吸一口气，轻轻敲了敲门。阿琳打开门，看到是我，脸上立刻露出和蔼的笑容。我鼓起勇气，看着她的眼睛说：“阿琳，我有个想法，我想让你和比尔当我的爷爷奶奶，你们愿意吗？”阿琳愣了一下，眼中闪过一丝惊讶，紧接着，她的眼眶红了，一把将我拥入怀中，声音略带颤抖地说：“宝贝，我们当然愿意，这是我们的荣幸呀。”这时，比尔也从屋里走出来，他笑着点头，眼中满是慈爱，说道：“我们早就把你当成自己的孙辈啦。”10续写思路分析Para2：ThenIrealizedthatIshouldencouragemorestudentstotakepart.在往后的岁月里，比尔和阿琳始终全力支持我追寻每一个梦想。当我对绘画产生浓厚兴趣时，阿琳为我买来各种绘画工具，比尔则陪着我去户外写生，鼓励我用画笔描绘世界。我参加绘画比赛时，他们比我还紧张，比赛结束后，又为我的每一次进步欢呼雀跃。在我成长的每一个重要时刻，他们都不曾缺席。我从心底里感激他们，他们早已成为我生命中不可或缺的一部分，这份特殊的祖孙情，将永远温暖着我的人生。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Thenextday,Igotupearly,beingfullypreparedtovisitBillandArlenefirst.Ontheway,myheartwaspoundingviolentlyasiftherewasalittlerabbitjumpinginside.WhenIarrivedattheirdoor,Itookadeepbreathandknockedgently.Arleneopenedthedoorandwhenshesawme,akindsmileimmediatelyappearedonherface.Isummonedupmycourageandlookingintohereyes,Isaid,"Arlene,I'vegotanidea.IwantyouandBilltobemygrandparents.Wouldyouliketo?"Arlenewasabitstartledatfirst.Alookofsurpriseflashedinhereyes.Then,hereyesbecamered.Shepulledmeintoherarmstightlyandsaidwithaslightlytremblingvoice,"Honey,ofcoursewe'dloveto.It'sourhonor."Atthismoment,Billcameoutfromthehouse.Henoddedwithabigsmileandtherewasfullofloveinhiseyes.Hesaid,"We'vealreadyregardedyouasourgrandchild."13范文呈现Overtheyears,BillandArlenehavebeensupportingmeinallmydreams.WhenIbecameinterestedinpainting,Arleneboughtmeallkindsofpaintingtools.Billaccompaniedmetogooutdoorsketching,encouragingmetodepicttheworldwithmypaintbrush.WhenIparticipatedinpaintingcompetitions,theywereevenmorenervousthanme.Aftereachcompetition,theycheeredforeveryprogressImade.Theynevermissedanyimportantmomentinmygrowth.I'mtrulygratefultothemfromthebottomofmyheart.Theyhavealreadybecomeanindispensablepartofmylife.Thisspecialgrandparent-grandchildrelationshipwillwarmmylifeforever.14升级版范文呈现Thenextday,Irosewiththelark,myheartbrimmingwitheagernesstovisitBillandArlene.AsImademywayacross,myheartthumpedwildly,asifatiny,excitedcreatureweretrappedwithin.Uponreachingtheirdoorstep,Idrewadeepbreathandtappedgently.Arlene'sfacelitupwithawarmsmileassheopenedthedoor.Summoningallmycourage,Imethergazeandblurtedout,"Arlene,I'veanidea.IwonderifyouandBillwouldbemygrandparents?"Arlenewasmomentarilytakenaback,surpriseregisteringinhereyes.Inaninstant,hereyeswelledwithemotion,andshepulledmeintoatightembrace,hervoicequiveringwithjoy."Honey,itwouldbeourgreatesthonor."Justthen,Billemergedfromthehouse,noddingwithabeamingsmile,hiseyesradiatingaffection."We'velongconsideredyouourgrandchild,"heaffirmed.15升级版范文呈现Overtheensuingyears,BillandArlenestoodunwaveringlybymysideinpursuitofallmydreams.Whenthesparkofinterestinpaintingignitedwithinme,Arlenepromptlyprocuredanarrayofpaintingtools,whileBillaccompaniedmeono