高考英语复习读后续写练习：从他人身上汲取力量传递环保之举

高考英语读后续写语篇练习从他人身上汲取力量，传递环保之举1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文WhenIwas16,myparentsandImovedtoasmalltownofArizona.Sincemyparentswereverybusyatthattime,myAuntJuliaoftentookcareofmeduringtheirabsence.Onerainyday,whenJuliaandIwereheadingtowardhome,Icaughtsightofanoldladywearinganorangejacketwithahugebagandawalkingstick.Outofcuriosity,IaskedJulia,“Whoisshe?Whatisshedoingwiththathugebag?”Juliacaughtaglimpseather,thentoldme,“SheiscalledMelinda.Shehasbeencollectinggarbagewiththathugegarbagebaginthetownforseveralyears.Nobodyknowswhyshe’sbeendoingit.Maybejustforfun.”Hearingherwords,Icouldn’thelpexclaiming,“Wow!It’ssostrange!Whydoesshefinditfunnytocollectgarbage?”Sincethatday,Ihadcomeacrossherformanytimesonmywayhome.Shealwayscarriedthehugegarbagebagwhetheritwasrainyorsunny.Gradually,Ididn’tfindherstrangeforcollectinggarbage.Instead,Ibegantogreetherwithasmile.4续写原文Twoyearslater,IwasadmittedtoChicagoUniversity.Tomydisappointment,Ioftensawtrashonthelawnoncampus.“Whyshouldpeoplelittereverywhere?Whoisresponsibleforthetrash?”Afewdayslater,itoccurredtomethat,sincenobodytookresponsibilityforit,whynotcollecttrashmyself?Thatway,Icouldwalkpastthelawnwithoutfeelingguilty.Then,Itookaction.IalwaystookatrashbagandcollecttrashonthelawneverytimeIwalkedpastit.Afewstudentsalsofollowedsuitsoonafterwards,keepingtheschoolcleanerandprettierthanbefore.Oneday,anideapoppedintomyheadwhenIfinishedcollectingtrash——maybewecouldhelpmakethecitycleanerandprettiertoo!Despitethethoughtthatcollectingtrashinfrontofsomanypeopleoutsideschoolwasawkward,Iknewitwastherightthingtodo.SoIdecidedtogiveitago.5段首句Paragraph1：Oneday,Iwascollectinggarbageoutsidetheschool.Paragraph2：ThenIrealizedthatIshouldencouragemorestudentstotakepart.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析816岁时作者随父母搬到亚利桑那州小镇，父母忙碌，常由姑姑照顾。一天雨中，作者和姑姑看到收集垃圾的梅琳达，不解其行为。此后作者多次遇到她，渐渐习惯并微笑问候。两年后作者考入芝加哥大学，看到校园草坪有垃圾，受梅琳达启发，自己开始收集垃圾，一些同学也纷纷效仿。作者还想让城市更干净，决定走出校园收集垃圾。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：ToEric’ssurprise,Benwalkedtotheplatformcheerfullyandconfidently.那天我在学校外收集垃圾，刚开始，周围人异样的目光让我浑身不自在，心里直犯嘀咕，担心被人笑话。但一想到梅琳达多年如一日坚持收集垃圾，我便鼓起勇气继续。就在这时，一个年轻妈妈牵着小女孩路过，小女孩好奇地看着我，问妈妈我在做什么。妈妈耐心解释后，小女孩挣脱妈妈的手，跑向不远处捡起一个塑料瓶，小心翼翼地放进我的垃圾袋，还抬头冲我甜甜一笑。这一幕让我心里暖暖的，也更坚定了继续做下去的决心。10续写思路分析Para2：ThenIrealizedthatIshouldencouragemorestudentstotakepart.小女孩的举动让我深切意识到，仅凭我一人之力远远不够，必须鼓励更多学生参与。于是，我在学校发起“清洁城市，你我同行”的倡议活动，制作精美的海报，详细介绍收集垃圾对城市环境的重要意义。利用课余时间，在校园里向同学们讲述梅琳达的故事以及我自己的经历，号召大家行动起来。没想到，同学们热情高涨，纷纷响应。周末，我们组成志愿小队，走上街头，一起为城市的整洁贡献力量，所到之处，街道变得干净整洁，城市也仿佛焕发出新的生机。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Oneday,Iwascollectinggarbageoutsidetheschool.Atfirst,Ifeltextremelyawkwardaspeoplepassingbycaststrangeglancesatme.Someevenstoppedtostare,whichmademewanttogiveup.However,theimageofMelinda,whohadbeencollectinggarbagepersistentlyinthetown,cametomymind.Withadeepbreath,Iforcedmyselftocarryon.Suddenly,amiddle-agedmanwalkedover.Helookedatthegarbagebaginmyhandandasked,"Whatareyoudoingthisfor?"Irepliedwithabitofnervousness,"Iwanttomakethecitycleaner."Tomysurprise,henoddedinapprovalandsaid,"It'sagreatidea.Ishoulddosomethingtoo."Thenhebentdownandstartedtohelpmepickupthetrash.Hisactiongreatlyinspiredme.13范文呈现ThenIrealizedthatIshouldencouragemorestudentstotakepart.Idecidedtostartacampaigninschool.Imadeeye-catchingpostersthatshowedthecurrentsituationofthecity'senvironmentandtheimportanceofgarbagecollection.Duringlunchbreaks,Istoodinthecafeteria,sharingmystoryandMelinda'swithmyclassmates.Iemphasizedhoweachofuscouldmakeadifference.Mywordsseemedtostrikeachordwiththem.Manystudentscametome,expressingtheirwillingnesstojoin.Weformedavolunteergroup.Onweekends,wewentoutontothestreetstogether.Asweworked,thecitygraduallybecamecleaner,andthesenseofachievementwefeltwasoverwhelming.14升级版范文呈现Oneday,Iwascollectinggarbageoutsidetheschool.Initially,Iwasoverwhelmedbytheawkwardnessascuriousglancesfrompassers-bywerecastmyway.Someevenpaused,theireyesfixedonme,whichalmostmademeabandonmyplan.However,itwasMelinda,whohadbeenunwaveringlycollectinggarbageinthetown,thatcametomyrescue.Takingadeepbreath,Ipersevered.Suddenly,amiddle-agedmanapproached.Lookingatthegarbagebaginmyhand,heinquired,"Whatareyoudoingthisfor?"Withatouchofnervousness,Ireplied,"Iaimtomakethecitycleaner."Tomyastonishment,henoddedapprovingly,saying,"It'sagreatidea.Ishoulddomyparttoo."Then,bendingdown,hejoinedmeinpickingupthetrash,hisactiongreatlyinspiringme.15升级版范文呈现ThenIrealizedthatIshouldencouragemorestudentstotakepart.Thus,acampaignwaslaunchedinschool.Eye-catchingpostersweremade,vividlydepictingthecity'senvironmentalsituationandthesignificanceof