高三英语一轮复习读后续写练习：小黑狗奥尼克斯勇救主人

高考英语读后续写语篇练习小黑狗奥尼克斯勇救主人1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Shewastheprettiestlittledogwehadeverseen,andthewholefamilyimmediatelyfellinlovewithher.WenamedherOnyxbecauseofherthick,shinyblackcoat.ShespentherfirstvacationwithuswhenshewasonlytenweeksoldandhadherfirstbathandswimintheSt.LawrenceRiver.Wehadnocluethatthisamazinglittleballoffurwouldendupbeingourhero.Asshegrewolder,Onyxbecamemoreandmoreinvolvedinourfamilyactivities.Onhotsummerdays,Onyxenjoyedfloatingontheriverwithusinherownrubbertube(橡皮圈).Amazinglystandingonthetopofthetube,shesmiledwhileshowingoffherperfectbalance.Restingherfrontlegsandpawsovertheedgeoftherubbertube,shekepthereyesshutasshefloateduntilshe'dhadenoughofthewarmsunonherblackcoat.4续写原文Oneday,oureighteen-year-olddaughter,Margie,announcedshewasgoingtoswimacrossthebay.Nooneinthefamilywasfreetogoswimmingwithher.Theunwrittenrule,regardlessofswimmingability,wastohaveacompanioninthewaterwithyou,especiallywhenswimmingthewidthofthebay.Iwasnotagoodswimmer,soIsaidtoMargie,“TakeOnyxwithyou.”Havingheardhername,Onyxwokeupfromanapandwasreadyforaction.Margiesignedthedogtofollowher.Onyxrantothewaternexttoher.Theyenteredthefreezingrivertogetherandswamsidebysideacrossthebay.Iwatchedfromtheriverbankastheyreachedthesandbar(沙洲)onthefarshore.Theyrestedafewminutesbeforedivingintothewaterforthereturntrip.Ifeltuneasyforsomereasonandcontinuedtowatchthepairswimsidebyside.5段首句Paragraph1：SuddenlyIheardMargiecallingout,“Ihaveacram(痉挛)intheleg!”Paragraph2：Seeingthepairapproachingtheriverbank,Ibreathedasighofrelief.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8一家人收养了一只名为奥尼克斯的漂亮小黑狗，它很快融入家庭活动，常在夏日与家人在河中嬉戏。一天，18岁的女儿玛吉宣布要独自游过海湾，因无人陪同，母亲让奥尼克斯随行。玛吉和奥尼克斯成功游到对岸，休息后返程。然而，在返程途中，玛吉突发状况。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：SuddenlyIheardMargiecallingout,“Ihaveacram(痉挛)intheleg!”突然，我听到玛吉大声呼喊：“我的腿抽筋了！”声音中满是焦急与恐惧。奥尼克斯听到主人的呼救，瞬间警觉起来。它迅速游到玛吉身边，用自己的身体紧紧挨着玛吉，试图给她提供支撑。奥尼克斯用脑袋轻轻顶了顶玛吉，似乎在告诉她别害怕。随后，它用牙齿咬住玛吉泳衣的一角，调整好方向，开始朝着河岸奋力游动。尽管水流湍急，奥尼克斯游得十分吃力，但它眼神坚定，丝毫没有放弃的意思。玛吉紧紧抓住奥尼克斯的身体，在它的帮助下，暂时缓解了下沉的危险。10续写思路分析Para2：Seeingthepairapproachingtheriverbank,Ibreathedasighofrelief.看到它们俩朝着河岸靠近，我松了一口气。奥尼克斯用尽全身力气，终于将玛吉拖到了浅水区。我急忙跑过去，将玛吉拉上岸。玛吉躺在地上，大口喘着粗气，眼中满是对奥尼克斯的感激。奥尼克斯也累得趴在一旁，舌头伸得老长。过了一会儿，玛吉缓过神来，她一把抱住奥尼克斯，不停地抚摸着它的头，嘴里说着：“谢谢你，我的小英雄。”从那以后，我们更加珍惜奥尼克斯，它不仅是我们的宠物，更是我们家庭的英雄，它的勇敢和忠诚让我们深深感动。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现SuddenlyIheardMargiecallingout,“Ihaveacrampintheleg!”Panicwasevidentinhervoice.Onyx,uponhearinghermaster'scryforhelp,immediatelybecamealert.ItswiftlyswamtoMargie'ssideandpresseditsbodyfirmlyagainsthers,attemptingtooffersupport.OnyxgentlynudgedMargiewithitshead,asiftoconveyreassurance.Then,itgraspedthecornerofMargie'sswimsuitwithitsteeth,adjusteditsdirection,andstartedswimmingvigorouslytowardstheriverbank.Despitethestrongcurrentmakingtheswimstrenuous,Onyx'seyesweredetermined,showingnosignofgivingup.MargieclungtightlytoOnyx'sbody,andwithitsassistance,shemanagedtostayafloatforthemoment.13范文呈现Seeingthepairapproachingtheriverbank,Ibreathedasighofrelief.OnyxexertedallitsstrengthandfinallydraggedMargieintotheshallows.IrushedoverandpulledMargieontotheshore.Margielayontheground,gaspingforbreath,hereyesfilledwithgratitudetowardsOnyx.Onyx,exhausted,collapsedbesideher,itstonguehangingout.Afterawhile,Margieregainedhercomposure.ShehuggedOnyxtightly,strokingitsheadcontinuouslyandsaying,“Thankyou,mylittlehero.”Fromthenon,wecherishedOnyxevenmore.Itwasnotjustapetbutaheroofourfamily.Itscourageandloyaltydeeplytouchedourhearts.14升级版范文呈现Suddenly,acrypiercedtheair:“Ihaveacrampintheleg!”Margie'svoice,lacedwithpanic,sentshockwavesthroughme.Instantly,Onyx,ever-attunedtohermaster'sdistress,sprangintoaction.DartingtowardsMargie,itpresseditsbodyagainsthers,alivingbuoyinthetreacherouswater.Withagentlenudgeofitshead,itseemedtowhisperwordsofcomfort.Then,grippingthecornerofMargie'sswimsuitfirmlybetweenitsteeth,Onyxchartedacoursetowardsthesafetyoftheriverbank.Thecurrent,likeawildbeast,foughtagainstthem,butOnyx,undeterred,poweredthrough,itseyesablazewithdetermination.Margie,herlifenowinOnyx'spaws,clungondesperately,findingsolaceinthedog'sunwaveringstrength.15升级版范文呈现Asthepairnearedtheriverbank,awaveofreliefwashedoverme.Withafinalburstofenergy,OnyxtowedMargieintotheshallows.Isprintedtowardsthem,myheartpounding,andhauledMargieontotheshore.Shelaythere,breathless,hereyesfixedonOnyxinagazeofprofoundgratitude.Onyx,spentfromitsheroicefforts,slumpedbesideher,itstonguelollingout.Momentslater,asMargieregainedhersenses,shewrappedherarmsaroundOnyx,hertouchatestamenttoherlove.“Thankyou,mylittlehero,”shemurmured,hervoicethickwithemotion.Fromthatdayforward,