高考英语复习读后续写练习：英雄犬与托拉：守护主人的生命传奇

高考英语读后续写语篇练习英雄犬与托拉：守护主人的生命传奇1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文DogsnamedHeroandTorasavedtheirowner’slifeinMarch.Theyremainedbyhissidethroughtwocoldnights,foughtcoyotes（土狼）,andwaitedforhelp.Theirstoryhaswontherespectoftheworld.AcharitydonationcampaignwaslaunchedbythevictimandthelocalshelterTaberLostPawsSocietytohelptheinjureddogs.Thestorybeganwithanattack.WhenapasserbynamedCurtisDahlwaswalkinghisdoginafieldofmuddygrassnearthesugarfactoryinthetownofTaber,anareathatisquiteremote,notwell-traveled,andquitecoldinMarch.Suddenly,Herocamerunningupandbithisdogaroundtheneck.DahlclaimedhefoughtwithHerofortenminutes,tryingtogethimoffhisdog,andhisfingerwashurtbytheendofit.Callingpoliceandanimalserviceswithacomplaint,hetoldthemaboutHero’spresence,butwhentheofficersarrivedandsawHerolyingdownthere,badlyhurtandtiredout,theysuddenlyheardacryforhelp.4续写原文Arriving,theyfoundamanlyingonhisbackinaditch（沟渠）,tremblingandunabletomove.Hetoldpoliceheis61andlivesaloneandthathewaswalkinghistwodogsHeroandTorawhenhefelldown.He’dbeenstucktherefortwodaysandhisdogsprotectedhim.Themansaidthatwhenhefelldown,ToraandHerostayedwithhimtokeephimsafeandwarmforsometime,andthenToraranoff.“Iknowshewenthometofindsomehelpforme,buteverytimeshecameback,verysad,”saidtheman.Torawentbackandforthfromthesitewhereherownerwasandherhomeseveraltimes.BythetimeDahlwalkedbyandrescuersarrived,Torahadjustgonebackagain.5段首句Paragraph1：ThemanrecalledhowHeroandToraprotectedhimfromcoyotes.Paragraph2：Knowingwhathappened,DahlheldnoillfeelingstowardHero.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8三月，两只狗狗Hero和Tora拯救了主人的生命。主人独自在野外散步时摔倒，被困两天。期间，狗狗们不仅为他取暖，还勇敢对抗土狼。路人CurtisDahl起初因Hero攻击他的狗而报警，警察到达后发现受伤的主人。随后，发起了慈善捐款活动帮助受伤的狗狗，它们的故事赢得了世人的尊重。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：ThemanrecalledhowHeroandToraprotectedhimfromcoyotes.主人回忆起Hero和Tora是如何保护他免受土狼伤害的。在那寒冷彻骨的夜晚，荒野中不时传来土狼令人胆寒的嚎叫声。一群土狼被主人的气息吸引，逐渐靠近。当时主人身体虚弱，毫无抵抗能力。关键时刻，Hero和Tora挺身而出，它们紧紧守在主人身边，竖起毛发，冲着土狼发出低沉而凶狠的吼声。土狼们试图发起攻击，Hero和Tora毫不畏惧，一次次勇敢地冲上前去，与土狼展开激烈搏斗。它们身上多处被土狼咬伤，但始终没有退缩半步，用自己的身体为主人筑起了一道坚固的防线，让主人在这极度危险的环境中得以保全性命。10续写思路分析Para2：Knowingwhathappened,DahlheldnoillfeelingstowardHero.了解事情的经过后，Dahl对Hero没有了丝毫怨恨。他深刻地被两只狗狗的忠诚和勇敢所打动。回想起Hero当时的攻击行为，他意识到那是Hero在急切地保护受伤的主人。Dahl来到收容所看望Hero和Tora，看着它们身上的伤痕，心中满是敬佩。他决定为救助这两只狗狗的慈善活动捐款，希望能为它们的治疗和康复尽一份力。Dahl的转变，不仅体现了他对动物的理解与关爱，也让人们看到了这个故事所传递出的温暖与正能量，感染着身边的每一个人。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现ThemanrecalledhowHeroandToraprotectedhimfromcoyotes.Duringthosefreezingcoldnights,thehowlsofcoyotesechoedthroughthewildernessfromtimetotime.Agroupofcoyoteswereattractedbythesmellofthemanandgraduallyapproached.Atthattime,themanwastooweaktodefendhimself.Atthecriticalmoment,HeroandTorasteppedforwardbravely.Theystoodfirmlybesidetheirowner,theirhairsstandingonend,andgrowledmenacinglyatthecoyotes.Thecoyotestriedtolaunchattacks,butHeroandTorashowednofear.Theyrushedforwardtimeandtimeagain,engaginginfiercebattleswiththecoyotes.Theywerebitteninmanyplacesbythecoyotes,buttheyneverretreatedevenasinglestep.Theyusedtheirbodiestobuildasoliddefenselinefortheirowner,ensuringthatthemanwassafeinthisextremelydangerousenvironment.13范文呈现Knowingwhathappened,DahlheldnoillfeelingstowardHero.Hewasdeeplytouchedbytheloyaltyandcourageofthetwodogs.RecallingHero'sattackbehavior,herealizedthatitwasHero'surgentneedtoprotectitsinjuredowner.DahlvisitedthesheltertoseeHeroandTora.Lookingatthescarsontheirbodies,hisheartwasfilledwithadmiration.Hedecidedtodonatetothecharitycampaignforrescuingthesetwodogs,hopingtocontributetotheirtreatmentandrecovery.Dahl'schangenotonlyreflectedhisunderstandingandloveforanimalsbutalsoshowedthewarmthandpositiveenergythatthisstoryconveyed,infectingeveryonearoundhim.14升级版范文呈现ThemanvividlyrecalledtheharrowingmomentswhenHeroandTorashieldedhimfromthemenacingcoyotes.Amidstthosefrigidnights,theeeriehowlsofthecoyotesreverberatedthroughthedesolatewilderness,sendingchillsdownhisspine.Drawnbyhisscent,apackofcoyotesstealthilyclosedin,theireyesglintingwithpredatoryintent.Helplessandweakened,themanwasinnopositiontofendforhimself.However,HeroandTora,withunwaveringresolve,sprangintoaction.Standingguardlikesentinels,theirfurbristled,andtheyemitteddeep,gutturalgrowlsthatechoedthroughthenight.Asthecoyoteslungedforward,thedogsfearlesslycounter-attacked,engaginginaseriesofintenseskirmishes.Despitesustainingmultiplebitesandscratches,theyremainedsteadfast,forminganimpenetrablebarrieraroundtheirmaster,thussafeguardinghislifeinthefaceofgravedanger.15升级版范文呈现Uponlearningthefullstory,Dahl'sinitialanimositytowardsHerodissipatedcompletely.Instead,hewasovercomewithprofoundadmirationforthedogs'unwaveringloyaltyandextraordinarycourage.ReflectingonHero'searlieraggression,henowunderstoodthatitwasadesperateactofprotectionforitsincapacitatedowner.Eagertoexpresshisnew-foundrespect,Dahlmade