高考英语复习读后续写练习：兽医医院的暖心回馈+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习：兽医医院的暖心回馈1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Iwaswanderingalongthestreetonapleasantday,headingtowardsourlocaldrugstore.AsIwalked,IsuddenlyrememberedthatIneededtobuyaspecialtypeofcannedcatfoodfromthevet(兽医).Infact,thecatbelongstomydaughter,andshe’scurrentlyinafinancialdilemmaandcan’taffordtopayfortheexpensivefood.Justthedaybefore,IhadhadaconversationwithheraboutitandexpressedmyconcernthatIcan’taffordtokeepspending$300amonthforthevetfood.WhenIenteredthevethospital,theplacewasbusywithactivity.Thevetassistantwasoccupiedhelpinganothercustomer.Fortunately,sherecognizedmeandknewexactlywhatkindoffoodIneededtobuy.SheaskedmeifIwantedhalfacaseorawholecase.Afteramoment’sthought,Idecidedonthefullcase.Justthen,anothercustomerwalkedinandmadehiswaytothecounter.SinceIwasn’tinaparticularhurry,Ipolitelysaid,“Goaheadandservethisgentleman.Meanwhile,I’llgotothedrugstore.ThatwillgiveyoutimetodoyourpaperworkwhileI’mgone.”4续写原文Shelookedrelievedandsaid,“Thanks,thatwouldbegreat!”Thegentleman,akind-lookingmanwithafriendlysmile,immediatelyprotested,“Youshouldgofirst,youwereherebeforeme.”Iwavedmyhandandreplied,“Noworries,yougorightahead.Mypleasure,”Hejokinglyreplied,“Wow,howcanIthankyou?”Withoutreallythinking,inamomentofcheerfulness,Isaid,“Youcouldbuymeacaseofcatfood.Haha.”Ilaughedandthenturnedtoleave.5续写原文AsIwalkedoutofthevethospital,Icouldn’thelpbutsmileattheunexpectedinteraction.Itwasjustasmallmoment,butitaddedatouchofwarmthtomyday.LittledidIknowwhatsurprisesthefuturemighthold.6段首句Paragraph1:Ireturned10minuteslater.Paragraph2:Withthecaseofcatfood,Igothome.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了作者在去药店途中想起要给女儿的猫买昂贵的兽医店猫粮。在兽医医院，因不赶时间，作者让后来的顾客先接受服务，还开玩笑让对方给自己买猫粮，这次互动给作者的一天增添了温暖。续写需围绕作者返回兽医医院后的经历，以及带着猫粮回家后的故事展开，突出人与人之间的善意和温暖。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Paragraph1：Ireturned10minuteslater.分析：此段应承接上文，描述作者回到兽医医院后的场景。重点在于展现那位男士是否兑现“承诺”，可详细描写男士拿着猫粮等待的画面，以及作者看到这一幕时的惊讶与感动。通过对话和细节，体现男士的善良和作者的感激，让故事发展自然流畅，进一步凸显人与人之间的美好情感。11续写思路分析Paragraph2：Withthecaseofcatfood,Igothome.分析：该段从作者带着猫粮回家展开，重点描写作者与女儿分享这段奇妙经历时女儿的反应，以及她们看到猫咪吃粮时的温馨场景。最后升华主题，表达此次善举对作者和女儿的影响，让她们感受到温暖与希望，也促使作者决定传递这份爱，使故事的情感得到深化。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Paragraph1:Ireturned10minuteslater.WhenIwalkedbackintothevethospital,Iwasgreetedbythevetassistantwithabigsmile.Shesaid,“Youhaveaverykindgentlemanwaitingforyou.”IwasabitpuzzleduntilIsawthemanwhoIhadletgoaheadofme.Hewasstandingtherewithacaseofcatfoodinhishands.Hesmiledatme,saying“IthinkIshouldkeepmypromise.Here’syourcaseofcatfoodasathankyouforyourkindness.”Iwascompletelysurprised.Ineverthoughthewouldactuallytakemyjokeseriously.Ithankedhimgenerously,andhejustshruggedandsaid,“It’stheleastIcoulddo.”Wechattedforawhile,andIfoundoutthathewasalsoananimallover.Paragraph2:Withthecaseofcatfood,Igothome.Icouldn’twaittotellmydaughterwhathadhappened.WhenIsharedthestorywithher,shewasamazedatit.Shesaid,“Mom,thisissuchawonderfulstory.Itjustshowsthattherearestillkindpeopleintheworld.”Wethenopenedthecaseofcatfoodandwatchedthecateatinghappily.AsIsattherewithmydaughter,Ifeltadeepsenseofcontentment.Thisunexpectedactofkindnessnotonlylightenedourfinancialburdenbutalsofilledourheartswithwarmthandhope.Fromthenon,Imadeupmymindtopasson“love”toothers.Justasasayinggoes:“Rosegivenandfragranceinhands.”14范文呈现Paragraph1:Ireturned10minuteslater.AsIsteppedbackintothevethospital,thevetassistantgavemeabiggrinandpointedtowardsaman.ItwastheoneI'dletgoahead.Hestoodthere,holdingacaseofcatfood.Whenhesawme,hewalkedoverwithasmile.“Hereyouare.IsaidI'dgetyouacaseofcatfood,andImeantit,”hesaid.Iwasshocked.Istammeredoutmythanks,stillnotbelievinghe'ddoneit.Hetoldmehelovedanimalstooandwasgladtohelp.Wetalkedforashorttime,andIfoundhimreallyfriendly.Paragraph2:Withthecaseofcatfood,Igothome.AssoonasIentered,Icalledmydaughter.Itoldherallaboutwhathappenedatthevethospital.Shelistenedwithwideeyes,andthenexclaimed,“That'ssocool,Mom!It'slikeafairytale.”Weopenedthecatfoodandwatchedthecatpounceonit.Lookingatmydaughter'shappyfaceandthecontentedcat,Ifeltsowarminside.Thiskindactmadeourday.Idecidedrightthentobemorekindtoothersandspreadthislove.15升级版范文呈现Paragraph1:Ireturned10minuteslater.AsIreenteredthebustlingvethospital,thevetassistantgreetedmewithanenthusiasticsmileandinformedmethatakindgentlemanwaswaitingforme.Mycuriositypiqued,IscannedtheroomuntilmyeyeslandedonthemanIhad礼让earlier.Hewasstandingthere,proudlyholdingacaseofcatfoodinhishands.Hisfacelitupwhenhesawmeapproaching.“Ibelieveapromiseisapromise,”hesaid,extendingthecatfoodtowardsme.“Thisismywayofshowinggratitudeforyourkindness.”Iwasutterlyastounded,mymouthagapeindisbelief.Istammeredoutmyheartfeltthanks,stillunabletofathomthathehadtakenmyjestseriously.Weengagedinabriefbutpleasantconversation,duringwhichIdiscoveredthathesharedmypassionforanimals.Paragraph2:Withthecaseofcatfoodinhand,Imademywayhomewithaspringinmystep.ThemomentIwalkedthroughthedoor,Icouldn'twaittosharetheextraordinarystorywithmydaughter.Icalledherover,andasIrecountedtheeventsatthevethospital,hereyeswidenedinwonder.“Mom,that'samazing!It'sabeautifulreminderthatthere'ssomuchgoodnessintheworld,”sheexclaimed.Weeagerlyopenedthecaseofcatfoodandwatchedwithdelightasthecatdevouredit.Sittingsidebyside,wesavoredthewarmthandcontentmentthatfilledtheroom.Thisunexpectedactofkindnessnotonlyalleviatedourfinancialstrainbutalsokindledafireofhopewithinus.Fromthatmomenton,Iresolvedtopayitforward,spreadingloveandkindnesswhereverIwent,forItrulybelievedthat“Asmallactofkindnesscanmakeabigdifference.”16升级版范文呈现Paragraph1:Ireturned10minuteslater.Steppingbackintothevethospital,Iwasmetwiththevetassistant'sbeamingface.“There'sakindmanwaitingforyou,”shesaid.IlookedaroundandsawthegentlemanI'dletgofirst.Hewasholdingacaseofcatfood.AsIwalkedtowardshim,hesmiledandsaid,“Icouldn'tforgetmypromise.Yourkindnessinspiredme.”Iwasstunned,touchedbyhisthoughtfulness.Ithank