高考英语复习读后续写练习：大萧条时期的圣诞温暖+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习：大萧条时期的圣诞温暖1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Itwasthetailendofthedepression(大萧条),andthingsweretough.MomhadahardtimeraisinguskidsonherowninoursmallcommunityofNewWestminster,BC．MydadhaddrownedinPittLakefiveyearsearlier—Istillrememberitasifitwereyesterday.Lookingback,IrealizewhatMomwentthroughsendinguskidstoschool.Everymorningshewouldputanewpieceofcardboardinourshoes,becauseoursoleswerewornout.Constantmovingwastypicalformyfamilyinthesetimes.Rentwastwenty-fivedollarsamonth,butMomcouldn’tpayit.Thesewerehardandsadyears,butwenevercomplained.4续写原文Christmaswasapproaching,andwewereentitledtoatwenty-fivedollarChristmasfundforsocialassistance.Momsaidthatinsteadofbuyingfood,shewouldusethemoneytopaybackrent.ShetoldusthentherewouldbenothingforChristmas.UnknowntoMom,IhadbeensellingChristmastreestoearnenoughmoneytobuyanewpairofboots.Bootswithnocardboardinthesoles.IknewexactlywhichbootsIwanted.Theyhadapriceoftwenty-threedollars.5续写原文Well,thebigdaycameontheafternoonofChristmasEve.Iwasveryexcited,asIhurrieduptheroadtocatchthebus.Itwasonlyhalfamilewalk,butonthewayInoticedahousewithChristmaslightsanddecorations.ItwasthenthatIrealizedthatatourhouse,wehadnothingforChristmas.IknewthenthatwewouldhavenoturkeyorhamforChristmas,andIfeltsad.Suddenly,Iwasfeelingastrangesenseofguilt.HereIwasgoingtobuyanewpairofbootswhileMomwashomeintears.Shewouldbetryingtoexplaintouswhytherewerenopresents.Istopped.Thebusdroveoffwithoutme,andIstoodalone,butfeelingasifaweighthadbeenliftedoffmyshoulders.IchangedmymindandIrealizedwhatIhadtodo.6段首句Paragraph1:AcrossthestreetwasabiggrocerystorecalledthePigglyWiggley.Paragraph2:Iwhisperedforboystoquietlyunloadthegroceriesandpilethemagainstthedoor.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文围绕大萧条时期作者一家的艰难生活展开。爸爸早逝，妈妈独自抚养孩子，家庭经济拮据，连房租都难以支付。圣诞节临近，妈妈决定用社会救助的25美元交房租，意味着没有钱买圣诞物品。而“我”通过卖圣诞树攒了些钱，原本打算买双新靴子，但看到别人家的圣诞装饰，想到自己家的冷清，心中愧疚，决定改变计划。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Paragraph1：AcrossthestreetwasabiggrocerystorecalledthePigglyWiggley.分析：此句作为段首，应承接上文“我”改变主意后的行动。可以描述“我”进入杂货店的情景，比如看到琳琅满目的商品，内心的想法，如何挑选圣诞所需物品，以及与杂货店老板的互动等，为下文将这些物品带回家给妈妈惊喜做铺垫。11续写思路分析Paragraph2：Iwhisperedforboystoquietlyunloadthegroceriesandpilethemagainstthedoor.分析：该句引出了送杂货到家这一情节。接下来可描写“我”安排好一切后的紧张与期待，妈妈开门看到杂货时的反应，是惊讶、感动还是其他情绪，以及“我”看到妈妈反应后的感受，突出家庭温暖和“我”的成长。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Paragraph1:AcrossthestreetwasabiggrocerystorecalledthePigglyWiggley.Ienteredthestorewithanewfoundpurpose.Lookingaround,Isawturkeys,hams,andallkindsofChristmastreats.IthoughtabouthowhappymyfamilywouldbeifwecouldhaveaproperChristmas.SoIusedallthemoneyIhadtobuythosethings.Thestoreownerwaskindandhelpedmefindtwoboyswithbicyclestocarrythegroceriestomyhome.Paragraph2:Iwhisperedforboystoquietlyunloadthegroceriesandpilethemagainstthedoor.ThenIknockedonthedoor.WhenMomopenedit,shewasshockedtoseethegroceries.Shelookedatmewithtearsinhereyes.Isaid,“MerryChristmas,Mom!WecanhaveagoodChristmasthisyear.”Momhuggedmetightly,andIfeltsowarminside.ItwasthebestChristmasIhadeverhad.14范文呈现Paragraph1:AcrossthestreetwasabiggrocerystorecalledthePigglyWiggley.Irushedintothestoreandstartedpickingoutitems.Ichoseabigturkey,someham,anddeliciouscookies.Ispenteverycentofmyhard-earnedmoney.ThestoreownersawwhatIwasdoingandwastouched.Hehelpedmefindtwoboyswhowerewillingtohelpmecarrythegrocerieshome.Paragraph2:Iwhisperedforboystoquietlyunloadthegroceriesandpilethemagainstthedoor.Aftertheyleft,Iknockedonthedoor.Momopenedit,andhereyeswidenedinsurprise.Shecouldn'tbelievewhatshesaw.Isaid,“Mom,thisisourChristmas.Wedon'thavetobesadanymore.”Momhuggedme,andwebothfeltthejoyofChristmas.15升级版范文呈现Paragraph1:AcrossthestreetstoodacolossalgrocerystorenamedthePigglyWiggley.Withaheartbrimmingwithdeterminationandanew-foundsenseofpurpose,Isteppedinside.ThestorewasawonderlandofChristmasdelights.Turkeys,theirplumpbodiesglisteningunderthestorelights,hamswiththeirenticingaroma,andanarrayofmouth-wateringChristmastreatsfilledtheshelves.AsIbrowsedthroughtheaisles,imagesofmyfamily'sjoyousfacesonChristmasDayflashedthroughmymind.Withouthesitation,Iselectedthefinestitems,spendingeverypennyofmyhard-earnedmoney.Thestoreowner,observingmyactionswithasoftsmile,offeredhisassistance.Hehelpedmerecruittwoboys,who,withtheirbicyclesequippedwithcarriers,weremorethanwillingtoaidintransportingthegroceriestomyhumbleabode.Paragraph2:Iwhisperedtotheboystoquietlyunloadthegroceriesandneatlypilethemagainstthedoor.Oncetheyhadcompletedthetaskandriddenaway,Itookadeepbreath,myheartpoundingwithanticipation.Iknockedonthedoor,andwhenMomopenedit,timeseemedtostandstill.Hereyeswidenedinsheerdisbelief,andagaspescapedherlips.Shestaredatthegroceries,thenatme,andtearswelledupinhereyes.“MerryChristmas,Mom,”Isaid,myvoicefilledwithloveandpride.“We'regoingtohaveaChristmastorememberthisyear.”Momenvelopedmeinawarmhug,andIcouldfeeltheloveandgratituderadiatingfromher.Inthatmoment,IknewthatthesacrificesImadewereworthit,andthewarmthoffamilyandthespiritofChristmasfilledourhome.16升级版范文呈现Paragraph1:AcrossthestreetwasamagnificentgrocerystoreknownasthePigglyWiggley.Idashedintothestore,myeyesscanningtherowsofgoodswitheagerness.Thesightofturkeys,ham,andanabundanceofChristmasdelicaciesfilledmewithexcitement.Icarefullyselectedtheitems,imaginingthelookofsurpriseonmyfamily'sfaces.EveryitemIplacedinthecartwasasymbolofhopeforabetterChristmas.Iusedupallmymoney,notasinglecentleft.Thestoreowner,touchedbymyefforts,