高考英语复习读后续写练习：情人节的暖心行动：为受伤同学装点惊喜+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习情人节的暖心行动：为受伤同学装点惊喜1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文AsValentine’sDay,atimeforexpressingaffectionthroughtheexchangeofpresents,drewnear,Kendrafoundherselfseatedatthekitchentable,carefullypenninghernameonValentine’scardsforherclassmates.Sherecognizedherownhesitation;wordsdidn’tcomeeasilytoher.Whilesheenviedtheeasewithwhichherpeerstalkedandlaughed,hershynessoftenkeptherquiet.Kendragrabbedanothercard..Hereyeslitupatthephrase“You’redynamite(引起轰动的人或物)!”—atermthatwouldundoubtedlydelightherGrammy,whofrequentlyusedtheexpressiontopraisetheirfestivedecorations.“Well,thatlooksdynamite!”Grammywouldexclaim,herapprovalfillingKendrawithwarmth.4续写原文JustasKendrawassigningthecards,hermothercamein,sharingthesadnewsofElise,theirneighbor,andherrecentaccidentthatledtoabrokenleg,restrictinghertohomeschoolingforthecomingweeks.KendrafeltsorryforElise,andquicklypickedthemostsplendidvalentine,hurryingtoElise’shome.Uponarrival,Kendra’slookfelluponthelife-sizeddeerstatuedecoratingthefrontyard.Shestudiedit,sayingtoherself,“Wouldn’tthisdeerlookcoolwithabigheartaroundhisneck?ElisecouldlookoutofthewindowandseeitdecoratedforValentine’sday.”5续写原文Withthisidea,KendragotthesizableredheartherGrammyhadgivenher,tieditwithstring,andhungitaroundthestatue’snecklikeafestivechain.Thenextday,shedecoratedtheantlers(鹿角)withavarietyofsmallerhearts.ItwasduringthisactofkindnessthatColinandAmy,Elise’sfellowclassmates,happeneduponthescene.“AreyoudecoratingElise’sdeerforValentine’sDay?”theyasked.Kendraconfirmedwithanod,explainingherintentiontocheerupElise.Despiteheruncertaintyaboutwhattoaddnext,Colinproposedaddingsomecolor,whileAmysuggestedputtingdecorationsonthedeer’sbackandforehead.Unitedbyasharedpurpose,theyagreedtomeetlater.6段首句Paragraph1:Thatafternoon,theymettodecoratethedeerwiththematerialstheyhadsourced.Paragraph2:Justthen,Elise’sfrontdooropened,andElisestuckherheadout..7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9情人节临近，这是一个人们通过互赠礼物表达爱意的节日。肯德拉坐在厨房桌前，认真地在情人节卡片上写下自己的名字，准备送给同学们。她生性害羞，写卡片时也觉得难以表达内心想法。她看到一张卡片上的“你真了不起！”这句话，想到了奶奶常常用类似的话语称赞节日装饰，这让她心里感到温暖。就在这时，妈妈进来告诉她邻居埃莉斯出了意外，腿骨折了，接下来几周都要在家学习。肯德拉很同情埃莉斯，于是挑选了最漂亮的情人节卡片，匆忙前往埃莉斯家。到了埃莉斯家，肯德拉看到前院的真人大小的鹿雕像，萌生了给它装饰一番，让埃莉斯透过窗户就能看到情人节装饰的想法。她用奶奶给的大红心，系上绳子挂在雕像脖子上当作装饰链，第二天又在鹿角上挂了各种小爱心。此时，埃莉斯的同学科林和艾米路过，得知肯德拉的想法后，他们也加入进来，科林提议增添颜色，艾米建议在鹿的背部和额头装饰，大家约定稍后再一起行动。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Paragraph1:Thatafternoon,theymettodecoratethedeerwiththematerialstheyhadsourced.那天下午，他们带着找来的材料碰面，准备一起装饰这只鹿。科林带来了几罐鲜艳的颜料，有粉色、紫色和黄色，这些色彩在阳光下闪烁着迷人的光泽。艾米则带来了一些彩色的丝带和亮片，还有一些小巧精致的蝴蝶结。肯德拉看着这些丰富的材料，心中充满了期待，她觉得这只鹿一定会变得更加漂亮。他们分工明确，科林负责用颜料在鹿的身上绘制一些可爱的图案，比如星星、月亮和爱心。他专注地挥舞着画笔，不一会儿，一只栩栩如生的粉色爱心就出现在了鹿的身上。艾米则用丝带和亮片装饰鹿的背部和额头，她把丝带系成漂亮的蝴蝶结，然后小心翼翼地将亮片粘贴在上面，每一个动作都充满了细心和耐心。肯德拉继续在鹿角上添加更多的小爱心，她还找来了一些彩色的羽毛，将它们穿插在鹿角之间，让鹿角看起来更加生动。他们一边忙碌，一边交流着彼此的想法，欢声笑语回荡在院子里。经过一番努力，这只原本普通的鹿雕像变得焕然一新，它就像一个穿着华丽盛装的舞者，散发着迷人的魅力。11续写思路分析Paragraph2:Justthen,Elise’sfrontdooropened,andElisestuckherheadout.就在这时，埃莉斯家的前门打开了，埃莉斯探出头来。她的目光一下子就被眼前这只光彩夺目的鹿吸引住了，她的眼睛瞪得大大的，脸上露出了惊喜和感动的神情。她拄着拐杖，慢慢地走到院子里，仔细地欣赏着这只被精心装饰过的鹿。肯德拉、科林和艾米看到埃莉斯出来，都迎了上去。肯德拉笑着说：“埃莉斯，这是我们为你准备的情人节惊喜，希望你能喜欢。”埃莉斯感动得热泪盈眶，她激动地说：“这是我见过的最漂亮的鹿，谢谢你们，你们真是太好了！”科林和艾米也纷纷表示，希望这个装饰能让埃莉斯在受伤的日子里感到开心和温暖。埃莉斯看着他们，心中充满了感激，她觉得自己虽然受伤了，但因为有了这些好朋友的关心和爱护，这个情人节变得格外特别。他们围坐在一起，分享着这个充满爱意的时刻，欢声笑语在院子里久久回荡。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Thatafternoon,theymettodecoratethedeerwiththematerialstheyhadsourced.Colinbroughtseveralcansofbrightpaints,includingpink,purpleandyellow,whichsparkledcharminglyinthesunlight.Amy,ontheotherhand,carriedsomecolorfulribbons,sequinsandsmall,delicatebows.Kendralookedattheserichmaterialswithgreatanticipation.Shebelievedthatthedeerwouldbecomeevenmorebeautiful.Theyhadacleardivisionoflabor.Colinwasinchargeofpaintingsomelovelypatternsonthedeer'sbodywiththepaints,suchasstars,moonsandhearts.Hefocusedonwavingthepaintbrush,andsoon,avividpinkheartappearedonthedeer'sbody.Amyusedtheribbonsandsequinstodecoratethedeer'sbackandforehead.Shetiedtheribbonsintobeautifulbowsandthencarefullypastedthesequinsonthem,everymovementfullofcareandpatience.Kendracontinuedtoaddmoresmallheartstotheantlers.Shealsofoundsomecolorfulfeathersandinsertedthemamongtheantlerstomaketheantlerslookmorevivid.Whiletheywerebusy,theycommunicatedwitheachotherabouttheirideas,andlaughterechoedintheyard.Aftertheirefforts,theoriginallyordinarydeerstatuewascompletelytransformed.Itwaslikeadanceringorgeouscostumes,exudingacharmingcharm.14范文呈现Justthen,Elise'sfrontdooropened,andElisestuckherheadout.Hereyeswereimmediatelyattractedbythedazzlingdeerinfrontofher.Hereyeswidened,andalookofsurpriseandemotionappearedonherface.Shewalkedslowlyintotheyardwiththehelpofcrutchesandcarefullyadmiredtheelaboratelydecorateddeer.WhenKendra,ColinandAmysawElisecomeout,theyallwentuptoher.Kendrasmiledandsaid,"Elise,thisisaValentine'ssurprisewepreparedforyou.Ihopeyoulikeit."Elisewassomovedthattearsfilledhereyes.Shesaidexcitedly,"ThisisthemostbeautifuldeerI'veeverseen.Thankyouallsomuch!"ColinandAmyalsoexpressedthattheyhopedthisdecorationcouldmakeElisefeelhappyandwarmduringherinjury.Eliselookedatthem,filledwithgratitudeinherheart.Shefeltthatalthoughshewasinjured,thisValentine'sDaybecameextremelyspecialbecauseofthecareandloveofthesegoodfriends.Theysataroundtogether,sharingthismomentfulloflove,andlaughterlingeredintheyardforalongtime.15升级版范文呈现Thatafternoon,theyreconvenedtoadornthedeerwiththematerialstheyhadprocured.Colinarrived,bearingseveralcansofvibrantpaints-pink,purple,andyellow-thatglistenedenchantinglyinthesunlight.Amy,forherpart,carriedanassortmentofcolorfulribbons,twinklingsequins,anddaintybows.Kendra'seyeslitupatthesightoftheseabundantmaterials,herheartbrimmingwithanticipation.Shewascertainthatthedeerwasabouttobetransformedintoaworkofart.Theyswiftlydividedthetasksamongthemselves.Colintookupthepaintbrush,intentoncreatingadorablepatternsonthedeer'sbody.Withdeftstrokes,hepaintedstars,moons,andhearts,eachonecomingtolifeunderhisskilledhand.Beforelong,avividpinkheartadornedthedeer'sflank,addingatouchofwhimsy.Amy,meanwhile,setaboutdecoratingthedeer'sbackandforeheadwiththeribbonsandsequins.Shetiedtheribbonsintointricatebows,andthenmeticulouslyappliedthesequins,hereverymovementatestamenttoherpatienceandcare.Kendra,nottobeoutdone,continuedtoadorntheantlerswithadditionalsmallhearts.Sheevensourcedsomecolorfulfeathersandartfullyinsertedthemamongtheantlers,givingthemalivelyanddynamicappearance.Astheyworked,theyengagedinanimatedconversation,sharingideasandlaughingheartily.Theirvoicesechoedthroughtheyard,fillingtheairwithasenseofcamaraderieandjoy.Afteraperiodofintenseeffort,theonce-plaindeerstatuewascompletelytransformed.Itnowstoodbeforethem,resplendentandmagnificent,likearegalcreaturereadytotakecenterstage.16升级版范文呈现Justthen,Elise'sfrontdoorswungopen,andEliseemerged,hergazeimmediatelydrawntotheresplendentdeer.Hereyeswidenedinastonishment,andalookofprofoundemotionwashedoverherface.Withtheaidofhercrutches,shemadeherwayslowlyintotheyard,hereyesfixedontheelaboratelydecorateddeer.Kendra,Colin,andAmyrushedtowardsher,theirfacesbeamingwithexcitement.Kendra