2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：偶遇独角兽梦想与成全的故事+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习偶遇独角兽，梦想与成全的故事1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文MynameisFauna,butMomandDadsometimescallmeMagpie,sinceItalkalot.Theycallme“animalmagnet,”too;becauseanimalslikeme.Idon’tmindatallbecauseIlikethem,too.Infact,whatIreally,reallywantisapetofmyown.Mydadhasapetfish,andIlikeitalot—butIwouldstilllikeapetthat’sallmine.“Please?Iaskedmyparents.“Prettyplease,withcherriesandchocolateandwhippedcreamontop?”“We’llsee!”“I’llwalkitandfeeditandbrushit....well,unlessithasscalesorsomething.ThenI’llpolishthemrealnice.”“We’llsee.”Finally,though,“we’llsee”wasupgradedto“soon.”“Let’sdosomeresearch,”saidDad,“andseewhatkindofpetisbestforyou.”4续写原文“Andkeepyoureyespeeled,”saidMom.“Youneverknowwhenanopportunitywillcomealong.”Onedidcomealong.IwasonmywayhomefromschoolwhenIsawaunicorn(独角兽)standinginbackofBakerTrembly’sshop.Hewasnibblingstalebiscuitsoutofthetrashcan.Ithoughthemightbeawildunicorncomeintotown,buthetrotted(小跑)rightuptomewhenIheldouttheappleIhadinmybackpack,leftoverfromlunch.“Itfollowedmehome!”Itoldmyparents,afterImanagedtoleadtheunicorntoourfrontgate.“CanIkeepit?”“Ihopeyouwerecareful,”saidmydadwithafrown.“Unicornscanbedangerous.”“Notthisone!He’sverysweet.Andhe’sjustwhatIwant!.Icankeephim.inthegarden.”“Hedoeslooksweet,”saidmymom.“Let’scheckhistags(标牌).”Tags?Ihadn’tevennoticedhisthinsilvercollar,I’dbeensoexcited.5段首句Paragraph1:Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.Paragraph2：“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8小女孩福纳爱说话，深受动物喜爱，一直渴望拥有自己的宠物。父母起初未答应，后表示可以研究并留意机会。一天放学途中，福纳看到一只独角兽在垃圾桶旁吃饼干，独角兽亲近她，她将其带回家希望收养。父母发现独角兽有带电话号码的项圈，准备联系失主。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.项圈上有个小标签，写着一个电话号码。看到这个号码，我心里“咯噔”一下，满心的欢喜瞬间被担忧取代，担心这意味着我不能留下这只独角兽。爸爸毫不犹豫地拿起手机拨通了号码。电话那头，一个叫萨丽的女孩接起电话，声音里满是焦急。她焦急地诉说着，这只独角兽叫闪闪，是她从小养大的宝贝，今天不知怎么就跑丢了，她找了好久都没找到。爸爸向她说明了情况，告知我们的住址，并和她约好让她过来。挂断电话后，我心里五味杂陈，既为闪闪有主人感到难过，又期待能见到它的主人。10续写思路分析Para2：“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”“闪闪从小就跟着我，”萨丽说道，“我们从来没有分开过。”我看着萨丽和闪闪亲昵互动的样子，能真切感受到她们之间深厚的感情。虽然我心里特别失落，毕竟我真的很想拥有闪闪，但我知道让闪闪回到主人身边才是正确的选择。萨丽感激地看着我，说以后可以带着闪闪来找我玩。我听了，心情稍微好了一些。看着萨丽带着闪闪离开，我暗暗告诉自己，以后一定还会遇到属于我的宠物。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.Seeingthenumber,myheartsank.Thejoyinmyheartwasinstantlyreplacedbyworry,fearingthatthismeantIcouldn'tkeeptheunicorn.Mydadimmediatelypickeduphisphoneanddialedthenumber.Ontheotherend,agirlnamedSarianswered.Hervoicewasfilledwithanxiety.Shesaidthattheunicorn,Sparkle,washerbelovedpetthatshehadraisedsinceitwasababy.Today,ithadrunawaysomehow,andshehadbeensearchingeverywherebutcouldn'tfindit.Mydadexplainedthesituation,toldherouraddress,andarrangedforhertocomeover.Afterhangingupthephone,Ifeltmixedemotions,sadthatSparklehadanowner,yetalsolookingforwardtomeetingher.13范文呈现“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”IwatchedasSariinteractedaffectionatelywithSparkle.Itwasclearthattherewasadeepbondbetweenthem.AlthoughIwasextremelydisappointedbecauseIreallywantedtohaveSparkle,IknewitwastherightthingtoletSparklereturntoitsowner.SarilookedatmegratefullyandsaidshecouldbringSparkletovisitmeinthefuture.Hearingthis,Ifeltabitbetter.WatchingSarileavewithSparkle,ItoldmyselfthatIwouldsurelymeetmyownpetsomeday.14升级版范文呈现Therewasalittletagonit,bearingaphonenumber.Atthesightofthedigits,myheartplummeted.Theelationthathadfilledmemomentsagowasswiftlysupplantedbyunease,asIdreadedthethoughtthatthismightsignifytheendofmyhopesofkeepingtheunicorn.Withouthesitation,mydadseizedhisphoneanddialedthenumber.Ontheotherendoftheline,agirlnamedSarianswered,hervoicefraughtwithanxiety.Sherecountedthattheunicorn,Sparkle,washercherishedcompanion,whomshehadnurturedsinceitsinfancy.Today,ithadvanishedwithoutatrace,andshehadscouredeverycornerinvain.Mydadelucidatedthesituation,providedouraddress,andarrangedforhertocomeover.Afterhangingup,amaelstromofemotionssurgedwithinme,ablendofsorrowatSparklehavinganownerandanticipationofmeetingher.15升级版范文呈现““I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”IbeheldasSariandSparkleengagedinaffectionateinterplay.Itwasevidentthataprofoundbondunitedthem.Despitemyoverwhelmingdisappointment,forIhadsetmyheartonhavingSparkle,Irecognizedthatreturningittoitsrightfulownerwastheonlyjustcourse.SariregardedmewithgratitudeandpromisedtobringSparkletovisitmeinthefuture.Thisassurance