2024秋高中英语Unit5ThepowerofnatureSectionⅣWriting-旅游景点介绍学案含解析新人教版选修6

PAGEUnit5ThepowerofnatureSectionⅣWriting——旅游景点介绍一、基本结构二、增分佳句1．Myhometownisontherailwayline.我的家乡在铁路沿线。2．Inthewestsuburbsofthecitytherestandsasmallvillage.Thatismyhometown.市西郊有一个小村子，那就是我的家乡。3．Ourcountryisalargeonewithalonghistory.我们的国家是个历史悠久的大国。4．Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyvillageinthepast/last20years.在过去的20年里，我们村子发生了天翻地覆的改变。5．Thestreetshavebeenwidened.Factories,schools,hospitals,cinemasandtheatreshavebeensetuponeafteranother.Nowmyhometownhasbecomearichandbeautifulplace.街道已经拓宽。工厂、学校、医院、影院和剧院一个接一个地拔地而起。如今，我的家乡变得富有、漂亮。6．LocatedintheeastofFujianProvince,Xiamenisacoastalcitywithalonghistory.厦门位于福建省东部，是一个具有悠久历史的沿海城市。7．Itcoversatotalareaof5,271squarekilometreswithapopulationofabout3.5million.它总占地面积是5271平方千米，人口约为350万。8．TherearemanyfamousplacesofinterestinShanwei,amongwhicharetheFengshanTempleandRedBay.汕尾市有许多闻名的旅游胜地，如凤山祖庙、红海湾等。[题目要求]依据以下提示写一篇关于伦敦的旅游景点介绍。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1．确定体裁：本文为说明文；2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；3．确定时态：主要运用一般现在时。二、构思第一部分，整体介绍。其次部分，分区介绍。第三部分，总结全文。其次步：核心词汇想周全1．fullof充溢2．apoliticalcenter政治中心3．ahugefinancialmarketplace一个巨大的金融市场4．theoldestpartofLondon伦敦最古老的地方5．abusyshoppingandentertainmentdistrict繁忙的购物区和消遣区6．holdsth.successfully胜利举办……7．improve改善8．Itisdifficulttodosth.做……很困难第三步：由词扩句雏形现1．一句多译①伦敦是一座艺术气息和历史氛围浓郁的都城，一个重要的政治中心，一个巨大的金融市场。Londonisacapitalcityfullofartandhistory,animportantpoliticalcentreandahugefinancialmarketplace.→London,acapitalcityfullofartandhistory,isanimportantpoliticalcentreaswellasahugefinancialmarketplace.②伦敦是一个“乡村集散地”，每个地方都有自己的特色和自己的社区，因此要全面描述伦敦是很困难的。ItisdifficulttodescribeLondonineveryaspect,forthecityismadeupofacollectionofvillages,eachofwhichhasitsowncharacterandcommunity.→Asacitymadeupofacollectionofvillages,itisdifficulttodescribeLondonineveryaspect,foreachofthevillageshasitsowncharacterandcommunity.2．基本句式①金融广场是伦敦最古老的地方。TheSquareMileistheoldestpartofLondon.②那里没有太多的人居住。Therearenotmanypeoplelivingthere.③每天30万人在此工作。300,000peopleworkthereeveryday.④伦敦西区是繁忙的购物区和消遣区。WestEndisabusyshoppingandentertainmentdistrict.⑤伦敦东区包含伦敦港。EastEndcontainsthePortof⑥那是移民最先到达的地方。Itistheplacewheremanyimmigrantsfirstarrived.⑦在伦敦胜利举办了2012年奥运会。TheOlympicsweresuccessfullyheldin2012inLondon.⑧当地人希望这个区的住房、教化和工作机会能够得到改善。Thelocalpeoplehopethathousing,educationandemploymentformanypeopleinthisareawillimprove.第四步：句式升级造亮点1．用定语从句及with的复合结构连接基本句式中的①②③TheSquareMileistheoldestpartofLondon,wheretherearenotmanypeoplelivingwith300,000peopleworkingthereeveryday.2．用while及which引导的定语从句连接基本句式中的④⑤⑥WestEndisabusyshoppingandentertainmentdistrictwhileEastEndcontainsthePortofLondon,whichistheplacewheremanyimmigrantsfirstarrived.3．用whose引导定语从句连接基本句式中的⑦⑧TheOlympicsweresuccessfullyheldin2012inLondon,whosepeoplehopethathousing,educationandemploymentformanypeopleinthisareawillimprove.第五步：过渡连接联成篇London,acapitalcityfullofartandhistory,isanimportantpoliticalcentreaswellasahugefinancialmarketplace.TheSquareMileistheoldestpartofLondon,wheretherearenotmanypeoplelivingwith300,000peopleworkingthereeveryday.WestEndisabusyshoppingandentertainmentdistrictwhileEastEndcontainsthePortofLondon,whichistheplacewheremanyimmigrantsfirstarrived.TheOlympicsweresuccessfullyheldin2012inLondon,whosepeoplehopethathousing,educationandemploymentformanype