2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：从厨艺小白到参赛蜕变之旅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习从厨艺小白到参赛蜕变之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文WhenMr.Bruin,ourteacher,announcedacompetitiontoendourkitchenskillsunit,whereparticipantsmustcookwithoutrecipes,usingonlytheingredients(原料)providedbythejudges,Irecalledwhatalwayshappenedinmyfamily.Mymomknewhowtomakesevenmeals.Shekeptallsevenrecipesinapinkbinder(活页夹),eachonelabelledwithadayoftheweek.OnMondayswasMeatloaf(烘肉卷).AndithadbeenTunaTuesdaysandSpaghettiSaturdaysfor,like,myentirelife.Ihatedit.Oh,notonlyI,butalsomyyoungerbrother,Georgie.“Noteverymealhastostartwiththesameletterasadayoftheweek.Andallofittastesawful,”Icomplainedatthediningtable.“Yeah!Meatloaf'sawful,”repeatedGeorgie..Mymom'seyesflashed.ButatleastIhadsomeoneatmyback.4续写原文MythoughtwasinterruptedbythewordsofTania,mybestfriend.“I'mtotallygoingtowin,”sheannounced.“I'vegottalentinmygenes.”Itwastrue.Tania'sdadwasthebestcookever.Ithoughtaboutmygenes.Ididn'tknowmuchaboutthem.So,ifIwantedtowin,Ineededpractice.Tonight,Iwasmakingsupper.5续写原文Myattempt,unfortunately,provedafailure.Icombinedchocolatechips,marshmallows,carrots,potatoes,andkidneybeansinapot,whichturnedoutaburntmess,muchtomyowndisappointment.Georgieevencheeredwhenmymomofferedtheremainingmeatloafasamoreappealingoption.AsIwaspouringitintothegarbagecan,Mrs.Benny,myneighbor,spottedme.“What'sthat?”sheasked.“Supper,”Isaid.“Goodtoknow,”saidMrs.Benny.“It'sniceofyoutohelpyourmother,evenifitdidn'tworkout.Yourmomworkshard.”“Actually,Iwasjustpracticingforacookingcompetitionatschool.Wehavetocomeupwithourownrecipesforit.ButI'malostcause.”Mrs.Bennylookedthoughtful,“Whydon'tyoucomeovertomyplace?I'llofferyousomehelp.”6段首句Paragraph1:ThenextdayIwasstandinginMrs.Benny'sgarden,surroundedbyredtomatoesandrowsofgreens.Paragraph2：WhenIgothomewithtwocontainersoftomatojam,mymomwaslyingonthesofa,awetclothonherforehead.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9老师宣布厨艺单元有一场无食谱烹饪比赛，原料由评委提供。“我”想起妈妈只会做七道菜，且味道不佳，自己和弟弟都不喜欢。好友塔尼亚称有家族厨艺基因能夺冠，“我”决定练习。然而首次尝试却失败了，把各种原料混合煮成一团焦糊。邻居本尼夫人看到后，邀请“我”去她家帮忙练习厨艺。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：ThenextdayIwasstandinginMrs.Benny'sgarden,surroundedbyredtomatoesandrowsofgreens.第二天，我站在本尼夫人的花园里，四周环绕着红彤彤的西红柿和一排排翠绿的蔬菜。本尼夫人热情地穿梭在菜畦间，一边向我介绍各种蔬菜的特点，一边讲解如何根据它们的特性来搭配食材。她摘下一颗饱满的西红柿，放在我手心，说：“西红柿是很多菜肴的好搭档，酸甜的味道能为菜品增添丰富层次。”接着，我们又挑选了鲜嫩的罗勒叶和紫皮洋葱。回到厨房，本尼夫人系上围裙，开始手把手教我制作番茄果酱。她耐心地指导我控制火候，不停地搅拌，适时加入适量的糖和香料。在她的悉心指导下，锅里的食材逐渐融合，散发出诱人的香气。11续写思路分析Para2WhenIgothomewithtwocontainersoftomatojam,mymomwaslyingonthesofa,awetclothonherforehead.当我带着两罐番茄果酱回到家时，妈妈正躺在沙发上，额头上敷着一块湿布。我心中一紧，轻手轻脚地走到沙发旁。我把一罐果酱放进冰箱，然后拿着另一罐来到妈妈身边，轻声说：“妈妈，尝尝这个，我和本尼夫人一起做的。”妈妈缓缓坐起身，接过勺子，挖了一勺果酱放入口中。瞬间，她的眼睛亮了起来，惊喜地说：“太好吃了！宝贝，你真厉害。”听到妈妈的夸赞，我心里满是欢喜。这一刻，我明白了，只要有人指导并加以练习，我也能做出美味的食物。我对即将到来的烹饪比赛充满了信心。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现ThenextdayIwasstandinginMrs.Benny'sgarden,surroundedbyredtomatoesandrowsofgreens.Mrs.Bennywasbustlingaroundthevegetablebeds,introducingthecharacteristicsofeachvegetabletome.Shepickedaplumptomatoandputitinmypalm,saying,"Tomatoesaregreatpartnersformanydishes.Theirsweet-and-sourtastecanaddrichlayerstothefood."Then,wealsoselectedfreshbasilleavesandpurpleonions.Backinthekitchen,Mrs.Bennyputonanapronandstartedteachingmehowtomaketomatojamstepbystep.Shepatientlyguidedmetocontroltheheat,keepstirring,andaddtherightamountofsugarandspicesattherighttime.Underhercarefulguidance,theingredientsinthepotgraduallyblendedtogether,givingoffanattractivearoma.14范文呈现WhenIgothomewithtwocontainersoftomatojam,mymomwaslyingonthesofa,awetclothonherforehead.Iwasworriedandwalkedquietlytothesofa.Iputonecontainerofjaminthefridgeandthentooktheothertomymom.Isaidsoftly,"Mom,trythis.ImadeitwithMrs.Benny."Momslowlysatup,tookaspoon,andputaspoonfulofjamintohermouth.Immediately,hereyeslitupandshesaidinsurprise,"It'sdelicious!Honey,you'reamazing."Hearingmymom'spraise,Ifeltextremelyhappy.Atthismoment,Irealizedthatwithguidanceandpractice,Icouldalsomakedeliciousfood.Iwasfullofconfidenceintheupcomingcookingcompetition.15升级版范文呈现ThenextdayfoundmestandinginMrs.Benny'sgarden,whereIwasenvelopedbyclustersofredtomatoesandneatrowsofverdantgreens.Mrs.Benny,withenthusiasm,flittedamongthevegetablebeds,expoundingontheuniquetraitsofeachvegetable.Shepluckedaplumptomato,placingitgentlyinmypalm,andremarked,"Tomatoes,aversatileingredient,caninfusedisheswithadelightfulsweet-and-sourflavor,addingdepthandcomplexity."Subsequently,wegatheredfreshbasilleavesandpurpleonions.Returningtothekitchen,Mrs.Bennydonnedanapronandcommencedguidingme,step-by-meticulousstep,intheartofmakingtomatojam.Shepatientlyinstructedmeonheatcontrol,theimportanceofconstantstirring,andthepreciseadditionofsugarandspices.Underherwatchfuleye,theingredientsinthepotmeldedharmoniously,releasinganenticingaroma.16升级版范文呈现Uponmyarrivalhome,bearingtwocontainersoftomatojam,Ifoundmymomrecliningonthesofa,adampclothrestingonherforehead.ConcernwelledupwithinmeasItiptoedtowardsthesofa.Idepositedonecontainerofjaminthefridgeandthenapproachedmymomwiththeother.