专题02 投稿征文（解析版）-2025年高考英语写作常考题型全面突破

专题02投稿征文征文投稿，区别与书信，一般会给出特定的主题。如庆祝英文栏目创刊十周年，你最敬爱的人等等。不要在开头和结尾生搬硬套如“I’writingto...”等书信格式。基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。话题基本上围绕书信类，如推荐一个项目，那就和推荐信写作思路一致。如最想感谢的人，那就和感谢信思路一致，不过在表达上可能人称需要换一下。基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。学生需要掌握相关词汇，句式用法等。文章框架结构“引出话题-要点展开-总结全文”。主次分明，逻辑清晰。主题句要出现关键点，如现状、原因、看法、影响、意义、措施、建议等。拓展句具体详细，有意识使用逻辑衔接词。【2023▪全国甲卷】你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物简介及事迹；2.意义或启示。注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你写好。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Confuciusisawell-knownfigureinChinesehistory.Histeachingsemphasizedtheimportanceofmoralvalues,respectforelders,andsocialharmony.Confuciustraveledthroughoutthecountry,impartinghiswisdomtocountlessdisciplesandleavingaprofoundimpactonChinesesociety.ThesignificanceofConfuciuscannotbeoverstated.HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.Eventoday,hisideascontinuetoguideindividualsandcommunitiesinChinaandbeyond.Confucius’slifeoffersvaluablelessons.Hestressedtheself-cultivation,respectforelders,andthepursuitofknowledge,whichservesasaguidinglightinourfast-pacedandinterconnectedworld.Histeachingsremindusoftheimportanceofintegrity,compassion,andsocialresponsibility.【思路点拨】

段落要点首段总体阐述所述问题或现象。正文具体论述或描写相关情况；或者介绍主题人或事物细节。尾段得出结论、体会或呼吁【写作模板】whenitcomesto___________________(当谈到...时）,itiswidelyacknowledgedthat________________________（众所周知）.Foronething,_________________________（主题特色一）.Notonly_________________________butalso_________________________________(具体特点)Foranther,thereisnodoubtthat________________________________(主题特色二)Idohopethat________________________.(表达期望).Allinall,itishightimethat....(sbdidsth)【必背词语】同意，赞同subscribeto忠实的读者faithfulreaders表达自己的观点voicetheiropinions不遗余力地做某事sparenoeffortstodo...共同努力做某事makejointefforttodo...对...…有害doharmto/beharmfulto...谈到、提到Whenitcomesto...不可否认......Thereisnodenyingthat...随着新学期的临近Withthenewtermapproaching面临考试befacedwithchallengeexams人们普遍认为....Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat...很明显，明显地Itisobviousthat.../obliviously极为重要；强调...…的重要性...ofgreat/crucial/vitalsignificance/importance;强调…的重要性emphasizetheimportanceof...;highlightthesignificanceof...;attachimportanceto......…【必背开头段】Anarticleinthenewspapercaughtmyattention.报纸上一篇文章引起了我的注意Whenitcomestoprotectingtheocean,itiswell-knownthatoceanplaysanimportantpartinourlife.说到保护海洋，众所周知，海洋在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。TherearemanypeoplewhoIrespect.Asforme,myfatheristheoneIrespect.ThereasonswhyIrespecthimareasfollows.近来，随着智能手机和电脑的日益流行，越来越多的学生选择用它们在课外学习英语。Nowadays,withtheimprovementofthestandardofliving,anincreasingnumberofteenagerssufferfromobesity,whicharousessocialconcerns.如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症，这引起了社会的关注。InthelongspanoftheChinesehistory,theexistenceoftheoutstandingConfuciusislikeashiningpearl.在中国漫长的历史上，杰出的孔子的存在就像一颗闪亮的珍珠。Sb.isconsideredtobeoneofthemostinfluentialfiguresinhistoryduetohis/heraccomplishments/achievements/impact.某人被认为是历史上最具影响力的人物之一，因为他/她的[成就/影响力/贡献]。ThelonghistoryofChinahaswitnessedtheflourishingofpoetryandthebrillianceofmanyexceptionalpoets,amongwhomIadmireDuFumost.中国悠久的历史见证了诗歌的繁荣和许多杰出诗人的才华，其中我最欣赏杜甫。【必背主题段】Asahighschoolstudent,Inoticedthatmanystudentshadaseriesofhealthproblemsbecauseofirregulardiet.作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。Myfavouritesportsisropeskipping,becausenotonlycanIdoitathomeconvenientlybutalsoitcanhelptorefreshmeafterIgettiredfromdoinghomework.我最喜欢的运动是跳绳，因为跳绳不仅可以方便地在家里做，而且可以帮助我在做完作业累了之后提神。Additionally,ItakedelightinvariousactivitiesinthereadingclubeveryFriday,whereIgetimmersedintheseaofliterature,greatlyimprovingmyliterarycompetence.此外，我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动，在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里，大大提高了我的文学能力。Onlyifwetakeactiontoexercisecanwebehealthierandhealthierinthefuture.只有当我们采取行动去锻炼时，我们才能在未来变得更健康。Foronething,notonlydoestheoceanoffersusvariousofseafoodtoeat,butalsoitishometomanykindsofanimals.首先，海洋不仅为我们提供了各种各样的海鲜可以吃，而且它也是多种动物的家园。Notonlydoesplayingbasketballbuildupmybodyandrelievestressfromstudy,butitalsopromotesfriendshipwithothers.打篮球球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。Facedwiththechallengeofbeingdestroyed,missingorevenbeingstolen,traditionalChineserelicsareurgenttobeprotected.面对被销毁、失踪甚至被盗的挑战，中国传统文物迫切需要得到保护。【必背结尾段】Iwillgreatlyappreciatearesponsefromyouatyourearliestconvenience.如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。IdoexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.我希望《青年》能出版更多的经典作品，并有一个光明的未来。Iwillgreatlyappreciatearesponsefromyouatyourearliestconvenience.如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。Wehopethatwithallthesemeasurestaken,eyesightproblemscanbegreatlyreduced.我们希望这些有效的措施能大大减少视力问题。IsincerelyhopeYouthwillachievegreatersuccessandhaveapromisingfuture.我衷心希望Youth能取得更大的成就，更受欢迎。IsincerelyhopethatthroughmoreunderstandingofConfuciusandhisConfucianism,wecanmaketheworldfilledwithmorelove,justiceandpeace.我真诚地希望，通过对孔子及其儒家思想的进一步理解，我们能让世界充满更多的爱、正义与和平。Personally,itishightimethatwesparednoefforttopreservetraditionalculturalrelics.就我个人而言，我们是时候不遗余力地保护传统文物了。（2024年浙江卷1月）请你写一篇短文向校英文报“SportsandHealth”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：1.介绍这项运动；2.说明推荐理由。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：StandUpandExercise,Everybody!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】StandUpandExercise,Everybody!Everybody!Areyoutiredofsittinginclassallday?Howaboutincorporatingsomephysicalactivityintoyourdailyroutine?Onegreatoptionisthe“StandUpandStretch”exercise.Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.It’saquickandeasywaytogetyourbloodflowingandre-energizeyourbodyandmind.Thisexerciseisrecommendedforseveralreasons.First,ithelpstocombatthenegativeeffectsofprolongedsitting,suchasbackpainandstiffness.Second,itcanimproveyourfocusandconcentration,makingiteasiertostayengagedinclass.Lastly,itpromotesahealthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverallwell-being.So,nexttimeyoufeelabitsluggishduringclass,remembertostandupandstretch!It’sasmallchangethatcanmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.Writing1（2024·山东泰安·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校正通过校英文报向同学们征集暑期社会实践活动的方案。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.你的方案;2.你的理由。注意：1.词数80词左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearEditor,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerelyyours,LiHua【答案】DearEditor,Tomakeoursummervacationfulfilling,Iwouldliketoproposeasocialpracticeactivitycalled“GetYourHandsDirtyinHiking”inwhichstudentsshouldcombinehikingwithcleaninguptrails.Inthiseco-friendlyhike,studentsareencouragedtobringrecycledbagstopickuptrashalongthehikingtrails,whichcannotonlypromotetheirphysicalhealthbutalsofostertheirsenseofsocialresponsibility.Byactivelyparticipatinginthecleanupprocess,studentsrecognizethemselvesasessentialmembersofsocietyandstrengthenanawarenessofenvironmentalconservation.Itisthroughthesehands-onexperiencesthatwestudentscanbeinspiredtomakeadifferenceinnatureandbeyond.Sincerelyyours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇关于暑期社会实践活动的方案投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累令人满意：fulfilling→satisfying加强：strengthen→enhance参加：participatein→takepartin重要的：essential→crucial2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Byactivelyparticipatinginthecleanupprocess,studentsrecognizethemselvesasessentialmembersofsocietyandstrengthenanawarenessofenvironmentalconservation.拓展句：Ifstudentscanactivelyparticipateinthecleanupprocess,theywillrecognizethemselvesasessentialmembersofsocietyandstrengthenanawarenessofenvironmentalconservation.【点睛】[高分句型1]Tomakeoursummervacationfulfilling,Iwouldliketoproposeasocialpracticeactivitycalled“GetYourHandsDirtyinHiking”inwhichstudentsshouldcombinehikingwithcleaninguptrails.(运用了介词+关系代词结构非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Byactivelyparticipatinginthecleanupprocess,studentsrecognizethemselvesasessentialmembersofsocietyandstrengthenanawarenessofenvironmentalconservation.(运用了动名词作宾语)Writing2（24-25高三上·浙江·阶段练习）假设你是李华，上周六你班参观了当地的传统手工作坊（handicraftworkshop），请你写一则短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括：1.你的经历；2.你的收获。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。AMemorableVisittoaHandicraftWorkshop______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:AMemorableVisittoaHandicraftWorkshopLastSaturday,ourclasswentonajourneythroughtimetoalocalhandicraftworkshop,wheretheartofmakingisnotjustanexceptionalskill,butaliving,breathingtradition.Aswesteppedintotheworkshop,theairwasfilledwiththescentofclayandthesofthumoftoolsatwork.Stunnedbyawidearrayofdelicateceramics,Iembarkedonmyfirstattemptatavaseundertheguidanceofaseasonedcraftsman.Withthewheelspinningandclaytakingformundermyhands,Iwasoverwhelmedwiththrillandsatisfaction.Thisexperiencehasleftmewithanewfoundrespectfortheartofmakinganddeeperinsightsintotheculturalheritagethatthecraftrepresents.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则短文向校英文报投稿，说明参观当地的传统手工作坊的经历。【详解】1.词汇积累充满：befilledwith→befullof杰出的：exceptional→outstanding传统：tradition→custom满意：satisfaction→content2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Withthewheelspinningandclaytakingformundermyhands,Iwasoverwhelmedwiththrillandsatisfaction.拓展句：WhenIhadthewheelspinningandclayundermyhands,Iwasoverwhelmedwiththrillandsatisfaction.【点睛】[高分句型1]LastSaturday,ourclasswentonajourneythroughtimetoalocalhandicraftworkshop,wheretheartofmakingisnotjustanexceptionalskill,butaliving,breathingtradition.(运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Withthewheelspinningandclaytakingformundermyhands,Iwasoverwhelmedwiththrillandsatisfaction.(运用了with的复合结构)Writing3（24-25高三上·山东潍坊·开学考试）假如你是李华，你校英文报举办了主题为“终身学习(LifelongLearning)”的读书分享会活动。请你写一篇投稿记录这次活动，内容包括：1．活动的内容；2．你的心得。注意：写作词数应为80个左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Toinspirestudentstoexploretheendlessworldofknowledgethroughliterature,ourschool’sEnglishnewspaperrecentlyheldaremarkablereadingandsharingeventthemed“LifelongLearning”.Theeventkickedoffwithaseriesofpresentationsbystudentswhosharedbooksthathadprofoundlyinfluencedtheirperspectivesonlearning.Inaddition,teacherswereinvitedtoprovideguidanceonlearningeffectivelyandcontinuously.Thehighlightoftheeventwasaguestlecturebyafamousauthorwhosharedherpersonaljourneyofcontinuouslearningandhowithadshapedhercareerandlife.Thiseventnotonlybroadensmyunderstandingoftheimportanceoflifelonglearningbutalsoarousesapassionwithinmetoseekknowledgeineveryaspectoflife.Therefore,Iamdeterminedtokeepreadingtobecomeabetterversionofmyself.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英文报举办了主题为“终身学习(LifelongLearning)”的读书分享会活动。要求考生写一篇投稿记录这次活动。【详解】1.词汇积累举办：hold→launch极好的：remarkable→wonderful此外：inaddition→what’smore拓宽：broaden→widen2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Thiseventnotonlybroadensmyunderstandingoftheimportanceoflifelonglearningbutalsoarousesapassionwithinmetoseekknowledgeineveryaspectoflife.拓展句：Notonlydoesthisevent

broadenmyunderstandingoftheimportanceoflifelonglearning,butalsoitarousesapassionwithinmetoseekknowledgeineveryaspectoflife.【点睛】【高分句型1】Toinspirestudentstoexploretheendlessworldofknowledgethroughliterature,ourschool’sEnglishnewspaperrecentlyheldaremarkablereadingandsharingeventthemed“LifelongLearning”.（运用了todo不定式结构作状语以及过去分词作后置定语）【高分句型2】Theeventkickedoffwithaseriesofpresentationsbystudentswhosharedbooksthathadprofoundlyinfluencedtheirperspectivesonlearning.（运用了who引导的定语从句）Writing4（24-25高三上·江西鹰潭·阶段练习）你校英语论坛的专题讨论板块本周讨论的话题为“TheChineseathletewhoinspiresmemost”。请你写一篇短文发布在该板块上，内容包括：1.运动员简介；2.激励你的原因。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

TherearenumerousremarkableChineseathletes,ofwhomdiverQuanHongchaninspiresmemost.

Asayounggirl,QuanHongchanneededtoworkextremelyhardonhertraining,withtheinitialintentionofimprovingherfamily’slivingstandardandhelpinghermomcureillness.Growingupinsuchhardconditions,thegirlwasbraveandhardworking.AttheAsianGames,thisstronggirldisplayedherconfidenceandcalmnessduringeachdive.Iaminspiredbyheroutstandingtalents,extraordinarycourageandfirmwillpower.

Inshort,QuanHongchanisagreatathletewhogoesafterperfectioninmymind.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于话题为“TheChineseathletewhoinspiresmemost”的短文发布在学校英语论坛的专题讨论板块上。【详解】1.词汇积累许多的：numerous→countless鼓励；鼓舞：inspire→encourage总之：inshort→inanutshell出色的：outstanding→prominent2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Growingupinsuchhardconditions,thegirlwasbraveandhardworking.拓展句：ThoughQuanHongchangrewupinsuchhardconditions,thegirlwasbraveandhardworking.【点睛】【高分句型1】TherearenumerousremarkableChineseathletes,ofwhomdiverQuanHongchaninspiresmemost.(运用了介词of+whom引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Growingupinsuchhardconditions,thegirlwasbraveandhardworking.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)Writing5（24-25高三上·江西南昌·开学考试）假设你是李华，今年暑假你和同学相约南昌梅岭风景区，进行了为期一天的徒步活动，请你以AHikingExperience为题给校英文报写一篇短文分享这次经历，内容包括：1.活动的过程;2.采取的防护措施;3.个人感受。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。AHikingExperience____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

AHikingExperience

Lastsummer,IhikedwithfriendsinNanchang’sMeilingScenicArea.

Westartedearly,packingwater,snacks,andmasksforsafety.Theairwasfresh,andthescenerybreathtaking.Toensureasecurejourney,wetookseveralprotectivemeasures.Firstly,wecarefullyplannedourroute,avoidingtreacherousorunfamiliarterrainthatcouldposerisks.Wealsoinformedfamilymembersofouritineraryandestimatedreturntime.

Reachingthesummit,wefeltasenseofprideandunity.Thebreathtakingpanoramaremindedusofnature’sbeautyandtheimportanceofperseverance.Thishiketaughtmevaluablelessonsaboutfriendship,teamwork,andrespectingnature.ItwasamemorabledaythatI’llalwayscherish.【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生以AHikingExperience为题给校英文报写一篇短文分享今年暑假你和同学相约南昌梅岭风景区，进行了为期一天的徒步活动的经历。【详解】1.词汇积累确保：ensure→guarantee首先：firstly→firstandforemost到达：reach→arriveat重要性：importance→significance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Toensureasecurejourney,wetookseveralprotectivemeasures.拓展句：Wetookseveralprotectivemeasures,thepurposeofwhichwastoensureasecurejourney.【点睛】[高分句型1]Firstly,wecarefullyplannedourroute,avoidingtreacherousorunfamiliarterrainthatcouldposerisks.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]ItwasamemorabledaythatI’llalwayscherish.(运用了that引导的定语从句)Writing1（2023年全国乙卷）请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WhenIwasinmyprimaryschool,Ihadanopportunitytoattendamusicalcontestheldinmyschool.ThatwasthefirsttimeIwatchedalivemusicalperformance.Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply.Iaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.Inthebeginning,itwasquitedifficulttoreadthenotesonthestave.However,itdidnotdemoralizeme.Ispentmostofmyleisurehourstopracticepiano.Althoughmyfingerswerepainfulafterfewhourspractice,IfeltsatisfiedifIcouldplayamusicpiececompletely.EventhoughIwillnotpursueasmylifecareer,Iwillstillcontinuelearningandplayingpianoasmyhobby.Itissimplybecausemusicisthebestmedicationformysoul.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。【详解】1.词汇积累机会：opportunity→chance使沮丧：demoralize→discourage满意的：satisfied→content空闲的：leisure→spare2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply.Iaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.拓展句：Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply,soIaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.点睛【高分句型1】WhenIwasinmyprimaryschool,Ihadanopportunitytoattendamusicalcontestheldinmyschool.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)【高分句型2】Althoughmyfingerswerepainfulafterfewhourspractice,IfeltsatisfiedifIcouldplayamusicpiececompletely.(运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)Writing2（2022年全国乙卷）学校英文报正在开展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.学习活动状况描述；2.简单评论；3.你的建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。【答案】LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomNowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.However,thosechoosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itisadisturbingtrend.Forstudents,whatbenefitsmosttotheirstudyisreadingEnglishbooks.Becauseoftheirlackofself-discipline,they’remoreeasilyaddictedtochattingonlineorplayinggames.It’surgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline,andit’salsourgentforparentsandteacherstostrengthentheguidance.【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，对学生的英语学习活动状况进行描述并作简单的评论，提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累缺乏：lack→shortage加强：strengthen→enhance各种各样的：various→allkindsof就我而言：asfarasI’mconcerned→frommyperspective2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：However,thosechoosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%an