2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：志愿者的努力与寻找援手之路+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习志愿者的努力与寻找援手之路1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Onabrightsunnyday,IstartedmyfirstdayofvolunteeringattheL.A．FoodBank.Myreasontovolunteeratthefoodbankwastosatisfymyneedtohelpothersandleaveachange.Thiswasmyopportunitytomakeapositiveimpactintheworldalongwithotherswhoenjoyvolunteering.AsIenteredthefoodbank,therewerelotsofpeoplethere.Theywaitedinlinestocheckinwithcoordinators(协调员).Everybodyvolunteeringbeganheadingquicklytotheirassigneddutiesaftercheckingin.IstartedtogetexcitedwhenIrealizedmyopportunitytoencounterandworkwithadiversegroupofpeople.Thisexperienceallowedmetomakeconnectionswithpeopleofdifferentbackgrounds.4续写原文Coordinatorsassignedmetorepackagedonatedfooditems.WhenIpackedthedonatedfoodintoabag,Imustmakesureeachbaghadtocontainthecorrectamountoffood.Ialsomustplacefoodintobagsquicklybeforethetablewouldgetovercrowded.Mytaskalsorequiredalotoffocuswhentryingtoworkquicklywithmyhands.However,Ithoughtallthehardworkandeffortwouldbeworthit.5续写原文Weworkedtogetherasateamtoensurethatourtaskwasgoingeffectively.Whiledoingmytask,somevolunteersaroundmesighed,“Therearestillmanyboxesoffoodthatneedtobeunloadedthoughwetriedourbesttoworkatafast-pace.”Ifeltlikeweallhadacommongoalofhelpingothers,buttheproblemwasthatthereweren’tenoughvolunteers.Infact,weneededmorepeopletodealwiththefood,whichcouldn’tbekeptfortoolong.Withoutenoughvolunteers,muchfoodwouldgobad.However,wherecouldwefindmorevolunteers?Idecidedtohaveatrytopersuadesomepeopletohelpdealwiththefood.6段首句Paragraph1：Afterabusymorning,Idecidedtoeatsomethinginarestaurant.Paragraph2：Iwalkedtowardsthemandwantedthemtojoinus.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9在阳光明媚的一天，“我”开启了在洛杉矶食品银行的首次志愿工作。在食品银行，“我”被分配重新包装捐赠食品，大家齐心协力却发现志愿者人手不足，大量食物面临变质风险。“我”决心寻找更多志愿者，忙碌一上午后在餐厅有了新发现，或许能解决燃眉之急。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Afterabusymorning,Idecidedtoeatsomethinginarestaurant.忙碌一上午后，我走进一家餐厅准备吃点东西。坐在餐桌前，享受着片刻的放松。不经意间，我注意到旁边一桌坐着几个年轻人，他们正热烈地交谈着，脸上洋溢着青春的活力。我灵机一动，心想他们或许就是我们急需的志愿者。但当我准备上前邀请时，心里不禁有些忐忑。毕竟和陌生人搭话，还请求他们帮忙，万一被拒绝了怎么办？可一想到食品银行堆积如山的食物和即将到来的变质危机，我还是鼓起了勇气。11续写思路分析Para2：Iwalkedtowardsthemandwantedthemtojoinus.我走向他们，脸上挂着友善的笑容，先做了简单的自我介绍，接着详细地讲述了食品银行的现状。我告诉他们，大量捐赠的食物因为志愿者人手不够，面临着变质浪费的风险，而他们的加入可以改变这一局面。出乎我意料的是，他们听后眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒，还接连问了好多问题，对志愿工作表现出浓厚的兴趣。他们相互讨论了一会儿后，竟然一致同意跟我去食品银行帮忙。他们的热情瞬间感染了我，有了这些新伙伴的加入，我坚信我们一定能避免食物浪费，为那些需要帮助的人送去温暖。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Afterabusymorning,Ienteredarestauranttograbsomethingtoeat.Sittingatthetable,Iwasenjoyingamomentofrelaxation.Suddenly,Inoticedagroupofyoungpeoplesittingattheadjacenttable.Theywerechattinganimatedly,withtheglowofyouthontheirfaces.Anideapoppedintomymind.Maybetheycouldbethevolunteersweurgentlyneeded.However,whenIwasabouttoapproachthem,Ifeltabitnervous.Afterall,itwasnoteasytotalktostrangersandaskfortheirhelp.Whatiftheyrefused?Butthinkingofthemountainsoffoodinthefoodbankandtheimpendingspoilagecrisis,Isummonedupmycourage.14范文呈现Iwalkedtowardsthemwithafriendlysmile.First,Iintroducedmyselfbriefly,andthenIdescribedthesituationatthefoodbankindetail.Itoldthemthatduetotheshortageofvolunteers,alargeamountofdonatedfoodwasatriskofspoiling,andtheirparticipationcouldchangethesituation.Tomysurprise,theireyessparkledwithexcitementafterhearingthis.Theyaskedaseriesofquestions,showinggreatinterestinthevolunteerwork.Afterashortdiscussionamongthemselves,theyunanimouslyagreedtogotothefoodbankwithme.Theirenthusiasmimmediatelyinfectedme.Withthesenewvolunteersjoining,Ifirmlybelievedthatwecouldpreventfoodwasteandbringwarmthtothoseinneed.15升级版范文呈现Afterastrenuousmorning,Isteppedintoarestaurant,intentongrabbingabite.Seatedatthetable,relishingabriefrespite,myattentionwasabruptlydrawntoagroupofyoungindividualsattheneighboringtable.Engagedinanimatedconversation,theirfacesradiatedyouthfulexuberance.Athought,likeaboltoflightning,flashedthroughmymind:perhapstheycouldbethemuch-neededreinforcementsforthefoodbank.However,asIreadiedmyselftoapproachthem,awaveofnervousnesswashedoverme.Afterall,initiatingaconversationwithstrangersandsolicitingtheirassistancewasnoeasyfeat.Whatiftheydeclined?Nevertheless,theimageofthemountainouspilesoffoodatthefoodbank,teeteringonthebrinkofspoilage,steeledmyresolve,andIsummonedthecouragetoproceed.16升级版范文呈现Iadvancedtowardsthem,wearingawarmsmile.First,Iofferedaconciseself-introduction,followedbyadetailedaccountofthediresituationatthefoodbank.Iexplainedthatduetothescarcityofvolunteers,asubstantialquantityofdonatedprovisionswasperilouslyclosetospoiling,andtheirinvolvementcouldbetheturningpoint.Tomyastonishment,theireyeslitupwithenthusiasmuponhearingthis.Theypepperedmewithaflurryofquestions,evincingprofoundinterestinthevolunteerendeavor.Afterabriefhuddleamongthemselves,theyreachedaunanimousdecisiontoaccompanymetothefoodbank.Theirinfectiouszealimmediatelypermeatedtheair,