2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：爱心传递：善举循环的温暖故事+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习爱心传递：善举循环的温暖故事1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文WhatGoesAroundComesAroundOnedayamansawanoldladyonthesideoftheroad.Noticingshemightneedhelp,hepulledup,gotoutandfoundthatshehadaflattire(瘪胎).Theladywasworried.Noonehadstoppedtohelpforthelasthourorso.Hecouldseethatshewassoafraid,standingoutthereinthecold.Hesaid,"I'mheretohelpyou,ma'am.Whydon'tyouwaitinthecarwhereit'swarm?Bytheway,IamBryanAnderson."Ashewaschanginghertire,sherolleddownthewindowandbegantotalktohim.Shetoldhimthatshewasonlyjustpassingthrough.Shecouldn'tthankhimenoughforcomingtoheraid.4续写原文Whentheworkwasfinished,theladyaskedhowmuchsheowedhim,wilingtoacceptanyamount.Bryanneverthoughttwiceaboutbeingpaid.Hetoldherthatifshereallywantedtopayhimback,thenexttimeshesawsomeonewhoneededhelp,shecouldgivethatpersontheassistanceheorsheneeded,andBryanadded,"Andthinkofme."Hewaiteduntilshestartedhercaranddroveoff.Ithadbeenacoldanddepressingday,buthefeltgoodasheheadedforhome,disappearingintothedarkness.5续写原文Afewmilesdowntheroadtheladywentintoasmallcafé.Thewaitresscameoverandbroughtacleantoweltowipeherwethair.Shestillhadasweetsmileeventhoughshementionedthatherhusbanddiedandshehadtomakealivingbyherself.Theladynoticedthewaitresswasnearlyeightmonthspregnant,butsheneverletherconditionchangeherpositiveattitude.Theoldladywonderedhowsomeonewhohadsolittlecouldbesocaringtoastranger.ThensherememberedBryananddecidedtodosomething.6段首句Paragraph1：Aftertheladyfinishedhermeal,thewaitresscametocollectthebill.Paragraph2：Thewaitresspostedthetouchingstoryonline,accompaniedbywords"Thankyou!Kindlady!"7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9一天，布莱恩・安德森在路上看到一位车胎瘪了的老妇人，主动帮忙更换轮胎且分文未取，只希望她能将帮助他人的善举传递下去。老妇人离开后走进一家小咖啡馆，看到怀有身孕却独自谋生且笑容甜美的女服务员朱迪，想起布莱恩的话，决定施以援手。故事围绕着这份爱心的接力展开，展现人与人之间善良互助的美好。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Aftertheladyfinishedhermeal,thewaitresscametocollectthebill.老妇人吃完饭后，朱迪前来结账。老妇人看到朱迪胸前的名牌，知道了她的名字。她从钱包里拿出一张百元大钞递给朱迪。朱迪接过钱，转身去柜台找零。就在这时，老妇人起身，轻手轻脚地离开了咖啡馆。她在餐桌上的餐巾纸下压了一张纸条，上面写着：“你无需感谢我。曾经也有人像我帮助你一样帮助过我。如果你真的想回报我，就别让这份爱的传递终止。”朱迪找零回来，发现老妇人已经不见，看到纸条的那一刻，她的内心被深深触动，眼眶瞬间湿润，泪水在眼眶里打转。11续写思路分析Para2：Thewaitresspostedthetouchingstoryonline,accompaniedbywords"Thankyou!Kindlady!"朱迪被老妇人的善举深深感动，她决定把这个温暖的故事分享出去。她在社交媒体上发布了这个故事，并配上文字：“谢谢你！善良的女士！”没想到，这个故事迅速在网络上传播开来，如同一颗爱心的种子，在无数人心中生根发芽。许多网友看到后，纷纷被这份善良和爱心所打动，有的人在评论区分享自己被帮助的经历，有的人表示以后也要像故事中的人一样，主动去帮助他人。这份爱心在网络的助力下，传递得更远更广，让更多人感受到人性的美好。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Aftertheladyfinishedhermeal,thewaitresscametocollectthebill.Theladysawthenametagonthewaitress,whichread"Judy".Shetookouta$100billfromherwalletandhandedittoJudy.Judyreceivedthemoneyandturnedaroundtogetthechangeatthecounter.Atthatmoment,theladygotupandquietlyleftthecafé.Sheleftanoteunderthenapkinonthetable.Itsaid,"Youdon'towemeanything.Somebodyoncehelpedmeout,justlikeI'mhelpingyou.Ifyoureallywanttopaymeback,don'tletthischainofloveend."WhenJudycamebackwiththechangeandfoundtheladyhadgone,shewasdeeplytouchedwhenshesawthenote.Hereyeswerefilledwithtears.14范文呈现Thewaitresswassomovedbythekindactoftheladythatshedecidedtosharethiswarmstory.Shepostedthestoryonsocialmedia,accompaniedbythewords"Thankyou!Kindlady!"Surprisingly,thestoryspreadrapidlyontheInternet.Itwaslikeaseedoflove,takingrootandsproutingintheheartsofcountlesspeople.Manynetizensweretouchedbythiskindnessandlove.Somesharedtheirownexperiencesofbeinghelpedinthecommentssection,andsomesaidtheywouldtaketheinitiativetohelpothersjustlikethepeopleinthestory.WiththehelpoftheInternet,thislovewaspassedonfurtherandwider,makingmorepeoplefeelthebeautyofhumannature.15升级版范文呈现Aftertheladyfinishedhermeal,thewaitresscametocollectthebill.Spottingthenametagreading"Judy"onthewaitress,theladyretrieveda$100billfromherwalletandextendedittowardsJudy.Judytookthemoneyandpivotedtofetchthechangeatthecounter.Seizingthismoment,theladyroseandslippedoutofthecaféunnoticed.Underthenapkinonthetable,sheleftanotethatread,"Youdon'towemeathing.Someoneoncelentmeahand,justasI'mdoingforyou.Shouldyoutrulywishtorepayme,ensurethischainofloveremainsunbroken."Uponreturningwiththechangetofindtheladygone,Judy'seyeswelledupwithtearsassheperusedthenote,herheartdeeplystirred.16升级版范文呈现Sodeeplymovedwasthewaitressbythelady'sbenevolentactthatsheresolvedtosharethisheartwarmingstory.Sheposteditonsocialmedia,accompaniedbythewords"Thankyou!Kindlady!"Astonishingly,thestorywentviralontheInternet,likeaseedoflovetakingrootandflourishingintheheartsofcountlessindividuals.Manynetizens,touchedbythisdisplayofkindnessandlove,sharedtheirownexperiencesofbeingassistedinthecommentsection,whileotherspledgedtoproactivelyhelpothers