专题七-读后续写-02-环境描写【高分词块-精彩好句】(原卷版)

年份卷别主题语境词数2022年I卷特殊教育教师鼓励学生勇敢接受挑战阅读理解语篇312词续写要求两部分，共150左右II卷特殊教育教师鼓励学生勇敢接受挑战阅读理解语篇312词续写要求两部分，共150左右2021年I卷母亲节阅读理解语篇316词续写要求两部分，共150左右II卷母亲节阅读理解语篇316词续写要求两部分，共150左右1.读后续写的选材聚焦社会关爱、友谊和亲情，传递鼓励、关爱、理解、沟通、勇气等信息。内容贴近学生生活，能够引起共鸣，可以顺利展开写作。2.以情感类话题复习为主，注重学生个人的自我品德的培养和修养提升，构建积极向上的心理暗示。3.提升阅读速度和质量，重点训练阅读过程中对于有助于展开续写活动的信息的提炼和梳理。4.把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力，重视开头语的提示作用。段落开头语的前后和上下衔接也很重要，考生需要注意整篇的篇章结构来续写构思，理顺上下文逻辑关系，短文内语句要连贯、有序。5.注重细节，尤其是注重写作视角。不能照搬照抄备考时背诵的心理描写、环境描写等好的句子照搬，要根据具体实际来选择用哪种叙述方式和进行适当改写。主题二环境描写类型1自然环境日月星辰【高分词块】set

in

the

west在西方落下be

lit

by

a

full

moon被满月照亮hide

behind

the

clouds躲到云后面burst

through

the

clouds破云而出the

rising/setting

sun朝阳/落日keep

out

of

the

sun避开阳光rise

in

the

east从东方升起a

rainbow

hanging

in

the

sky挂在空中的彩虹millions

of

stars

in

the

sky天空中的无数星星be

bathed

in

silver

moonlight沐浴在银色的月光下【精彩好句】1.The

sun

glinted

on

the

windows.太阳照在窗户上闪闪发光。2.Thunder

boomed

in

the

sky.雷声在天空中隆隆作响。3.The

moon

was

rising

in

the

inky

sky.月亮在墨似的夜空中升起。4.The

moonlight

gleamed

on

the

water.月光照在水面上泛起粼粼波光。5.The

moon

cast

abright

light

over

the

garden.月亮在花园里撒下清辉。6.The

clouds

thinned

and

the

moon

shone

through.云层渐稀，透出了月光。7.We

could

see

the

moon

through

a

break

in

the

clouds.我们能从云缝里看到月亮。8.A

bright

moon

adorns

spring

night

skies

and

the

earth.明月装点了春天的夜空，也装点了大地。9.There

was

a

big

moon

and

hundreds

of

stars

shining

overhead.头顶是一轮明月和成百上千颗闪烁的星星。山河湖海【高分词块】beattheseashore/bank拍打着海岸/河岸theupper/middle,lowerreaches上/中/下游reachhighupintothesky直插云霄rungentlydowntothesea平缓地向大海延伸winditswayforward蜿蜒前行adelightfulsea/mountainview宜人的海景/山景aroughandnarrowmountainroad崎岖狭窄的山路【精彩好句】Mistwasrollinginfromthesea.薄雾从海上涌来。Cloudsenvelopedthemountaintops.云雾笼罩着山顶。Theywereclimbingupanarrowmountainroad.他们正爬上一条狭窄的山路。Theycontinuedalongtheflankofthemountain.他们沿着山的侧面继续前进。Thehillsflattenedouttowardsthesea.丘陵逐渐平坦，伸向大海。Themountainwassharplydefinedagainstthesky.那座山在天空的衬托下显得轮廓分明。春夏秋冬【高分词块】thechangingseasons四季更迭therainy/dryseason雨季/旱季thefloodseason汛期，洪水季节thegrowingseason生长季节ahotseason炎热的季节thebreedingseason繁殖季节【精彩好句】Springishereandromanceisintheair.春天来了，空气中洋溢着爱情的气息。Shemissedthegloriousbloomsofthespring.她错过了春天的繁花美景。Allthesummerworldisbrightandfresh，andbrimmingwithlife.整个夏天都是明朗清新的，充满了生机。Theleavesalmostallfell，creatingaseaoffierycolorsbeneathourfeet.几乎所有的叶子都落了下来，在我们的脚下形成了一片火红色的海洋。Amomentlater，thesnowflakesbegantofallquietly.Soonthelandbeforemyeyeswasallwhite.一会儿，雪花儿开始静静地飘落，很快眼前的大地全白了。沙雨雪风霜【高分词块】darkclouds乌云becoveredwiththicksnow被厚厚的雪覆盖pourwithrain大雨滂沱ablanketoffog/snow厚厚的一层雾/雪pealsofthunder轰轰的雷声behit/struckbyaheavysnow遭受大雪的袭击drivingrain倾盆大雨afierce/heavystorm狂风暴雨【精彩好句】Thunderrolledinthedistance.远处雷声隆隆。Thedarkcloudspackedwithtonsofwaterreadytopouroutanytime.乌云挤满了大量雨水，随时准备倾泻。Theraincamepouringdown，thestreamsrose，andthewindblewandbeatagainstthehouse.大雨倾盆而下，河水上涨，风吹打着房子。Theskyisovercast，darkenedwithgloomycloudsandthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.天空阴沉、乌云密布，整个世界仿佛被一条巨大的灰色棉被笼罩着。Thatnighttherecameaterrificstorm，withdrivingrain，clapsofthunderandblindingsheetsoflightning.那天夜里下了一场可怕的暴风雨，大雨滂沱，电闪雷鸣。花果树木【高分词块】agardenfullofflowers种满花的花园beinblossom开花（trees）bearfruit（树木）结果aburstoffragrance一阵芳香intherustlingleaves在沙沙作响的树叶中beladenwithfruit果实累累inthebushes在灌木丛中beimmersedintheseaofflowers沉浸在花海之中【精彩好句】Thelocusttreeswereinbloomandthefragranceoftheblossomsfilledtheair.槐树开花了，空气中弥漫着花香。Thegrasslookedlikeabeautifulwovenblanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.那片草地看起来就像一条美丽的编织毯子，只为我们在地上铺开。Amongthedensegrass，hefeltthathisfeetwerecrushingdrybrancheswhichcrackledlikefireworks.在茂密的草丛中，他感到他的脚踩碎了枯枝，枯枝像烟花一样噼啪作响。Betweenthesebeautifultreessprangupclustersoffirs，whosebranchesspreadwidearound.在这些美丽的树之间冷杉丛生，树枝向四周伸展开来。【文段赏读】Itwasthecoolgraydawn，andtherewasasenseofpeacedeepinthewoods.Notaleafstirred；notasounddisturbedgreatNature'smeditation.Dewdropsstoodupontheleavesandgrasses.Awhitelayerofashescoveredthefire，andathinbluebreathofsmokerosestraightintotheair.凉爽的、灰蒙蒙的黎明时分，树林深处一片宁静。一片叶子也没有动，没有任何声音打扰大自然的沉思。露珠还挂在树叶和草上。火上覆盖着一层白色的灰烬，一缕蓝色的轻烟直直地飘向空中。Itwasearlyinthespringmorning.Thesunwasiustrisingoutoftheeasternhorizonandemittingredhuesthroughthecloudsandacrossthesky.Soonthecampuswasbathedinthefirstraysofthesun.Thegroundwascoveredwithtendergrassesandthedewdropsstoodontheirtipsandreflectedthesunshine.那是一个春天的清晨。太阳刚从东方地平线升起，透过云层和天空散发出红光。不久校园就沐浴在第一缕阳光中。地上长满了嫩草，草尖上的露珠反射着阳光。类型2社会环境【高分词块】afloodofvehicles许多车辆acrowdedstreet一条拥挤的街道abusyandbustlingcity一座熙熙攘攘的城市panickedcrowds惊慌失措的人群rowsandrowsofnewhouses一排排的新房子manypeoplecomingandgoing人来人往【精彩好句】Thecitywakesupearlyinthemorningandrestslateintothenight.这座城市很早就醒来，很晚才休息。Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourcityinthepastthirtyyears.在过去三十年里，我市发生了巨大的变化。Athisleftwasaspacioustemporaryplatform.在他的左边是一个宽敞的临时平台。Thehousewasisolated，withitsfencesgonelongago，weedscoveringthedoorsteps.这所房子很偏僻，围墙早已消失，门阶上杂草丛生。Ateightintheeveningtheschoolhousewasbrilliantlylighted，anddecoratedwithwreathsofleavesandflowers.晚上八点，校舍里灯火辉煌，装饰着用树叶和花做成的花环。【文段赏读】Someboystudentswhowereabsorbedinreadingleanedagainstthetreeswithbudspeepingoutfromthegraybarks.AcoupleofgirlstudentsreadEnglishaloudwhilewalkingupanddownthegravelpatharoundthelake.一些男学生正聚精会神地阅读，他们靠在树上，灰色的树皮下微微露出嫩芽。几个女学生一边大声读着英语，一边在湖边的砾石小路上走来走去。（2022年全国新高考I、II卷）Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路线)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊恼).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、（2022·广东茂名·二模）AholidayinPenangisanannualaffairformyfamily.MyparentsgrewupinPenangandareveryfondofPenangfood.InDecembereveryyear,wewoulddriveuptotheislandtospendthreedaysvisitingtheirfavoritefoodhaunts(常去的地方).Thisyear,westartedourjourneyupnorthonaFridaymorning.Ittookussixhourstoreachourdestination.WealwaysstayedatoneofthehotelsinBatuFerringhi.Thebeachwasjustashortwalkfromthehotelentranceandourroomshadalovelyviewofthesea.Wespentourfirsteveningplayingonthebeach.Afterdinner,wereturnedtoourroomstoplaygames.Myparentshadaruleforourholidayswhichwasthatweweretospendtimedoingthingstogether.

TherewastobenoTVandnoInternet.Thenextmorning,wewenttoBukitBenderaandthenspenttherestoftheafternoonintownvisitingourfavoritehawkerstalls(小贩摊位).Aswewerehavingteaatacoffeeshop,weoverheardpeopletalkingaboutanearthquakenearSumatera,anislandinIndonesia.Weheadedbacktothehotelandthenwenttothebeach.Wetookawalkalongthebeach,pickingupseashellsalongtheway.Lookingup,IsawthesunshiningbrighterthanIeverknewbefore.Isawatreetremblinginthedistanceasitreflectedthesun’srays.Itneveroccurredtousthatsomethingawfulwouldtakeplace.Suddenly,Inoticedastrangething.Theseaseemedtobeleavingfromtheshore.Icalledmyfathertolookatthecuriousoccurrence.Myfathertookonelookandwentpale.Wesawagreylineinthedistancemovingtowardstheshore.Itseemedtogrowtallerbythesecond.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Myfathershoutedatustorunbacktothehotel._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wewaitedalongtimebeforegoingdownstairs._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、（2022·福建师大附中模拟预测）OnahotSeptemberafternoon,PeterandhisfriendIsabelwereontheirwaytothelibrary.WhentheypassedbyTubmanpark,Isabelsuggestedcuttingthroughittogettothelibrary.Astheyenteredthepark,thesightoftheswings(秋千)andthemerry-go-roundbroughtbackafloodofmemoriesoftheirchildhoodspentthere.Butnoweverythinglookedsoold,sad,anddirty.Litterlayonthegroundnexttoanoverflowingtrashbin.Therewerestillyoungschoolchildrenplayingtherebuttheyhadtoavoidthetrashthatlitteredtheplayground.Alittleboytoldthemthatthecitytooktheothertrashcansawayandtheremainingonenevergotemptiedoften.Astheyheadedtowardthelibrary,thetwohighschoolstudentswrinkledtheirforehead.Inthelibrary,theyencounteredMrs.Evans,theirkind-heartedfifth-gradeteacher,retiredyetstillpassionate.Mrs.EvanslistenedasIsabelandPetereagerlyexplainedwhatthey’dseen.Finally,sherecommendedthemtogototheCityHalltovoicetheirconcerns.Thenextday,IsabelandPeterwentintothebuildingoftheCityHallbutweremetwithanimpatientofficer.Theywereinformedthatthecitycouldn’thelpwiththeirproblemduetoatightbudget.Discouraged,theyleftandturnedtoMrs.Evansforhelp.Underherguidance,theydecidedtoaskGoGreen,anon-profitorganizationwhosegoalistoprotecttheenvironment,forhelp.“Thisgroupisgoodatraisingmoneyforprojectsjustlikeyours,”saidMrs.Evans.ShepromisedtoarrangethemtopresenttheirideastoGoGreen.Hearingthis,theirfacelitup.Twomaintasksremainedahead:researchingwaystocleanuptheparkandpreparingaconvincingpresentation.AsIsabelwasgoodatresearchingwhilePeteralwayshadatalentforspeaking,theycooperatedquitewell.Isabellearnedfromasciencemagazinethatanewtypeoftrashbincansqueezethetrashdownwithoutbeingemptiedoften,whichsavestime,money,andenergy.Basedonthis,Peterpracticedhispresentationoverandoveragain.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Aweeklater,PeterstoodnervouslyatthebackofthehallwhereGoGreenwasmeeting._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterthemeeting,IsabelexcitedlytoldPeterthegoodnews.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________三、（2021·山东·潍坊一中三模）Onemorningonmywaytoschool,noticedanelderlywomandressedinayellowvest(马甲)carryingagarbagebagandoneofthoserubbishclaws(爪形器具)."What'sthatladydoing?"Iaskedmum."VestLady.Shejustpicksuprubbisharoundhereforfun,"mumsaid."Whywouldsomeonethinkpickinguprubbishlookinglikeaconstructionworkerisfun?"Ipuzzled.ForseveralyearsI'dwitnessthismysteriousVestLady—rainorshine—onmywaytoschool.Ihadthoughtshewascrazyforpickinguprubbish.EventuallyIsmiledandwavedathereachtimeIsawher.Later,Imovedtohighschool.ThetimeIsawrubbishhereandthereIfeltreallyannoyed.ThenI'dthink,"Whyisn'tanyonepickingupthisrubbish?PeoplearesoinconsiderateI"However,shortlyafter,Irealizedpickinguptherubbishwasnotsomeoneease'sproblem.NowIcouldn'twalkpastlitterwithoutfeelingguilty.Ivolunteeredtocleanuprubbisharoundourschool.Strangeasitmightsound,pickinguplitterwaskindofathrillforme!Infact,Iwassodeterminedthatformy17thbirthdayIboughtmyselfarubbishclaw,reusableglovesandareflectivesafetyyellowvestwithmyownnameonit.Duringmyfirstattemptinmystylishequipment,metwithunfriendlylooksfromothersasifIwereacriminaldoingcommunityservice.Oneday,Ihadanepiphany(顿悟):"I'mactingjustlikeVestLady!"Buttherewastoomuchrubbisharound,cigaretteendslitteredabout,cansrollingonthestreet,piecesofpaperhiddeninthegrassandplastic.alonewastooweakJHowwouldIgetmorevolunteersinvolvedinrubbishremoval?Asmartideaflashedintomymind.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。SoonIcreatedmywebsitegopickingupcom.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Moreandmorepeopleonvestswiththeirownnames._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________四、（2021·河北张家口·三模）BPWDisastartupcompany,wheremyworkmatesandIworkourheadsoff,seekingsolutionstovariousenvironmentalproblems.Wearewhatpeopleconsideragroupofpromisingyoungtalentsworkinginapromisingindustry.Wearefromdifferentbackgroundsbutweallfitinwellwiththehigh—pacedlifeandenjoyalltheconveniencethatSaltLakeCitycanoffer.WeprideourselvesonallthedifferenceswearemakingtothisplanetbutourbestsubjectforlunchbreakchatiswhatwedoasvolunteerstoprotectalakecalledLakePurilence.Wefirstheardaboutthelakefrommyworkmate,Bluto,whoreferredtoitashischildhoodparadise,whereheusedtofish,swimandcastpebbles(鹅卵石)withhisfriends.Hedescribedthelakeareaasoneofthefewplacesofwildnessthathadnotbeenruinedbymoderntourism.Hehadlefttheplaceforyearssincehisparentssoldtheirfarmnearthelakeandmovedtothecity,buthestillkeptdreamingofgoingback.Inhisownwords,hewas“naturestarved”.AttractedbyBluto'sdescription,thefiveofusworkinginthesameofficegotonourwaytoitinOctober,2019,takingadvantageofafederalholiday.Itwasaplacenotonlylesserknownbutalsooutoftheway.Wetookaflightfirstandthenrentedtwocarsattheairport.Wehadtotravelalongbackroadsinrentalcarstofinallygettherebutthescenerywasabsolutelystunning.NowonderitwaslovedsodearlybyBluto.Allthebeautifultreesandthegrasswerecoveredwithredandorangeleavesandthequietlakeislikeamirrorreflectingthegoldenraysofthesun.Ashortdistanceaway,wecouldseeafewothertouriststakingpicturesbythelakeandsomewhitebirdsflyingupfromthewaterandthepatchesofreedmarshes(芦苇荡).Amazedbythescene,ourheartslongedforacloserencounterwiththelake.注意:1.续写的词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Aswegotclosertothelake,however,wesawsomethingstrikinglyinharmonioustothebeautifulview.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingatmyworkmates,Iputforwardaplan,whichmettheirimmediateapproval.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五、（2021·浙江·宁波市北仑中学三模）WhenIworkedasanurse,Iwasondaydutyandwhilemyfriendswereonnightduty.Ononeshift,IrememberIsensedsomethingjustbeforegoingoffdutyat11am.Ihadbroughtthewardsisterhermorningtea,soIputdowntheteatray.Thetrayrattledandfellthroughthewindow.AtfirstIthoughtIhadaccidentallyknockeditover,butthenIfeltthewholebuildingshookandpatientsscreamed.Irealizedthatwewerei