2023-2024学年初中书面表达主题分类训练10篇-情感与情绪-教师版

2023-2024学年初中书面表达主题分类训练10篇-情感与情绪1.(2023·江西省赣州市·期中考试)正值青春期的你会与父母生气吗？你通常是在什么情况下会与他们生气，你觉得这样适合吗？如果不合适，除了文中提到的深呼吸和冷静几秒钟之外，还有其他方式应对吗？请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对生气的看法和理解以及如何应对生气。写作要点：1）Doyougetangrywithyourparents？2）Inwhatsituationswouldyougetangrywithyourparents？Doyouthinkit'sright？3）Doyouknowsomeotherwaystodealwithangerexcepttakingadeepbreathandbeingcalmdownforseconds？要求：1）短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2）短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3）词数不少于80。 【答案】Iget

angrywith

myparentssometimes.（我也和父母生气）Theyalwaysonlycareaboutmystudy，sotheymakemetakeallkindsofremedialclasses.Theyalsomadealotofrulesforme.Itmakesmeveryuncomfortableandtired.（什么情况下生气）Iknowmyparentswantmetogotoabetteruniversityandbeabetterperson，soit'swrongformetobeangry.（生气是不对的）So，Islowlydevelopedsomemethods.First，Iwilltalktomyparentsseriouslywhentheyareinagoodmood，tellingthemmythoughtsandcurrentstatus.【高分句型一】AndtellthemthatifI'mbadinanysubject，I'lltellthemandfindatutorforme.【高分句型二】Secondly，Ialsoneedtorestinsteadofhavingendlessclasses.Finally，Ialsolistentomusictocalmmyselfdown.（如何使自己平静下来）【解析】【高分句型一】

First，Iwilltalktomyparentsseriouslywhentheyareinagoodmood，tellingthemmythoughtsandcurrentstatus.首先，当我的父母心情好的时候，我会认真地和他们说话，告诉他们我的想法和现状。when引导的时间状语从句。【高分句型二】

AndtellthemthatifI'mbadinanysubject，I'lltellthemandfindatutorforme.告诉他们，如果我哪门功课不好，我会告诉他们，给我找个家教。if引导的条件状语从句。能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。2.(2023·广东省云浮市·期中考试)每个人都有生气、难过或失落的时候，每当这时你会如何排解这种不良情绪呢？请你根据写作要点及要求用英语写一篇短文，谈一谈你如何处理不良情绪。要点：1）Whendoyouhavebadfeelings？2）Howdoyoudealwiththosefeelings？3）Whydoyoudealwiththeminthatway？要求：1）必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，80词左右（结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。Thesearemywaysofdealingwithbadfeelings.Ihopetheycanbehelpfultoyou. 【答案】IwouldfeelangryorguiltyaboutthingsIdidordidn'tdo，aboutthingsIcouldn'thave，andalotofotherthings.Itseemsthateveryonehastheirownbadmood.Butguiltandangerwon'thelpus.Overtime，theywillbecomeaburdenonmyshoulders.（什么时候有不好的心情）

Firstly，forgivenessisapowerfultool.Ishouldforgivemyselffirst.Ishouldn'tkeepmybadfeelingstomyself.Ialsohavetoforgivethosewhomakeusfeelguiltyorangry.It'snotalwayseasy.Butwhenwelearntoforgiveourselves，itbecomeseasiertoforgiveothers.

【高分句型一】Secondly，IwilllistentosomemusicanddosomethingIliketocalmmyselfdown.

【高分句型二】Finally，Iwillalsotellthisstorytomyfriendsorparents.（如何处理的和为什么这么做）

These

are

my

ways

of

dealing

with

bad

feelings.I

hope

they

can

be

helpful

to

you.【解析】

【高分句型一】Butwhenwelearntoforgiveourselves，itbecomeseasiertoforgiveothers.但是当我们学会原谅自己的时候，原谅别人就变得容易了。when引导的时间状语从句。【高分句型二】Secondly，IwilllistentosomemusicanddosomethingIliketocalmmyselfdown.其次，我会听一些音乐，做一些我喜欢的事情来让自己冷静下来。and表并列。能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。3.(2023·河南省濮阳市·期中考试)过去的几个月，因防控在家的人形成了些许疫情心情，如何调试个人心情，你肯定有个人的观点，毕竟好心情有助于身体健康，好心情让我们享受工作和生活，请你根据表格提示及要求，以"KeepaGoodMood"为题写一篇英语短文。KeepaGoodMoodCOVID-19severalmonthsago，sonow：getangryWhattodo：smile，helpful…Advantages：keephealthy，enjoyourlifeFeeling：…要求：1）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；2）词数80左右。短文第一段已给出，不计入总词数；3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。KeepaGoodMoodNowadays，manyofusoftengetangry.EspeciallywhenwestayedathomeseveralmonthsagobecauseoftheCOVID-19. 【答案】Keep

a

Good

Mood

Nowadays，many

of

us

often

get

angry.Especially

when

we

stayed

at

home

several

months

ago

because

of

the

COVID-19.

Then

what

can

we

do

to

keep

a

good

mood？First，we

can

smile

often

because

it's

helpful

for

us

to

keep

healthy

and

enjoy

our

life.Second，try

our

best

to

do

something

for

other

people

in

need.It

can

help

us

feel

good.Third，if

we

take

part

in

some

outdoor

activities，we

can

make

new

friends

and

we'll

feel

happy，too.【高分句型一】Last，we

can

tell

others

our

bad

moods，they

may

give

us

some

good

advice.

In

short，keeping

a

good

mood

can

help

us

learn

and

live

more

happily.【高分句型二】（感受）【解析】【高分句型一】Third，if

we

take

part

in

some

outdoor

activities，we

can

make

new

friends

and

we'll

feel

happy，too.第三，如果我们参加一些户外活动，我们可以结交新朋友，我们也会感到快乐。条件状语从句。【高分句型二】In

short，keeping

a

good

mood

can

help

us

learn

and

live

more

happily.简而言之，保持良好的心情可以帮助我们更快乐地学习和生活。In

short简而言之。能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。4.(2023·广东省广州市·模拟题)请你以“ColorandMood”为题提前写好一份英文演讲稿。内容包括:(1)简单描述颜色对情绪的影响;(2)你最喜欢的颜色及原因(原因不少于两点);(3)号召大家都要做情绪的主人，控制好自己的情绪。作文要求:(1)不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。(2)语句连贯，词数80个左右。 【答案】ColorandMood

Lastweek,Ireadanarticleaboutcolorandmood,letmetellyousomethingaboutit.Therearemanycolorsinourlife.Theycannotonlymeandifferentthingsbutalsobringusdifferentfeelings.Forexample,peoplesometimesusepinktodescribeapersonwhoishealthy.Colorbluesometimesmeansthatapersonwhoisblueisverysad.

Ofallthecolors,Ilovewhitebest.Whiteisthecolorofsnowandcloud.Itrepresentsofpurityandcalmness.Itcanmakeabeautifulpicturewithanyothercolors.Itcanoftenmakemefeelrelaxed.

Everyonehashisfavoritecolor.However,nomatterhowcolorschangeyourmood,youshouldlearntocontrolyourmoodandbeabetterperson.【解析】

略5.(2023·吉林省长春市·模拟题)希望中学近期举办英语征文竞赛，题目为"Asmallactmakesabigdifference."。请你为其投稿，谈谈你对这句话的理解，并分享一件你自身或周围的人的故事，以及带给你的收获或启迪。要求：（1）字数不少于80词。（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。（3）条理清晰，语句通顺，书写工整。 【答案】A

small

act

makes

a

big

differenceASmallActOfKindnessMakesABigDifference.LastmonthIwentthroughaveryhardtime，becausemydearmompassedaway.Iflewtomyhometowntopaymyrespectsandsaymygoodbyes.Havingspentdays

withmyfamily ，Ihadtoheadback.

Afterboardingtheplane ，Ifoundmywindowseattakenbyayoungman.Usuallyit'snotabigdealtome  ，butIreallywantedtositthere.Asaresult，hewasaskedtomove.Mymomwasnolongerthere.Ialmostlostcontrolofmyemotions

whentheplanetaxiedtotherunway. 【高分句型一】Tearsfilledmyeyes.SuddenlyIfeltataponmyelbow.Itwasthatyoungmancheckingonme.HeaskedmeifIwasOKandsaidhewasthereifIneededtotalk. 【高分句型二】Afterall ，wehadathree-hourflightsittinginthesamerow.

Iassured

himknowthatIwasn'treadytotalk，buthiswordshadmademefeelbetter.AlthoughIdidn'ttakehimuponhisoffer  ，IwastouchedthatastrangerknewImightneedsomeoneatthatmoment.Peopleonplanesoftendoeverythingtheycannottotalktosomeone ，Imean.Butherethismanwaswillingtogivemeallofhistime.  （经历）Thatmomentlastmonthhasmademeactivelylookforwaystoserveandhelpothers.Theymaynotbebigthings ，buttheymaybebigtothatperson. （感受）【解析】【高分句型一】Ialmostlostcontrolofmyemotions

whentheplanetaxiedtotherunway. 当飞机滑行到跑道上时，我几乎无法控制自己的情绪。when引导的时间状语从句。【高分句型二】HeaskedmeifIwasOKandsaidhewasthereifIneededtotalk. 他问我是否安好，并说如果我需要倾诉，他就在那里。if引导的条件状语从句。这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕内容写作。命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。写作时要结合内容对情况进行陈述，之后给出自己的看法和建议，看法和建议需要自主发挥。6.(2023·浙江省舟山市·模拟题)你校EnglishCorner将进行"ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblem"的成长分享。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，请根据表格内容讲述你控制愤怒的小故事，并分享你的感悟。WhathappenedbetweenTomandmeWhatIhavelearned...boughtamuch-lovedmagazine......tookthemagazinewithouttelling......feltangry......calmeddownandtalkedmunicatewithothersontime...要求：（1）短文须包括表格所有内容（至少补充一条感悟），可适当增加细节；（2）短文中不出现真实的地名和人名；（3）词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）参考词汇：anger愤怒calmdown冷静Haveyouevercontrolledyourangerandsolvedaproblembetter？Hereismyexperience. Thanksforlistening.【答案】

Have

you

ever

controlled

your

anger

and

solved

a

problem

better？Here

is

my

experience.（引出话题）

Lastterm，IboughtamagazinethatIhadalwayswanted.IlikeditsomuchthatIwascarefuleverytimeIcarriedit.Butoneday，mybestfriendTomtookthemagazinewithouttellingme.WhenIfoundit，Iwasveryangry.【高分句型一】ButIcalmeddownsoon.IthoughtofhowTomhelpedmewhenIwasintroubleandIdidn'twanttobreaktherelationshipbetweenus.【高分句型二】SoIcontrolledmyangeranddecidedtohaveatalkwithhim.Itoldhimthatheshouldtellmeifhewantedtoreadthemagazine.Afterthetalk，ourrelationshipbecamestronger.（讲述控制愤怒的小故事）Fromthisexperience，whenweareangry，weshouldcalmourselvesdownandlearntoreflect.Themostimportantistocommunicatewithothersontimesothatwecansolvetheproblemsbetter.（感受）

Thanksforlistening.（感谢）【解析】【高分句型一】：WhenIfoundit，Iwasveryangry.当我发现它时，我非常生气。when引导一个时间状语从句。【高分句型二】：IthoughtofhowTomhelpedmewhenIwasintroubleandIdidn'twanttobreaktherelationshipbetweenus.我想起了汤姆在我遇到麻烦时是如何帮助我的，我不想破坏我们之间的关系。wanttodosth表示想做某事。能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。7.(2023·广东省云浮市·期中考试)2022年3月21日的东航客机坠毁事件和持续三年多的新冠肺炎疫情告诉我们：人生在世，生命很重要，健康很重要。但是在学习和生活中，我们会有一些不好的情绪（badfeelings），坏的情绪会影响我们的健康，请以"GoodWaystoKeepHappy"为题，谈一谈中学生如何在学习和生活中保持愉快的心情。提示词：listentomusic,domoreexercise,makefriends,smileoften.…要求：（1）语句通顺，表达连贯，语法正确，书写规范；（2）必须包含所给信息；（3）词数70左右。（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）GoodWaystoKeepHappyItisveryimportantforustokeephappy.Becausebeinghappyistobehealthy.Butdoyouknowthewaystokeepushappy？ Ihopeyoucankeephappyeveryday.【答案】Good

Ways

to

Keep

Happy

It

is

very

important

for

us

to

keep

happy.Because

being

happy

is

to

be

healthy.Butdo

you

know

the

ways

to

keep

us

happy？

First,listen

to

music.Musicisveryimportantinourlife.①Ifthere'snomusic,ourlifewon'tbesointeresting.Second,

do

more

exercise.Asisknowntoall,sportscannotonlykeepushealthy,butalsomakeushappy.Third,make

morefriends.②Sometimes,friendsarethepeoplewhoknowusbest.Youcanshareyoursadnessandhappinesswithyourfriends.Finally,don'tforgettosmile.Ifyou'vehadareallybadday,youcanlistentosomefunnystories.Thenyou'llbehappy.

I

hope

you

can

keep

happy

everyday.【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇提示性的命题作文，主题是一谈中学生如何在学习和生活中保持愉快的心情。写作时主要使用一般现在时态，第三人称。注意表达连贯，语法正确。【结构布局】引言：开篇点题，引出下文中心：说明保持愉快的心情的方法结尾：表达祝愿【高分词汇】

①listen

to听②do

more

exercise多锻炼③notonly...butalso不仅……而且【高分句型】①Ifthere'snomusic,ourlifewon'tbesointeresting.        （if引导条件状语从句）②Sometimes,friendsarethepeoplewhoknowusbest.（who引导定语从句。）8.(2023·浙江省杭州市·模拟题)美国朋友Sam发来的邮件，请阅读后以电子邮件的形式回复。要求：①可适当添加内容让行文通顺、连贯。②字数不少于80词。To：LiPingFrom：SamSubject：WhatshouldIdo？DearLiPing，Howiseverythinggoingwithyou？I'mstressedoutthesedays.MylastexamresultsdroppedonceagainandIreallydon'tknowhowtoimprovemygrades.What'sworse，myparentsalwayscomparemewithothersandexpecttoomuchfromme.It'sdifficulttogetonwellwiththem.Iamsoupset.WhatshouldIdo？Pleasegivemesomeadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourquickreply!Yours，Sam 【答案】Dear

Sam，

I'msorrytohearaboutyourproblems.Firstofall，onetestdoesn'tmeananything.Aslongaswecontinuetostudyhard，I'msureyourgradeswillimprove.Ifyouhaveanyproblems，besuretoaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpintime.【高分句型一】Secondly，youcanfindsometimetohaveagoodtalkwithyourparents.Andtheywillsurelyunderstandyou.Finally，youshouldlearntorelaxyourself.Youcanrelaxyourselfbylisteningtomusic，doingrunning，etc.，anddoingsomethingyoulike.Ihopeyoufindthesesuggestionshelpful.【高分句型二】

Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Yours，Li

Ping【解析】【高分句型一】Ifyouhaveanyproblems，besuretoaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpintime.如果你有任何问题，一定要及时向你的老师和同学寻求帮助。if引导条件状语从句。【高分句型二】Ihopeyoufindthesesuggestionshelpful.我希望这些建议对你有帮助。Ihope+宾语从句。能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。9.(2023·江苏省泰州市·模拟题)成长中的青少年有着丰富的情绪体验。当取得进步时，你也许会和人分享喜悦；当日记被偷看时，你可选择冷静后再面对；当伤心时，或许你会运动流汗来稀释悲伤；当心中忧惧时，可设法强大自己……学校网站英文版在征稿，期待你的分享。请根据提示，自拟题目，描述一次经历。写作要点：（1）Whatexperiencewouldyouliketoshare？（2）Whathaveyougotfromtheexperience？写作要求：（1）用英文表达，题目自拟；（2）积极向上，言之有理，结构完整，逻辑通顺；（3）语言流畅，符合英语表达习惯；（4）书写清晰美观，词数120左右。 【答案】BetheMasterofYourEmotions

Lifeisfullofupsanddowns，andsometimesthingsdon'tgoasplanned.Whensomethingunpleasanthappens，weoftenfeeldisappointedorevenangry.【高分句型一】Oneofourchoicesistoacceptouremotionsanddon'tletthemcontrolus.

Oneday，itwasourgroup'sturntocleanupourclassroom.Whenschoolwasover，Iwenttotheteacher'sofficetoasksomequestions.【高分句型二】WhenIhurriedbacktotheclassroom，Ifoundthattherewasnooneleft.Ifeltveryangryandwantedtogohomeimmediately.Afterleavingtheclassroom，thesuggestiontocontrolangersuddenlycametomymind.Istartedtocalmdownfrom1to10，andIsucceeded.Finally，Idecidedtoputdownmybackpackandpickupthebroom.Ispentalmostanhourcleaningupourmessyclassroom，confidentthateverythinginourclassroomhadreturnedtonormal，andIamproudofwhatIhavedone.（我的经历）

Isuccessfullycontrolledangertobethemasterofmyemotions.Thisexperiencehasinspiredmetohavethecouragetofacenegativeemotionsinthefuture.（我学到了什么）【解析】【高分句型一】Whensomethingunpleasanthappens，weoftenfeeldisappointedorevenangry.当不愉快的事情发生时，我们经常感到失望甚至愤怒。when引导时间状语从句。【高分句型二】Whenschoolwasover，Iwenttotheteacher'sofficetoasksomequestions.放学后，我去老师的办公室问了一些问题。when引导时间状语从句。能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。10.(2023·陕西省西安市·期中考试)大家都知道保持一份好心情有利于身心健康，也有助于学习。假如你是李斌，你的美国朋友Linda近来心情不佳。请你用英语写一封邮件，告诉她如何保持一份好心情。要点：learntorelax，havehealthyeatinghabits，getenoughsports，getonwell，withclassmates，volunteeractivities...要求：（1）短文应包括所给要点，可以适当发挥；（2）语句通顺、行文连贯、书写工整；（3）文中不得出现真实的人名和地名；（4）不少于70词（开头和落款已给出，不计入总词数）DearLinda，Iheardyo