2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：姐妹情暖体操馆共克困难+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习姐妹情暖体操馆，共克困难1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文VioletandTillyweretwosisters.Tillywassostuckwithhersisterthatshealwaysfollowedhereldersister,Violet,everywhere.Forexample,whenVioletwaspainting,shewouldpaintbyherside.Everytime,Violetlookedatherangrily.Couldn’tshefindherownthingtodo?Thistime,itwasTilly’sfirstweekatgymnastics,whileViolethaddonegymnasticsforthepasttwoyears.Violetsatonthegymfloor,waitingforherturntodosomersaults(翻筋斗).Shefrownedatherlittlesisteracrosstheroom.Whycouldn’tTillyalwaysfindherownthingtodo?“Violet,you’reup!”calledViolet’sinstructor,MissTaylor.Violetcameoverandpushedoffwithherlegsandstraightenedherarms.Shedidone,two,threesomersaults.MissTaylorclapped.“Perfect!”4续写原文VioletnoticedthatTillyhadsteppedawayfromtheyoungergrouptowatchViolet’ssomersaults.“Tilly!”calledTilly’sinstructor,MissBrooke,fromacrosstheroom.Tillydidn’tseemtohear.Notuntilshewascalledthreetimesdidsherunbacktohergroup.“Yourturntodosomersaults.”MissBrookeputanarmaroundher.Tillywalkedtothematwithherfaceturningredlikeatomato.Shebentdowntostartasomersault.Whensherolled,shefellheavilyonthemat.Kidslaughedinsurpriseatthenoise.5续写原文Tillystooduncomfortablyandthenrantowardstherestroom.Shewasgonefromthegym,asViolethadwanted.Butitdidn’tfeelright.AftertellingMissTaylorwhereshewasgoing,Violethurriedtotherestroom.ShefoundTillycryinghard.Violetputanarmaroundhersister.SeeingViolet,Tillycriedevenharder.Tillysniffed“Idon’twanttodogymnasticsanymore.”Shewipedawaythetearswiththebackofherhand.ThiswasViolet’schance.Ifshesaidnothingtohersister,Tillymightquitgymnasticsforever.6段首句Paragraph1：ButVioletknewhowexcitedTillyhadbeenaboutjoiningingymnastics.Paragraph2：SeeingasmileonTilly’sface,Violetsaid,“Whataboutgivingitanothertry?”7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了蒂莉总是跟着姐姐维奥莱特，这让维奥莱特有些不耐烦。在体操馆里，维奥莱特做翻筋斗动作时表现出色，蒂莉因观看姐姐而被老师提醒。轮到蒂莉做翻筋斗时，她摔倒了，引得孩子们发笑，她伤心地跑向洗手间。维奥莱特虽之前希望蒂莉离开，但此时心生不忍，前往洗手间安慰。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：ButVioletknewhowexcitedTillyhadbeenaboutjoiningingymnastics.但维奥莱特深知蒂莉当初对参加体操有多兴奋。回想起蒂莉报名时，眼睛里闪烁着光芒，不停地跟她讲自己想要学会的各种高难度动作。维奥莱特看着哭泣的妹妹，温柔地说：“蒂莉，这次摔倒没什么大不了的，谁刚开始学不会摔倒呢？你看我，刚开始的时候也经常出错。我知道你很有天赋，只要坚持，一定能做得很好。”蒂莉听着，渐渐止住了哭声，抬头看着维奥莱特，眼神中透露出一丝动摇。11续写思路分析Para2：SeeingasmileonTilly’sface,Violetsaid,“Whataboutgivingitanothertry?”看到蒂莉脸上露出了笑容，维奥莱特说：“再试一次怎么样？”蒂莉犹豫了一下，还是坚定地点了点头。回到体操馆，维奥莱特陪着蒂莉在一旁耐心练习。她一点点地纠正蒂莉的动作，告诉她发力的技巧。蒂莉认真地听着，努力地模仿。终于，当蒂莉再次站到体操垫上，她成功地完成了翻筋斗。周围响起了热烈的掌声，蒂莉开心地笑了，维奥莱特也为她感到无比骄傲。从那以后，姐妹俩在体操馆里一起进步，感情也更加深厚了。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现ButVioletknewhowexcitedTillyhadbeenaboutjoiningingymnastics.SherememberedTilly'seyessparklingwithanticipationwhenshesignedup,andhowshecouldn'tstoptalkingaboutalltheamazingmovesshewantedtolearn.Lookingathercryingsister,Violetsaidgently,"Tilly,thisfallisnothing.Everyonefallswhentheystart.EvenIdid.Iknowyouhavealotoftalent.Aslongasyoukeepatit,you'lldogreat."Tillylistened,graduallystoppinghertears,andlookedupatVioletwithaglimmerofhesitationinhereyes.14范文呈现SeeingasmileonTilly’sface,Violetsaid,“Whataboutgivingitanothertry?”Tillyhesitatedforamomentbutthennoddedfirmly.Backinthegym,VioletaccompaniedTillyandpatientlypracticedwithher.ShecorrectedTilly'smovementsbitbybit,tellinghertheskillsofexertingforce.Tillylistenedcarefullyandtriedherbesttoimitate.Finally,whenTillystoodonthematagain,shesuccessfullycompletedthesomersault.Warmapplauserangoutaroundthem.Tillysmiledhappily,andVioletwasextremelyproudofher.Fromthenon,thetwosistersmadeprogresstogetherinthegym,andtheirrelationshipbecameevendeeper.15升级版范文呈现ButVioletwasvividlyawareoftheexuberantexcitementthatTillyhadharboreduponjoiningthegymnasticsclass.SherecalledthewayTilly'seyeshadsparkledwithunbridledenthusiasmwhensigningup,chatteringnon-stopabouteveryintricatemovesheaspiredtomaster.Gazingatherweepingsister,Violetspokeinatender,soothingtone,"Tilly,thistumbleisbutafleetingsetback.Everyonestumblesattheoutset.EvenIhadmyfairshareoffalls.I'mcertainyoupossesslatenttalentinabundance.WithunwaveringplookedupatVioleterseverance,you'reboundtoshine."Tilly,hersobsgraduallysubsiding,,aglimmerofuncertaintydancinginhereyes.16升级版范文呈现SeeingasmilegracingTilly’scountenance,Violetproposed,“Howaboutgivingitanothershot?”Afteramoment'shesitation,Tillynoddedresolutely.Returningtothegymnasium,VioletremainedbyTilly'sside,guidingherthroughpatientpracticesessions.Withmeticulousattention,shecorrectedTilly'severymovement,impartingthesecretsofproperforceapplication.Tilly,hangingontoeveryword,endeavoredtoreplicatethetechniques.Finally,asTillyonceagaintookherpositiononthemat,sheexecutedthesomersaultflawlessly.Aresoundingroundofapplauseerupted,fillingthe