考点16 英语作文中句式的升级-新高考英语一轮总复习（上海专用）（解析版）

PAGE1考点16英语作文中句式的升级课前热身练（2023春·上海·华师大二附中校考阶段练习）在社交网络日渐流行的今天，高中生使用QQ、微信、B站等平台的频率日渐增多。网络平台给同学们提供学习资源的同时，也带来了虚假新闻、滥用言论自由等问题。请就这一社会现象发表看法，内容包括：1.简述目前网络平台的一些问题；2.提出你对改善网络环境的建议及理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays,theuseofsocialmediaplatformssuchasQQ,WeChatandBilibilibyhighschoolstudentsisincreasingrapidly.However,theseparticipationsbringupseveralproblems,suchastheproliferationoffakenews,theabuseoffreedomofspeech,andsoon.Toimprovetheonlineenvironment,Isuggestthatschoolshouldpromoteaneducationprogrammeforthestudents,whichemphasizestheimportanceoftheaccuracyofinformationandbeawareofinappropriatewordsorworksontheInternet.Besides,studentsshouldalsotaketheinitiativetobuildahealthyonlineenvironmentbyavoidingfakenews,disrespectfulwordsortrolling.Lastbutnotleast,teenagersshouldlimitandbalancetheuseoftheInternet.Abusiveandinappropriatebehaviorsfromsocialmediacanbelargelyavoidedifmoretimeisputintooutdooractivitiesandproductiveworks.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。在社交网络日渐流行的今天，高中生使用QQ、微信、B站等平台的频率日渐增多。网络平台给同学们提供学习资源的同时，也带来了虚假新闻、滥用言论自由等问题。要求考生请就这一社会现象发表看法。【详解】1.词汇积累迅速地：rapidly→quickly引起：bringup→cause/bringabout建议：suggest→advise/propose此外：besides→inaddition2.句式拓展简单句变复合原句：However,theseparticipationsbringupseveralproblems,suchastheproliferationoffakenews,theabuseoffreedomofspeech,andsoon.拓展句：However,theseparticipationsbringupseveralproblems,whichincludetheproliferationoffakenewsandtheabuseoffreedomofspeech.【点睛】[高分句型1]Toimprovetheonlineenvironment,Isuggestthatschoolshouldpromoteaneducationprogrammeforthestudents,whichemphasizestheimportanceoftheaccuracyofinformationandbeawareofinappropriatewordsorworksontheInternet.(运用了连接词that引导宾语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Abusiveandinappropriatebehaviorsfromsocialmediacanbelargelyavoidedifmoretimeisputintooutdooractivitiesandproductiveworks.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)核心考点梳理（一）使用万能句型使用万能句型能让简单句变成复合句，每篇文章可以用1到2句。词义万能句型例句毫无疑问Thereisnodoubtthat...Thereisnodoubtthat/Thereisnodenyingthat/Itgoeswithoutsayingthat/Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatcertainamountofplayingtimeplaysanimportantroleinchildren’sgrowth.不可否认Thereisnodenyingthat...不言而喻Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...普遍认为Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat...（二）使用高级句型高级句型的运用就是对高中所学语法的灵活运用。语法高级句型例句定语从句which引导的非限制性定语从句Environmentalpollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious,whichhasarousedthepublic’sconcern.介词+关系代词Speakingandlisteningareofgreatsignificanceforlanguagelearning,bywhichyouaresuretomaketremendousprogress.时间和地点名词后加when和where引导的定语从句Ibelievethatwithjointefforts,thecampuswillbeaspureasparadisewherewewon’tgetlostinmoralitybutwillimproveourlearningefficiency.名词性从句主谓宾结构的句子都可改成What+主+谓isWhatwestudentsshouldpayattentiontoisthemistakeswe’vemadeinourstudy.同位语从句HereIaminthehopethatmyadvicewilladdabrillianttouchtoyoursuccess.状语从句原因Itisbeneficialforyoutomakesomelocalfriends,consideringthatitneedssomepracticetolearnaforeignlanguagewell.结果Inaword,socialpracticeisimportanttostudentsintheirstudy,theformationoftheirworldoutlookandthedevelopmentoftheirpersonalities.Consequently/Asaresult,studentsshouldtakeanactivepartinsocialpracticeasmuchaspossible.让步Althoughtheknowledgethatwehavegainedinclassisimportant,equalconcentrationshouldbelaidonourpracticalabilitieswhichplayanimportantroleinourfuturecareer.比较Thelongeryoupersevere,thegreaterthesuccessyouwillachieve.Nothingismoreimportantthanyourownself-confidence.强调句Itis...that...Itisthisearliestdreaminmylifethatsupportsmetoalwaysstriveformybrightfuture.倒装句Notonly...butalso...Throughsocialpractice,notonlywillstudentsbeabletocommunicatewithmorepeoplebutalsoknowaboutdeepersocialproblemsandmoreaboutthemselves.Only+介词短语/状语从句Onlyinthiswaycanweliveinamoreharmonioussociety.Onlyifwetakemeasurestoaddresstheproblemwillwe名词/形容词/副词/动词+as(虽然)Youngasweare,

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rapidly,Withthecollegeentranceexaminationapproaching,Withsomanysportingfacilitiesprovidedbytheschool,...插入语在句子主语后插入短语，同位语和定语从句，让句子显得更高级。常用插入语短语有：tosome/alargeextent;needlesstosay①Thereisnodoubtthatcomputer,directlyorindirectly,toalargeextent,influencesourlifeprimarilyowingtothatcomputercanimprovetheefficiencyofourworkandstudy.②ShanghaiMuseum,awell-knownanddistinguishedmuseumbothathomeandabroad,ismoreprofessionalinholdingpaintingexhibitions.③Thenaughtyboy,whowasspoiledbyhisparents,alwaysinsistsonthingshewants.比喻AistoBwhatCistoD.JustasAistoB,soisCtoD.Readingistoamanwhatsaltistoadish.Justasgardenersaretoflowers,soisateachertohisstudent.感叹句How.../What...Howtimeflies!/Whatatragedy!谚语多背诵一些谚语Asthesaying/proverbgoes,practicemakesperfect.（三）高级句型的转化Socialpracticeisgoodforstudents.使用定语从句：Socialpracticewillenableusstudentstobeexposedmoretoreallife,whichwillmakeusgetfamiliarwiththelocalsocietyandbroadenourhorizons.使用状语从句：Wewillgetfamiliarwiththelocalsocietyandbroadenourhorizons,consideringthatsocialpracticewillenableusstudentstobeexposedmoretoreallife.Socialpracticewillenableusstudentstobeexposedmoretoreallife.Consequently,wewillgetfamiliarwiththelocalsocietyandbroadenourhorizons.使用非谓语：Socialpracticewillenableusstudentstobeexposedmoretoreallife,thusmakingusgetfamiliarwiththelocalsocietyandbroadenourhorizons.使用倒装：Notonlycansocialpracticeenableusstudentstobeexposedmoretoreallife,thusmakingusgetfamiliarwiththelocalsociety,butitcanbroadenourhorizonsaswell.（四）各种写作技巧的运用Toomuchhomeworkwillharmchildren'sphysicalandmentalhealth.①加万能单词或句型：Thereisnodenyingthattoomuchhomeworkwillharmchildren'sphysicalandmentalhealth./Toomuchhomeworkwillundoubtedlyharmchildren'sphysicalandmentalhealth.②用高级词汇和词组：Toomuchhomeworkwillundoubtedlyexertanegativeimpacton/serveasanobstacletochildren'sphysicalandpsychologicalhealth.③用高级句型：Toomuchhomeworkwillundoubtedlymakeourchildrensufferfromunbearable(unendurable/intolerable)stress,whichservesasanobstacletoboththeirphysicalandpsychologicalhealth,nottomentionthefactthatthoseendlesshomeworkextraordinarilygoagainsttheconceptofall-rounddevelopment.当堂知识检测1．Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.上图是一副引人深思的漫画：“或许不完美，但……”，请仔细观察图片，并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括：1.简要描述图片2.谈谈从中获得的启发___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thecomic,whichistitled“PerhapsImperfect,but...”,depictstwodancers,oneofwhomisseatedonawheelchairandtheotherisstandingup.Theseatedindividual,whoislearningtodancewithagreatdealofeffort,isaninspirationtousall.Meanwhile,thestandingdancer,whosemovesareflowingandgraceful,demonstrateshermasteryoftheart.Lifeisnotalwaysperfect,andeventhosewithdisabilitiescanachieveincrediblethings,whichthisimageremindsusof.Theseateddancer,whoseeffortsarecertainlynotinhibitedbyherwheelchair,hasadeterminationthatistrulyadmirable.Additionally,thestandingdancer,whoisperhapsperfectinherownway,canlearnthatimperfectionisabeautyinitself.Thus,thiscomicinspiresusalltoappreciateourownstrengthsandweaknesses,andtosupportoneanotherinourconqueststoovercomeourperceivedlimitations.【导语】这是一篇看图作文。要求考生根据漫画中的信息写一篇作文，要求有图片的描述以及从漫画中得到的启示。【详解】1.词汇积累描绘，描画：depict→draw与此同时：meanwhile→inthemeantime另外：additionally→inaddition值得陈赞的：admirable→commendable2.句式拓展同义句转折原句：Lifeisnotalwaysperfect,andeventhosewithdisabilitiescanachieveincrediblethings,whichthisimageremindsusof.拓展句：Thisimageremindsusthatlifeisnotalwaysperfect,andthateventhosewithdisabilitiescanachieveincrediblethings.【点睛】【高分句型1】Theseatedindividual,whoislearningtodancewithagreatdealofeffort,isaninspirationtousall.(运用了who引导的定语从句)【高分句型2】Theseateddancer,whoseeffortsarecertainlynotinhibitedbyherwheelchair,hasadeterminationthatistrulyadmirable.(运用了whose引导的定语从句)2．请根据图片内容和要求用英语写一篇短文。内容要求：1.描述画面（守株待兔）；2.概述其寓意；3.谈谈个人感想。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇：stump树桩______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OnepossibleversionInthepicture,amanisstayingbyastumpwaitingforharestocomeanddashthemselvesagainstit.Legendhasitthatafarmerwasonedayworkinginthefieldswhenhesawaharebumpintoastumpaccidentallyandbreakitsneck.Fromthenon,hegaveupfarmingandsimplysatbythestumpwaitingformoreharestocomeandrunintoit.However,thereisnosuchthingassomethingfornoth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HelpingtheoldadapttoadigitalsocietyNowadays,mobilepaymentgainsgreatpopularityinChina,makingourlifemoreandmoreconvenient.MostofusareusedtopayingbyscanningQRcodes.However,theoldareleftbehindbythistrend.Therefore,howtohelptheoldadapttoadigitalsocietyisofgreatimportance.Aseveryoneknows,theoldhavedifficultyinlearningnewthings.Wheneverwemeettheoldintrouble,wearesupposedtomakeeveryefforttoteachthem.What’smore,itisessentialtoraisetheirawarenessoflifelonglearning.Onlyinthiswaycantheykeepupwiththetimes.Themoretheylearn,theeasiertheycanadapttosociety.Lastbutnotleast,itistimethatourgovernmenttookmeasurestobridgethedigitalgapandprovidethemwithconvenientlifeservices,suchasmakingtheirtravelpossiblebyaddingmoreinformationtotheirseniorcards.Hopefully,withourjointefforts,theoldcanadaptthemselvestoadigitalsocietyquicklyandliveagoodlife.【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生在观察图片后写一篇以Helpingtheoldadapttoadigitalsociety为题的稿件向英文报ChinaDaily进行投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累重要的：essential→critical适应：adaptoneselfto...→adjustoneselfto...因此：therefore→hence采取措施：takemeasures→takeaction2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：What’smore,itisessentialtoraisetheirawarenessoflifelonglearning.拓展句：What’smore,itisessentialthatweshouldraisetheirawarenessoflifelonglearning.【点睛】【高分句型1】Nowadays,mobilepaymentgainsgreatpopularityinChina,makingourlifemoreandmoreconvenient.(运用了现在分词短语作结果状语)【高分句型2】Wheneverwemeettheoldintrouble,wearesupposedtomakeeveryefforttoteachthem.(运用了whenever引导的让步状语从句)4．假设你是光明中学高三（1）班的学生李华，今天学校组织了消防演习。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英语日记，叙述整个演习过程，并谈谈自己的感想。注意：（1）日记的开头已为你写好；（2）词数100词左右；（3）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Thismorning,ourschoolheldafiredrill.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Thismorning,ourschoolheldafiredrill.Wewerelisteningtotheteacherattentivelyinthemathclasswhenweheardthefirealarmfromthespeakeronthewall.Theteacherstoppedteachingimmediatelyandinstructedustoexittheclassroominorder.Whenwegotintothepassageway,wefoundweweresurroundedbysmokeeverywhere.Itwaschokingandourtearsrandown.Westudentsbentdown,coveredourmouthwithhandkerchiefs,andrandownstairsrapidlyintotheopenontheplayground,justaswehadbeentaughtbefore.Whenwecamebacktoourclassroom,westudentsgaveasummaryofthisfiredrill.IthinkfiredisastersareoftenseenonTVandreadaboutinthenewspaper.Weshouldknowtheskilltoescapefromafireincaseofemergency.【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇记叙文，要求考生写一篇英语日记，叙述整个消防演练过程，并谈谈自己的感想。【详解】1.词汇积累立刻：immediately→instantly指导：instruct→guide经常：often→frequently应该：should→besupposedto2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Itwaschokingandourtearsrandown.拓展句：Itwaschoking,whichmadeourtearsrundown.【点睛】[高分句型1]Wewerelisteningtotheteacherattentivelyinthemathclasswhenweheardthefirealarmfromthespeakeronthewall.(运用了固定句型)[高分句型2]Whenwegotintothepassageway,wefoundweweresurroundedbysmokeeverywhere.(运用了when引导时间状语从句和省略了that的宾语从句)5．假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津，下周你校将与英国姊妹校线上“云”交流校园生活。高中三年即将结束，回顾丰富多彩的校园生活，哪一次校园活动给你留下了美好而深刻的印象呢?请你以“TheMostImpressiveSchoolActivity”为题写一篇发言稿。内容包括：1.介绍活动过程;2.分享个人感受。注意：短文不少于100词。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello,everyone!I’mLiJin,aseniorthreestudentfromChenguanghighschool.I’mmorethandelightedtocommunicatewiththeclassmatesfromthesisterschoolinBritainonlineaboutcampuslife.Lookingback,Ifindthepastdayshavewitnessedplentyofmemorableactivities.Andtheonethatimpressedmemostisthecoming-of-ageceremony.ThemeaningfuleventwasheldonMay4thtohonorthestudentswhohadturned18.Wegatheredatthestadium,wearingtraditionaldresses.First,ourprincipalsincerelyextendedhiscongratulationsonusbecominggrown-ups.Andwereviewedourhighschoollifetogether,whichwasfullofhappiness.ThenfollowedtheConfucian-stylecoming-of-ageceremonies—JiLi(forgirls)andGuanLi(forboys).Finally,wemadeasolemnvowtoshouldertheresponsibilitiesofanadult.Personally,thisactivitynotonlyexposedustotraditionalChineseculture,butalsomotivatedustoembracethenewidentityandliveuptoourpromise.We,18-year-olds,shouldcherishouryouth.That’sall.Thankyou.【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生以“TheMostImpressiveSchoolActivity”为题写一篇发言稿。【详解】1.词汇积累：高兴的：delighted→pleased/cheerful回顾：review→lookback/retrospect激励：motivate→inspire/stimulate2.句式拓展：原句：Personally,thisactivitynotonlyexposedustotraditionalChineseculture,butalsomotivatedustoembracethenewidentityandliveuptoourpromise.拓展句：Personally,notonlydidthisactivityexposeustotraditionalChineseculture,butalsoitmotivatedustoembracethenewidentityandliveuptoourpromise.【点睛】【高分句型1】Lookingback,Ifindthepastdayshavewitnessedplentyofmemorableactivities.(运用了现在分词作状语。)【高分句型2】Andwereviewedourhighschoollifetogether,whichwasfullofhappiness.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句。)课后巩固提高6．你校英文报正在举办主题为“Theimportanceofgoals”的征文比赛，请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1.目标的重要性；2.呼吁同学们树立目标。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Theimportanceofgoals_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文：TheimportanceofgoalsAsasayinggoes,“Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutacompass.”Obviously,goalsplayanessentialroleinourlife.Inthefirstplace,goalsguideustowardswherewewanttohead,providingawaytooursuccessfuljourney.Inaddition,peoplewhoareawareoftheirgoalstendtostaymotivatedandinspiredwhenfacedwithadversity.Lastbutnotleast,wearebecomingphysicallyandspirituallyfulfilledwhenfocusingonourgoals.Hence,ifyoustilldon’thaveagoal,setanappropriateoneandtrytoaccomplishit.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生讲述目标的重要性并呼吁同学们树立目标。【详解】1.词汇积累在……方面起极其重要的作用：playanessentialrolein→playavitalpartin指引：guide→direct意识到：beawareof→beconsciousof/realize集中注意力于：focuson→concentrateon2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Inthefirstplace,goalsguideustowardswherewewanttohead,providingawaytooursuccessfuljourney.拓展句：Firstofall,goalsdirectsustowardsthedestinationwhichwewanttoheadfor,providingawaytooursuccessfuljourney.【点睛】【高分句型1】Inaddition,peoplewhoareawareoftheirgoalstendtostaymotivatedandinspiredwhenfacedwithadversity.(使用了who引导定语从句和when引导时间状语从句，且状语从句中使用了省略结构)【高分句型2】Hence,ifyoustilldon’thaveagoal,setanappropriateoneandtrytoaccomplishit.(使用了if引导条件状语从句和祈使句)7．你校英文报正在进行题为AMeaningfulVolunteeringExperience的征文，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.时间和地点；2.活动内容；3.你的感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。AMeaningfulVolunteeringExperience_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

AMeaningfulVolunteeringExperienceLastSaturdaymorning,I,togetherwithmyclassmates,workedasvolunteersinourcommunitycentre.Wehelpedtohandoutfoodandmedicinedonatedbyalocalcompanytotheelderlylivinginourcommunity.Wealsodeliveredthefoodandmedicinetothehomesofthosewhohaddifficultywalkingormoving.TiredasIwasafterhoursofhardwork,Ifeltverydelighted.Thismeaningfulvolunteeringexperiencewasnotonlyarelayoflove,butalsoagoodchanceformyownpersonalimprovement.【导语】本文是开放性作文。要求考生写一篇题为AMeaningfulVolunteeringExperience的征文。【详解】1.词汇积累分发：handout→distribute捐赠：donate→giveaway困难：difficulty→trouble劳累的：tired→weary2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Wehelpedtohandoutfoodandmedicinedonatedbyalocalcompanytotheelderlylivinginourcommunity.拓展句：Wehelpedtohandoutfoodandmedicinethathadbeendonatedbyalocalcompanytotheelderlylivinginourcommunity.【点睛】【高分句型1】Wealsodeliveredthefoodandmedicinetothehomesofthosewhohaddifficultywalkingormoving.（由who引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】TiredasIwasafterhoursofhardwork,Ifeltverydelighted.（由as引导的让步状语从句的倒装结构）8．上周六，你们班组织了一次社会实践活动。请你据此写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1.活动的内容；2.收获与感想。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行为连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion：WetookpartinasocialpracticeactivitylastSaturday.Iwasinitiallyexcitedaswewouldbeabletoexperiencethelifeoutsideofcampus.IwasdepressedwhenIlearnedthatweneededtohelpthecleaners.However,itistheseadmirablecleanerswhoworktirelesslytokeeptheentirecityclean.Whattheydomeansagreatdealtoourcommunity.Weworkedallmorningclearingthestreet.Ifeltasenseofachievementatthattime.Thepracticetaughtmethatrespectingthebeautifulenvironmentmeansrespectingourselves.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生根据上周六班级所组织的一次社会实践活动，写一篇英语短文。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：takepartin→participatein激动的，兴奋的：excited→thrilled大量，很多：agreatdeal→alot整个的：entire→whole2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Weworkedallmorningclearingthestreet.Ifeltasenseofachievementatthattime.拓展句：Weworkedallmorningclearingthestreet,atwhichtimeIfeltasenseofachievement.【点睛】【高分句型1】IwasdepressedwhenIlearnedthatweneededtohelpthecleaners.(运用了when引导的状语从句以及that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】However,itistheseadmirablecleanerswhoworktirelesslytokeeptheentirecityclean.(运用了强调句型)9．假定你是李华，最近你的班级就学生在学习和生活中面临的问题对班上的同学进行了调查。请根据图表，用英语写一篇短文向学校英文报投稿。内容包括：1.学生面临困难的状况描述；2.简单评论；3.你的建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.稿件标题已给出，不计入总词数。WhatTroubleWeHave___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

WhatTroubleWeHaveHavingdoneasurveyamongourclassmatesrecently,wefindoutwhattroublesstudentsarefacing.Accordingtothedata,morethanhalfofthestudentsthinkthebiggesttroubletheyfaceiskeepingupwithothers,which,inmyopinion,isthemainsourceofstudents’pressure.Nearlyonefifththinkit’sratherchallengingtohavemorefriends.About12percentbelievethatthebiggestchallengetheyfaceishavingahealthierlifestyle.Alsoafewstudentsexpresstheirconcernabouttheirrelationshipwithparentsandseveralconsiderkeepinghobbiesasaluxury.Only3percentthinktheyhavenoproblems.Iguessitisthehighpressurefromstudyandpeersthatcausestheseproblems.Consequently,Isuggestthatsomeactivitiesshouldbeorganizedtoprovidestudentswithopportunitiestorelievestresssothattheywouldadoptamorepositiveattitudetowardcomingchallenges.【导语】这是一篇图表作文。假定你是李华，最近你的班级就学生在学习