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书面表达一经典精讲（下）主讲老师：林斌北京八十中学英语高级老师开篇语人物传记Lifeofaperson题一：HenryNormanBethune__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LifeofBethune…bebornin/on……bebornin/on……enteruniversity……receivemedicaldegree……give…tohelp……setup……work…as…save……diefrom……beburied……beconsideredto…PersonalinformationHardworkandsuccessEvaluation/OpinionsLifeofBethuneNormanBethunewasaCanadiandoctor.HewasbornonMarch3rd,1890,inasmalltownofCanada.HeenteredUniversityofTorontoandPerPersonalinformationAftergraduationBethunemovedtoMontrealandgavefreemedicalcaretohelppoorpeoplethere.Bethunealsosetupafreeartschoolforchildren.BethuneleftforChinain1938.HeworkedselflesslyasadoctorandsavedmanyChinesesoldiers.Dr.Bethunediedfrombloodpoisoningin1939andwasburiedinShijiazhuang.HardworkandsuccessHardworkandsuccessDr.Bethuneisconsideredtobeadevotedandselflessinternationaldoctor.Evaluation/OpinionsEvaluation/OpinionsLayoutLayoutParagraph1:Paragraph2:Paragraph1:Paragraph2:Paragraph3:PersonalinformationHardworkandsuccessEvaluation/Opinionsbebornin/onenteruniversityreceive…degreegive…tohelp….setup………He/Sheisconsideredtobe…题二：_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________题三：依据提示写一篇100词左右的短文。1.杨利伟，38岁，辽宁人，中国空军飞行员。2.他于2003年10月15日乘神舟5号载人宇宙飞船进入太空，成为我国的第一位宇航员。他在太空飞行了21个小时，绕(orbit)地球14圈后顺当返回地面。3.中国是继美国和俄罗斯之后第三个能够成功地放射(launchn.&v.)和回收飞船的国家。标志着我国空间载人工程的巨大成功。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________题四：基本信息：★1960年12月诞生在香港；有音乐天赋；★1984年出第一张专辑，在后来的二十几年的歌坛生涯中，出版很多专辑并在国内外举办多场演唱会。“伴侣”成了家喻户晓的歌。演唱会状况：★首都体育馆theCapitalStadium★座无虚席；观众齐唱；整场气氛吵闹个人感受：自拟DearJim,Howarethingsgoing?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Lihua题五：Justguessthemandescribedinthefollowingsentences！Bornonthe18thofJanuary,1979inTaiwan,hewasraisedbyhismotherandwasshyandquietduringhischildhood.Showinginterestinmusic,hebeganlearningtoplaythepianoattheageof3.Whenhisfirstalbumwasreleasedin2000,hegottheworld’sattention.Hispopularitysky-rocketed(急速上升),andhehasreceivedmanyawardsforhissongs.HisownuniqueChineseR&Bstyleisunparalleledbyothersandhecontinuestomakebreakthroughsashetakesrisksinattemptingnewthings.①①Bornonthe18thofJanuary,1979inTaiwan,JayChou,afamoussinger,wasraisedbyhismotherandwasshyandquietduringhischildhood.分词结构同位语尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺.省略结构省略结构②Showinginterestinmusic,hebeganlearningtoplaythepianoattheageof3.留意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼。状语从句状语从句③WhenJay’sfirstalbumwasreleasedin2000,hegottheworld’sattention.④Hispopularitysky-rocketed(急速上升),whichallowedhimtoreceivemanyawardsforhissongs.定语从句定语从句尽量用复合句,倒装,非限性定语从句等，润色文章。⑤HisownuniqueChineseR&Bstyleisunparalleledbyothersandhecontinuestomakebreakthroughsashetakesrisksinattemptingnewthings.留意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组。名师寄语书面表达一经典精讲（下）讲义参考答案人物传记题一：LifeofapersonNormanBethunewasaCanadiandoctor.HewasbornonMarch3rd,1890,inasmalltownofCanada.HeenteredUniversityofAftergraduationBethunemovedtoMontrealandgavefreemedicalcaretohelppoorpeoplethere.Bethunealsosetupafreeartschoolforchildren.BethuneleftforChinain1938.HeworkedselflesslyasadoctorandsavedmanyChinesesoldiers.Dr.Bethunediedfrombloodpoisoningin1939andwasburiedinShijiazhuang.Dr.Bethuneisconsideredtobeadevotedandselflessinternationaldoctor.题二：TheChinesewillneverforgettheday,August28,2004,whenLiuXianggotthegoldmedalof110mhurdlesin28thOlympicGames.Notmerelydidhebeatallthewell-knownopponentsathomeandabroad,buthewasthefirstonewhofinishedthematchaswell,especiallyheonlyspent12.91secondswhichwas0.03secondsfasterthantheformerworldrecord.LiuXiangwasbornonJune13,1983inaworker’sfamily.Whenhewasjustalittleboy,hewassenttothechildren’ssportsschoolbyhisparents.Therewasnodenyingthathewasaluckyboy,becausehewasfoundbyCoachSunHaiping.Heisagoodboythathealwaystakesagreatmanypresentstorespecthisparentswheneverhecomesbackhome.Famousasheis,heisalwaysfriendlytohisneighborsasusual.SogreatisLiuXiangthatheiscalledasournationalhero.ItisuniversallyacknowledgedthatChinahasagreatathletecalledLiuXiang.LiuXiangsaidthathewoulddohisutmosttoachievehisanothergoalinlife---thechampionintheBeijing2008Olympics.SuchisLiuXiang,amanwithstrongmindandapromisingfuture.题三：YangLiwei,borninLiaoningOneOctober15ChinalauncheditsShenzhouVmannedspacecraft,withastronautYangLiweiaboardandYanghasbecomeChina’sfirstastronaut.Yangandhisspacecraftorbitedtheearth14timesduringabout21hoursbeforehesafelylandedinnorthChinathenextday.ThesuccessfullaunchandreturnofthespacecraftmadeChinathethirdcountryinspaceafterRussiaandtheUnitedStates,andthismarkedthegreatsuccessofthemannedspaceprogramofChina.题四：DearJim,Howarethingsgoing?OnNovember21st,2008I