高中英语读后续写练习+祖母的爱成就舞会闪耀时刻+课件-2025届高三上学期英语一轮复习专项

高考英语读后续写语篇练习祖母的爱，成就舞会闪耀时刻1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Lizawasayounggirlwithbrighteyesandahopefulsmile.Shewassittingonherbedwithherlaptop.Shescrolledthroughanonlinestore,hereyeslightingupatthesightofabeautifuldress.Itwasadesignergown(女礼服),shiningwithsequins(亮片)Butitwaswayoutofherbudget.Shesighedandlookedoverathermother,whowasreadingabookinthearmchairbythewindow.“Mom,canIpleasegetthisdressformyprom(正式舞会)?It’sperfect!”Lizapleaded,showingthescreentohermother.Hermotherglancedatthepriceandshookherhead.“Liza,that’stooexpensive.Wecan’taffordtospendthatmuchonadressyou’llwearonce.”4续写原文“But,Mom.Everyoneatschoolistalkingabouttheirdesignerdresses.Idon’twanttobetheonlyonewithoutone,”Lizaargued,hervoicerisingwithfrustration.Hermothersighed,tryingtostaycalm.“Honey,Iunderstand,butspendingthatmuchmoneyonadressisn’tpractical.Besides,someonehasasurpriseforyoutoday.Youmightnotneedtobuyadress.”Lizalitup.“Asurprise?Whatkindofsurprise?”Hermothersmiledmysteriously.“You’llsee.Justbepatient.”Liza’sgrandmother,palm,enteredthehouse,holdingapackagewrappedneatlyingiftpaper.Pam’seyestwinkledassheapproachedLiza.“Hello,dear!Ibroughtyousomethingspecial,”palmsaidwarmly,handingthepackagetoLiza.5续写原文Liza’scuriositygotthebetterofher,andsheeagerlytoreopenthepackage.Insidewasabeautifuldress,handcraftedwithfinedetailsandcare.“Liza,tryiton.Itwasmadebyyourgrandmother,thoughnotadesigner,butitisasignoflovefromher,”hermothersaid.Lizaputonthedressandstoodinfrontofthemirror,withahappysmileonherface.“Iwillgototheprominthis!Myclassmate’swillbeenviousofme!”6段首句Paragraph1：Intheevening,Lizamerrilywalkedintothehallwiththedress,accompaniedbyhergrandmother.Paragraph2：Hearingwhatherclassmatesaid,Lizaproudlytookhergrandmother’shandandintroducedhertothem.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了利萨在网上看中一条昂贵的设计师礼服，希望能穿着去参加正式舞会，但母亲表示价格超出预算，无法购买。母亲称有人会给利萨惊喜，或许她不用买新礼服。随后，祖母带着亲手制作的精美礼服来访，利萨穿上后非常满意，决定穿着它去参加舞会。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:

Intheevening,Lizamerrilywalkedintothehallwiththedress,accompaniedbyhergrandmother.晚上，利萨穿着那件礼服，在祖母的陪伴下，兴高采烈地走进了舞会大厅。大厅里灯光璀璨，五彩斑斓的灯光交织在一起，如梦如幻。音乐声悠扬动听，节奏感十足，人们随着音乐翩翩起舞。利萨一走进来，就吸引了众多目光。她的礼服在灯光下闪烁着柔和的光芒，精致的手工细节让它显得与众不同。同学们纷纷投来羡慕的目光，几个女生围上来，不停地夸赞她的礼服漂亮。利萨心里乐开了花，她优雅地和同学们打招呼，同时紧紧挽着祖母的胳膊，感觉自己是世界上最幸福的人。就在这时，一个同学好奇地问道：“利萨，你这礼服是哪个大牌设计师的作品呀？简直太惊艳了！”11续写思路分析Para2：Hearingwhatherclassmatesaid,Lizaproudlytookhergrandmother’shandandintroducedhertothem.听到同学这么问，利萨骄傲地拉起祖母的手，向大家介绍道：“这可不是什么大牌设计师的作品，而是我最亲爱的祖母亲手为我做的！”同学们听后，都露出了惊讶和敬佩的表情。利萨接着说：“我原本想要一条昂贵的设计师礼服，可妈妈说太贵了。没想到祖母给了我这个惊喜，她花费了很多时间和精力，一针一线地为我缝制了这件礼服。每一个细节都饱含着她对我的爱。”同学们纷纷点头，对祖母的手艺赞不绝口。祖母有些不好意思地笑了笑，但眼中满是自豪。利萨在舞会上尽情地跳舞，她知道，自己身上穿着的不仅是一件漂亮的礼服，更是祖母满满的爱。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Intheevening,Lizamerrilywalkedintothehallwiththedress,accompaniedbyhergrandmother.Thehallwasbrightlylit,withcolorfullightsinterweaving,creatingadream-likeatmosphere.Themusicwasmelodiousandfullofrhythm,andpeopleweredancinggracefullytothemusic.AssoonasLizaentered,sheattractednumerouseyes.Herdressglistenedwithasoftlightunderthelights,andthedelicatehand-madedetailsmadeitstandout.Herclassmatescastenviousglancesather,andseveralgirlssurroundedher,constantlypraisingherdress.Lizawasoverjoyed.Shegreetedherclassmatesgracefullywhiletightlyholdinghergrandmother'sarm,feelinglikethehappiestpersonintheworld.Justthen,aclassmateaskedcuriously,"Liza,whichfamousdesigner'sworkisthisdress?It'ssimplyamazing!"14范文呈现Hearingwhatherclassmatesaid,Lizaproudlytookhergrandmother’shandandintroducedhertothem."Thisisn'tadressfromafamousdesigner.Itwasmadebymydearestgrandmotherwithherownhands!"Herclassmatesshowedexpressionsofsurpriseandadmiration.Lizacontinued,"Ioriginallywantedanexpensivedesignerdress,butmymomsaiditwastooexpensive.Unexpectedly,mygrandmothergavemethissurprise.Shespentalotoftimeandenergysewingthisdressstitchbystitch.Everydetailisfilledwithherloveforme."Herclassmatesnoddedinagreement,fullofpraiseforhergrandmother'scraftsmanship.Hergrandmothersmiledshyly,buthereyeswerefullofpride.Lizadancedheartilyattheprom,knowingthatthedressshewaswearingwasnotonlybeautifulbutalsofullofhergrandmother'slove.15升级版范文呈现Intheevening,Liza,radiatingjoy,enteredthegrandhallinherexquisitedress,accompaniedbyherbeaminggrandmother.Thehall,ablazewithresplendentlights,reverberatedwithlivelymusic,ascouplestwirledgracefullyonthedancefloor.ThemomentLizasteppedin,alleyesweredrawntoher.Herdress,amasterpieceofhandiwork,shimmeredwithawarmglow,settingherapartfromthecrowd.Herclassmates,filledwithadmiration,flockedaroundher,showeringherwithcompliments.Liza,beamingwithpride,gracefullyacknowledgedtheirpraisewhilekeepingafirmholdonhergrandmother'sarm.Amidstthecommotion,acuriousclassmatepipedup,"Liza,thisdressisastunner!Whichrenowneddesignercraftedit?"16升级版范文呈现Hearingthisquery,Liza,withasenseofdeeppride,graspedhergrandmother'shandandpresentedhertothegroup."Thisdressisn'ttheworkofahigh-enddesigner;it'salaboroflovefrommydeargrandmother!"Herclassmates,visiblytakenaback,werequicktoexpresstheiradmira