专题05：材料作文-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（四川成都）

专题05：材料作文-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（四川成都）学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号一、材料作文1．在今年世界地球日(4月22日)的学校活动中，合唱团演唱了一首节奏舒缓、饱含深情的英文歌曲。请根据下列提示写一篇乐评，向更多人推荐这首歌。WordBank:◆heal[v.]tomakesth.healthyagain◆monologue[n.]alongspeechinaplay,movie,song,etc.spokenbyoneactor◆generation[n.]allthepeoplewhowerebornataboutthesametime◆sorrow[n.]afeelingofgreatsadness◆entire[adj.]includingeverything,everyone,oreverypart;[SYN]whole要求：1.文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名；2.乐评须包含以上所给信息；3.写出推荐理由并适当阐述，至少三条；3.注意文章逻辑，语句通顺，有恰当的过渡和衔接；4.词数：110词左右。提示词汇：世界地球日WorldEarthDay

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推荐[v.]recommend____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．许多初中生害怕错过社交媒体上发生的事情，每天都会忍不住浏览社交媒体，这种现象叫做FOMO(FearofMissingOut错失恐惧症)。请你根据此现象，以“HowtoDealWithFOMO”为题写一篇报道。HowtoDealWithFOMOinYourLife现象许多初中生害怕错过社交媒体上发生的事情，每天都会忍不住浏览社交媒体。原因①学习压力大；②缺乏关爱；③对社交媒体的依赖建议①参加社团活动；②向老师或同学寻求帮助；③与家人多交流；④多读纸质书；⑤多进行户外运动提示词：社交媒体socialmedia要求：1.文章必须包括以上所有内容并撰写合理的结尾。语句通顺，层次清晰，意思连贯；2.不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息；3.100词左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假如你是李欣，你校正在开展“用英语讲述你最喜欢的中国（电影、歌曲、发明……等）”为主题的视频展评活动，请根据以下提示撰写视频文稿。1.介绍你最喜欢的……的种类、名称等基本信息；2.说明你喜欢……的原因及你在欣赏（使用等）时的感受；3.对你视频观众提出倡导及建议。注意：1.文稿须全面反映提示信息；2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；3.词数80～100，开头已给出，且不计入总词数。Hello,everyone.I’mLiXin._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．每年的6月6日是全国爱眼日，请你结合学校英语社的爱眼宣传海报，写一篇文章，结合学生近视现状，分析近视的原因，介绍良好习惯并推荐专家建议，号召同学们养成良好的用眼习惯，保护好视力。注意：1.你的文章应包含以上所有信息；2.不能出现真实校名和姓名；3.词数：100词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：myopia(n.)近视：nearsighted(adj.)近视的；regular(adj.)定期的ForaMoreBeautifulWorldinYourEyes____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．现在有很多学校给班级提供了一块菜地，培养学生们吃苦耐劳的精神。请你结合下图，写一篇短文，并谈谈劳动带给家长和学生的变化。参考词汇：劳动labor

校园农场schoolfarm要求：1.短文应包含以上所有信息和图片中的相关要点；2.短文应格式正确，语句通顺，句式多样；3.词数100词左右。首句已给出，不计入总词数。Thesedays,manyschoolsprovideeachclasswithapieceoffieldtoplantvegetablestohelpmorestudentsgethard-workingspirit._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．前几天你见到了小学时候的好朋友。三年未见，他的变化很大。假设外教要求你写一篇关于朋友的文章，请你以“MyFriendHasChanged”为题，根据以下提示完成这篇文章。过去的情况1、个头矮小，学习不努力2、喜欢玩游戏3、淘气，取笑别人现在的情况1、……2、……我的感受……要求：1、表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2、词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词）。MyFriendHasChangedLastweek,Imetmybestfriendinprimaryschool.Hehaschangedalot.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假如你是林华，请根据以下表格中的信息以“MyChangesinLearningEnglish”写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你进初中两年多来在英语学习方面的变化及经验并简要地谈谈你对某两个学习方法的看法。刚进七年级时现在打瞌睡，听课不认真认真记笔记不喜欢听磁带，发音不准尽可能多听害羞，害怕讲英语主动找同伴英语对话一个人学习小组合作…………提示：l.文章应包含表格中的所有信息；不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校；2.字数100词左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．根据国家最新调查数据，中国中小学生2020年总体近视率为52.7%。保护视力，刻不容缓。请根据下图，结合你的生活经验，写一篇短文。Theresultsofthesurveyonstudents’myoplarateinChinain2020要求：1.短文应包括以上所有信息；2.文中不能出现真实学校和姓名；3.词数：100词左右。开头已给出，不计入词数。4.参考词汇：myopiarate近视率；视力sight；近视的short-sightedAccordingtoasurveybytheChinesegovernmentin2020,themyopiarateofChinesestudentshasbeenupto52.7%.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．你校英文校刊就“美育进中考”这一新闻开辟专栏，展开讨论。请以“Shouldhighschoolentranceexaminationincludemusicandart?”为题写一篇短文，并向该栏目投稿。要求：1.请先在答题卡上填写表中空格。2.写作内容需要包含图中所含信息，要转述，不能完全照抄。3.表达你的观点以及2点理由。（与图中理由需要不同）注意：1.文章不得出现真真实校名和姓名；2.词数120左右。参考词汇：all-roundadj.全面的__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．在英语课堂上，英语老师要求学生分组讨论“ShouldTeenagersGooutwithFriendsonWeekends?”，请按下面的讨论记录。View:理由：1.放松自己2.一起锻炼3.参加志愿者活动View:理由：1.学习、完成家庭作业2.做家务3.陪伴家人注意:1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；2.要求包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥；3.词数：100词左右。ShouldTeenagersGooutwithFriendsonWeekends?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：1．例文OnApril22,ourSchoolChorussangasong,HealtheWorld,tocelebratetheWorldEarthDay.Thesongcameoutin1991andwassungbyMichaelJackson.Itencouragespeopletoprotectourworld.IfeelsomovedthatIwanttowriteamusicreviewtorecommendit.First,Michaelsingsthesongwithfulllove,whichtrulytouchesme.Besides,thelyricsareeasytounderstand,andeachsentencemakesusthinkalot.Last,thesongisworthspreadingbecauseithelpscallonpeopletotakeactionnow.Ihopeyou’lllovethesongandwecanhelpmakeourworldabetterplace.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据歌词内容和歌曲的信息写一篇乐评，从而推荐该歌曲。2.写作指导：本文以第三人称书写，时态是一般现在时和一般过去时。第一段介绍作者创作歌曲的事，第二段介绍推荐原因，第三段总结。可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。2．例文：HowtoDealWithFOMOManyjuniorhighschoolstudentsareafraidofmissingoutonwhat’shappeningonsocialmediaandcan’thelpbutbrowsesocialmediaeveryday.Thereasonwhysomanyteenagersaresofondofsurfingthesocialmediaisthattheyaresufferingfromthestressfromthestudy.Anotherreasonisthattheyneedtobecaredfor.Besides,theyrelytoomuchonsocialmedia.HowdothestudentsdealwithFOMO?First,wecanjointheclubs,suchasfootballclubandswimmingclub.Second,weshouldasktheteachersorclassmatesforhelp.Third,wecantalkwithfamilymemberswhenwearelonely.Fourth,domoreoutdoorexercise.Besides,readingmorepaperbooksisalsoagoodidea.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中已给出的要点，用“HowtoDealWithFOMO”为题，介绍“错失恐惧症”这一现象，出现的原因及自己的建议。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍错失恐惧症这一现象；第二步，介绍出现这一现象的原因；第三步，具体介绍应对错失恐惧症的建议。[亮点词汇]①juniorhighschool初中②beafraidof害怕③befondof喜欢④sufferfrom承受⑤dealwith应对，处理[高分句型]①Thereasonwhysomanyteenagersaresofondofsurfingthesocialmediaisthattheyaresufferingfromthestressfromthestudy.（why引导定语从句；that引导表语从句）②Third,wecantalkwithfamilymemberswhenwearelonely.（when引导时间状语从句）3．例文：Hello,everyone.I’mLiXin.MyfavouritesongisLookupatthestarswhichissungbyZhangJie,oneofthemostpopularsingersinChina.It’sapopsongthatisfullofpositiveenergy.Ilikethissongbestfortworeasons.First,thesongsoundsverylivelythatitcanmakemehappy.Second,thelyricsofthesongareinspiring.It’spossibleforeveryonetomeetdifficultyinlife.Wheneverthathappens,Iwilllistentothatsong.Itcheersmeupandencouragesmetomoveon.Finally,Ihopeyouwillenjoythisvideoandgivemorevaluablecommentsonit.That’sall.Thanksforwatching.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作提示题目已经给出，要围绕写作提示进行写作，并可以适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，承接文章开头，并开篇点题，指出自己最喜欢的中国电影、歌曲、发明等的基本信息；第二步，说明喜欢它的原因及自己的感受；第三步，最后进行总结，并对视频观众提出建议和倡导。[亮点词汇]①befullof充满②cheersb.up使某人振作起来③encouragesb.todosth.鼓励某人做某事④moveon继续前进[高分句型]①It’sapopsongthatisfullofpositiveenergy.（that引导的定语从句）②Wheneverthathappens,Iwilllistentothatsong.（whenever引导的时间状语从句）4．参考范文ForaMoreBeautifulWorldinYourEyesJune6isNationalEyeCareDay.Asurveyshowsabadsituation:about38%offourthgradersarenearsighted,about68%foreighthgradersandabout81%forthoseinhighschool.Badhabitscausemyopia.Usingphonesinbedhurtseyes.Lyingonthesofawhilereadingisalsoharmful.Weshoulddevelopgoodhabitsforachange.Let’sdoeyeexercisesoftenandhaveregulareyesighttests.Weshouldfollowthe20/20/20rule:After20minutesofcomputeruse,weshouldlookatsomethinggreen20feetawayfor20seconds.It’stimetotakeactionforamorebeautifulworldinoureyes.(词数108）【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据海报中的“信息提示”分析当前的学生近视现状，及原因，并给出建议，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍调查的结果；第二步，分析学生近视的原因；第三步，就“保护视力”提出建议；第四步，呼吁大家行动。[亮点词汇]①onthesofa在沙发上②developgoodhabits养成好习惯③doeyeexercises做眼保健操④takeaction采取行动[高分句型]①Lyingonthesofawhilereadingisalsoharmful.(动名词作主语)②It’stimetotakeactionforamorebeautifulworldinoureyes.(it固定句型；动词不定式作主语)5．例文

Thesedays,manyschoolsprovideeachclasswithapieceoffieldtoplantvegetablestohelpmorestudentsgethard-workingspirit.

Inthepast,parentspaidmoreattentiontotheirchildren’sgrades,butnowtheyoftenencouragetheirchildrentodohousework.Asforthestudents,theyusedtostudyhardeveryday,andtherewasnotimeforthemtodeveloptheirhobbiesorrelax.Butnowstudentshavelesshomework,andtheycantakeuptheirhobbies,exerciseandsoonintheirsparetimeorweekends.Nowstudentshaveanextralaborclass.Throughthis,studentscanmastermanyusefullifeskills.Inaddition,theycanalsoexperiencethehardworkoffarmers.Athome,helpingparentsdohouseworkcanreducetheburdenofparents.

Inaword,laborisbeneficialandhonorable,anditisofgreatbenefittoourgrowth.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：根据所给提示写一篇作文，介绍劳动带给家长和学生的变化。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍父母和学生以前以及现在的变化；第二步，具体介绍通过劳动学生可以获得什么；第三步，最后表达你的看法。[亮点词汇]①payattentionto注意②encouragesbtodosth鼓励某人做某事③inaddition此外[高分句型]①Butnowstudentshavelesshomework,andtheycantakeuptheirhobbies,exerciseandsoonintheirsparetimeorweekends.（and连接两个并列结构）②helpingparentsdohouseworkcanreducetheburdenofparents.（动名词作主语）6．Onepossibleversion:MyFriendHasChangedLastweek,Imetmybestfriendinprimaryschool.Hehaschangedalot.Atthattime,hewasshortandhedidn’tworkhardatstudies.Heoftenwentouttoplaygameswithotherchildren.Heusedtobeanaughtyboyandliketomakefunofothers.Laterhedeterminedtochange.Now,heistallandspendsmostofhistimereadingbooks.Asaresult,hebecomesatopstudentinhisschool.Helikesplayingbasketballverymuch.Heisn’tnaughtyanymore.Heoftenhelpshisparentswiththehousework.Thismakeshisparentsveryhappy.Seeingmyfriend’schanges,Ifeltproudandhappy.Ilearnfromhimthatonceyoumakeupyourmind,youcanachieveyourgoals.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的我的感受，适当添加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍朋友过去的情况；第二步，介绍朋友现在的情况；第三步，介绍自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①usedtobe曾经是②makefunof取笑③not...anymore不再[高分句型]Ilearnfromhimthatonceyoumakeupyourmind,youcanachieveyourgoals.（that引导的宾语从句）7．例文：MyChangesinLearningEnglishWeallknowitisveryimportantforusstudentstodevelopgoodstudyhabits.Ihavebeeninjuniorhighschoolfortwoyears.IhavechangedalotinlearningEnglish.WhenIfirstwasintheseventhgrade,Ididn’tlistentotheteachercarefullyandalwaysdidthingsthathadnothingtodowiththeclass.MyEnglishpronunciationwasnotcorrectandmyclassmatesalwayslaughedatme.SoIwasveryafraidtospeakEnglishinpublic.Ialwaysstudiedalone,becauseIwasafraidtoaskmyclassmatesquestions.NowIhavedevelopedsomegoodhabitssuchaslisteningtoEnglishasmuchaspossible,takingnotescarefullyinclass,keepingEnglishdiariesandsoon.IalsomakedialogueswithmyclassmatesinEnglish.IoftenimprovemyEnglishthroughgroupstudy.Inaword,developinggoodhabitsisveryimportanttoEnglishlearning.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态结合“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意刚进七年级时的情况和现在的情况的对比，在包含所有要点的基础上适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出主题“在英语学习上有很多变化”；第二步，通过今昔对比来突出自己的变化；第三步，收尾。[亮点词汇]①juniorhighschool初中②laughat嘲笑③beafraidtodosth.害怕做某事④inaword总而言之[高分句型]①WhenIfirstwasintheseventhgrade,Ididn’tlistentotheteachercarefullyandalwaysdidthingsthathadnothingtodowiththeclass.（when引导时间状语从句；and连接并列谓语结构；that引导定语从句）②Ialwaysstudiedalone,becauseIwasafraidtoaskmyclassmatesquestions.（because引导原因状语从句）8．例文AccordingtoasurveybytheChinesegovernmentin2020,themyopiarateofChinesestudentshasbeenupto52.7%Manyfactorsleadtothemyopiaproblem.Withthepopularityofdigitalproducts,anincreasingnumberofstudentsfixtheireyesonthescreenatleast4hourseveryday.Moreoveracademicburdenforcesstudentstooverusetheireyeswhichworsensthesituation.Weshouldtakeactiontodealwiththeproblem.First,thegovernmentshouldupdatetherelevantrulestoreduceschooltimeensuringthestudentstouseeyesless.Second,westudentsshouldsaynototoomuchuseofelectronicdevices.Sinceeyesarethewindowofoursoul,weshouldtakemeasurestoprotectthem.【详解】1.题干解读：本题是一篇材料作文，结合题干提示，介绍2020年中学生近视率的结果，分析导致近视的原因，以及给出相应保护视力的建议。2.写作指导：本文时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称和第三人称。写作时，首先开篇点题说中国中小学生2020年总体近视率为52.7%；其次分析导致近视的因素，并提出相应的建议保护视力；最后呼吁大家行动起来保护好自己的视力。注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法使用错误。9．1.for；2.against范文：Shouldhighschoolentranceexaminationincludemusicandart?Recentlywehavediscussedwhether