作文19 辽宁盘锦卷（满分作文+同类作文+素材积累）-备战2022年中考英语满分作文+万能模板+热点素材

2021年中考满分作文特快专刊真题在线作文19辽宁盘锦卷真题在线（辽宁省盘锦市2021年中考英语试题）在初中三年的时光里,你不仅学到了知识，也具备了一定的能力。当你克服困难第一次成功地完成某件事情时，这份与众不同的经历一定在你的脑海里留下了深刻的印象。请你以“Myfirsttimeto________”为题，写一篇英语作文，分享你的经历并谈谈你的感受。写作要求：（1）补全标题，词数80-100；（2）语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；（3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。Myfirsttimeto________考题解析________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考题解析1.题干解读：题目是半命题作文，要求以“Myfirsttimeto…”写一篇作文，分享自己第一次做某事的经历并谈谈自己的感受。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，记叙过去的经历用一般过去时。文章可采用三段式，第一段引出这次经历，第二段详细叙述经历，最后一段讲感受。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。满分范文满分范文MyfirsttimetoswimAsweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.IstillrememberthefirsttimeIlearnedtoswim.Lastsummerholiday,Iwantedtolearnhowtoswim.Iaskedmyfathertoteachme.Iwenttotheswimmingpoolwithmyfather.Hetaughtmehowtoswim.Atfirst,Iwasafraidofdivinginthewater.AndIfeltuncomfortableinthewater.Butmyfatheralwaysencouragedme.Hesaidhewouldprotectme.ThenIbegantoswim,butIcouldn’tswimforwardatall.Itmademeupset.Thenmyfathertoldmehowtomove,howtostretchoutmyhandsandlegs.SlowlyIcouldmovealittle.Ittookmeaboutfourhourstolearntoswim.Ifeltquitehappy.Whatanunforgettableexperienceitwas!名师点评名师点评2021年盘锦卷中考英语书面表达，与20年相比没有很大变化，皆是半命题作文，在书面表达考查形式上有一定变化，19年及以前为两个作文，是以小作文+大作文的形式进行考查的，但近两年作文难度有所下降，由两篇减少为一篇，题目类型均为半命题或者命题作文，学生在学习中可多关注此类型的作文书写及相关素材积累。佳句积累1.Asweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.【亮点】asweallknow：众所周知。2.IstillrememberthefirsttimeIlearnedtoswim.【亮点】Ilearnedtoswim为定语从句，修饰先行词time。3.Thenmyfathertoldmehowtomove,howtostretchoutmyhandsandlegs.【亮点】howtomove,howtostretchoutmyhandsandlegs为宾语从句，作told的宾语。4.Ittookmeaboutfourhourstolearntoswim.【亮点】Ittakessb.sometimetodosth.花某人多长时间做…5.Whatanunforgettableexperienceitwas!【亮点】本句为感叹句，作为结尾，对第一次的游泳经历作了很好的结尾和升华。举一反三相似题①人生中有很多第一次：第一次学游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家务；第一次赢得比赛；第一次……。请根据提示，就你的第一次……写一篇短文。内容包括：1.第一次……的整个过程；2.你的感受。要求：1.词数：80-100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。Asweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.Istillrememberthefirsttime__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】ThefirsttimetolearntoswimAsweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.Istillrememberthefirsttimetolearntoswim.Lastsummervacation,myfathertookmetotheswimmingpoolinourneighborhoodandtaughtmetoswim.Itwasthefirstformetoswim.Atfirst,Icouldnotswimatall.Myfatherwasverypatient.Heencouragedmeandtaughtmehowtoswim.Hetaughtmehowtobreatheinthewaterfirst.Then,Hethrewmeintothedeepestpartoftheswimmingpool.IwassofrightenedthatIcouldn’tmove.ButInevergaveup.Ifeltsafewithmydadaround.Threehourslater,withthehelpofmyfather,Icouldswimbymyself.AlthoughIcouldn'tswimverywell,Iwasveryhappy.Iwillneverforgetthisexperience,becauseInotonlylearnedhowtoswim,butalsolearnedtobebrave!【考题解析】这是一篇材料作文，根据提示信息，选择给你印象深刻的第一次活动进行描述并谈谈自己的感受。时态主要为一般过去时，人称主要为第一、三人称。写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文。首先开门见山，介绍自己的第一次活动是什么，接下来详细介绍第一次活动的整个过程，最后谈一谈自己的感受。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。注意：注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范，避免出现拼写错误；词数在80—100。相似题②人生中有很多第一次：第一次学游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家务；第一次赢得比赛；第一次……。请根据提示,用英语写一篇短文,描述你最难忘的一次经历。提示：(1)Whichthingisthemostunforgettableforyou?(2)Whatdidyoudo?(3)Howdidyoufeel?要求：(1)短文须包含所给提示,可适当发挥。(2)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。(3)词数80个左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)Asweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.Istillrememberthefirsttime____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】As__we__all__know,__everyone__has__his__unforgettable__memories.__I__still__remember__the__first__timeIclimbedthemountain.Threeyearsago,allwestudentswereaskedtoclimbthemountain.Itwasmyfirsttimetotryclimbingamountain.Ifeltveryexcited.Wesetoffat8aminthemorningandIsupposeditmightbeaneasyjourney.However,astimewentby,someonewantedtogiveup.Theteacherencouragedustoreachthetopofthemountain.Whenwegottothetopofthemountain,thefeelingcouldn'tbeexpressedbywords.Fromthenon,Ilearnedthatweshouldn'tgiveupwhenfacingdifficulties.Onlywhenwekeepdoingsomething,canwehaveasenseofachievement.相似题③人生中有很多第一次做的事，如第一次游泳，第一次赢得比赛……你记忆最深的是什么呢？请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。1.要点：1)这件事情是什么；2)这件事情发生的过程；3)你的感受。2.要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2)词数100左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Asweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.IstillrememberthefirsttimeIclimbedthemountain.Threeyearsago,allstudentsinmyclasswereaskedtoclimbamountain.Itwasmyfirsttimetodothingslikethis.Ifeltveryexcitedatfirst.Wesetoffat8a．m.inthemorningandIsupposeditmightbeaneasyjourney.However,astimewentby,someonewantedtogiveup.Theteacherencouragedustoreachthetopofthemountain.Althoughintheendweweretired,wewerereallyattractedbythesceneryatthetopandourfeelingscan'tbeexpressedbywords.Fromthattime,Ilearnednottogiveupwhenfacingdifficulties.OnlywhenIkeepdoingitandfinishitcanIhaveasenseofachievement.相似题④你们班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论自己第一次做某事的难忘经历。比如：第一次独自旅行，第一次做饭……。请你以“MyFirstTimeTravelingAlone”为题写一篇英语短文，叙述一下自己第一次单独旅行的经历。要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.100词左右。MyFirstTimeTravelingAlone___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MyFirstTimeTravelingAloneIstillrememberthefirsttimeItraveledalone.Lastsummervacation,Iwenttothesummercamp.ThatwasthefirsttimeIlefthomealone.Atfirst,IwasalittleafraidbecauseIhadneverlefthomebefore.Butmyparentsencouragedmealot.Imetalotofchildren.Wewenttoclimbthemountaintogether.Theywerebraveandwebecamegoodfriends.Weoftenhelpedeachother.Atlast,wegottothetopofthemountain.Wewereveryexcited.Ilearnedalotfromtheexperience.IknewwhattodowhenIhadproblems.Thatwasthemostimportant.【考题解析】审题指导：细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：

1.叙述一下自己第一次单独旅行的经历，以记叙文为主；

2.需要写“我”的第一次单独旅行，用第一人称；

3.记叙自己的单独旅行经历，发生在过去，以一般过去时为主；抒发个人情感及感悟用一般现在时；我的第一次独自旅行要点提示素材串联开头：概括我的第一次经历1.还记得我的第一次单独旅游(stillrememberthefirsttimeItraveledalone)2.去年暑假我参加了夏令营(lastsummervacation,gotothesummercamp)正文：详细叙述此次经历的过程1.起初有点害怕，因为之前从未离开过家(atfirst,alittleafraid,neverleavehomebefore)2.父母鼓励，遇见了许多勇敢的孩子，与他们一起爬山，相互帮助，最后到达山顶(encourage,meetalotofchildren,climbthemountaintogether,helpeachother,thetopofthemountain)结尾：总结自己的感受学到了许多，知道了遇到困难做什么(learnalotfromtheexperience,knowwhattodo)相似题⑤（2021原创）烹饪会给人带来愉悦，你的第一次烹饪经历是怎样的呢？请以“Myfirstcookingexperience”为题，用英语写一篇短文描述你的第一次烹饪经历。1.要点：1)描述具体的经历；2)你的感受。2.要求：1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；2)词数100左右。Myfirstcookingexperience________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MyfirstcookingexperienceAsweall