高考英语复习读后续写练习+超市外的车钥匙风波与暖心救助+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习超市外的车钥匙风波与暖心救助1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Itwassupposedtobeanormaltriptothesupermarket.Mysonwaslittle,anditwasgettingclosetonoon,soIwasrushingtomycartryingtoavoidameltdown(融化).Thesunwasstreamingthroughthelargewindows,castingawarmglowonthefruitsandvegetables,andforamoment,Ifeltasenseofcontentmentinthesimpleactoffinishingthegroceryshoppingwithmychild.IrememberfeelingasenseofaccomplishmentasIgothimintothecarwithoutanytears.ThenIwenttostartthecar.However,Isuddenlyrealizedmykeysweregone.Afterafewminutesofcheckingaround,IrealizedthatImusthavelockedtheminthetrunk(后备箱)withmybag.AwaveofanxietywashedovermeasIstaredblanklyatthecar,theonceinvitingsupermarketnowabackdroptomygrowingpanic.4续写原文Iwasn’tsurewhattodo,soItookmysonoutofhiscarseatandwentbackinsidethestorewithallmygroceries.IhadtousetheirphonetocallmyhusbandforthesparekeybecausemyphonewasinthebagIhadlockedinthetrunk.Aftermultiplecallsandmessageswithnoanswer,Iwasgettingupset.Mysonwastiredandgettingfussy(爱哭的).Iwasexhaustedfromasleeplessnightthatallmomsgothroughwhentheirkidsareteething.Whenhewentintofull-oncrying,Ifeltthetearscomedownmyface,too.Anemployeeatthestoretappedmeontheshoulderandaskedmetocomewithher.Iwaspanickedforamoment,thinkingthatIwasgoingtobeblamedandthrownintothestorageareatokeepusquiet.Theemployee—whosenameIwouldlaterfindoutwasKelly—tookme,tomysurprise,totheStarbuckscafethatwasinsidethestore.SheaskedmeifIdrankcoffee.Isaidyes.5段首句Paragraph1：Thenshewalkedovertothecounterandcamebackwithoneforme.Paragraph2：Withherhelp,myhusbandfinallyarrived.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了一位带着年幼孩子的母亲在超市购物后准备回家，临近中午，她匆忙将孩子安置好后却发现车钥匙不见了，一番寻找后确定钥匙连同包一起被锁在了后备箱。她只好带着孩子和所有的杂货返回超市，想用超市电话联系丈夫拿备用钥匙，然而多次联系无果。孩子又累又闹，母亲也疲惫不堪，几乎绝望之时，超市员工凯利出现，将她带到店内的星巴克咖啡馆，并询问她是否喝咖啡，为这个窘迫的局面带来了一丝温暖与转机，让这位母亲在困境中感受到了陌生人的善意。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Thenshewalkedovertothecounterandcamebackwithoneforme.、接着，凯利快步走到柜台前，不一会儿，便双手捧着一杯咖啡向我走来。她轻轻将咖啡递到我面前，眼神中满是关切与善意，说道：“喝杯咖啡，放松一下吧，看起来你今天不太顺利。”我接过咖啡，热气腾腾的咖啡杯暖着我的手心，那丝丝缕缕上升的热气，仿佛也温暖了我疲惫的心。我轻轻抿了一口，苦涩中带着一丝甘甜，心情也随之稍微舒缓了一些。凯利在旁边的座位上坐下，和我聊起天来，她温柔的话语如同春日里的微风，轻轻拂去我心头的焦虑。她讲述着自己初为人母时的手忙脚乱，那些曾经的艰辛与不易，让我深感共鸣。在她的陪伴下，孩子也渐渐停止了哭闹，开始好奇地打量着周围的一切，原本压抑的氛围渐渐有了一丝轻松的气息。10续写思路分析Para2：Withherhelp,myhusbandfinallyarrived.时间一分一秒地过去，就在我几乎要放弃等待的时候，门口突然出现了丈夫熟悉的身影。我激动地站起身来，凯利也跟着起身，脸上露出欣慰的笑容。丈夫匆匆走到我们身边，先是关切地看了看我和孩子，然后对凯利连声道谢。凯利笑着摆摆手，说这只是她力所能及的小事。我向丈夫简单说明了情况，丈夫从口袋里拿出备用钥匙，我们一起向停车场走去。一路上，我心中满是对凯利的感激，这次经历让我深刻感受到了陌生人的善意是如此珍贵。回到家后，我依然久久不能忘怀凯利的帮助，我决定以后也要像她一样，在他人遇到困难时伸出援手，将这份温暖传递下去。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Thenshewalkedovertothecounterandcamebackwithoneforme.Shepresentedthesteamingcupofcoffeewithasympatheticsmileandmurmured,"Ithoughtyoucouldusethis.Takeamomenttorelax."Igratefullyacceptedit,thericharomaofthecoffeeinstantlysoothingmyfrayednerves.AsItookasip,thewarmliquidseemedtoseepintomyverybeing,providingamuch-neededrespite.Kellythensatbesidemeandinitiatedaconversation.Shesharedsomeofherownparentingtales,herwordsflowinglikeagentlestream,graduallywashingawaymyanxiety.Myson,nowsomewhatpacified,begantolookaroundthecaféwithwide-eyedwonder.Theatmosphere,whichhadbeenthickwithtension,nowseemedtolighten,ifonlyalittle.13范文呈现Withherhelp,myhusbandfinallyarrived.RelieffloodedovermeasIsawhimenterthecafé.Iquicklystoodup,andKellyfollowedsuit,asmileofsatisfactiononherface.Myhusbandhurriedover,hiseyesfilledwithconcernforus.HethankedKellyprofusely,andshesimplyshruggeditoff,sayingitwasnobigdeal.Ibrieflyexplainedthesituationtohim,andheretrievedthesparekeyfromhispocket.Aswewalkedtowardstheparkinglot,myheartswelledwithgratitudeforKelly.Thisencounterhadtaughtmethepowerofkindnessfromastranger.Oncewegothome,Icouldn'tstopthinkingaboutKelly'sactofkindness.Iresolvedtopayitforwardandbethereforothersintheirtimeofneed,justasshehadbeenforme.14升级版范文呈现Thenshewalkedovertothecounterandcamebackwithoneforme.Withasmileaswarmasthesun,shehandedmethecoffee,whoserichfragranceinstantlyfilledmynostrils,calmingmyrestlessheart.ItwasatthatmomentthatItrulyfeltaglimmerofcomfortinthisotherwisechaoticsituation.Sittingbesideme,Kellysharedherownexperiencesofmotherhood,herwordsflowinglikeagentlebrook,whichgraduallywashedawaymyanxiety.Myson,nowquieteddown,waslookingaroundthecaféwitheyesfullofcuriosity,makingtheoncetenseatmospheresomewhatrelaxed.15升级版范文呈现Withherhelp,myhusbandfinallyarrived.NeverhadIbeensorelievedaswhenIsawhisfigureappearingattheentranceofthecafé.Standinguphurriedly,IsawKellyalsorise,asenseofsatisfactiongleaminginhereyes.Myhusband,whoseconcernforuswaspalpable,thankedKellyprofusely.Itwasherkindnessthathadbeenabeamoflightinmydarkmoment.Aftergettingthesparekey,wewalkedtowardstheparkinglot.OnlythendidIrealizehowpreciousthekindnessofastran