高考英语复习读后续写练习+少年杰克的洛基山攀岩挑战之旅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习少年杰克的洛基山攀岩挑战之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文WhenJasonwaseatingbreakfast,hismothersaid,“Afterbreakfast,Jason,Iwantyoutogointotownwithme.It’syoursister’sbirthday,andweneedtoshopforhergifts.”Jasonwaseagertogo,becausebuyinggiftswasalwaysfun.Astheydrovetotown,Jasoncouldn’thelpbutaskthequestionthathadbeenonhismindsinceyesterdaywhenAuntNancycame.“What’sinthebigboxthatDadtooktothebarn(畜棚),Mom?IsitsomethingAuntNancyboughtforMegan’sbirthday?”“It’sasurprise,Jasonanddon’tgonearthatbarntoday.Doyouhearme?”4续写原文Jasonknewnothingwouldchangehermind.Onlynowhewasmorecuriousthanever!Backhome,MeganranouttomeetJason.“Jason,Jason,I’msixyearsold!”shecried,jumpingupanddown.“Iknow,Iknow.”Jasongaveherabighug.Soonthehousewasfilledwithexcitement.MegansatonthechairwatchingwhileMomandAuntNancywerepreparingthebirthdaydinner.Dadwouldn’tbebackforatleasttwohours.Jasonwentoutsidetryingtothinkofsomethingtodo,buthisthoughtskeptreturningtotheboxinthebarn.5续写原文Jasonwishedhecouldjustturnbacktothehouse,buthislegscarriedhimintothebarn.Heopenedtheboxandfoundalittledoginit!“Megan’sgoingtoloveyou!”Hesecretlywishedthedogwasforhim.Afterall,MomandDadknewthathehadbeenwantinghisowndog.SoonJasonwasplayinghappilywiththedog,andheforgotthatheshouldn’tbeinthebarn.Suddenly,thedogranoutofthebarnasfastasitcouldandintothefield.6段首句Paragraph1：Doubtstartedtospreadinhismind.Paragraph2：Theviewfromthetopwasbreathtaking.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了在科罗拉多小镇，充满冒险精神的杰克13岁时对攀岩产生兴趣，在当地攀岩馆学习后，不满足于室内攀岩，渴望挑战洛基山的天然山峰。听闻附近一条困难路线后，他精心准备数周后前往攀登。起初较顺利，但之后困难重重，甚至一度找不到支撑点。然而，他凭借坚定决心克服困难登顶，山顶壮丽景色让他成就感满满，也开启了他更多的登山冒险之旅。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Doubtstartedtospreadinhismind.怀疑在杰克心中蔓延，他开始思考自己是否太过冲动，不该贸然挑战如此艰难的路线。但当他低头看到身上早已磨破的训练服，那是他努力训练的见证，心中又涌起一股不甘放弃的劲儿。他小心翼翼地调整呼吸，让自己镇定下来，眼睛再次仔细搜寻着岩石上可能的着力点，脑海中回忆着教练教授的技巧。突然，他发现一处岩石的纹理似乎可以利用，便鼓足勇气伸出手去，紧紧抓住，接着奋力向上一蹿，继续艰难地攀爬。11续写思路分析Para2：Theviewfromthetopwasbreathtaking.山顶的景色美得令人窒息。连绵起伏的山峦在脚下铺展开来，仿佛一幅巨大的画卷，山谷中云雾缭绕，如梦如幻。杰克激动地俯瞰着这一切，心中满是自豪与喜悦。微风吹过，他的发丝随风飘动，疲惫感瞬间消散。此刻，他深刻地意识到，这次攀登不仅是对体力的考验，更是对意志的磨炼。他暗暗发誓，未来还要挑战更多的山峰，去探索这片山脉中更多未知的壮美。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Doubtstartedtospreadinhismind.Hewaswonderingwhetherhehadbeentoorecklesstotakeonsuchaformidablechallenge.Lookingdownathisworn-outtrainingclothes,whichwerethewitnessesofhisarduoustraining,asenseofunwillingnesstogiveupsurgedwithinhim.Calminghimselfdownbytakingadeepbreathdeliberately,hescannedtherockfacemeticulouslyagain.Allofasudden,hespottedatextureontherockthatseemedavailableforuse.Summoninguphiscourage,hereachedouthishand,graspedittightly,andthenmadeastrenuousupwardleap,continuinghisarduousclimb.14范文呈现Theviewfromthetopwasbreathtaking.Theundulatingmountainsstretchedoutbeneathhisfeetlikeacolossalpainting,withthevalleysveiledinthemist,dreamyandillusory.Standingonthesummit,Jackgazedatthepanoramawithexcitement,hisheartfilledwithprideandjoy.Thegentlebreezeblew,hishairflutteringinthewind,andthesenseofexhaustionvanishedinstantly.Atthismoment,hedeeplyrealizedthatthisclimbwasnotonlyatestofphysicalstrengthbutalsoatemperingofhiswill.Hevowedsecretlythathewouldtakeonmorepeaksinthefutureandexploremoreoftheunknownmagnificenceinthesemountains.15升级版范文呈现Doubtstartedtospreadinhismind.Washebeingfoolhardytoattemptsuchachallengingroute?Itwasatthismomentofhesitationthatheglanceddownathistatteredtraininggear,theveryemblemofhisunremittingefforts.Withanewfounddeterminationkindledwithin,hetookamomenttosteadyhisracingheart.Peeringintentlyattherocksurface,hespiedaminutefissurethatmightjustofferaglimmerofhope.Summoningeveryounceofhiscourage,hereachedout,fingersgraspingthetenuoushold.Then,withaheave,hepropelledhimselfupward,defyingtheoddsandtheelements.16升级版范文呈现Theviewfromthetopwastrulyasighttobehold.TherelaythemajesticRockies,theirpeaksandvalleysunfurlinglikeavasttapestrybeneathhim.Thevalleys,enshroudedinawispyveilofmist,seemedtoholdsecretsuntold.NeverhadJackfeltsuchaprofoundsenseofaccomplishment.Itwasnotjustthephysicalfeatbuttheconquestofhisinnerdemonsthatfilledhimwithpride.Standingthere,heknewthiswasbutthefirstchapterinhi