读后续写珍贵的裙子-从物质到精神的领悟讲义-江苏省无锡市澄宜六校阶段性联合测试高三上学期2024-2025学年12月月考英语试题

阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。APreciousDressIwasraisedinafamilywheremyparentswereunitedintheirwayofbringingupchildren,butitmostlyfelltomymothertoactuallycarryitout,andshemanagedthefamilybudgeteffortlessly.Lookingback,IhonestlythinkIwouldbeadifferentpersonifmymumhadn’tturnedadressintoalifelessonIcarrywithmetoday.Ifwecomplainedaboutnothavingwhatanotherkiddid,we’dhearsomethinglikeIdon’tcarewhatso-and-sogotforhisbirthday,youarenotgettingacarforyourbirthdayoralavishsweetparty.Wehadtoearnourallowance(零用钱)bydoingchoresaroundthehouse.Mybrotherscannodoubtrememberhoursspentcleaningthehouse.Icanstillrememberhowlongittooktopolishthelegsofourdiningtable.Sometimes,Icouldn’tevencontainmyenvyofChloe,aneighbourhoodgirl,alwaysbeautifullydressed,whoseparentssatisfiedherwithalmosteveryneed.Oneday,mymotherdrovemedowntowntobuysomehouseholdnecessitiesandthereitwasintheshoppingwindow.Pink,lovely,delicatelytrimmed(镶嵌着)withlace,thedresswinked(眨眼)atmeandIknewIhadtohaveit.“It’sbeautiful,”mymothersaidwhenIpointeditouttoher.“Whatabeautifuldress!”Itriedtohidemydesireatfirst.ButthenIguessIcouldn’tstanditanylonger.“Mum,pleasegetit?I’lldoanything,butIneedthatdress.Iloveit.Please?”Iwasdesperate.“Youknow,”shesaid,gentlyrubbingmyback,“ifyousaveup,youcouldbuythisyourself.”“BythetimeImakeenough,it’llbesold!”“Theremightbeaway,”shesaid.Andsoourpayingplanunfolded.MumboughtthedressandputitsafelyinsomehidingplacewhereIcouldn’tfind.EachweekIeagerlycountedmygrowingsavingsincreasedbyextrawork.Weekslater,Icountedandjumpedforjoy.Oh,Imadeit!Ifinallyhadtheexactamountwe’dagreedon.Havingputonmydress,Iflewtoschoollikeabird.However,theunthinkablehappened.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。第一段：ThemomentIarrivedattheschoolgate,Chloeappearedinexactlythesamedress.第二段：Hearingmecryingloudly,Mumgentlypushedopenthedoor.一、文章大意作者成长于一个家教严格的家庭，父母教导孩子要通过做家务赚取零用钱，作者常羡慕邻居女孩Chloe能轻易拥有各种漂亮衣服。一次作者在商店看到一条心仪的粉色裙子，母亲提出让作者攒钱购买的计划，作者努力攒够钱后买到裙子开心地穿着去学校，却发现Chloe穿着一模一样的裙子，这让作者深受打击跑回家大哭。母亲耐心安慰作者，让作者明白努力的过程比物品本身更重要，这次经历也成为作者铭记一生的宝贵人生课程，使其懂得了事物的真正价值在于为之付出的努力和精神，而非仅仅是物品的外在和占有。二、伏笔及回应伏笔：作者羡慕Chloe总是穿着漂亮衣服且父母满足其几乎所有需求，与自己需通过做家务赚取零用钱形成对比，突出作者对漂亮衣服的渴望。回应：作者看到心仪裙子后极度渴望拥有，母亲让其攒钱购买，这一情节顺理成章，因为作者长期羡慕他人有漂亮衣服，所以对这条裙子的渴望更加强烈，攒钱买裙的计划也因此展开。伏笔：母亲将裙子买回家后藏在作者找不到的地方，暗示裙子在后续情节中会有重要作用，也增加了故事的悬念。回应：作者攒够钱后穿上裙子去学校，裙子成为了引发作者情绪变化的关键物品，因为裙子的出现才有了后面与Chloe撞衫的尴尬局面以及作者一系列的情绪反应。伏笔：作者努力做家务攒钱，每周都急切地数着不断增加的积蓄，体现出作者对裙子的重视和期待。回应：当看到Chloe也穿着同样的裙子时，之前的期待瞬间破灭，这种强烈的反差进一步加深了作者的痛苦和失望情绪，使情节更具张力。伏笔：作者提到家庭的教育方式，即通过做家务赚取零用钱，培养孩子的责任感和价值观，为作者努力攒钱买裙子的行为奠定了基础，也为母亲后续的教导做了铺垫。回应：母亲在作者因撞衫而伤心时，用家庭一直秉持的价值观来安慰作者，让作者明白努力的过程比物质更重要，使故事的主题得以升华，前后呼应。伏笔：作者在看到裙子时难以抑制的喜爱和渴望，表现出裙子对作者的吸引力，预示着裙子将会给作者带来不一般的经历。回应：这条裙子不仅让作者经历了从期待到失望的情绪起伏，还引发了母亲对作者的人生教导，成为整个故事的核心物品，推动了情节的发展和主题的呈现。三、续写要点第一段：要点：详细描述作者看到Chloe穿着同样裙子时的内心感受，如震惊、羞愧、愤怒等情绪交织。同学们的反应如何，是嘲笑、窃窃私语还是惊讶，这些反应进一步加剧了作者的负面情绪。作者在这种极度尴尬的情境下，内心的挣扎，比如想要立刻逃离这个让她难堪的地方，但又觉得自己的努力变得毫无意义，不知如何是好，最终决定跑回家向母亲哭诉。情感线：从最初看到裙子的惊喜和期待，瞬间转变为极度的沮丧、羞愧和自我怀疑，觉得自己的努力都白费了，陷入了深深的负面情绪中。故事线：在学校门口与Chloe撞衫，引发了一系列尴尬的场景和内心的挣扎，最终选择跑回家，推动故事进入下一个情节。第二段：要点：母亲进来后，先安抚作者的情绪，比如轻轻地抱住作者，让她尽情地哭泣发泄。然后，母亲开始耐心地开导作者，讲述一些关于人生价值和努力意义的道理，比如“真正的美丽不在于拥有独一无二的物品，而在于你为实现目标所付出的汗水和坚持”。作者在母亲的开导下，逐渐停止哭泣，开始思考母亲的话，意识到自己在攒钱过程中所培养的品质和能力才是最宝贵的财富，心情慢慢平复，从这次经历中获得了成长和启示，明白了物质并不是衡量幸福和价值的唯一标准。情感线：从极度的悲伤和绝望，在母亲的安慰下逐渐转为平静和思考，最终理解了母亲的教导，内心得到了治愈和成长，情绪变得积极向上，收获了人生的重要感悟。故事线：母亲的出现和教导解决了作者的内心冲突，使故事走向了一个温馨而富有教育意义的结局，完成了故事的主题表达。四、主旨升华句"Trueworthisnotfoundinthepossessionofthings,butinthepursuitandthelessonslearnedalongtheway."（真正的价值不在于拥有物品，而在于追求的过程以及沿途所学到的教训。）"Thevalueofoureffortsliesnotintheendresult,butinthetransformationtheybringwithinus."（我们努力的价值不在于最终的结果，而在于它们给我们内心带来的转变。）"Whatweearnthroughhardworkholdsasignificancefargreaterthantheobjectitself;itshapesourcharacterandenrichesourspirit."（通过努力工作所获得的东西，其意义远大于物品本身；它塑造了我们的性格，丰富了我们的精神。）"Inthejourneyoflife,itisnotthematerialpossessionsthatdefineus,buttheperseveranceandgrowthweexperienceinstrivingforthem."（在人生的旅途中，定义我们的不是物质财富，而是在追求它们的过程中所经历的毅力和成长。）"Thebeautyofagoalliesnotinitsattainment,butinthestrengthandwisdomwegatherduringthepursuit."（目标的美丽不在于其实现，而在于追求过程中我们所积累的力量和智慧。）五、写作示范示范一第一段：

ThemomentIarrivedattheschoolgate,Chloeappearedinexactlythesamedress.Myheartplummetedasifithadbeendroppedfromagreatheight.Awaveofshameandself-consciousnesswashedoverme,makingmycheeksburn.Thegigglesandwhispersofmyclassmatesreachedmyears,andIfeltasifIwereondisplay,apitifulimitation.Myeyeswelledupwithtearsofembarrassmentanddisappointment.Ihadthoughtthisdresswouldmakemespecial,butnowIjustfeltlikeafool.Withoutasecondthought,Iturnedonmyheelandfled,thesoundofmysobbingdrownedoutbythewindasIranhome,desperatetoescapethehumiliation.第二段：

Hearingmecryingloudly,Mumgentlypushedopenthedoor.Shesatbesidemeonthebedandenfoldedmeinherwarmembrace.Asmysobssubsided,shecuppedmyfaceinherhandsandlookedintomyeyeswithinfinitetenderness."Sweetheart,"shesaidsoftly,"yousee,thedressisjustapieceofcloth.Butthewayyouworkedsohardtogetit,that'swhatmatters.Youlearnedthevalueofperseverance,ofsaving,andofpatience.Chloemayhavethesamedress,butshedidn'tgothroughwhatyoudid.Youarestrongerandmoredeterminedbecauseofthisexperience."Herwordspiercedthroughmymiserylikearayofsunshine.Irealizedshewasright.Fromthatdayon,Icarriedwithmetheunderstandingthatthethingswestriveforwithourheartandsoularewhattrulyenrichourlives,notthethingsthemselves.示范二第一段：

ThemomentIarrivedattheschoolgate,Chloeappearedinexactlythesamedress.Iwasrootedtothespot,myeyeswideningindisbeliefandhorror.TheworldseemedtospinaroundmeasItookinthesight.Theexcitedchatterthathadfilledmewithanticipationonmywaytoschoolnowturnedintoadeafeningchorusofsnickersandstares.Icouldfeelmyhandsclenchingintofists,mynailsdiggingintomypalms.Anger,shame,andasenseofutterdefeatcoursedthroughme.Howcouldthisbe?Allthoseweeksofscrubbingfloorsanddoingextrachores,fornothing.Iwantedtodisappear,tovanishintothinair.Withachokedsob,Itoremyselfawayfromthesceneandsprintedhome,myvisionblurredbytears.第二段：

Hearingmecryingloudly,Mumgentlypushedopenthedoor.Shemovedwithacalmgrace,sittingdownbesidemeandstrokingmyhairsoothingly."Honey,"shebegan,hervoiceabalmtomywoundedspirit,"remember,thejourneyyoutooktogetthatdressiswhatcounts.Youprovedtoyourselfthatyoucansetagoalandachieveit.Thedressisjustasymbol,butthequalitiesyoudeveloped-yourdetermination,yourself-discipline-thosearetherealtreasures.Othersmayhavethesamedress,buttheydon'thaveyourstory.Youareunique,andthisisjustasmallbumpintheroad."Asherwordssankin,Ifeltthetightnessinmychestease.Inodded,realizingthatIhadindeedgrownthroughthisexperience.Fromthenon,Iwouldlookatchallengesnotassetbacks,butasopportunitiestolearnandbecomeabetterversionofmyself,knowingthatthetruevalueoflifeliesinthelessonswelearnandthepersonwebecome.读后续写参考答案ThemomentIarrivedattheschoolgate,Chloeappearedinexactlythesamedress.Atthesightofthishorribleturnofevents,Iwasgreenwith