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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasNovember2008inAstoria,asmallcityinthewesternpartofOregon,USA.DonMcLean,a60-year-oldkind-heartedlandlord(房东),hadatenant(租客)namedJosiah,whowas50yearsoldandhadcomefromapoverty-strickenfamilytoseekworkinAstoria.WhenJosiahfirstmovedin,hewasclearlyhavingahardtimemakingendsmeet.DonnoticedthatJosiahwasconstantlyworriedandseeminglyeconomicalwitheveryexpense.HealsosawthatJosiahoftenateverysimpleandinsufficientmeals.Oneday,whentherentwasdue,JosiahcametoDonwithalookofgreatembarrassment.Hehesitatedashetriedtoexplainthathedidn'thavethefull$300.DonimmediatelyrealizedthedepthofJosiah'financialstruggle.Withouthesitation,hesaidtoJosiahsoftly,“Iknowyou'rehavingatoughtime.I'mgoingtoreducetherentto$100permonth.Weallneedahelpinghandsometimes.”JosiahwasextremelygratefulandgaveDonagreatdealofthanks.However,oneyearlater,Josiah'swifefellil.Worriedabouther,hereturnedtohishometown,whichwasafour-hourwalkfromAstoria,Duetothelongdistance,hiscommunicationwithDonbecamelessfrequent.Topayforhiswife'smedicalbillsandmedicine,Josiahspentallhissavings.Despiteworkinghardeverydayhestillcouldn'tmanagefinanciallyandledaverydifficultlife.Butfortunately,hiswife'sconditiongraduallyimproved.Oneday,JosiahhappenedtohearthatDonwasseriouslyillandstillinhospital.HeknewthatDon'ssonwasworkingintheUKandcouldn'treturnimmediately,Heonlyhadhiselderlywifebyhisside.RememberinghowDonhadhelpedhim,Josiahmadeafirmdecision:tovisitDon.Withonly$13inhispocket,JosiahchosetowalktoAstoriatosavemoney,Afteratiringfour-hourjourney,hefinallyarrived.注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右:(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Feelingextremelyhungry,Josiahreachedoutforhis$l3inthepocket.Paragraph2:Withtheappleshespent$llon,JosiahenteredDon'shospitalroom.文章大意(300字):这篇文章讲述了一个发生在美国俄勒冈州阿斯托里亚小镇的感人故事。房东DonMcLean是一个善良的老人,他的租客Josiah来自一个贫困家庭,生活拮据。Don在Josiah付不起房租时,慷慨地减免了他的租金。一年后,Josiah的妻子生病,他不得不回到四小时步行路程的家乡,两人的联系变得稀少。当Josiah得知Don病重住院,他决定步行回到阿斯托里亚去看望Don,以表达他的感激之情。这个故事展现了人与人之间的善良和互助,以及在困难时期人与人之间深厚的情感联系。伏笔及回应:伏笔:Josiah经济困难,无法支付全额房租。回应:Don减免了Josiah的房租,体现了他的善良和同情心。伏笔:Josiah的妻子生病,他回到遥远的家乡。回应:这导致他与Don的联系变得稀少,增加了故事的紧张感。伏笔:Josiah的妻子病情逐渐好转。回应:这为Josiah能够离开家乡去看望Don提供了可能。伏笔:Don病重住院,儿子在英国无法立即回来。回应:这突显了Don的孤独,为Josiah的行动提供了动机。伏笔:Josiah只有13美元,选择步行去阿斯托里亚。回应:他用11美元买了苹果,体现了他为了看望Don不惜一切代价的决心。续写要点(两段):第一段:描述Josiah在饥饿中如何使用他仅有的13美元,以及他为何选择买苹果作为食物。第二段:描述Josiah带着苹果进入Don的病房,以及他们之间情感交流的情景。情感线:文章中的情感线是Josiah和Don之间的友情和互助。从Don的慷慨帮助到Josiah不顾困难去看望病重的Don,两人的情感联系逐渐加深。故事线:故事从Josiah的经济困难和Don的善行开始,经历了Josiah妻子的疾病和Don的孤独,最终以Josiah步行回城看望Don作为高潮。主旨升华句(5句英文):"Intimesofneed,ahelpinghandcanchangelives.""Compassionknowsnobounds,anditisoftenreturnedinthemostunexpectedways.""Thetruemeasureofaperson'scharacterishowtheytreatthosewhoarestruggling.""Asmallactofkindnesscanhaveaprofoundimpactonanother'slife.""Inthefaceofadversity,thehumanspiritisoftendefinedbyourcapacityforempathyandsupport."两篇写作示范:示范一:Feelingthegnawinghunger,Josiahclutchedthethirteendollarsinhispocket.Hekneweverycentcounted,buthisbodydemandedsustenance.Withasigh,hedecidedonafrugalmeal-applesfromanearbymarketforelevendollars,keepingtwoforemergencies.Wearyfromthejourney,heclutchedthebagofapples,asymbolofhiscommitmenttoDon.UponenteringDon'shospitalroom,Josiah'sheartswelledwithamixofreliefandsorrow.Don'sweakenedstatewasastarkcontrasttotherobustmanwhohadonceshownhimkindness.Withagentlesmile,Josiahofferedanapple,asimplegesturethatspokevolumesaboutthedepthoftheirbond.示范二:Josiah'sstomachrumbledashefumbledwiththethirteendollarsinhispocket.Heknewhemustconservehisfunds,butthelongwalkhadlefthimfamished.Optingforthemosteconomicalchoice,hepurchasedabagofapplesforelevendollars,keepingtheremainingtwoforanyunforeseenneeds.AsheenteredDon'shospitalroom,Josiah'sspiritwasheavywithconcern.Don,onceapillarofstrength,nowlayfrailandconnectedtotubes.Josiah'ssimpleofferingofanapplewasatestamenttohisgratitudeandtheunbreakablebondtheyhadforged.Theireyesmet,andinthatmoment,thelanguageofgratitudeandcompassiontranscendedwords,bindingtheminamomentofsharedhumanity.读后续写参考答案1Feelingextremelyhungry,Josiahreachedoutforhis$13inthepocket.Howmuchhewantedtobuyhimselfsomethingtoeatwiththose13dollars!ButherememberedhowDonhadnothesitatedtolowertherentwhenhewasstruggling,andhehopedtobuysomething,howeversmall,tobringabitofcomforttoDonduringhisillness.RecallingthatDonhadoncementionedhisfondnessforapples,heknewwhatheshoulddo.Heused$11tobuyfiveapples,carefullyselectingthefreshestonesinthestore.Then,withtheremaining$2,heboughtasimplesandwichforhimselftoquicklyeasehishunger.Withtheappleshespent$11on,JosiahenteredDon'shospitalroom.Donwaslyinginbed,lookingpaleandweak.Josiahwalkedoverandsaidsoftly,“Don,I'mJosiah.”Donopenedhiseyesandwassurprised,“Josiah,whyareyouhere?”Donaskedweakly.JosiahheldDon'shand,saying,“YouhelpedmewhenIwasintrouble.Nowit'smyturntobehereforyou.“Then,DonaskedJosiahabouthisjourneyandtheapples.Josiahhadtotellhimthetruth.Hearingthis,Donwasdeeplytouchedandsaid,“Josiah,youhavesolittlebutstillthinkofme.Iwillneverforgetthisgesture.”读后续写参考答案2Paragraph1:Feelingextremelyhungry,Josiahreachedoutforhis$13inthepocket.HeknewheneededtosaveeverypennyforDon'srecovery,buthisstomachwasgrowlingfromthelongwalk.Hedecidedtospendasmallportionofthemoneyonsomethingtoeat.Josiahfoundalocalmarketandboughtabagofapplesfor$11,keeping$2foranyunforeseenneeds.Theappleswouldhavetosufficeashismealfortheday.Withthebagofapplesinhand,hefeltamixofhungeranddetermination.HewasdeterminedtoseeDon,toexpresshisgratitudeinperson,andtoofferanysupporthecould,nomatterhowsmall.Paragraph2:Withtheappleshespent$11on,Josiahent
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