人教版八年级英语上册 Unit1 话题写作专项

第一单元话题写作专项【话题分析】本单元的写作话题是根据自己假期的旅游见闻,写一篇游记。游记通常使用过去时来记叙当时发生的事件。若议论、抒情或描写景色和人时,为了生动,也可用一般现在时。【写作典例】假设你是王明,上周末和父母一起去三亚旅游。请根据提示及要求写一篇英语短文介绍你们的三亚之旅。时间上周末人物你和父母天气炎热、潮湿活动周六:去海滩、冲浪、游泳……周日:参观博物馆、购物、品尝美食……______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作指导】1.根据题干可知,本文是一篇记叙文。2.文章应使用第一人称。3.时态为一般过去时。【写作提纲】和父母参【写作范文】①LastweekendmyparentsandIwenttoSanyaonvacation.Theweatherwashotandwet.OnSaturday,wewenttothebeach.②Therewasmuchtodothere.③Firstofall,Isurfedandswamwithmyfather.Mymotherenjoyedthesunshineonthebeach.Afterthat,weplayedvolleyballtogether.OnSundaywewenttoamuseum.Wesawsomeoldthingsthere.Thenwewentshopping.Weboughtsomethingspecialformygrandparents.Also,wetriedsomeseafoodintherestaurant.Ittastedreallydelicious.④Allinall,thetripwasenjoyable.Thoughweweretired,welearnedalot.①LastweekendmyparentsandIwenttoSanyaonvacation.首句直接交代了事情发生的地点、时间、人物等信息。②Therewasmuchtodothere.该句总写作者在沙滩有很多事可做。③Firstofall、afterthat、then、also等词的使用使文章逻辑清晰。④Allinall,thetripwasenjoyable.用allinall总写,并且点题,首尾呼应。【知识拓展】假如你是来自北京的Jack,上周末你和妈妈到上海游玩。请你根据提示及要求给爸爸写一封邮件,简述你们的活动和感受。Activities:Day1:wenttoShanghaiDisneyland(上海迪士尼乐园)Day2:visitedtheOrientalPearlTower(东方明珠塔)andtriedlocal(当地的)food参考词汇:机会chance;景色scenery要求:70词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearDad,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________