2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+尴尬作业下的独特农场+“冒险”+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习尴尬作业下的独特农场“冒险”1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文IntheheartofDaventry,five-year-oldOliveralwayscherishestendermomentswithhismother,CodiPow,whowasadedicatedstudentnurseinthehospitalinthetown.Codihassufferedfromhighbloodpressuresinceayoungage,andgrappleswithpersistenthealthissues,whichcouldeasilytriggerpotentialstrokeorheartproblems.Shestillremembersinthewinterwhenhersonwasthreeyearsold,shegotanunexpectedtoothinfection,whichworseneddramatically,leavingherinhospitalforaweek.Thattoothinfectionalmostbroughtanendtoherlife.Asastudentnurse,Codinavigatesherdailyroutinewithenormouscare.Sheknowsclearlythatsheshouldattendtoherselfwell,takingpillsontime,curbingheremotions,reducingthe-sodiuminput,andsoon.Herdoctor’srepeatedwarningsechoinhermind,emphasizingtheneedtoavoidinfectionthatcouldleadtoseverecomplications(并发症).4续写原文Oliverlivesalifenodifferentfromotherkidsintheneighborhood,filledwithplayfulactivities,joyoussinging,andtheroutinetripstokindergarten.Whatsetshimapartisthathestandsoutforhisuniquepassion:healthandsafety.Duringplaytime,heeagerlyabsorbshimselfinatoyfirstaidkitandaskshismumaboutmedicalthings.Oliverhascollectedasurprisingamountofknowledgeonhealthandsafety,despitebeingjustfive.OnequietSundaymorning,whilepreparingbreakfastforOliver,Codifeltitabitdifficulttobreathe.Shewenttothehospitalwithchestpain,swellingtoherneckandalumpinthesamearea.Shehadabloodtest,chestX-RayandECGbeforebeingsenthomeandadvisedtoseeherdoctorlateraftershegotthetestreports.5续写原文By1:30intheafternoon,CodiwasdoingwashinginthekitchenwhilechattingwithOliverwhenherconditiondrasticallyworsened.Shefeltahighfever,thesignofapossibleinfection.Allofasudden,shehadablackout,andherlegsgaveout.Shefellontothekitchenfloorlikeasackofsand.6段首句Paragraph1：Witnessinghismothercollapseinthekitchen,Oliverwashorrified.Paragraph2：Codiwasswiftlyattendedtobythemedicalprofessionals.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了安娜作为转校生，在完成首次暑假作业分享时陷入困境，因为她暑假在祖父母农场处理牛粪，自觉难以启齿，便想编造其他冒险经历。在家人的不同态度下，她仍纠结不已，甚至梦到其他精彩冒险。次日在课堂上，听着同学们讲述各自精彩的暑假经历，她愈发紧张。轮到她时，她鼓起勇气如实讲述农场工作，却意外获得同学们的赞赏，因她明白了这项工作虽不讨喜却意义重大。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Witnessinghismothercollapseinthekitchen,Oliverwashorrified.“轮到你了，安娜，”哈蒙德老师说道。我深吸一口气，走上讲台，双手紧紧抓住讲台边缘，指关节都泛白了。我鼓起勇气，将在农场与牛粪打交道的经历一一道来，同时向同学们解释了祖父的研究成果——把牛粪转化为清洁能源的重要意义和环保价值。一开始，有几个同学面露嫌弃之色，但随着我的讲述，他们逐渐被吸引，眼神中流露出好奇与敬佩。我讲完后，忐忑地看向老师和同学们，心中满是不安。11续写思路分析Para2：Codiwasswiftlyattendedtobythemedicalprofessionals.当我回到座位时，全班同学欢呼起来，几位同学带着钦佩的目光向我走来。他们纷纷夸赞我做了一件了不起的事，说从没想过牛粪还能有这么大的作用，甚至有人询问我更多关于农场和牛粪转化的细节。我心中的大石头终于落地，原来坦诚分享真实经历，也能赢得尊重与认可。此刻，我不再为这个特别的暑假作业而感到尴尬，反而充满自豪，也更深刻地理解了科学研究的意义和价值，即使是从最平凡甚至有些“不讨喜”的事物中，也能发现伟大之处。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现“It’syourturn,Anna,”Ms.Hammondsaid.Takingadeepbreath,Iwalkedtothefrontoftheclass,myhandsgrippingtheedgeofthepodiumtightlyuntilmyknucklesturnedwhite.Isummonedupmycourageandrecountedmyexperiencedealingwithcowpooponthefarm.Meanwhile,Iexplainedtomyclassmatesthesignificanceandenvironmentalvalueofmygrandfather'sresearchachievement-convertingcowpoopintocleanenergy.Initially,severalclassmatesshoweddisgustedexpressions,butasIcontinued,theyweregraduallyattractedandcuriosityandadmirationgleamedintheireyes.Afterfinishing,Ilookedattheteacherandclassmatesapprehensively.14范文呈现TheclasscheeredasIreturnedtomydesk,andsomeofmyclassmatesapproachedmewithadmirationintheireyes.Theycomplimentedmeondoinganamazingthing,sayingtheyhadneverthoughtcowpoopcouldhavesuchagreatuse.Someeveninquiredaboutmoredetailsregardingthefarmandtheconversionofcowpoop.Thebigstoneinmyheartfinallylanded.Itturnedoutthatsharingtherealexperiencefranklycouldalsowinrespectandrecognition.Atthismoment,Inolongerfeltembarrassedaboutthisspecialsummerhomeworkbutwasfullofpride.Moreover,Iunderstoodthemeaningandvalueofscientificresearchmoredeeply.Evenfromthemostordinaryandeven"unpleasant"things,greatnesscouldbediscovered.15升级版范文呈现“It’syourturn,Anna,”Ms.Hammondsaid.Withbatedbreath,Imusteredeveryounceofcourageandmademywaytothefrontoftheclassroom.AsIwalked,mypalmsgrewincreasinglysweaty,andmyheartpoundedviolentlyagainstmyribcage.Standingbeforemypeers,Ibegantospeak,myvoicequiveringslightlyatfirst.Irecountedthedaysspentonmygrandparents’farm,laboringwithcowpoop.Witheachword,Icouldseesomeofmyclassmateswrinklingtheirnosesindistaste.However,asIdelveddeeperintotheexplanationofmygrandfather’srevolutionarydiscovery–thetransformationofthisseeminglyunappealingsubstanceintoacleanandsustainableenergysource–ahushfellovertheroom.Theirexpressionsshiftedfrommildrepulsiontogenuineinterestandintrigue.BythetimeIconcludedmypresentation,theoncerestlessclassroomwasnowfilledwithapalpablesenseofaweandnewfoundrespect.16升级版范文呈现TheclasseruptedintothunderousapplauseasIreturnedtomyseat,theircheersandwhistlesreverberatingthroughtheair.Severalofmyclassmates,theireyesalightwithadmiration,flockedtowardsme.Theylavishedpraiseuponme,expressingtheirastonishmentathow