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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Henrywasakind,goodboy.Hisfatherdiedofaterribledisease,whichcostmuchandleftthembadlyoff.Hismotherwasverypoor.Althoughsheworkedhard,shecouldonlymanagebothendsmeet.Hehadalittlesisterabouttwoyearsold.Hewantedtohelphismother,forshecouldnotalwaysearnenoughtobuyfoodforherlittlefamily.Andastheonlymanofthefamily,hehadbeenpreparinghimselftotakehisresponsibility.Heoncewantedtoquitschooltofindsomekindofjobtolessenhismother’sburden,butwasseriouslyrefused.Oneday,onthewayhomeafterschool,Henryspottedawalletlyingunderapileofleaves.Heopeneditcarefully,findingitwasfullofmoney!Butitwasdarknow,andtheemptystreetinthecoldwintersawononearound.Henrymighthavekeptallthemoney,fornoonesawhimwhenhefoundit.Buthismotherhadtaughthimtobehonest,andnevertokeepwhatdidnotbelongtohim.Sohedecidedtowaitinthefreezingwind.Afterwhatseemedacenturylater,therefinallycamebacktheworriedandhurryingowner.Themanwasmorethandelightedtogetbackthelostwallet.“Itwassuchasurprise!”themansaid,“Iheldnohopeforitatall.Well,boy,that’swhatyoudeserveforyourgooddeed.”Themangavehimadollarasthanksandapraiseforhishonesty.Howtodealwiththemoney?Thecandy?Anewpairofpants?Orotherthingshewaslongingforsomuch?Wait,nextmonthwasmother’sbirthday…Yes,Henrygottheideaandknewwhatheshoulddoandhewoulddoitsecretly.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Withthedollarheboughtabox,threebrushes,andsomeblacking(鞋油).___________________________________________________________________.Hesmiledandhandedthemoneytohismother.____________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:Henry家境贫寒,父亲去世后母亲独自支撑家庭,他想辍学帮忙却被拒。他捡到一个装满钱的钱包,在寒风中等回失主,失主给了他一美元酬谢。他打算用这一美元为母亲准备生日礼物,于是有了后续的计划与行动。伏笔及续写回应:伏笔:Henry家庭贫困。续写回应:他用一美元买材料准备给人擦鞋挣钱为母亲买生日礼物,体现他在贫困中的努力与对母亲的爱。伏笔:Henry想帮母亲减轻负担。续写回应:通过擦鞋挣钱来达成,回应他之前想要承担家庭责任的想法。伏笔:Henry决定等失主,表现出诚实。续写回应:他用诚实换来的报酬去做有意义的事,进一步彰显其美好品德。伏笔:捡到钱包时街上无人,他有私吞的可能。续写回应:他坚守诚实,后续行为都建立在这一良好品德之上,与可能的错误行为形成对比。伏笔:Henry思考如何使用这一美元。续写回应:他将其用于购买擦鞋工具开启赚钱计划,把钱的用途详细展开,推动故事发展。续写要点:第一段:描述Henry用一美元购买工具后开始在街边擦鞋挣钱的过程,包括他如何招揽顾客,怎样认真地擦鞋,以及在这个过程中遇到的困难,比如天气寒冷导致手被冻僵,但他依然坚持等。第二段:讲述Henry把挣到的钱交给母亲时的场景,母亲的反应,如惊讶、感动、欣慰等,以及Henry内心的感受,强调家庭的温暖和Henry的孝顺与懂事。情感线:从捡到钱包时的纠结(虽然短暂但体现内心挣扎)到决定等失主后的坦然,再到用一美元计划为母亲赚钱时的坚定,擦鞋过程中的执着,最后把钱交给母亲时的自豪与幸福,情感丰富且围绕着家庭亲情与个人品德展开。故事线:Henry拿着一美元买好擦鞋工具后,在街边努力擦鞋挣钱,克服困难,最终挣够钱在母亲生日时交给母亲,展现了一个贫苦少年在困境中坚守品德、努力尽孝的故事。主旨升华句:Honestyisthebestpolicy,anditoftenpavesthewayformorebeautifuldeeds.(诚实是上策,它常常为更美好的行为铺平道路。)Inthefaceofpoverty,akindheartandgoodvirtuecanshineevenbrighter.(在贫困面前,一颗善良的心和良好的品德能更加闪耀。)Smallactsofkindnessandresponsibility,likeripplesinapond,cancreateawaveoflovewithinafamily.(小小的善举和责任,就像池塘里的涟漪,可以在家庭中掀起爱的浪潮。)Theseedsofvirtue,sowninthesoilofhardship,growintothemightytreesofcharacter.(美德的种子,播撒在艰难的土壤中,长成品格的参天大树。)Truewealthisnotmeasuredbymoney,butbytheloveandintegrityoneholdsintheheart.(真正的财富不是用金钱衡量,而是由心中的爱与正直来衡量。)写作示范一:Withthedollarheboughtabox,threebrushes,andsomeblacking.Everydayafterschool,Henrywouldsetuphislittleshoeshiningstandonthecornerofthestreet.Thecoldwindblew,makinghisfingersnumb,buthedidn'tstop.Hecalledouttopassersbywithabrightsmile,“Sir,wouldyoulikeyourshoesshined?”Whenacustomersatdown,hecarefullyremovedthedirtandpolishedtheshoesuntiltheyshone.Itwashardwork,buthethoughtofhismother'sbirthdayandpersevered.Hesmiledandhandedthemoneytohismother.Hismotherlookedathiminastonishmentatfirst,thenhereyesfilledwithtears.“Mydearboy,wheredidyougetthis?”sheasked.Henrytoldherthewholestory.Hismotherhuggedhimtightly.“Youarethebestson.Yourkindnessandhardworkmakemesoproud.”Henryfeltawarmglowinhisheart,knowingthathehaddonesomethingmeaningfulforhisfamily.写作示范二:Withthedollarheboughtabox,threebrushes,andsomeblacking.Henrystartedhisshoeshiningbusinessonweekends.Hewasabitshyatfirst,butwhenhethoughtofhismother'stiredface,hebecamebraver.Hepolishedshoeswithgreatcare,usingdifferentbrushesfordifferentparts.Somepeopleweretouchedbyhisyoungageandhardworkandgavehimextratips.Hesavedeverypenny.Hesmiledandhandedthemoneytohismother.Hismother'shandstrembledasshetookthemoney.“Henry,youaresuchagoodboy.ThisisthebestgiftIcouldeverreceive.”Henrybeamedwithhappiness.“Mom,it'sallbecauseofyou.Youtaughtmetobehonestandhardworking.Ijustwanttomakeyouhappy.”Thefamily'sloveandHenry'svirtuefilledtheroom,makingitawarmandbeautifulplace.参考答案Withthedollarheboughtabox,threebrushesandsomeblacking(鞋油).Hethenwenttothecornerofthestreet,andsaidtoeveryonewhosebootsdidnotlooknice"Blackyourboots,sir,please?"Hewassopolitethatpeoplesoonbegantonoticehim,andtolethimblacktheirboots.Hebroughtallthemoneyhomelittlebylittle,hidingitinapocketunderthebed.Dayafterday,thepocketbecameheavierandheavierandHenrycan’thelpwonderingwhatasurprisehismotherwouldget.Hesmiledandhandedthemoneytohismother.Tooshocked,shecouldhardlyspokeaword.“Wheredidyougetthemoney?”Shewassoangry,“Itoldyoutobehonest.”“Mom,Iearneditmyself.

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