专题08 书面表达-冲刺2023年中考英语重难题型考前突破（广东专用）（解析版）

冲刺2023年中考英语重难题型考前突破（广东专用）-书面表达【解析版】一、人与社会 11.校园义卖活动（2023广东深圳一模改编） 2.学雷锋（2023广东深圳一模改编） 33.舞狮传承人——叶天（2023广东深圳二模） 4.读万卷书不如行万里路？（2023广东广州一模）5.最喜欢的节日（2023山东淄博一模改编） 6.感动中国人物——陆鸿（2023上海模拟测试改编7.中国文化交流活动（2023广东广州一模改编） 8.中国梦（2023广东深圳一模） 19.奥运冠军进校园（2023广东深圳一模改编） 1二、人与自然 161.湿地保护节（2023广东深圳一模） 12.校园创意节（2023广东深圳一模改编） 3.对抖音的看法（2023广东广州一模改编） 4.绿色星球俱乐部（2023广东广州一模改编） 2三、人与自我 231.英语读书节活动（2023广东广州一模改编） 2.劳动教育（2023广东广州一模改编） 25一、人与社会【1】（2023·广东深圳·统考一模改编）假如你是山河中学的学生义工社团负责人李华，你校将在“五四青年节”举办校园义卖活动为“扶贫公益基金”筹集善款，请根据以下提示撰写宣传海报的英文版内容。提示：1.目的：弘扬“五四精神”，伸出援助之手；2.时间：2023年5月4日下午15:00—17:30；3.地点：学校操场；4.内容：（1）准备义卖物品（旧书、文具、体育用品、玩具等）；（2）制作义卖海报；（3）进行义卖活动；5.呼吁：……。参考词汇：校园义卖charitysale要求：1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4.标点正确，书面整洁。InordertocarryforwardthespiritoftheMay4thMovement________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Joininandgiveyourhelpinghands!【答案】例文InordertocarryforwardthespiritoftheMay4thMovementandextendahelpinghand,Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinthebigcharitysale,whichwilltakeplaceontheplaygroundinourschool.Itwillbeheldfrom15:00p.m.to17:30p.m.onMay4th,2023.Thecharitysalewillbehostedbyourmonitorwherewewillsellstationery,usedbooks,sportssuits,lovelytoys,handcraftsandsoon,andallproceedswillbenefitneedychildreninthecountryside.Wearegoingtomakepostersandhaveacharitysale.Iknowyouhaveshowedgreatinterestandpromiseinouractivity,soIhopeyoucancometotakepartinit.Ithinkitwillbeameaningfulexperienceandletusseeittogether.Joininandgiveyourhelpinghands!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容对校园义卖活动进行介绍，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍活动的目的、地点和时间；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍活动的内容；第三步，呼吁大家来参加。[亮点词汇]①invitesbtodosth邀请某人做某事②takeplace举行③andsoon等等④takepartin参加[高分句型]①Thecharitysalewillbehostedbyourmonitorwherewewillsellstationery,usedbooks,sportssuits,lovelytoys,handcraftsandsoon,andallproceedswillbenefitneedychildreninthecountryside.（where引导的定语从句）②Iknowyouhaveshowedgreatinterestandpromiseinouractivity,soIhopeyoucancometotakepartinit.（省略that的宾语从句）【2】（2023·广东深圳·深圳中学校联考一模改编）3月是学雷锋月，假如你是学生李华，是某学校的一名学生。下周你所在的学校将举行一系列“学雷锋”活动，请根据以下提示，写一个倡议书，介绍此次活动并号召学校的同学们积极参加，要点：1．目的：培养社会责任感，提高交流技巧，帮助有需要的人2．内容：①看望敬老院老人②帮助照顾流浪动物③……（补充一点）3．你的号召与倡议要求：80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；参考词汇：social社会的Dearfriends,Ourcityisfullofloveandwarmth.InMarch,therewillbeagreateventcalled“LearningfromLeifeng”.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’sall.Thankyou!【答案】例文Dearfriends,Ourcityisfullofloveandwarmth.InMarch,therewillbeagreateventcalled“LearningfromLeifeng”.Thefollowingissomedetailedinformationaboutit.Thiseventwillbeheldinordertodevelopstudents’senseofsocialresponsibility.Atthesametime,studentscanimprovetheircommunicationskillsandhelppeopleinneed.Thereareaseriesactivitiesduringtheevent.Firstly,wewillgotooldpeople’shomesandhelpthemcleantheirrooms.Secondly,someofuswillgototakecareofhomelessanimals.Wecanfeedthemorplaywiththem.Thirdly,wewillholdabookfairtoraisemoneyforthepoor.Eachstudentneedtobringsomebooksthattheydon’tneedanymore.Ithinkthiseventwillbereallyeducationalandmeaningful.Witheveryeffortwemake,wecanmakeabigdifference!Hopeeveryonecantakepartinit!That’sall.Thankyou!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇倡议书；②时态：时态为“一般将来”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍活动的目的；第二步，介绍活动的内容。[亮点词汇]①atthesametime同时②makeabigdifference有很大的影响③takepartin参加[高分句型]①Thiseventwillbeheldinordertodevelopstudents’senseofsocialresponsibility.（动词不定式作目的状语）②Ithinkthiseventwillbereallyeducationalandmeaningfuls.（省略that的宾语从句）【3】（2023·广东深圳·统考二模）舞狮是中国优秀的传统民间艺术。请你为班级英语角的“人物”版块写一篇短文，介绍一位舞狮（LionDance）技艺传承人——叶天。内容包含以下要点：1.叶天的基本信息（男，45岁，佛山人）和学习舞狮的经历（4岁学习舞狮，22岁获得全国舞狮比赛一等奖）；2.他是如何传承舞狮的（到国外表演、教年轻人舞狮，……）；3.你对叶天和舞狮的看法。要求：1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4.标点正确，书面整洁。提示词：传承keep...aliveYeTianisamasterofLionDance.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：YeTianisamasterofLionDance.Heis45yearsoldandheisfromFoshan,Guangdong.Whenhewas4,hestartedtolearnLionDance.Heisveryinterestedinitandpracticeshard.Attheageof22,hewonthefirstprizeintheNationalLionDanceCompetition.TohelpkeeptheLionDancealive,heandthedancersgoabroadandperformLionDanceeveryyear.Besides,heteachestheyounginFoshanhowtoperformit.HealsoshootsthevideosofLionDanceanduploadsthemtothewebsitesothatmorepeoplecanknowaboutit.LionDanceisoneofthetraditionalChinesefolkartsthatbringspeoplehappinessduringfestivals.IreallyadmireYeTian.Inmyview,weshouldlearnmoreaboutLionDancefromYeTianandpassitdown.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。以班级英语角的“人物”版块写一篇短文，介绍舞狮（LionDance）技艺传承人——叶天。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。文章可以分成三个段落，第一段介绍叶天的基本信息和学习舞狮的经历；第二段描述他如何传承舞狮的；最后一段谈谈叶天和舞狮的看法。【4】（2023·广东广州·统考一模）有人说“读万卷书不如行万里路”，但是也有人持不同的观点。请你根据下表提示分别阐述这两种意见并发表自己的观点。ReadingTravellingYouropinion1)各类知识；2)认识世界；3)了解历史；1)观光，游览名胜；2)体验不同文化；3)身心放松……要求：1)包含所有图表信息，并适当发挥；2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写整洁；3)词数不少于80字（开头已给，不计入总词数）。“It’sbettertotraveltenthousandmilesthantoreadtenthousandbooks.”ThisoldChinesesayinghascausedheateddiscussionsamongstudents.Somepeoplethink____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文“It’sbettertotraveltenthousandmilesthantoreadtenthousandbooks.”ThisoldChinesesayinghascausedheateddiscussionsamongstudents.Somepeoplethinkwegetalotfrombooks.First,wecanreadallkindsofbookstoknowhoweverythingworks.Second,byreadinggoodbooks,wecanunderstandtheworldbetter.Third,booksmakeuslearnmoreabouthistoryandmakeusfullofdifferentthoughts.However,someotherpeopleprefertotraveloutside.Throughsightseeingandvisitingplacesofinterest,wecanunderstandtheworldbetter.Itisnecessaryforustoopenoureyestofeeldifferentcultures.Travellingisanotherwaytostayrelaxed.Besides,gettingintouchwithmorepeoplecanimproveourcommunicatingskills.Inmyopinion,bothofthemaregoodforus.Ifwewanttofeeltherealworld,trytravelling.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕读书与旅行来写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段介绍读书的好处；第二段介绍旅行的好处；第三段发表自己的观点。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。【5】（2023·山东淄博·统考一模改编）每当提到节日，我们都会想起一些美好的时光：或体验传统、或外出游玩，或与家人团聚，或与朋友相约……请写一篇英语短文，谈谈你在节日里的一次美好回忆及感受。内容包括：1.你最喜欢的节日；2.你在这个节日进行的活动（至少2点）；3.你对节日的感受。要求：100词以上，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheLunarNewYearisanimportantfestivaltotheChinesepeople.LastSpringFestival,Myfamilywerebusypreparingforitseveraldaysbeforeitcame.Wecleanedanddecoratedthehouse.Mygrandpahungcolorfullanternsatthegate.Myparentsboughtdifferentkindsofdeliciousfood.OntheeveoftheLunarNewYear,wegatheredtogetherandateabigfamilydinner.Afterthemeal,wewatchedTVuntiltheclockstrucktwelve.ThenwesetofflongstringsofsmallfirecrackersandfireworkstowelcometheLunarNewYear.Thatwasawonderfuldayforme.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍你喜欢的节日；第二步，具体阐述你在这个节日所做的事情；第三步，最后表达对于这个节日的感受。[亮点词汇]①bebusydoingsth忙于②differentkindsof不同种类的③setoff点燃[高分句型]①Myfamilywerebusypreparingforitseveraldaysbeforeitcame.（before引导的时间状语从句）②ThenwesetofflongstringsofsmallfirecrackersandfireworkstowelcometheLunarNewYear.（动词不定式作目的状语）【6】（2023·上海·模拟预测改编）“能吃苦，肯奋斗，有担当，似一叶扁舟在激湍中逆流而上，如一株小树在万木前迎来春光。”这就是陆鸿，《感动中国》2022年度人物之一。虽幼时高烧导致身体残疾，但他仍坚持学习。毕业后，由于身体残疾，陆鸿没有找到工作，他开始自主创业，从卖水、修自行车到最后成功开相册厂，他帮助许多残疾人就业，实现人生价值……请以“永不言弃”为话题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，内容包括：1.讲述陆鸿的成长经历；2.谈谈他身上值得我们学习的优秀品质；3.呼吁全体同学学习陆鸿，遇到困难，不轻言放弃。参考词汇：相册album；坚持persistence注意：1.短文条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不得泄露个人信息；3.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)AmongallthepeoplewhowerepresentedwithTouchingChinaAwardthisyear,LuHongleftadeepimpressiononme.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

AmongallthepeoplewhowerepresentedwithTouchingChinaAwardthisyear,LuHongleftadeepimpressiononme.LuHongcomesfromJiangsu.Ahighfevercausedphysicaldisabilitywhenhewasyoung,buthestillpersistedinstudying.Aftergraduation,duetohisphysicaldisability,LuHongcouldn’tfindajob.Heisnotcomplaining,notdepressed,andunwillingtobecomeaburdentohisfamily.Hestartedhisownbusiness,fromsellingwaterandrepairingbicyclestosuccessfullyopeningaphotoalbumfactory.Hehelpedmanydisabledpeoplefindemploymentandrealizetheirvalueinlife.LuHongisnotafraidofhardship,willingtostrive,responsible,andnevergivesup.Heisamodelforallofus.ComparedtoLuHong,thereisnothingthatcannotbeovercomeaboutthedifficultieswefaceinlifeorstudy.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，讲述陆鸿的成长经历及他的优秀品质；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，总写，陆鸿给我留下了深刻印象，引出介绍的内容（文章已给出）；第二步，具体讲述陆鸿的成长经历。第三步，最后写陆鸿值得我们学习的优秀品质，结束全文。[亮点词汇]①leaveadeepimpressiononsb.给某人留下深刻印象②comefrom来自③beunwillingtodosth.不愿意做某事④becomeaburdento成为…的负担⑤benotafraidofhardship不怕吃苦⑥comparedto与……相比，比起⑦dueto由于[高分句型]①Ahighfevercausedphysicaldisabilitywhenhewasyoung,buthestillpersistedinstudying.（时间状语从句、but连接的并列句）②AmongallthepeoplewhowerepresentedwithTouchingChinaAwardthisyear…（定语从句）③ComparedtoLuHong,thereisnothingthatcannotbeovercomeaboutthedifficultieswefaceinlifeorstudy.（therebe句型和定语从句）④Hehelpedmanydisabledpeoplefindemploymentandrealizetheirvalueinlife.（动词不定式作宾语补足语）【7】（2023·广东广州·统考一模改编）假如你是李华，学校将接待一批国际交换生，请你为学校拟一封邮件，向交换生们推荐两项有关中国文化的交流活动，给出理由，并提供一些建议。内容包括：1.你推荐的两项活动（校内和校外）；2.推荐这两项活动的理由；3.如何能更好地参与这些活动（你的建议）。注意：1.词数80个左右(文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥)2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Dearexchangestudents,Welcometoourschool!Tomakeyourvisitmorepleasantandmeaningful,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wearelookingforwardtoyourarrival!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文Dearexchangestudents,Welcometoourschool!Tomakeyourvisitmorepleasantandmeaningful,herearesomeamazingactivitiesforyou.TolearnaboutChinesetraditionalculture,takingourancientpoetryclassisthetopchoice.Whilereadingthepoems,youmayfeelthatyouaremeetingpeoplefromthepastandexperiencingtheirlife.Itisevenmorewonderfulifyouwearsometraditionalclotheslikehanfuandtrytobehavelikethem,whichhelpsyouunderstandtheirlifebetter.TomeetmodernGuangzhou,IstronglyrecommendyoutotakeatripbyridingasharedbicyclealongthePearlRiver.Asoneof“thefourgreatinventions”inmodernChina,sharedbikesareconvenientenoughtotakeyouanywhere,anytime.Touringwithabike,youcanenjoynotonlythenaturalbeautyalongtheriver,butalsosomefamouslandmarksaroundZhujiangNewTown.Bytheway,remembertotakeyourmobilephone,asusingsharedbicyclesneedsscanningwithamobilephone.Wearelookingforwardtoyourarrival!Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文。②时态：以一般现在时为主。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]①第一步，补全开头，交代出写作目的，介绍几个活动给对方；②第二步，分别从校内和校外两个方面来介绍活动；③第三步，总结全文，表示对于对方到来的期待。[亮点词汇]①learnabout学习关于……②trytodo尝试做某事③recommendsbtodosth推荐某人做某事④notonly…,butalso…不但……，而且……⑤bytheway顺便说一下[高分句型]①Whilereadingthepoems,youmayfeelthatyouaremeetingpeoplefromthepastandexperiencingtheirlife.(while引导的时间状语从句)②Itisevenmorewonderfulifyouwearsometraditionalclotheslikehanfuandtrytobehavelikethem,whichhelpsyouunderstandtheirlifebetter.(if引导条件状语从句，which引导定语从句)【8】（2023·广东深圳·统考一模）习近平主席向全世界庄严昭告了中华民族伟大复兴的“中国梦”。作为一名即将毕业的初中生，你对“中国梦”有何感想？请你按照所提示的要点，写一篇英语演讲稿。要点：1.作为中国人而自豪(1)过去，“四大发明”等优秀的传统文化影响世界；(2)如今，……（列举两个中国成就，例如高铁)；2.为实现中国梦而奋斗(1)刻苦学习，勇于实践

(2).……《补充至少一点)要求:1.词数80左右(短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）﹔2．要点齐全，可适当发挥：3．条理清晰，语句通颍，意思连贯，书写规范；4．文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。Dearfriends,PresidentXiJinpingdescribestheChineseDreamasabigdreamfortheChinesenation.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou.【答案】OnepossibleversionDearfriends,PresidentXiJinpingdescribestheChineseDreamasabigdreamfortheChinesenation.NowI’dliketosharemyopinionswithyou.Firstly,Iamproudtoseetheprosperityofourmotherland.Ourexcellenttraditionalculture,suchasthefourgreatinventions,hadagreatimpactontheworld.Today,Chinahasgrownintoapowerfulcountrywithvariouskindsofachievements.Forinstance,thehigh-speedrailhasgreatlyreducedtravellingtimearoundthecountry.Besides,fromAIto5Grobots,Chinesetechnologycompaniesareintheworld’sleadingposition.InordertofulfilltheChineseDream,wearesupposedtoworkhardandtakeactiontorealizeourownvalues.Moreimportantly,itissignificantforustoseizeeverypossibleopportunitytomakeourcountrymorecompetitive.Withdreams,hardworkandopportunities,beautifulthingscanbecreated.That’sall.Thankyou.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。就“中国梦”这个题材来发表自己的感想。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时为主。分为四段式：第一段引出主题；第二段根据提示材料描述让自己引以为傲的事情；第三段描述如何为了中国梦而奋斗；最后一段表示感谢。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。【9】（2023·广东深圳·统考一模改编）为了增强学生们的锻炼意识，你所在的学校将举行“奥运冠军进校园”（OlympicChampionsEnteringCampus）活动。假定你是校英文报的编辑李华，请你代表校学生会写一则通知发布在校英文报上，预告此次活动。要点：1.时间地点：下周五下午，学校田径场；2.活动内容：①冠军成长故事分享；②冠军体育课；3.注意事项：①穿运动装；②……提示词：track-and-fieldground田径场

sportswear运动装要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名；3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4.标点正确，书面整洁。NoticeShenzhenisbecomingasportscitywithastrongfitnessculture.Toenhancethestudents’awarenessofexercise,ourschoolplansto________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheStudents’Union【答案】例文NoticeShenzhenisbecomingasportscitywithastrongfitnessculture.Toenhancethestudents’awarenessofexercise,ourschoolplanstoorganizeanactivity,OlympicChampionsEnteringCampus.Herearesomedetails.TheactivityisscheduledtobeheldnextFridayafternoononourschooltrack-and-fieldground,wherethreeexcellentathleteswillsharetheirinspiringgrowthstories,givingstudentssomeusefulsuggestionsonhowtodealwithstressfromdailylifeandstudy.WhatwillbethemostimpressiveandexcitingpartistheP.Elessonsspeciallydesignedbythechampions,whichisaperfectopportunityforusstudentstohaveacloseinteractionwiththem.Forconvenienceandcomfort,pleasemakesuretowearsportswear.Besides,itishighlyexpectedthatweallinteractwiththechampionsactivelytoshowourwarmestwelcomeandrespect.TheStudents’Union【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，是一篇通知；②时态：一般现在时；③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，同时注意适当补充和发挥注意事项，使用正确的词汇和句型，注意语法正确。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，以“这是一些细节”来引出后文；第二步，具体介绍活动的时间和地点，并介绍活动内容，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性；第三步，介绍并补充注意事项。[亮点词汇]①dealwith处理②aperfectopportunity一个完美的机会[高分句型]TheactivityisscheduledtobeheldnextFridayafternoononourschooltrack-and-fieldground.（被动语态）二、人与自然【1】（2023·广东深圳·统考一模）《湿地公约》第十四届缔约方大会在我国成功召开。深圳作为重要的湿地城市，也积极响应公约（WetlandsConvention）号召。假如你是学生李华，是学校环保俱乐部一员，你们俱乐部举行了“湿地保护节”（WetlandProtectionFestival）。请根据以下提示给你的外国朋友Mike写一封邮件，介绍此次活动。要点：1.目的：见证深圳湿地建设的成就；提升环保意识2.内容：①前往深圳红树林生态公园观赏红树林和鸟类；②深圳湿地摄影展；③……3.你的感受：①……；②……要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4.标点正确，书面整节。参考词汇：witness见证；awareness意识；mangroveforest红树林；ShenzhenMangroveEcologicalPark深圳红树林生态公园；DearMike,Asanimportantwetlandcity,ShenzhenismakingeffortstoanswerthecalloftheWetlandsConvention._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearMike,Asanimportantwetlandcity,ShenzhenismakingeffortstoanswerthecalloftheWetlandsConvention.ThepurposeofthisactivityistowitnesstheachievementsofShenzhenwetlandconstructionandenhanceenvironmentalawareness.WewenttoShenzhenMangroveEcologicalParktowatchmangroveforestsandbirds.WealsovisitedtheShenzhenWetlandPhotographyExhibition.WehavealsosingedtheConventionontheProtectionofWetlands.Wearecommittedtomaintainingwetlands.Throughthisactivity,welearnthatweliveonthesameplanetandweneedtoprotectwetlands.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍活动目的；第二步，介绍活动内容；第三步，介绍自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①makeeffortstodo努力做某事②thepurposeof……的目的③needtodosth需要做某事[高分句型]①ThepurposeofthisactivityistowitnesstheachievementsofShenzhenwetlandconstructionandenhanceenvironmentalawareness.（动词不定式作表语）②welearnthatweliveonthesameplanetandweneedtoprotectwetlands.（that引导的宾语从句）【2】（2023·广东深圳·统考一模改编）假如你是学生李华，上周你所在的学校举行了“校园创意节”（CreativeCampusFestival），请根据以下提示，给你的外国朋友Mike写一封邮件，介绍此次活动。要点：1.目的：丰富校园生活，发展创新能力；2.内容：①创意写作大赛②机器人展③……3.你的感受：①……②……要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名：3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4.标点正确，书面整洁。参考词汇：innovative创新的enrich使……丰富DearMike,Shenzhenisaninnovativecity.Agreateventcalled“CreativeDecember”isheldhere.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】参考例文DearMike,Shenzhenisaninnovativecity.Agreateventcalled“CreativeDecember”isheldhere.Inordertoenrichcampuslifeanddevelopinnovationability,myschoolheldthe“CreativeCampusFestival”lastweek.Thecontentofthisactivitymainlyincludescreativewritingcontest,robotexhibitionandpersonalprogrammingdesign.Throughthisactivity,Ilearnedalotofknowledge,andIalsolearnedthewonderfulideasofmyclassmates.Ialsowanttolearnrelevantknowledgeandtrytodesignmyownhomenexttime.Ihopemydreamcancometrue.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：信件开头结尾以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“你的感受”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，承接信件开头，介绍学校举办“校园创意节”的目的；第二步，根据提示要点介绍活动内容，可列举具体的事例；第三步，抒发自己在此次活动中的收获或感受并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①enrichcampuslife丰富校园生活②developinnovationability发展创新能力[高分句型]①Ihopemydreamcancometrue.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）【3】（2023·广东广州·华南师大附中校考一模改编）信息化时代，抖音（TikTok）越来越受到人们的欢迎。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike想了解抖音在中国的流行情况，写信向你询问。请你根据以下提示内容回信向他介绍抖音的特点，并谈谈你对抖音的看法。1.优点：制作方便；内容丰富；......2.缺点：容易着迷；影响视力；......3.你的看法。注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；2.词数80词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；3.不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。DearMike,I’mgladtotalkaboutTikTok.TikTokisverypopularinChinanow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopemyemailcanhelpyouunderstandTikTokbetter.Ifyouwanttoknowmoreaboutit,youcanemailmeagain.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearMike,I’mgladtotalkaboutTikTok.TikTokisverypopularinChinanow.

Peopleofallagescanmakeshortvideosbythemselves.Itshowspeopledifferentkindsofdailyactivities.What’smore,TikTokcanshareinterestingthingswithpeople,andmakethemhappyandrelax.However,everycoinhastwosides.It’seasyforpeopletobecrazyaboutit.Theyspendtoomuchtimewatchingit.It’sbadfortheireyes.Peoplepaylessattentiontotheirworkorstudy.Sometimes,itisn’tveryhealthy.IthinkwatchingTikTokcanmakeusrelax,butitmightbewiseforustolimitthetimewespendoniteveryday.IhopemyemailcanhelpyouunderstandTikTokbetter.Ifyouwanttoknowmoreaboutit,youcanemailmeagain.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍“抖音的受欢迎程度”来引出本文主题；第二步，介绍抖音的好处以及坏处；第三步，发表自己的观点。[亮点词汇]①differentkindsof各种各样的②becrazyabout对……着迷③spendtimedoingsth花时间做某事④bebadfor对……有害[高分句型]①It’seasyforpeopletobecrazyaboutit.（动词不定式作主语）②IthinkwatchingTikTokcanmakeusrelax（动名词作主语）【4】（2023·广东广州·广州大学附属中学统考一模）下周一些英国学生将来你校交流学习，他们想了解你校各俱乐部情况。假定你是林涛，是学校绿色星球俱乐部负责人，请你根据你们俱乐部的海报内容，用英语写一篇发言稿来作介绍。绿色星球俱乐部时间：每周五下午活动：●DIY工作坊：旧物改造●志愿者工作：分发环保传单、宣传绿色生活（请你补充两点）注意：1.词数90左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.文中须包括所有要点，每个要点可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺；3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：