专题20 提纲类作文-2017年中考英语试题分项版解析汇编 带解析

专题20提纲类作文1.【2017年安徽】书面表达。假如你是李华，你们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园”展演活动，你打算邀请你的美国朋友Mike参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。 1.时间：7月1日下午2点； 2.地点：学校操场； 3.内容：文化展览、节目表演等。 提示词：戏曲operan.表演performancen. 注意：1.词数80～100； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。DearMike, IknowyouareinterestedinChinesetraditionalculture._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearMike,IknowyouareinterestedinChinesetraditionalculture.Now,Ihaveapieceofgoodnewstosharewithyou.ThereisanactivityaboutChinesetraditionaloperasat2:00p.m.onJuly1.Itwillbeheldontheplaygroundinourschoolandalltheteachersandstudentswillattend.Onthatday,acultureshowandmanywonderfuloperaperformanceswillbeputon.It'sachanceforyoutolearnmoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture.Comeandjoinus!Ithinkwe'llhaveagreattime.I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua写作亮点：这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。文章脉络清晰，自然流畅，首先通过分享好消息来引出展演及展演时间，进而介绍展演地点及展演内容最后提出邀请。同时文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，掌握一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。考点：提纲类作文。学！科网2.【2017年山东青岛】书面表达。某英语杂志社对部分中学生的周末活动做了问卷调查（结果如图），请你写一篇英语短文参加征文活动。内容包括：1.简要描述调查结果。2.谈一谈中学生应该如何度过一个有意义的周末（至少两条）。要求： 1.词数：80-100。开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。didasurveyaboutmiddleschoolstudents’weekendHerearetheresults. 【答案】didasurveyaboutmiddleschoolstudents’weekendHerearetheresults.Wefoundthataboutfourtypercentofthestudentsoftendotheirhomeworkonweekends.Andthenumberofthestudentswhoplaycomputergamesonweekendsisaboutthirty-fivepercentsofthestudents.Onlyfifteenpercentsofthestudentslikereadingandabouttenpercentdootherthings.Asstudents,Itisourdutytostudyhard.butwemustlearntorelaxonweekendssothatwecanlearnbetternexkweekdays.AlthoughitisfuntorelaxbyusingtheInternetbutspendingtoomuchtimeoncomputergamesisnotgoodforstudents.Ithinkthebestwaytorelaxisthroughexercise.Itishealthyforourmindandbody..Ialsothinkweshoulddomorereadingbecauseitcanopenoureyestotheworld.Ifso,Ithinkourweekendswillbemoremeaningful.【解析】考点：提纲类作文。3.【2017年山东德州】书面表达。假如你叫张明，你的外国朋友John发来邮件，请你介绍中国的传统节日。请根据表格内容提示及要求给他写一封80—100词的回信。FestivalsTimeFoodActivitiesMeanings1TheLanternFestivalInJanuaryorFebruaryyuanxiaoWatchlanternshowsanddragondancesPrayforhealthandhappinessforthewholeyear2TheMid-AutumnFestivalInthemiddleofautumnmooncakesWatchthemoon;TellthestoryofChang’eCelebrateharvest;gettogetherwiththefamily3……………参考词汇：prayfor祈求；harvest丰收要求：1.描述节日1和节日2，并自主选择节日3进行介绍，包括节日名称、时间、美食、活动方式及意义等；2.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；4.文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。FromZhangMingToJohnSubjectAnintroductionofChinesefestivalsDearJohn,Gladtoreceiveyouemail.YouaskedmeaboutfestivalsinChina.Letmeintroducesomeimportantonestoyou.Firstofall,IwanttointroducetheLanternFestival.ItcomesinJanuaryorFebruary.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Canyoutellmesomethingaboutthefestivalsinyourcountry?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,ZhangMing【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearJohn,Gladtoreceiveyouremail.YouaskedmeaboutfestivalsinChina.Letmeintroducesomeimportantonestoyou.Firstofall,IwanttointroducetheLanternFestival.ItcomesinJanuaryorFebruary.Onthatday,weeatyuanxiao,gotowatchlanternshowsanddragondancestoprayforhealthandhappinessforthewholeyear.TheMid-AutumnFestivalisinthemiddleofautumn.Itisatimeforthefamilytogettogetherandcelebrateharvest.Atnight,thewholefamilyeatdeliciousmooncakesandtellthestoryofChang'ewhilewatchingthebigbrightmoon.TheSpringFestivalisthemostimportantforusChinese.It'sthebeginningofanewyear.Weusuallyeatdumplings,meatandsomeothernicefood.Towelcomethenewyear,wedosomecleaning,buynewclothes,setofffireworksandvisitourrelatives.Everyone,youngorold,hasahappysmileontheirfaces.Canyoutellmesomethingaboutthefestivalsinyourcountry?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,ZhangMing【解析】试题分析：这是一篇表格作文。根据提示，可知主要介绍三个节日：元宵节、中秋节、及自己选择的一个节日。对于几日的介绍主要涉及节日名称、时间、美食、活动方式及意义几个方面。由于介绍节日情况，所以主要采用一般现在时态，但是要注意第三人称单数的运用。在自选节日介绍时，要选择自己熟悉的节日来介绍，这样语言及内容才会丰富。考点：提纲类作文。4.【2017年山东泰安】写作。如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing）,它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以“Bike-sharing”为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。要点提示：AdvantagesBeconvenient,lesspollution,reducethetrafficpressure（减缓交通压力）Takeexercise…ProblemsThrowaway,damage（毁损）,bestolen…AdviceCivilized（文明的）,followtherules,takegoodcareof…注意：1.短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；3.词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Bike-sharingToday,asagreenermeansoftransportation,bike-sharingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinmanycities._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Today,asagreenermeansoftransportation,bike-sharingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinmanycities.It’sknownthatithasmanyadvantages.Soit’senjoyedbylotsofpeople.Firstofall,it’sveryconvenientforpeopletogosomewhere.Also,ithelpstoreducethetrafficpressure.Therewillbelesspollutionbecauseofbike-sharing.Besides,bike-sharinghelpspeopletakemoreexercise.Inthisway,it’shelpfultopeople’shealth.However,italsobringssomeproblems.Forexample,somepeoplethrowthemawayafterusingbikes.Evensomepeopledamagethem,andsomebikesarestolen.Inmyopinion,everyoneshouldtrytobecivilizedandfollowtherulesofusingbikes.Aslongaswetakegoodcareofbikes,itwillmakeourlifebetterandbetter,andourenvironmentwillbemorebeautiful.【解析】考点：提纲作文。5.【2017年山东枣庄】书面表达。把书面表达答案写在答题卡第七节的横线上。Writeareviewofthefollowingstoryinabout90words.Thereviewhastoincludethefollowingpoints:1.Thenameofyourreview.2.Theidea(s)ofyourreview.3.Thereason(s)foryouridea(s).4.Somethingyoudecideafteryouconsideralltheinformationinthestory.“Cock-a-doodle-doo!”criedthecock（公鸡）.Hestoodinthefarm-yardandcriedaloud,sothatallpeoplemighthearhim.“Cock-a-diidke-doo!HowusefulIam,forIalwaysgetupfirst.AndIcryaboutassoonasthesunrisestomakeallpeopleinthehousewake.”“Cluck!Cluck!Cluck!”criedthehenfromtheyard.Shewaswalkingaboutwiththreeprettylittlechickens,andtryingtofindsomefoodforthem.“Cluck!Cluck!Cluck!I’mmoreusefulthanyou.AlmosteverydayIlayanicefresheggformymaster’s（男主人）breakfast.ThenthinkhowusefulIamtomymistress（女主人）.Howmanynicethingsdoesshemakewithmyeggsforthechildren?Shecouldnotgetonwellwithouteggs.”【答案】TheUseoftheCockandthehenThecockisuseful.Healwaysgetsupfirstandcries,“Cock-a-diidke-doo!”towakeallpeopleinthehouseup.Thehenisusefultoo.Ontheonehand,shetriestofindfoodforprettylittlechickens;ontheotherhand,shelaysanicefresheggforhermaster’sbreakfast.Hermistressmakesmanythingswithhereggsforthechildren.Shecouldgetonwellwitheggs.Inaword,boththecockandthehenareuseful.Itiswrongofthemtoseetheirownuseonlyinsteadofseeingeachother’suse.【解析】试题分析：短文主要考查分析能力及写作整理信息的能力，用自己的语言对于公鸡和母鸡的行为做出评价，并要写出自己这样评价的理由。要注意所写的句子应该符合英语语法，不要遗漏要点。写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：getup起床；wakesbup把某人叫醒；trytodosth努力做某事；findfood找到食物；itis+形容词+介词(of/for)+todosth做某事是怎样的；用了一些过渡句或短语，如：Ontheonehand,ontheotherhand，Inaword等，使句子上下文过度自然。考点：提纲作文。6.【2017年浙江金华】书面表达。假如你应邀参加一个国际读书会，并将分享自己读过的一本好书。请根据下列表格中的要点，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你要分享的书。Keypoints（要点）Wordsandexpressionsforreference（参考词汇）WhatthenameisTheOldManandtheSea…WhowroteitErnestHemingway,America…WhatitisaboutFisherman,Fightagainstfishandnature…WhyIlikeitMeaningful,nevergiveup,Well-knownsentence:“Manisnotmadefordefeat（失败）.”,…Interesting,helpful,…Well-knownsentence:…注意：（1）可选择使用所给的书名及内容，也可另选书籍；（2）短文内容可适当增加；（3）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（4）词数：80~100；（5）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。短文首句：ThebookI’dliketosharewithyouisTheOldManandtheSea.【答案】ThebookI’dliketosharewithyouisTheOldandtheSea,writtenbyanAmericanwriterErnestHemingway.Thisbooktellsaboutafishermanwhoisluckyenoughtocatchahugefishatsea,butfindsithardtotakeithome.Onthewayback,hehastofightagainstthefish,andtheseaaswell.WhatIlikemostaboutthebookisthatthefishermannevergivesupwhenmeetingwithdifficulties.Istillrememberthewell-knownfromthebook:Manisnotmadefordefeat.Thistellsusthatnothingseemsterribleaslongaswehaveastrongwillandabraveheart.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给出材料作文。要求介绍自己读过的“老人与海”这本书。主要从书名，作者，内容，喜欢书的原因（即从中学到了什么）几个方面叙述。适当的介绍文中的名句。在运用语言时，不要拘泥于一种形式，注意一个意思可以有多种表达形式。遇到想不起来的词或句型时，可以找同义词、近义词或同义句来代替，这样可以节省时间。在写作时，尽量用自己有把握的方法来表达，用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词句，文章要以叙述清楚为主，避免大量词句堆积以至冗长，尽量少用没有十分把握的“大词”或比较复杂的语法结构和句型。写作亮点：这篇短文结构合理，行文流畅，内容丰富，其中长句，复合句的运用非常熟练，为文章添彩。如：定语从句Thisbooktellsaboutafishermanwhoisluckyenoughtocatchahugefishatsea,；表语从句WhatIlikemostaboutthebookisthatthefishermannevergivesupwhenmeetingwithdifficulties.；宾语从句Istillrememberthewell-knownfromthebook:Manisnotmadefordefeat.等。考点：提纲作文。7.【2017年浙江丽水】假设你是LiMing,你的笔友Lisa想了解在毕业之际,你将为母校做些什么有意义的事.从下表所列的五项内容中,至少选择两项,用英语给Lisa写一封电子邮件.DosomethingforMySchoolVolunteertodo(cleanuptheschool,…)Givesomethingaway(suchasbooks,…)Givesuggestions(organizemoreactivities,…)Maketheschoolmorebeautiful(planttrees,…)Writetoyoungerschoolmates(howtousetime,…)…注意：(1)文中必须包括所选内容括号内的提示,并适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；(3)词数：80--100；(4)短文开头供选择使用.不计入总词数.HelloLisa,Howisitgoing?It’stimeformetoleaveschool.YouaskmewhatIcandoformyschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiMing【答案】HelloLisa,Howisitgoing?It’stimeformetoleaveschool.YouaskmewhatIcandoformyschool.Herearemyplansthatlwouldliketosharewithyou.Firstofall,Iwillvolunteertodosomecleaningwithmyclassmates,suchascleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloors.Tokeepourschoolclean,wewillaskourschoolmatesnottolitteratschool.Also,Iwillgiveawaymyfavoritebookstotheschoollibrarysothatouryoungerschoolmatescanreadmoregoodbooks.AndIwillcallonmoreschoolmatestodoso.It’sreallyhardformetosaygoodbye.Iwishmyschooltohaveabetterfuture.(98words)LiMingPossibleversion2HelloLisa,Howisitgoing?It’stimeformetoleaveschool.YouaskmewhatIcandoformyschool.HerearemyplansI'dliketosharewithyou.Firstofall,Iplantowritealettertotheyoungerschoolmates,tellingthemtovaluethepeoplearoundandgetalongwellwiththem.Andlwillsharemysuccessandfailureinstudy,too.Also,Iwillgivesomesuggestionsonhowtomakeourschoolbetter.Moretreesandflowersmustbeplanted.Moreafter-classactivitiesshouldbeorganizedsothatourschoolmatescanjoininthemtorelax.Ihopeallofouryoungerschoolmatescanliveandstudyhappilyinourschool.(98words)LiMing【解析】写作亮点：短文思路清晰，逻辑性强。句式变化多样，连词使用恰当。如：Tokeepourschoolclean,wewillaskourschoolmatesnottolitteratschool.，Iwillgiveawaymyfavoritebookstotheschoollibrarysothatouryoungerschoolmatescanreadmoregoodbooks.，Moretreesandflowersmustbeplanted.Moreafter-classactivitiesshouldbeorganizedsothatourschoolmatescanjoininthemtorelax.IFirstofall,，Also,等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.考点：提纲作文。8.【2017年浙江绍兴】书面表达。76.某英语教育网站正在开展主题为“Howcanateenagerhaveasuccessfullife?”的讨论，为此你采访了一些同学（结果见下表）。请据上经用英语写一篇短文参与讨论，并阐述你的观点。同学主要观点你的观点努力学习尊重父母服务社会计划未来……（至少两条）注意：（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；（2）你的观点至少两条；（3）词数：80—100；（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。参考词汇：尊重respect短文首句：Ihaverecentlydoneasurveyabouthowateenagercanhaveasuccessfullife.【答案】Ihaverecentlydoneasurveyabouthowateenagercanhaveasuccessfullife.Moststudentsbelieveit’snecessarytostudyhard.Afterall,studyplaysakeyroleintheirlife.Theyalsoagreetheyshouldrespecttheirparents,wholookafterthemeveryday.Besides,they’rereadytoservethesocietyandintheiropinionit’sreallymeaningful.What’smore,theythinkeachteenagerissupposedtomakeagoodplanforfuture.Frommypointofview,weneedtomakesomegoodfriendssothatwecanlearnfromeachother.Also,wemustbeactiveandexercisemoretokeephealthybecauseit’simportanttoasuccessfullife.【解析】试题分析：英语教育网站开展主题为“Howcanateenagerhaveasuccessfullife?”的讨论，采访了一些同学参与讨论，写出他们的观点及自己的观点。因为是叙述同学的现在的观点，所以句子应该用一般现在时，叙述同学的观点用第三人称，叙述自己的观点用第一人称。注意不要遗漏要点，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，不能是汉语式的句子，要使用一些高级词汇及句式。写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：doasurveyaboutsth关于某事做调查；respecttheirparents,尊敬他们的父母；lookafter照顾；makeagoodplanforsth为某事做一个好的计划；makesomegoodfriends交一些好朋友；keephealthy保持健康。用了宾语从句，如：Moststudentsbelieveit’snecessarytostudyhard.What’smore,theythinkeachteenagerissupposedtomakeagoodplanforfuture.用了because引导的原因状语从句，如：Also,wemustbeactiveandexercisemoretokeephealthybecauseit’simportanttoasuccessfullife.增加了文章的亮点，也是提分的经典句子。考点：提纲作文。9.【2017年四川南充】书面表达。假如你是李华,你的笔友Frank是一名美国中学生,打算今年暑假来南充旅游。请你根据以下思维导图,用英语写一封email给他介绍一下南充。要求:1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2.必须包含思维导图所给的提示，并做适当发挥；3.行文中不得出现真实人名，校名或地名（思维导图中提及的除外）；4.词数：80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。DearFrank,I'mgladtohearthatyouwillcometoNanchongthissummervacation.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopetoseeyou!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearFrank,I’mgladtohearthatyouwillcometoNanchongthissummervacation.Nanchongisagreatcitywithalonghistory.YoucanwatchNorthSichuanPuppetryandknowaboutChenShou,awell－knownhistorian.HewroteabookcalledRecordsoftheThreeKingdoms.TherearemanyplacesofinterestinNanchong.YoucanvisitLangzhongAncientCity.Thebuildingsaresoamazing.AndyoucanenjoythefantasticJialingRiverandthewonderfulMountLingyun.Ifyouwanttorelaxyourself,makesuretotryZhangfeiBeef,ClearNoodlesinChiliSauceandotherdeliciousfood.Besides,youcanhavefunandbuysomethingspecialforyourfamilyandfriendsatWangfujingMall.Hopetoseeyou!Yours,LiHua【解析】考点：提纲作文。10.【2017年贵州安顺】书面表达（本大题共20分，分为两个部分，A部分5分，B部分15分）安顺市今年能否创建“全国文明城市”成功，不仅要靠市委市政府的全力推进和各单位的扎实工作，更要靠每一位安顺市民从自身做起，一言一语现内涵，一举一止显文明。作为中学生的你，也有义务为我市争创“全国文明城市”贡献一份力量。请根据要求，完成A、B两项写作任务。A．请你根据自己的想法，用完整的英语句子或简略的英语答语回答下面五个问题。1.IsAnshunamorebeautifulcitythanbefore?2.DoyouthinkitisnecessaryforAnshuntobeacivilized(文明的)city?3.Areyouhappywiththestrive?4.WhatshouldyoudotomakeAnshunbecomeagreencity?5.Howcanyoubecomeacivilizedmiddleschoolstudent?B．请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的同答，以“WhatshouldIdoforthestrive?(我该为创建做什么？)”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。参考词汇：1．创建(n.)strive2．申报bidfor3．称号(n．)title4．全国文明城市NationallyCivilizedCity5．为……作贡献contributetoWhatShouldIDoFortheStrive?【答案】WhatShouldIDoFortheStrive？Asweknow，Anshuncityisbecomingmoreandmorebeautiful．Actually，AnshunisbiddingforthetitleofNationallyCivilizedCity，whichisamustforourcitytobecomegreenandfamousinChina．Asamiddleschoolstudent，Iamterriblyhappyforthat，becauseIwilldowhatIcantohelpthestrive.Whatshouldwedothen？Firstly，wecannotlittereverywhereandweshouldkeepthestreetclean．Secondly，weshouldfollowthetrafficrulesalltimestokeepsafe．Thirdly，weshouldtreateachotherpolitelyandbehaveinacivilizedway．Moreimportantly，wemustplantmoretrees，flowersandplantstomakethecitygreener．Tosumup，itiseveryone'sdutytocontributetothestriveandstruggleforthehonorof"NationallyCivilizedCity"，isn'tit？【解析】 试题分析：本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等。写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：Asamiddleschoolstudent，Iamterriblyhappyforthat，becauseIwilldowhatIcantohelpthestrive．作为一名中学生，我非常高兴，因为我会尽我所能去帮助创建．这是because引导的原因状语从句，因为…，同时这个句子里又有一个宾语从句whatIcantohelpthestrive．高分句型二itiseveryone'sdutytocontributetothestriveandstruggleforthehonorof"NationallyCivilizedCity"，isn'tit？争取创建"全国文明城市"并且为之奋斗是每个人的责任，不是吗？这是一个反意疑问句，前半句是肯定句，后半句是否定句。考点：提纲作文。11.【2017海南】梁玲同学是你校初三（1）班的学生。她家境贫寒，但她勇于面对困难、主动承担家根据下面的采访笔记写一篇关于她的报道。要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥；3.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4.词数80左右。（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）LiangLing,a14-year-oldgirl,isastudentinClass1,Grade9.Shecomesfrom…____________________________________________________________________________________Sheisgreat.Let’swishherabetterfuture.【答案】LiangLing，a14-year-oldgirl，isastudentinClass1，Grade9．Shecomesfromapoorfamily．Sinceshewasalittlegirl，shehascaredforherfamily．EverydayLiangLinghelpswiththecooking，cleaningandwashing．Iaskedherwhethershewastiredofdoingsomuchhousework．"Notreally．"Shesmiled．"I'vegotusedtoit．"Thoughsheisbusy，shestudieshardandgetsgoodgrades．What'smore，sheisalwaysreadytohelpothers．Everyonelikesherbecauseofherkindness．Inoureyes，shealwaysfacesdifficultiesbravely．Nomatterhowhardthelifeis，shenevergivesup．

Sheisgreat．Let'swishherabetterfuture．【解析】高分句型二

Thoughsheisbusy，shestudieshardandgetsgoodgrades．虽然她很忙，但她努力学习并取得好成绩．注意though，虽然，后面不能和but连用．12.【2017年黑龙江哈尔滨】假如你是北京的李丽，下周你在哈尔滨读中学的表妹来北京旅游．请根据以下提示给她写一封信，并告诉她在北京旅游期间做一名文明的（well﹣mannered）中学生．写作要点：1、欢迎她来北京．2、介绍北京的情况．（1）下周天气：白天最高温度超过330C；（2）交通方式：最好乘坐地铁；（3）必去的名胜：长城．3、对她在北京旅游期间如何做一名文明的中学生提出具体建议．写作要求：1、不得使用真实的姓名和学校名．2、可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯．3、字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰．4、至少80词．DearLiLan，Howareyoudoing？Bestwishes!YoursLiLi．【答案】DearLiLan，Howareyoudoing？WelcometoBeijing．BeijingislocatedintheeastofChinaandattractsmoreandmorepeopleathomeandabroadtovisit，studyandevenlivedthereforalongtime．Thereasonwhybeijingissopopularisthatitisneitherhotinsummernorcoldinwinter．Notonlyisitthecapitalofchina，butalsoitisrecognizedasthepolitical，educational，andculturecenter．Ifyouwanttohaveanenjoyablejourney，Isuggestyouclimbthegreatwall．BecausethefamoussayinginChinaisthatthemanwhodoesnotreachthegreatwallisnotatrueman．Theweatherwillbehotnextweekendsandthehighesttemperatureisabove30degrees．Soyoushouldwearcoolclothes．Thetransportationisveryconvenientbecausethesubwaynearlycoversthewholecity．Soyouhadbettertakethesubwaytogoout．Beijingisacivilizedcityandyoushouldbeacivilizedstudent．ZunlaoaiyouisthetraditionalvirtueoftheChinesenation．Ifyousitnexttotheoldorthesick，pleasetaketheinitiativeseat．Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.Bestwishes!Yours,LiLi【解析】【高分句型二】NotonlyisitthecapitalofChina，butalsoitisrecognizedasthepolitical，educational，andculturecenter．它不仅是中国的首都，而且是政治、教育和文化中心．Notonly…butalso…不仅…而且，notonly放句首，句子要倒装．考点：提纲作文。13.【2017年黑龙江齐齐哈尔】(A)Writeapassageaccordingtotheinformationgiven.(30-50words)尊老敬老是中华传统美德，你是老年之家(theoldpeople'shome)的负责人王强，在假期即将到来之际，你想要招聘与你志同道合，愿为公益事业服务的志愿者。请以此为话题拟一则招聘广告。(30-50词之间)提示：1．要求有爱心，善沟通…，．2．请有意者给你打电话686-7729。VolunteersWanted____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(B)Writeapassageaccordingtothetitlegiven.(80-100words)生活中、学习中，父母的关爱、老师的付出，朋友的帮助成就了今天的你，让你走；境走向成功。此时此刻你一定有很多感谢的话要说。根据提示用英文写一篇短文。提示：1．感谢对象：父母，老师，朋友…．．（可选择一个对象或多个对象来写）。2．感谢的原因：生活方面，学习方面…，．3．美好祝福。要求：(1)词数：80-100词之间。(2)字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。(3)文章内容可适当发挥。Thanks____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A篇VolunteersWantedWeneedvolunteersintheoldpeople'shome．Doyouwanttohelptheoldpeople？Areyougoodwiththeold？Canyousing？Canyoudance？Canyouplaychesswiththeold？Doyouknowmanystories？Ifyouwanttojoinus，pleasecallWangQiangat686﹣7729.B篇ThanksInmylife，Igetlotsofhelpandlovefrommanypeople．NowIwanttoexpressmythankstothem．First，Iwanttothankmyparents．Theyprovideahappylifeforme．Theydomuchformeandgivemesomuchlove．Second，Iwanttothankmyteachers．Theyarealwaysbusydoingtheirwork．WhenIhaveproblemswithmystudy，theyaresopatientandhelpful．Third，Iwanttothankmyclassmates．Theymakemefeellesslonely．Iwillrememberthedayswhenweplayandstudytogether．Thankyou，myparents，myteacherandmyclassmates．Ihopeyouareingoodhealthandhaveabetterfuture．【解析】试题分析：以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节。写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：【高分句型一】①WhenI②haveproblemswithmystudy，theyaresopatientandhelpful．①when引导的时间状语从句．②haveproblemswith…在某方面有困难【高分句型二】Iwillrememberthedayswhenweplayandstudytogether．weplayandstudytogether是定语从句，修饰先行词thedays，关系词when作为从句状语．考点：提纲作文。14.【2017甘肃省白银市中考】书面表达（满分15分）今天是西方的“父亲节”，请根据以下的提示以MyBestDad为题写一篇短文介绍自己的父亲。要求：1.文中需包含提示中提到的至少4条内容：2.可根据图片发挥想象、适量拓展；3.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范；4.词数：80-100词左右；5.文中不得出现父亲的真实姓名、工作单位及考生的任何个人相关倍息。【答案】MyBestDadMydadisthebestmanIknow．Heis45yearsold．Heissogoodatmakingmywholefamilyhappy．Whenhecomeshome，helikestotellussomethinginterestinghe'sheardduringtheday．Andhispocketsarefullofchocolatesthatalwaysmakemehappy．Helikeseatingnoodlesbest．Myfavoritememoryofmydadisthathealwayswantstokeepmefrommakingmistakesbuthetriestoletmefindmyownway，eventhoughhisheartbreaksinsilencewhenIgethurt．Thisismybestdad．IlovehimandI'msoproudofhim．【解析】 试题分析：本文是介绍爸爸的情况，根据提示可知，这里叙述的是爸爸通常做的事情，所以应该用一般现在时，句子的主语用第三人称单数形式，所以应该注意主谓一致，所写的句子要符合英语语法，不要遗漏图画的信息。写作亮点：本文用了一些短语和句式，如：begoodat擅长；tellsbsth告诉某人某事；befullof充满；beproudof以……为自豪。用了when，eventhough引导的从句，增加了文章的亮点。考点：提纲类作文。15.【2017广东省深圳市中考】假设你是李华，三年的初中生活即将过去，你的外籍同学Sam在英语学习上帮助了你，在即将毕业之际，请你在给Sam的毕业纪念册上用英语写一段留言，要求包括以下内容要点：1．你在学习上曾遇到的困难；2．Sam对你的帮助，建议及措施：（1）多听多读；（2）多看英语电影；多唱英文歌曲；（3）…（自由发挥；不少于一项内容）3．你的收获及对Sam的感谢和祝福．DearSam，Howtimeflies!It'stimeforustosaygoodbye．Yourssincerely，LiHua．【答案】DearSam，Howtimeflies!It'stimeforustosaygoodbye!YouhaveofferedmesomuchhelpinmyEnglishthatIthinkwordstoshowthanksarefarfromenough．Istillrememberthreeyearsago，IhaddifficultiesinlearningEnglish．Itwasdifficultformetomemorizesomanywordsandunderstandwhatpeopleweresaying．MyspokenEnglishandwrittenEnglishwerepoortoo．However，I'msoluckythatImetyou，akind﹣hearted，smartandpatientboy．Firstly，youtaughtmetolistenmoreandreadmore．Anditreallyhelpedmealot．Besides，yousuggestedthatIshouldwatchEnglishmoviesandsingclassicEnglishsongs．Inaddition，youtoldmetoformthehabitofreadingaloudinthemorningandreadingnovelsbeforegoingtobed．Asaresult，Ifinallymadegreatprogress．AndIwishyouhappyandhealthy．Yourssincerely，LiHua．【解析】 试题分析：确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．要求介绍．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：It'stimeforsbtodosth到了做某事的时间了；havedifficultiesindoingsth做某事有困难；tellsbtodosth告诉某人做某事；teachsbtodosth教某人去做某事；用了that引导的宾语从句，用了Besides，Firstly，Inaddition，Asaresult连接词，使短文衔接自然。考点：提纲类作文。16.【2017湖北省鄂州市中考】为响应我市“创建国家卫生城市”的号召，6月3日，5000多名市民以绿色出行的方式参与了“生态鄂州——环洋澜湖健步走”活动。请以“共建绿色城市”为主题，根据以下文字提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。主题Let’sbuildagreencitytogether具体做法方式益处1.骑车、徒步出行避免交通拥堵，减少空气污染2.不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰让城市变得干净舒适3.植树造林美化城市，保护环境你的建议联系自己的生活实际提出几条具体的合理的建议。（至少2条）要求：1.80－100词（开头的首句已给出，不计算在总词数内）。2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。参考词汇：吐痰spit垃圾箱dustbin交通拥堵trafficjams环境environmentAsamiddleschoolstudentofEzhou,it’sourdutytohelpbuildagreencity._________________________________________________________