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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Duringmyhighschoolyears,Iwaspartoftheschoolband,agroupthatwasnotjustaboutmusicbutalsoaboutgoodfellowship(友情)andsharedexperiences.Wehadaspecialeventeachyear:themusicfestivalatawellknownthemepark.Itwasanopportunityforustoshowcaseourtalentsandenjoythepleasureofthepark.Tomakethiseventmeaningful,weorganizedafundraisingcampaign,sellingchocolatebarsthroughoutourmunity.Itwasasimpleplanbutonethatrequiredustoconnectwithourneighborsandaskfortheirsupport.Therewerealwaysheartwarmingencounters.Onesunnyafternoon,Iapproachedaneighbor’shome.Theladywhoansweredthedoorgreetedmewithasmileand,afterhearingaboutourcause,shedecidedtosupportusbypurchasingseveralbars.Aswewerenearingtheend,thelady’slittlegirl,whowasaboutthreeorfouryearsoldandhadbeenwatchingouraction,ranout.Thelittlegirlcamebackwithabillinherhand,alittledirtonit.Shewaseagertogiveittomeandsaid,“IwanttobelikeMomandsupportyou.”Theladywassurprisedandsaiditwassavedbythegirlherself.Herlovelyfaceandeagereyesmadeithardformetosayno.Itriedtoexplaintoherthathermotherwasalreadybuyingsomechocolate,butshewasdetermined.NeitherhermothernorIcoulddissuade(劝阻)herfromhernewfoundtaskofhandingmethedollarbill.IknewthatIcouldn’tputhermotherinapositiontobuymorechocolatethanshehadoriginallyintended.Icouldn’tacceptthelittlegirl’smoney.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。第一段:Suddenly,inspirationstruck!第二段:Thelittlegirl’seyeswidenedwithjoyasshegraspedthebillandthechocolatebar.文章大意高中时学校乐队为参加主题公园音乐节而在社区售卖巧克力棒筹款。一次,在向一位邻居推销时,邻居女士买了一些巧克力棒,她三四岁的小女儿拿着一张有点脏的钞票跑出来也要支持,她很坚决,而“我”不想让她母亲因她而多买巧克力,也不能接受小女孩的钱。几处伏笔及在续写中的回应伏笔:小女孩的坚持和“我”的两难处境。回应:续写中“我”想到办法解决这个问题。续写要点第一段(Suddenly,inspirationstruck!)情感线:从纠结转为想出办法的轻松。故事线:“我”拿出一根巧克力棒送给小女孩,告诉她这是对她热心支持的感谢,不用她的钱。续写示例:Suddenly,inspirationstruck!Ireachedintomybagandpulledoutoneofthechocolatebars.Ihandedittothelittlegirlwithabigsmileandsaid,“Sweetie,thisoneisforyou.It'saspecialgiftforyourkindnessandeagernesstohelp.Youdon'tneedtogivemethemoney.”第二段(Thelittlegirl’seyeswidenedwithjoyasshegraspedthebillandthechocolatebar.)情感线:小女孩的快乐和母亲的欣慰。故事线:小女孩高兴地拿着巧克力棒和钱,母亲感谢“我”的处理方式,“我”感受到温暖。续写示例:Thelittlegirl’seyeswidenedwithjoyasshegraspedthebillandthechocolatebar.Shehuggedmetightlyandthankedme.Hermotheralsosmiledgratefullyatme.AsIleft,Ifeltawarmglowinside.Thissimpleactofkindnesshadmadethefundraisingevenmorespecial.主旨升华句Kindnesscanturnadifficultsituationintoabeautifulmemory.(善良能将困难的局面变成美好的回忆。)Inthefaceofinnocenceandkindness,therearealwaysbettersolutions.(面对纯真和善良,总有更好的解决办法。)Asmallactoflovecanbringgreatwarmthinfundraisingactivities.(一个小小的爱心举动能在筹款活动中带来巨大的温暖。)Truegenerosityliesinrespectingandhandlingthekindnessofeveryheart.(真正的慷慨在于尊重和处理每一颗心灵的善意。)Whenwecherishthekindnessofchildren,wefindtherealmeaningoffundraising.(当我们珍惜孩子的善意时,我们找到了筹款的真正意义。)写作示范第一篇第一段:Suddenly,inspirationstruck!Icroucheddowntothelittlegirl'slevelandtoldherthathersupportwasthemostpreciousthing.Itookoutasmallnotebookfrommybagandwroteabig“ThankYou”onit.ThenIgaveittoherasaspecialtoken.Isaidthiswasarewardforherkindnessandshecouldkeephermoney.

第二段:Thelittlegirl’seyeswidenedwithjoyasshegraspedthebillandthechocolatebar.Sheshowedthenotebooktohermomwithpride.Themotherthankedmeformythoughtfulness.Ilefttheirhomewithaheartfullofwarmth,realizingthatinthisfundraisingprocess,theselittleactsofkindnesswerewhatmadeittrulyremarkable.第二篇第一段:Suddenly,inspirationstruck!Itoldthelittlegirlthatshecouldusehermoneytobuyachocolatebarfrommeanothertime.Fornow,Iwouldgiveherachocolatebaroncredit.Iwrotehernameonapieceofpaperandputitinmybag.Isaidwhenshehadmoremoneyinthefuture,shecouldetome.

第二段:Thelittlegirl’seyeswidenedwithjoyasshegraspedthebillandthechocolatebar.Shenoddedherheadvigorously.Themotherwastouchedbythescene.Iwalkedawayfeelingthatourfundraisingwasnotjustaboutgettingmoneybutalsoaboutthesebeautifulinteractionsthatmadeourmunitycloser.Onepossibleversion:Suddenly,inspirationstruck!

Withaquicklookatthemother,Idecidedtotakeamoreplayfulapproach.Ichangedmyattitudeandacceptedthedollarbillfromthelittlegirl,expressingmyheartfeltthanksforhergenerosity.Igaveherachocolatebar,thenquicklyreachedintomypocket,pulledoutanotherbill,andhandedittoher.Ismiledandsaid,“Here’syourchange!”Thelittlegirl’seyeswidenedwithjoyasshegraspedthebillandthechocolatebar.Shewaspletelysatisfiedwiththedealandbelievedthat

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