主题语境之探险旅行+“环境描写”【知识精研】高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

2025届高考英语读后续写主题语境之

“探险旅行”+“环境描写”

写作要点话题：探险旅行+救援+环境描写情节线：遭遇危险（恶劣环境&危险描写&情感描写）—出现转机（想到办法&呼救求助）—-救援脱险（救援描述&情感描写）—-感悟升华（历险者&救援者）情感线：焦急紧张/恐惧无助—筋疲力尽--欣喜/欣慰（relieved）—感动&感谢第一步：获救之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪）A:场景描写

①恶劣环境1.Theskyisdarkenedwithgloomyclouds.Lightningflashedacrossthesky,followedbyaclapofthunder.Minuteslater,therecameadownpour.2.Withadeafeningcrack,lightingsplitthesky,illuminatingthedarkclouds.3.Withraincloudslooming/hangingoverhead,theatmospherebecameheavyannouncing/threateningtheapproachingstorm.4.Theangrywavescrashedagainstthesideoftheboat,withwatersplashinghereandthere.5.Splashingraindropshitthewindshieldfranticallyandtheskieswereoverhungwithablanketofgrey.6.Themountainwaslikeafuriousghost/monster,roaringitsanger,thusmakingmemoreanxious.②惊险场面描写1.Thewatertwistedandturnedhim,scrapinghimagainsttherocks.Watergushedintohismouthanduphisnose.2.Thebigwindroaredthroughourearsandwewerepushedawayfromtheshorefartherandfarther.3.Suddenly,hewasstuckinthemudandcouldn’tgetout.Hestruggledhardbuthewasstilltrapped.Hescreamedforhelp,butallinvain.4.Withtheirmouthschokedwithsmoke,bothofthemfeeltheheatengulfingeverything.5.Enteringtheburninghousewaslike“runningintoabucketofblackpaint,”Surrellsays.Thethicksmokecausedhimtostumbleblindlyaround,burnedhiseyes,andmadeitimpossibletobreathe.6.Theroaringfireswallowedthewholehouse.7.Thebigredflameswerelickingthesidesofthewallsandcolumnsoffireshotthroughtheroof.③情绪描写（绝望、恐惧、挣扎）1.Fingersnumbedbythechillywater,throatchokedbyicywind,Ifeltonthevergeofcollapsing.2.Stillmoreandmorewaterfloodingintoherlung,shefeltshewasontheedgeofcollapsewhileallthecolorsoftheworldinfrontofherfadedawayquickly.3.Watchingtheshoreinthedistance,Ifeltpowerlessasifwewerebrokentinyboatsatthemercyofstrongwaves.4.Saltstingingmyeyes,IcouldhardlytellhowlongIcouldholdon.5.Timepassingus,tirednessengulfeduswithmyfeetstiff/numbandshivering.6.Herteethwerechatteringwithcold.第二步：获救之中（出现转机+救援动作）1.Shecouldhearwatertricklingsomewhereatadistance.2.Atthatmoment,ashrillwhistlerippedtheair.3.Insheerdesperation,Ifinallycaughtsightofsomeboatswithlifeguardsonthemleadingtowardsusinthedistance.4.Asifclutchingatstraws,Idialedthenumberagainandagain.5.Afteralongtime,alightspotappearedinthedistance!Wewavedourhandsandyelledoutforhelp.6.Whenwewereatalosswhattodonext,therewereshoutsrisingfromthedistance.7.Lookingupquickly,wefoundtheseclearmarkseasily.Itwaswiththehelpofthesemarksthatwequicklyfoundtheexit.救援脱险动作（1）火灾救援1.Afewminuteslater,thefirefightersarrivedandthefirewassoonbroughtundercontrol.Themotherwasrelieved.2.Hegrabbedtheladder,positioneditnearthewindowandclimbedtowardtheboy.Whenhereachedthewindow,hepushedthescreenintotheroomandcoaxedCodyout.3.Hecrawledtowardthesound,feelingaroundforanysignofthegirl.Finallyhetouchedsomething,ashoe,thenanankle.HepulledTiaratowardshim.Hehuggedherintoarmsandstood.4.Hefelttheheatoftheflamesonhischeeks.Turning,hefoughtthroughthesmokeandranblindlyintotheblackness.SurrellputTiaradownontheporch.5.HestartedCPR--thefirsttimehe’deverdoneso.Soonsheopenedhereyesandtookabreathonherown.

(2)落水救援1.Themomentwepulledourselvesoutofthewater,thecarwaswashedaway.Whatanarrowescape!2.Istruggledclumsilyinthewater.Afterafewupsanddowns,Ireachedtheedgeofthepond.3.Thewaterwasuptohislap,butAlastairwasverystrongandstruggledthoughwaveswithmeonhisback.Finally,wemanagedtoreturntothelandsafely.4.SeeingRonnywasalmostdrowned,Henrytookoffhisclothesimmediatelyandjumpedintothewaterwithoutanyhesitation.5.Withoutthinkingtwice,hespranginandcaughthimandquicklycarriedhimtothebank.Onthebank,Williewasgivenfirstaidandhecametolifeafterawhile.(3)受伤救援1.Pattingtheirfacestowakethemup,Icontinuouslytoldthemtobestrong.2.Sheappliedacleantoweltothewoundandpressedfirmlyonittostopthebleeding.3.RescuerstookPaulatoacaronastretcherandtookhertoahospitalforemergencytreatment.(4)雪中救援1.Thefirstthinghedidwastoseekshelterfromthefreezingwindandsnow.2.Usinghisskies,Nicholasbuiltasnowcave.Hegatheredahugemassofsnowanddugoutaholeinthemiddle.3.Thenhepiledbranchesontopofhimself,likeablanket,tostayaswarmashecould.4.However,theyknewtheclockwastickingandNicholasstoodabetterchanceofsurvivaltheearliertheyfoundhim.(5)迷路救援1.Frightenedaswewere,westillmadeupourmindtosearchforHarry.2.Hardlycanweseeanythinginthecompletelydarksituation,sowehadtofeelourwaytosearchHarry.(6)冰上救援1.Hepushedthebranchtowardme.IgrabbeditimmediatelyandwaseventuallydraggedoutoftheicywaterbyHarry!Whatanarrowescape!2.Amyhadagoodidea.Shetookoffherscarfandcoattomakearope.Shethrewittotheboy.Everyonepulledtherope.Theypulledtheboyoutofthepond.3.Afterthat,Mumdressedmeinawarmcoat,wrappedmeinablanketandpouredmeacupofhotmilk.(7)事故救援1.Hebalancedhimselfonthetruck,leanedbackandthrewtherockatthewindow.Finally,theglassbrokeandStevekickedintheremainingpiecesofglass.2.Inthatsplitsecond,Ilungedforward,extendingmyarms,readytocatchhimandpreventanyharmfromcominghisway.TheweightofhislittlebodylandingsafelyinmyarmswasafeelingIwillneverforget.Theemergencyservicesarrivedpromptlyandtookover,ensuringthatthebabyreceivedthenecessarymedicalattention.3.Withoutthinkingtwice,Igrabbedtheburgerandtosseditintheoppositedirectionwithallmymight,hopingtodistractthedog.(8)洞穴救援Nosoonerhadwearrivedwherethekidwastrappedthanthemanstartedtoscanthesurroundings.Thenheinchedtowardtheholeandstretchedouttoseizethechild’shands,pullinghimoutwithoutreserve.第三步：获救之后(1)宽慰&感激

1.Ibreathedasighofrelief,throwingmyarmsaroundhimandhuggedhimtightly.2.Smilinginrelief,Ifeltarushofgratitude.3.Onhearingthegoodnews,TomandIsighedingreatrelief,grinningmerrilyateachother.4.“IfIhadnotbeengivenfirstaid,Iwouldhavebeendead,”SimmonssaidtoNorwoodgratefully.“Itwasyouwhocametomyaidandsavedmylife.”5.Afterspending27hoursaloneinthewildness,Compeancried,“I’msafe.”Compean’sstoryprobablywouldhaveendedverydifferentlyhadatotalstrangerwithstrongsatelliteskillsandasharpeyefordetailnottakenaction.6.Thebaby’sparentsrushedover,tearsstreamingdowntheirfacesandtheirgratitudepouringoutinheartfeltwords.(2)升华

历险者1.Coldastherainwas,greatwarmthfilledhisheartlikeneverbefore.2.Fromthenon,hemadeuphismindnevertotakeanyrisksunlesshecouldensuretightsafety.3.Thatdaywassounforgettablethatitwouldstayinmymemory.4.OnlythendidIrealizethatitwasbraverythatcanconquerwhateverdifficultycameintheway.5.Fromthisexperience,whatwelearntwasthatitwasdangeroustoexploretheunknownworldwithoutafullydetailedplan.6.Grantfeltthatwhattheclimbhadtaughthimwashowfragileandpreciouslifeis.7.Thisfrighteningexperienceleftadeepimpressiononthem,whichmadethemrealizethattheyshouldcherisheverymoment.8.Itisuniqueexperiencethatmademeunderstandwhateverdifficultieswearefacedwith,aslongaswestayunited,wecanconquerit.救援者1.Iwouldneverforgetthegoodfeelingofhelpingsomeoneinneed.2.Itoccurredtomethathelpingotherswaspricelessandeveryoneshouldbealifeguard.3.Thestoryshowsthathavingagoodcommandoffirstaidcanmakearealdifference.4.Reflectingontheevent,Icouldn’thelpbutfeeladeepsensesatisfactionandfulfillment.Itshowedmethatsometimestheabilitieswepossesscanhaveaprofoundimpactonthelivesofothers.Theincidentservesasaremindertoalwaysbepreparedtolendahelpinghand,asyouneverknowwhenyouruniqueskillsmightmakeadifferenceinsomeone’slife.写作真题

浙江2020年7月

Onefall,mywifeElliandhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside"thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld"—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Taking

picturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI'mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithtelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.As

ElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.

写作真题

浙江2020年7月Terrified,

ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).

I

radioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmehelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn'tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear'spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears'eyes,butdoesn'thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.

续写首句Paragraph1Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文

Afewmomentslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Roaringevenmoreangrilythistime,hesmashedhispawscrazilyagainstthewirefence,tryingtostabuswithhissharpclaws.Panickedaswewere,ElliandIscreamedatthetopofourlungs,andwavedourfistsathiminanattempttointimidateandscarehimaway.Toourdisappointment,alltheseeffortswereinvain.Thebearviolentlydashedagainstthewoodenpostswhichwereevidentlyonthevergeofcollapsing!Thisfuriousbeastwaswithinastone'sthrow,soIflinchedbackandhuddledwithEllitightly.Chillywindswhippingourfaces,Icouldhearnothingbutthesoundofourheartsbeatingviolentlyinourchests.参考范文

Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.Thegustingwindfromthehoveringvehiclesweptawayourfearimmediately.Outofthehelicopterdescendedaropetopullusup.Thrilledyetrelieved,wegrabbedtheropeandeventuallylandedonthehelicoptersafeandsound.Whilelookingatthechunkybearfromhighabove,Iwasamazedtospotthisstubbornguyhadcrushedthefenceandheadedtowardourcampfortheinvitinggarlicbread.Atthisoncein-a-lifetimemoment,Ireachedintomybackpackandpulledoutthecamera,photographingthatimpressivescene.Gazingathisbroadbackinthemeltingicefield,Iwonderedifitwasthewarmerplanetthathadforcedthebeartohuntforfoodfromthehumanregions.跟着名著学续写-《柳林风声》

TheMoleworkedveryhardallmorning,cleaninghislittlehome.Hebrushed,andhewashed;hecleanedthefloorsandthewalls;hestoodonchairstowashthetopsofcupboards;hegotunderthebeds;hetookupthecarpets.Hecleanedandhecleaned,untilhisarmsandhisbackachedwithtiredness.

Itwasspringtime,andthesmellandthesoundofspringwereeverywhere,evenintheMole'sdarklittlehouseundertheground.Andwiththespringcomesthepromiseofchange,ofsunshine,ofnewgreenleaves.SoitwasnotsurprisingthattheMolesuddenlyputdownhisbrushesandsaid,"Ohbother!"andthen,"I'mtiredofcleaning!"Somethingupabovethegroundwascallingtohim,andheranoutofhishouseandbegantodighiswayupwardstothesun."Hedugandhepushed,andhepushedandhedug."Upgowe!Upgowe!"hesaidtohimself,untilatlasthisnosecameoutintothesunlight,andhefoundhimselfinthewarmgrassofafield.

"Thisisfine!"saidtheMole."Thisisbetterthancleaning!"Thesunshinewaswarmonhisbackandtheairwasfilledwiththesongsofbirds.Hegavealittlejumpforhappiness,shookhimself,andthenbegantocrossthefieldtowardssometrees.Hereandtherehewent,throughthefieldsandthewoods,lookingandsmellingandlistening.Everywhereanimalsandbirdswerebusy,talkingandlaughing,lookingforfood,makingnewhomesforthespring.TheMoleenjoyeditall.Then,suddenly,hecametoariver.Hehadneverscenariverbeforeinhislife-thiswonderfulbrightshiningthing,whichdanceditswayinandoutoftheshadowsunderthetrees,Itwasneverstillforaminute,hurryingandlaughingandtalkingtoitself.跟着名著学续写-《柳林风声》晨背--素材积累一、背精彩句子，让表达出彩1.Afterhoursofhiking,wefinallyreachedthesummitofthemountainandwererewardedwithabreathtakingview.经过几个小时的徒步旅行，我们终于到达了山顶，并欣赏到了壮丽的景色。2.MybrotherandIharvestedameaningfulexplorationanditwasreallyabrandnewweekend.我和哥哥收获了一次有意义的探索，这真是一个全新的周末。3.OurbeinglostaddedaspecialtastetomyadventurousvacationwhichIwouldrememberallmylife.我们的迷路给我的冒险假期增添了一份特别的滋味，我将终生难忘。4.Verytiredastheywere,theyhadtostrengthenuptospendanightthere.虽然他们很累，但他们不得不鼓起勇气在那里过夜。5.Thefirstthinghedidwastoshelterfromthefreezingwindandsnow.他做的第一件事就是躲避寒风和雪。6.Shetriedtomakeherwayquietlythroughtheunderbrush,butshewasnearlyscaredtodeathwhenshesawalargesnakecoilupbeforeher.她试图悄悄地穿过灌木丛，但当她看到一条大蛇盘绕在她面前时，她几乎吓死了。7.Theonlythingwecoulddowasjustsittinginthecoldairandwonderinghowtogetoutoftheforest.我们唯一能做的就是坐在寒冷的空气中，想着如何走出森林。8.Whetherit'saweekendgetawayoramonth-longadventure,there'snothingliketheexcitementofplanningatrip.无论是周末度假还是为期一个月的冒险，没有什么比计划旅行更令人兴奋的了。9.Despitefeelingweak,Nicholaswasgenerallyinagoodcondition,andhewasreallyhappyashewascarriedbacktotheskiresorttoreunitewithhisfamily.尽管感觉很虚弱，但尼古拉斯总的来说状态很好，当他被抬回滑雪场与家人团聚时，他真的很开心。10.Finally,wewentoutoftheforestthattrappedus.Whatanunforgettableexperience!Itturnsoutthatthere'salwaysawayoutofanydifficultsituationaslongaswestaycalm.最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。

多么难忘的经历啊！

事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。11.Travelingtonewdestinationsisanadventurethatalwaysfillsmewithexcitement.前往新的目的地是一次冒险，总是让我兴奋不已。

12.Whetherit'shikingthroughthemountainsorsurfingonthebeach,everyadventurebringsitsownuniquechallengesandrewards.无论是在山上徒步旅行还是在海滩上冲浪，每一次冒险都会带来自己独特的挑战和回报。13.Nearthetop,thicksnowblanketedthepath.Excitedly,thekidsracedacrossthehardsurface.

在山顶附近，厚厚的积雪覆盖了这条小路。孩子们兴奋地在坚硬的表面上奔跑。

14.Whenthesundisappearedbehindheavygrayclouds,theysuddenlyfeltlost,coldandhungry.当太阳消失在厚重的灰色云层后面时，他们突然感到迷茫、寒冷和饥饿。15.Exhaustedandbloodied，heemergedfromtheforestandbumpedintoafamilyofhikers，whocalled911.他筋疲力尽，浑身是血，从森林里出来，撞见一群徒步旅行者，他们拨打了911。二、悟创意语段，让联想出彩（1）Thenightbeforehisadventure，Colinpackedthenecessities，hismouthripplinganexcitedsmile.Thenextmorning，hebikedanunpopulatedpath，hikedthroughamountainandcampedovernightalone.Heappreciatedextremelyamazingsurroundingsights.Therewasabrooknotfarfromthecampsite，rushingandsparklingbetweengreenbanks.Atnight，lyingontheground，headmiredtheextremelymysterioussky.Themoonwatchedfromtheskybehindthecloudsasthestarsblinkedtheireyesinhappinessasiftheyweresayingsomething.冒险前的晚上，嘴角洋溢着兴奋的微笑，Colin收拾必需品。第二天早晨，他在人迹罕至的小路上骑行，徒步穿过大山，在夜晚独自宿营。他欣赏周围非常令人惊喜的风景。离宿营地点不远处，有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。在夜晚，躺在地上，他欣赏非常神秘的夜空。月亮在云层后面的天空中看着，星星高兴地眨着眼睛，好像在诉说着什么。（2）Macwaspedalingalongthemountainroadwhenhesawawolfchasinghim，openingitsbloodymouth.Hisfearwasbeyonddescription.Hebeggedpassingdriverstohelphim，butinvain.Sohegotoffhisbikewithouthesitation，seizeditandthrewitatthewolfwithallhisstrength，strugglingtofrightenthewolfaway.Hewasabouttobecomethefoodofthewolfwhenhisfriendsjoinedhim.Whenhereferredthehorriblethingtohisfriends，hestillfeltasifhishairhadstoodonend.Mac正沿着山路骑行，这时他看到一只狼张着血盆大口追赶他。他的恐惧无以言表。他乞求过往的司机帮助他，但是徒劳。因此，他毫不犹豫地从自行车上下来，抓住自行车，用尽全力把自行车扔向狼，尽力把狼吓走。他就要成为狼的盘中餐时，他的朋友加入他。当他向朋友描述这件恐怖的事情时，他仍然感到毛骨悚然。（3）Asweapproachedthecampingsitesurroundedbymountains，wehaddifficultycontainingourexcitement.Onreachingit，mymomopenedthedoorimmediately，chargedoutsideandeagerlyurgedustoputupthetent.Thesurroundingfascinatinglandscapewasatruefeastforoureyes，withitsrollinggreentreesdottedwithvariouswildflowers.Wewerebathedinthesunandbreathedinthesweetscentoffreshflowers.Birdsweresinginghappilyasiftheywerewarmlygreetingus.Myfamilychattedcomfortably，sweetmemoriesofthepastcrowdinginonus.随着我们靠近群山围绕的宿营地，我们难以抑制心中的兴奋。一到达宿营地，妈妈就立即打开车门，冲了出去，热切地催促我们搭帐篷。绿树连绵起伏，各色野花点缀其中，周围迷人的风景堪称一场名副其实的视觉盛宴。我们沐浴着阳光，呼吸着鲜花甜美的芬芳。鸟儿在欢快地歌唱，好像在热情地迎接我们。我的家人惬意地聊着天，过去美好的记忆涌上我们心头。晚练--素材运用2017年11月浙江卷

Avacationwithmymother阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Ihadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforso