中考英语人教版总复习主题写作突破课件主题十自然生态(1)2

主题十自然生态主题透析教材链接八下Unit9Haveyoueverbeentoamuseum?八下Unit10I’vehadthisbikeforthreeyears.九全Unit3Couldyoupleasetellmewheretherestroomsare?头脑风暴素材积累一、主题词块1.

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enjoythebeautyofnatureandprotecttheenvironment.

我们应该花些时间欣赏大自然的美丽,保护环境。(并列结构)4.Read

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.miles.读万卷书,行万里路。(谚语)takesometimetotenthousandtenthousand典例剖析(2024云南)你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“GettingClosetoNature”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,叙述一次你接近自然的经历及感悟(如郊游、研学、劳动实践等),或谈谈接近自然的好处。注意:(1)词数不少于80;(2)语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;(3)文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。

第一步“五定”审题体裁议论文人称第三人称时态一般现在时要点亲近自然;爱护自然;享受自然思路表明亲近自然的重要性;具体介绍亲近自然的好处;书写结语第二步“三段”谋篇第三步润色成文【基础版】GettingClosetoNatureNatureisthegreatestgifttohumanbeings.Itisthesourceofourlifeandthemostbeautifulsceneryintheworld.Firstofall,gettingclosetonaturecanhelpustorelax.Second,gettingclosetonaturecanhelpustobuildahealthylifestyle.Wecangohiking,swimmingorcyclingandtheseactivitiescanhelpusstayawayfromthebadhabitssuchassmokinganddrinking.Finally,gettingclosetonaturecanhelpustoappreciatethebeautyofnature.Inconclusion,gettingclosetonatureisveryimportanttous.Weshouldtakesometimetoenjoythebeautyofnature.【升格版】GettingClosetoNatureNatureisthegreatestgifttohumanbeings.Itisthesourceofourlifeandthemostbeautifulsceneryintheworld.Itisveryimportantforustogetclosetonature.①Firstofall,gettingclosetonaturecanhelpustorelax.Thefreshair,thesoundofbirdsandthesmellofflowerswillmakeusfeelrelaxed.②升格说明①添加本句,使“亲近大自然”的理由更加充分;而且作者还使用了It’s+adj.+forsb.todosth.结构,改变了句式。②本句的添加,进一步说明了亲近自然如何使我们放松,更有说服力。Second,itcanhelpustobuildahealthylifestylebygettingclosetonature.③Wecangohiking,swimmingorcyclingandtheseactivitiescanhelpusstayawayfromthebadhabitssuchassmokinganddrinking.Finally,it’shelpfulforustogetclosetonaturetoappreciatethebeautyofnature.④Inconclusion,gettingclosetonatureisveryimportanttous.Weshouldtakesometimetoenjoythebeautyofnatureandprotecttheenvironment.⑤③使用“by+动名词”结构,避免了与上文句子结构的重复。④再次使用了it’s+adj.+forsb.todosth.结构,使提出的三个益处的表达句型不重复。⑤and短语的添加,使由单纯欣赏自然的美上升到保护环境,使整篇文章的立意得到了升华。名师点评本文用流利的笔墨表达亲近大自然的好处等,全文条理清晰,时态运用正确,句子结构完整,表达通顺。各种句式的交替使用,丰富了句式结构,增加了文章的亮点,同时还体现了作者驾驭语言的高超技能。整篇文章一气呵成,给读者明快舒畅的感觉。学以致用1.要点提示类·家乡的变化为了响应习近平总书记提出的“绿水青山

就是金山银山”的发展理念,光明中学的筑文报社举办了一场以家乡

变化为主题的征文活动。假定你是光明中学的学生李华,请你根据以

下提示,以“TheChangesinMyHometown”为题,写一篇作文介绍

自己家乡的变化,情节可适当发挥。

内容包括:(1)描述家乡过去的情况;(2)描述家乡如今各个方面的变化;(3)畅想未来。注意:(1)词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息。TheChangesinMyHometownI’mLiHua.I’minGrade9.

Onepossibleversion:TheChangesinMyHometown

I’mLiHua.I’minGrade9.MyhometownisDeyang.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometowninthepastfewyears.

Inthepast,peopleinmyhometownlivedapoorlife.Thehouseswereoldandsmall.Thestreetsweredirtybecausetherewasrubbisheverywhere.Thetrafficwasnotconvenientandfewpeoplecamehere.Now,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Peoplearericherthanbefore.Manypeoplehavetheirowncarsandhaveahappylife.Manynewandtallbuildingshavebeenbuilt.Theenvironmenthasimprovedalot.Thestreetsaregettingcleanerandwider.Themountainsareallgreen,theriverisclearerandtheskyisbluer.Thousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworldcometovisitmyhometownanditbecomesmoreandmorefamous.I’msuremyhometownwillbebetterandbetterinthefuture.Ilovemyhometown!2.图表提示类·家乡介绍“读万卷书,行万里路”。暑假将至,成都某

中学计划组织学生来大美凉山开展研学之旅。假如你是李华,请根据

以下内容提示,以“WelcometoLiangshan”为标题,写一篇英语短

文,向即将到来的成都同学介绍一下你的家乡凉山。注意:(1)语言表达准确,文章连贯、通顺;(2)文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容,可适当发挥;(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;(4)词数80左右。文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。WelcometoLiangshanWelcometoLiangshan,aplacethatyouwillneverwanttoleaveonceyoucome.

IhopeallofyoucanenjoyyourselvesinLiangshan.Onepossibleversion:WelcometoLiangshan

WelcometoLiangshan,aplacethatyouwillneverwanttoleaveonceyoucome.Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.MybelovedhometownLiangshanisinthesouthwestofSichuanProvince,China.Itisknownforitsfreshair,beautifulnaturalenvironmentandgreenproducts.Theweatherhereiswarm.YoucanwearT-sh