专题12 中考书面表达-2023年江苏省中考英语二轮复习基础知识过过过+高分题型练练练

专题12中考书面表达写作的五个关键步骤：（一）仔细审题：看清要求，确定体裁、人称、时态等。（二）列出提纲：根据要点列出英文短语形式提纲，避免遗漏。（三）扩写成句：将所列提纲形成“主+谓+宾。”和“主+系+表。”基本句子结构，注意定语和状语修饰成分位置的使用以及避免中式英语出现。（四）连句成篇：使用适当的连词和过渡语将表达要点的句子连接成文。（五）自我修改：主要从以下几个方面进行自我修改：1.内容是否完整。2.时态是否正确。3.拼写和标点是否正确。4.主谓是否一致。5.格式和字数是否符合要求。6.层次是否清楚。写作中的好词好句：越来越多的：agrowingnumberof.........人们普遍认为：Itiswidelybelievedthat...........引起人们的关注：attractgeneral/public/worldattentiontosth.提出建议：comeupwithsuggestions作出努力：makeeffortstodosth.,takegreatpainstodo........产生影响：haveagood/badinfluenceon..........采取措施：takesteps/actiontodosth对……很好的了解：haveabetterunderstandingof培养对……的兴趣或者信心：developone’sinterest/confidencein发挥重要作用：playanimportantrole/partin..........知识、经验丰富：berichinknowledge/experience克服困难：getoverdifficulty面临危险、困难：inthefaceofdanger/difficulty发表看法：expressone’sopinion对..........有/没有意义：makemuch/littledifferenceto.............奉献于做某事：devoteoneselftodoingsth真正重要的是：Whatreallymattersis............实现自己的理想/愿望：realize/achieveone’sdream(hope/wish)减轻压力：reducethestress提高能力：improveone’sability开阔眼界、兴趣：broadenone’sinterest,broadenone’shorizons在某方面取得很大的进步：makemuchprogressin........发挥能力：developone’sability可以使用的经典名言警句：用于行动：Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.事实胜于雄辩。用于友谊：Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难朋友才是真朋友。用于做事：Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半。用于意志：Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。用于方法：AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大道通罗马。用于行动：Easiersaidthandone.说起来容易，做起来难。用于事物的正反两面：Everymanhashisweakside.人人都有缺点。用于坚持不怕困难：Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败是成功之母。用于做事：Lookbeforeyouleap.三思而后行。用于坚持：Nothingintheworldisdifficultifyousetyourmindtoit.世上无难事，只怕有心人。用于友谊：Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun.人若无友,就如同生命中没有太阳，用于坚持：Allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy.万事开头难，用于坚持：Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。写作中要注意文采:如果学生有时间和精力，想把书面表达写得更好,那么,还可注意以下几点:(1)句型多样化,不要I(We)……到底，使人觉得乏味。(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句。(3)进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句。(4)适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词。(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感。(6)适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。(7)上下句子紧接时，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以节省篇幅。同时也要注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用:1)语态、时态要准确无误。2)主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。3)注意人称代词的宾格形式。4)注意冠词用法，例如：Heisanhoneststudent.中的an不能写成a。5)注意拼写、标点符号和大小写。常考话题案例：一、学习减压生活节奏加快，竞争日益激烈，让大多数中学生在生活和学习上或多或少产生了压力，如何应对压力是大家不可回避的问题。为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"LessPressure,BetterLife"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你对于缓解压力的看法和建议。内容要点:1.同学们普遍存在的压力是什么;2.我的压力是什么;3.我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。写作要求:1.文中必须包括所给提示中内容要点，可展开思路，适当发挥；2.不少于80词。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】LessPressure,BetterLifeHello,boysandgirls：Pressureisaseriousproblemintoday’sworld.Studentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.Somestudentscan’tgetonwellwiththeirclassmates,whileothersmayworryabouttheirexams.I’malwaysunderpressure,too.Myparentswantmetobethetopstudentinclass.Sotheysendmetoallkindsofafter-classesatweekends.LastMondayevening,Ihadatalkwithmymother.ItoldherIwasnotlazy.Ireallyfelttired.Ineededtimetorelax.Mymotheragreedwithmeatlast.SoIthinkaconversationwithparentsisnecessarytosolvetheproblem.That’sall.Thankyou!二、校园生活假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Mary给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解一下你在学校的学习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受，请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容，结合你的实际用英语回复。To:liming@From:maryswift@Subject:SchoollifeDearLiMing,Howareyou?I'mgladtohearyouareaGrade9studentnow.I'dliketoknowsomethingaboutyou.Wouldyoupleasetellmesomethingaboutyourlife?●WhatproblemsdoyouhaveasaGrade9student?●Whodoyouoftenaskforhelpandwhatadvicewillhe/shegiveyou?●Whohasinfluencedyoumost?Why?I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Bestwishes.Yourssincerely,Mary注意:1.字数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总字数;2.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、顺畅;3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。DearMary,I'mgladtohearfromyou.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Allthebest,LiMing【范文】DearMary，I'mgladtohearfromyou.AsaGrade9student,Ifeelstressedfromtimetotime.Ihavesomeproblemsthesedays.Forexample,IhavesomuchhomeworktodothatIhavetostayuplateeveryday.Asaresult,IoftenfeelsleepyinclassandIdon'thaveenoughtimeformyhobbies.WheneverIamintrouble,IalwaysaskmyEnglishteacherforhelp.Sheasksmetogotobedandgetupearly.Shealsotellsmehowtoachieveabalancebetweenmyschoolworkandhobbies.MyEnglishteacheristhepersonwhohasinfluencedmemost.Sheisalwayskindandshecaresaboutallthestudents.IwanttobeateacherlikeherwhenIgrowup.Allthebest,LiMing三、成长学习每年的4月23日是世界读书日，这个纪念日的意义在于推动更多人去阅读。假如你校将开展“读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动的主题，向全校同学发出倡议。读书的意义：1.获取知识，开阔视野2.使人愉悦，益于学习3.……（自由发挥）现状：1.作业多，无良好读书习惯2.不知道读什么书，不会选择倡议：……（至少两点）注意：1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dearclassmates,Readingisveryimportantinourdailylife._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’sstartreadingnow!【范文】Dearclassmates,Readingisveryimportantinourdailylife.Firstofall,readingcanhelpusgetknowledgefromallkindsofbooks.Itcanalsohelptoopenupawholenewworldtous.Second,readingcanmakeuscleverandhappy.Itisgoodforourstudyanditcanhelpusgrowup.Third,readingcanhelpusthinkmoreandfurtherandmakeourlifemorecolourful.However,thereisusuallysomuchhomeworkforustodothatwedon’thaveenoughtimeforreading.Moreover,someofusdon’thaveagoodhabitofreadingbutoftenspendtoomuchtimewatchingTVandsearchingtheInternet.Inmyopinion,ourschoolcanhavea“ReadingWeek”onceaterm.Teachersshouldencouragestudentstoborrowbooksfromthelibrary.Wemustspendmoretimereadingsomeusefulbooks.Asaresult,wecanhaveabetterfuture.Let’sstartreadingnow!四、旅游交通越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢?请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)，内容包含：1.遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。2.别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。3.劝父母不能酒后驾车。你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。参考词汇：sidewalk人行道zebra-crossing斑马线注：第一段已给出，不计入总数__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Withmoreandmorecarscomingintoourfamilies,wearehappythatithasgreatlyimprovedourlife.Butunluckily,ithasalsobroughtmanyproblems,suchasheavytrafficandtrafficaccidents.Trafficsafetyiseverybody'sbusiness.Wemustobeytherules.Forexample,wemustwalkonsidewalks,whenwecrosszebra–crossing,stopandlookrightandleft,andthengoacrossfast.Don’tplayfootballontheroad.wecantellourparentsnottodrinkbeforetheydrive,nottorunthroughredlights,nottotalkandlaughwhiledrivingetc.Wecansaycarsarecomingintoourlife,butonlywheneverybodythinkstrafficsafetyiseverybody'sbusinesscanwebesafedrivingonroadsandwalkingonsidewalks.五、传统文化传统文化是近几年中考的热点，相信今年考它的可能性会很大。中国传统节日是传统文化的一部分。假设你是李华，你的美国朋友MIKE想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示，给Mike写一封e-mail，向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。内容提示：1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日;2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前准备、除夕夜、节日期间活动)写作要求：1.文中必须包括所给提示中内容要点，可展开思路，适当发挥；2.不少于80词。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】DearMike,Howareyou?I’mreallygladthatyouareinterestedintraditionalChinesefestivals.TherearemanytraditionalfestivalsinChina,suchasSpringFestival,Mid-AutumnDayandsoon.I’dliketointroducetheSpringFestivaltoyou.SpringFestivalisthemostimportanttraditionalholidayinChina.Itusuallylastsfor15days.Daysbeforethefestival,peoplecleantheirhouses.Theythinkcleaningsweepsanybadluck.Theydecoratetheirhouseswithpapercuts.Ontheeveofthefestival,familymembersgettogetherandhavebigmeals.ThentheywatchtheSpringFestivalGalaonTV.Atmidnight,theysetofffireworkstowelcometheNewYear.Duringthefestival,kidsgetluckymoneyfromoldpeople.Peoplevisittheirrelativesandfriends.Theywishoneanotherahappyyearandgoodluck.Howhappyweare.Yours,LiHua六、垃圾分类垃圾分类，人人有责。假如你是李华，你受学生会委托，向在校交换生发出参与垃圾分类的倡议。请你以"WasteSorting-AMustforEveryone"为题，用英文写一封倡议书，谈谈垃圾分类的意义，以及我们能做什么。提示词语:wastesorting(垃圾分类),litter,recycle,protect,environment提示问题:

Whyiswastesortingimportant?Whatcanwedotohelpwithwastesorting?

WasteSorting-AMustforEveryoneDearstudents,Wastesortingisbecomingincreasinglycommonaroundourcountry.

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