专题07 书面表达-2023年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（深圳专用）-3

2023深圳市中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递第三期专题07书面表达一、材料作文1．（2023·广东深圳·统考一模）假如你是深圳山河中学的学生义工社团负责人李华，你校将在“五四青年节”举办校园义卖活动为“扶贫公益基金”筹集善款，请根据以下提示撰写宣传海报的英文版内容。提示：1.目的：弘扬“五四精神”，伸出援助之手；2.时间：2023年5月4日下午15:00—17:30；3.地点：学校操场；4.内容：（1）准备义卖物品（旧书、文具、体育用品、玩具等）；（2）制作义卖海报；（3）进行义卖活动；5.呼吁：……。参考词汇：校园义卖charitysale要求：1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4.标点正确，书面整洁。InordertocarryforwardthespiritoftheMay4thMovement____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Joininandgiveyourhelpinghands!【答案】例文InordertocarryforwardthespiritoftheMay4thMovementandextendahelpinghand,Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinthebigcharitysale,whichwilltakeplaceontheplaygroundinourschool.Itwillbeheldfrom15:00p.m.to17:30p.m.onMay4th,2023.Thecharitysalewillbehostedbyourmonitorwherewewillsellstationery,usedbooks,sportssuits,lovelytoys,handcraftsandsoon,andallproceedswillbenefitneedychildreninthecountryside.Wearegoingtomakepostersandhaveacharitysale.Iknowyouhaveshowedgreatinterestandpromiseinouractivity,soIhopeyoucancometotakepartinit.Ithinkitwillbeameaningfulexperienceandletusseeittogether.Joininandgiveyourhelpinghands!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容对校园义卖活动进行介绍，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍活动的目的、地点和时间；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍活动的内容；第三步，呼吁大家来参加。[亮点词汇]①invitesbtodosth邀请某人做某事②takeplace举行③andsoon等等④takepartin参加[高分句型]①Thecharitysalewillbehostedbyourmonitorwherewewillsellstationery,usedbooks,sportssuits,lovelytoys,handcraftsandsoon,andallproceedswillbenefitneedychildreninthecountryside.（where引导的定语从句）②Iknowyouhaveshowedgreatinterestandpromiseinouractivity,soIhopeyoucancometotakepartinit.（省略that的宾语从句）2．（2023·广东深圳·深圳中学校联考一模）深圳是一座有温度的城市。3月是学雷锋月，假如你是学生李华，是深圳市某国际学校的一名学生。下周你所在的学校将举行一系列“学雷锋”活动，请根据以下提示，写一个倡议书，介绍此次活动并号召学校的同学们积极参加，要点：1．目的：培养社会责任感，提高交流技巧，帮助有需要的人2．内容：①看望敬老院老人②帮助照顾流浪动物③……（补充一点）3．你的号召与倡议要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；参考词汇：social社会的Dearfriends,Shenzhenisacitywhichcanbringpeopleloveandwarmth.InMarch,therewillbeagreateventcalled“LearningfromLeifeng”._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!【答案】例文Dearfriends,Shenzhenisacitywhichcanbringpeopleloveandwarmth.InMarch,therewillbeagreateventcalled“LearningfromLeifeng”.Thefollowingissomedetailedinformationaboutit.Thiseventwillbeheldinordertodevelopstudents’senseofsocialresponsibility.Atthesametime,studentscanimprovetheircommunicationskillsandhelppeopleinneed.Thereareaseriesactivitiesduringtheevent.Firstly,wewillgotooldpeople’shomesandhelpthemcleantheirrooms.Secondly,someofuswillgototakecareofhomelessanimals.Wecanfeedthemorplaywiththem.Thirdly,wewillholdabookfairtoraisemoneyforthepoor.Eachstudentneedtobringsomebooksthattheydon’tneedanymore.Ithinkthiseventwillbereallyeducationalandmeaningful.Witheveryeffortwemake,wecanmakeabigdifference!Hopeeveryonecantakepartinit!That’sall.Thankyou!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇倡议书；②时态：时态为“一般将来”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍活动的目的；第二步，介绍活动的内容。[亮点词汇]①atthesametime同时②makeabigdifference有很大的影响③takepartin参加[高分句型]①Thiseventwillbeheldinordertodevelopstudents’senseofsocialresponsibility.（动词不定式作目的状语）②Ithinkthiseventwillbereallyeducationalandmeaningfuls.（省略that的宾语从句）3．（2023·广东深圳·统考模拟预测）你的外国笔友Kathy听说深圳建设了许多绿道，写信来询问有关绿道的情况。请你按以下要点写一封回信，告知她相关细节。长度绿道总长度约2400千米地点一般修建在公园里，海边，山上修建绿道的好处1.美化城市，完善基础设施；2.……3.……提示词：绿道greenwayn.

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基础设施infrastructuren.要求：1.要点齐全，至少补充两个好处，并做适当发挥；2.条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范；3.字数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearKathy,YouaskedmeaboutthegreenwaysinShenzhenlasttime.YouknowthatShenzhenhasbuiltalotofgreenways._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouwanttocomehereandhavealook?Ihopetohearfromyousoon.Yourstruly,LiHua【答案】参考范文：DearKathy,YouaskedmeaboutthegreenwaysinShenzhenlasttime.YouknowthatShenzhenhasbuiltalotofgreenways.Thetotallengthofthegreenwayshereis2400km.Thesegreenwaysareoftenbuiltintheparks,bythesea,oronthemountains.Buildinggreenwaysbenefitsusinalotofways.First,itmakesourcitymorebeautifulandimprovestheinfrastructure.Inaddition,therearemoreplacesforcitizenstoexerciseandrelaxthemselves.Theycantakeawalkorridebikesonthegreenways.What’smore,thegreenwayswillattractmoretouriststoShenzhenbecausetheycanenjoybeautifulscenery,getclosetonature,andbreathefreshairalongthegreenways.Doyouwanttocomehereandhavealook?Ihopetohearfromyousoon.

Yourstruly,LiHua【详解】题干解读：题目要求给外国笔友Kathy写一封回信介绍深圳的绿道；要求包含表格中所有内容，并进行适当发挥。写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时，采用第三人称口吻。可采用3段落格式，第一段：开门见山，介绍绿道的长度和地点；第二段：描述修建绿道的好处；第三段：欢迎对方来深圳看一看。二、电子邮件4．（2023·广东深圳·统考一模）《湿地公约》第十四届缔约方大会在我国成功召开。深圳作为重要的湿地城市，也积极响应公约（WetlandsConvention）号召。假如你是学生李华，是学校环保俱乐部一员，你们俱乐部举行了“湿地保护节”（WetlandProtectionFestival）。请根据以下提示给你的外国朋友Mike写一封邮件，介绍此次活动。要点：1.目的：见证深圳湿地建设的成就；提升环保意识2.内容：①前往深圳红树林生态公园观赏红树林和鸟类；②深圳湿地摄影展；③……3.你的感受：①……②……要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4.标点正确，书面整节。参考词汇：witness见证；awareness意识；mangroveforest红树林；ShenzhenMangroveEcologicalPark深圳红树林生态公园；DearMike,Asanimportantwetlandcity,ShenzhenismakingeffortstoanswerthecalloftheWetlandsConvention.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearMike,Asanimportantwetlandcity,ShenzhenismakingeffortstoanswerthecalloftheWetlandsConvention.ThepurposeofthisactivityistowitnesstheachievementsofShenzhenwetlandconstructionandenhanceenvironmentalawareness.WewenttoShenzhenMangroveEcologicalParktowatchmangroveforestsandbirds.WealsovisitedtheShenzhenWetlandPhotographyExhibition.WehavealsosingedtheConventionontheProtectionofWetlands.Wearecommittedtomaintainingwetlands.Throughthisactivity,welearnthatweliveonthesameplanetandweneedtoprotectwetlands.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍活动目的；第二步，介绍活动内容；第三步，介绍自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①makeeffortstodo努力做某事②thepurposeof……的目的③needtodosth需要做某事[高分句型]①ThepurposeofthisactivityistowitnesstheachievementsofShenzhenwetlandconstructionandenhanceenvironmentalawareness.（动词不定式作表语）②welearnthatweliveonthesameplanetandweneedtoprotectwetlands.（that引导的宾语从句）5．（2022·广东深圳·统考二模）为落实国家教育部提出的加强中小学劳动教育的实施意见，你们学校安排了丰富多彩的劳动教育课。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Linda对你参加的课程很感兴趣，她发来邮件想了解有关情况。请你根据以下提示，给Linda回一封邮件。要点:1.劳动教育的目的：树立劳动光荣的观念、培养良好的劳动习惯等；2.具体活动：学习传统手工制作、学做家务等；3.你对学校开展的劳动教育课的看法。(至少给出两点)要求:1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校;3.包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;4.条理清楚，语句通顺，标点正确，书面整洁。参考词汇：劳动教育thelaboreducation劳动课thelaborlesson/course

手工课themanualtraininglesson/courseDearLinda,I’mgladtohearfromyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文:DearLinda,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Yousayyouareinterestedinourlaborcourse.Iwouldliketosharesomethingaboutitwithyou.Asweknow,thelaborcourseissettoeducatestudentstorespectandhonorhardwork,andformgoodworkinghabits.Inourschool,weareofferedvariousChinesetraditionalmanualtrainingcourses,suchaspaper-cutting.Welearntodohouseworkaswell.Someteachersteachustocookseveralkindsofsimpledishes.Inmyview,throughthelaboreducation,westudentscanacquiresomelifeskills.Meanwhile,ourschoollifewillbecomemorecolorfulandmeaningful.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意补充两点对劳动教育课的看法。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，和笔友分享关于劳动教育课的情况；第二步，详细介绍开展劳动教育的目的以及具体的活动内容有哪些；第三步，表达自己的看法。[亮点词汇]①beinterestedin对……感兴趣②sharesth.withsb.和某人分享某物③formgoodworkinghabits养成良好的工作习惯④teachsb.todosth.教某人做某事[高分句型]Yousayyouareinterestedinourlaborcourse.（省略that的宾语从句）6．（2023·广东深圳·统考一模）深圳是一座创新型城市，12月是深圳的“创意十二月”。假如你是学生李华，上周你所在的学校举行了“校园创意节”（CreativeCampusFestival），请根据以下提示，给你的外国朋友Mike写一封邮件，介绍此次活动。要点：1.目的：丰富校园生活，发展创新能力；2.内容：①创意写作大赛②机器人展③……3.你的感受：①……②……要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名：3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4.标点正确，书面整洁。参考词汇：innovative创新的enrich使……丰富DearMike,Shenzhenisaninnovativecity.Agreateventcalled“CreativeDecember”isheldhere.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】参考例文DearMike,Shenzhenisaninnovativecity.Agreateventcalled“CreativeDecember”isheldhere.Inordertoenrichcampuslifeanddevelopinnovationability,myschoolheldthe“CreativeCampusFestival”lastweek.Thecontentofthisactivitymainlyincludescreativewritingcontest,robotexhibitionandpersonalprogrammingdesign.Throughthisactivity,Ilearnedalotofknowledge,andIalsolearnedthewonderfulideasofmyclassmates.Ialsowanttolearnrelevantknowledgeandtrytodesignmyownhomenexttime.Ihopemydreamcancometrue.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：信件开头结尾以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“你的感受”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，承接信件开头，介绍学校举办“校园创意节”的目的；第二步，根据提示要点介绍活动内容，可列举具体的事例；第三步，抒发自己在此次活动中的收获或感受并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①enrichcampuslife丰富校园生活②developinnovationability发展创新能力[高分句型]①Ihopemydreamcancometrue.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）7．（2023·广东深圳·蛇口育才二中校考一模）假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tony给你发来邮件抱怨他的周末时间都被父母给他安排的培训占据了，他向你了解你及其他中国孩子是否面临同样的问题，并希望了解你对此现象的看法。请你给Tony回复邮件。写作要点：1.中国孩子周末的普遍情况。2.你的周末安排。3.你对父母安排周末培训的看法。写作要求：1.80词以上，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。DearTony,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouhavetoattendlotsofclassesatweekends.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Idohopeyoucanhavethefreedomtochoosewhatyouliketodoandenjoyyourweekends.YoursLiHua【答案】例文DearTony,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouhavetoattendlotsofclassesatweekends.WeChinesechildrenalsohavemanyafter-schoolclubsonweekends,suchasmusic,art,musicandsoon.Sowearebusyonweekendstoo.IgototheChineseclub,mathclub,Englishclubandbasketballclubeveryweekend.Ofcourse,westillhavealotofhomeworkattheweekend,soI’malsoverybusy.Ithinkparentsspendalotofmoneytoletusgotovariousclubssothatwecanhaveabetterfuture.SoItakeeveryclassseriously.Idohopeyoucanhavethefreedomtochoosewhatyouliketodoandenjoyyourweekends.YoursLiHua【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。向朋友Tony介绍中国孩子的周末生活以及自己对此的看法。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。文章开头和结尾已给出，中间分别介绍中国学生周末的安排以及自己的周末安排，并发表自己对此的看法。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。三、讲稿8．（2023·广东深圳·深圳市南山区华侨城中学校考一模）如果把初中三年的学习比作千米长跑的话，那么现在已经跑到了最后一个弯道。现在你班准备就“如何为中考做准备”开一个主题班会，请你根据以下内容写篇发言稿。身心健康1.不要熬夜，否则上课容易感觉困，不能认真听讲。2.保持良好情绪，不要过于担心。沟通交流1.多与父母和同学交流。2.与老师保持联系，不要忘记向老师求助。学习活动完成每一次练习，认真对待侮一次考试。其它可自由发挥要求：1.词数80个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.内容必须包括表中的要点，可适当发挥，使短文完整、语言流畅。3.可自由发挥一到两点自己的建议……Boysandgirls,theseniorhighentranceexaminationiscoining.Whatshouldwedoinordertopreparewellfortheexamination?Herearesomesuggestions._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Withthesedone,Ibelievewecanbesuccessfulintheseniorhighentranceexamination.【答案】例文Boysandgirls,theseniorhighentranceexaminationiscoining.Whatshouldwedoinordertopreparewellfortheexamination?Herearesomesuggestions.Firstofall,don’tstayup,oryouwillfeelsleepyeasilyandcan’tlistencarefully.Keepagoodmood,don’tworrytoomuch.Youshouldhavethecouragetosolvetheproblems.Second,youcanspendmoretimecommunicatingwithyourparentsandclassmates,andyoucansharethehappinessandsadnesswiththem.Keepintouchwithyourteachers,don’tforgettoaskthemforhelp.Third,readEnglishaloudandkeepwritinginEnglish.Finisheveryexercise,takeeverytestseriously,becausepracticemakesperfect.Correctingmistakesintimecanhelpimproveyourstudy.Withthesedone,Ibelievewecanbesuccessfulintheseniorhighentranceexamination.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇发言稿。假定你是李平，按照表格中所给信息完成，开头和结尾已经给出，就“如何为中考做准备”补充剩余内容。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第二人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段点明主题，要给出准备中考的建议；第二段详细介绍了身心健康、沟通交流和学习活动方面的建议；第三段结尾，相信这些建议可以提供帮助。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。四、通知9．（2023·广东深圳·统考一模）深圳正成为一座体育之城，健身文化浓厚。为增强学生们的锻炼意识，你所在的学校将举行“奥运冠军进校园”（OlympicChampionsEnteringCampus）活动。假定你是校英文报的编辑李华，请你代表校学生会写一则通知发布在校英文报上，预告此次活动。要点：1.时间地点：下周五下午，学校田径场；2.活动内容：①冠军成长故事分享；②冠军体育课；3.注意事项：①穿运动装；②……提示词：track-and-fieldground田径场

sportswear运动装要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名；3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4.标点正确，书面整洁