2025届中考英语复习写作培优册（外研版广西专用）11-人与社会-主题11 科技发明与创新

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高频主题三阶写作指导人与社会主题11

科技发明与创新（新科技的出现与应用；新科技/人工智能利弊谈；个人隐私与网络安全；航天科技发展）【教材模块/单元链接】外研版人教版译林牛津版七（上）M7

因特网的使用九（上）M9

发明&科技进步九（全）U6

发明八（下）U3

了解计算机九（下）U3

机器人如何帮助我们一阶

素材积累与训练素材积累短语与句型作用与影响1.be

used

to

do

sth.

被用来做某事2.change

one’s

life改变某人的生活3.with

the

development

of

随着……的发展4.make

a

lot

of

progress

取得很大的进步5.have

a

great

influence

on

对……产生很大的影响信息技术1.go

on

the

Internet

上网2.surf

the

Internet

网上冲浪3.chat

online

在线聊天4.make

e-friends

交网友5.text

message

手机短信6.check

the

email

检查邮件7.keep

in

touch

with

与……保持联系8.search

for

information

查找信息对某种科技或发明的看法1.On

the

one

hand…，on

the

other

hand…

一方面……，另一方面……2.from

my

point

of

view/in

my

opinion/as

for

me

在我看来3.All

in

all/In

short/In

a

word/In

conclusion，I

believe…

总之，我相信……开头句1.

With

the

development

of

science

and

technology，people

have

been

used

to

the

life

with

the

Internet.［外研七（上）M7］2.Nowadays，people

spend

much

time

on

the

Internet.

They

can

do

many

things

with

the

Internet.

［外研七（上）M7］3.The

Internet

is

changing

the

world.4.There

are

many

inventions

that

have

changed

the

world.［人教九（全）U6］5.As

we

all

know，smart

products

change

our

life

greatly.6.Among

many

inventions，I

think

the

most

useful

for

me

is

the

bicycle.中间句某发明/科技的功能1.I

listen

to

music

or

watch

movies

on

the

computer

every

Friday

night.

［外研七（上）M7］2.Today，with

the

invention

of

the

computer

and

electronic

technology，it’s

easy

to

get

information

on

the

Internet.［外研九（上）M9］3.I

came

up

with

a

good

idea

for

my

invention.

It’s

a

special

box

which

is

used

for

holding

wastes.

It

can

move

and

speak

different

languages.

As

soon

as

people

throw

away

wastes

on

the

street，they

will

be

cleaned

up

by

the

box

at

once.［人教九（全）U6］4.Home

robots

help

with

housework

so

that

people

have

more

time

to

do

things

they

enjoy.5.The

electric

car

can

not

only

save

energy

but

also

protect

the

environment.6.ChatGPT

offers

advice

and

helps

us

when

we

are

feeling

down.对生活的负面影响1.I

think

learning

online

for

a

long

time

is

bad

for

our

eyes.2.Not

everything

we

read

on

the

Internet

is

true

or

good

for

us.3.Depending

on

the

robots

too

much

may

make

people

lazier.结尾句表达观点1.In

my

opinion，home

robots

can

make

our

lives

easier.2.All

in

all，smart

products

have

both

advantages

and

shortcomings.

I

believe

that

if

we

use

them

correctly，it

will

help

us

live

a

more

convenient

life

in

the

future.3.Only

when

we

obey

the

rules

above

can

we

build

a

healthy

online

world.俗语/谚语1.Every

coin

has

two

sides.凡事都有两面性。2.The

question

mark

is

the

key

to

any

science.问号是开启任何一门科学的钥匙。高分模板介绍某科技/发明

Inventions

are

very

important

in

our

daily

life.

My

favorite

invention

is__________（发明名称），which

was

invented

by

__________in__________（发明者和发明时间）.

As

we

all

know，__________is

one

of

the

most

important

inventions（发明的重要地位）.

It

is

made

of/from__________（制作材质）.

It

looks

like

__________

（样子）.

When

it

is

invented，it

will

__________

（它的使用方法）.

In

my

opinion，I

hope

__________

can

help

us

in

these

ways（用途）.On

the

one

hand，__________.

On

the

other

hand，__________

（具体介绍两种用途）.

With

the

help

of__________，people

can

__________

（继续介绍用途）.

Thanks

to

the

invention

of

__________（发明名称），it

has

made

our

life

__________

（对发明的看法或感受）.句型训练1.You

can

create

or

invent

something.

You

know

more

about

its

knowledge

first.（用Only

when引导的倒装句升格句子）_______________________________________________________________________________________Only

when

you

know

more

about

its

knowledge

first

can

you

create

or

invent

something.2.I

start

the

car

and

it

can

fly

like

a

bird.（用as

soon

as引导的条件状语从句升格句子）_______________________________________________As

soon

as

I

start

the

car，it

can

fly

like

a

bird.3.The

car

is

cheap

and

environmentally

friendly.（用not

only…but

also…

升格句子）_________________________________________________________The

car

is

not

only

cheap

but

also

environmentally

friendly.4.I

want

to

invent

a

special

car.

The

car

can

swim

in

water

and

run

on

land.（用定语从句升格句子）__________________________________________________________________________I

want

to

invent

a

special

car

that/which

can

swim

in

water

and

run

on

land.5.人工智能的快速发展对我们的生活产生了巨大的影响。（汉译英）_____________________________________________________________The

rapiddevelopment

of

AI

has

a

great

influence

on

our

life.二阶

主题典例探究

发明不仅给我们的生活带来便利，而且还能促进社会进步和发展。近日，Invention杂志正在征集有关各类发明的英文稿件。请以“A

useful

invention”为题，写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.你心目中最有用的发明是什么（智能手机、扫地机器人……）；2.这个发明的基本信息（发明时间、发明者、功能……）；3.你的看法。注意：1.词数为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：invent（v.

发明），convenient（adj.

方便的）A

useful

invention

Inventions

allow

us

to

live

happy

and

easy

lives.

Among

all

the

inventions，I

think

the

most

useful

one

is

______________________写作剖析一、仔细审题1.文体：本文要求介绍自己心中最有用的发明的基本信息，是一篇________；2.时态：介绍发明历程，用____________，介绍发明的功能，用____________；3.人称：介绍发明的历程及发明的功能，用第____人称。说明文一般过去时一般现在时三二、构思框架，列出要点构思框架列出要点1.______________移动电话2.__________计算机3.______________扫地机器人4.____________________在某年被发明5.______________________以许多方式被使用6._________________提供快速的服务7._________________上网冲浪mobile

phonecomputercleaning

robotbe

invented

in+年份be

used

in

many

waysoffer

fast

servicesurf

the

Internet8.__________________

开阔我们的视野9._______________听音乐10._____________看视频11.______________________搜索信息12._____________放松自己13._____________明智地使用它14.______________给某人带来某物open

up

our

eyeslisten

to

musicwatch

videossearch

for

informationrelax

oneselfuse

it

wiselybring

sb.

sth.三、遣词造句，连句成文A

useful

invention

Inventions

allow

us

to

live

happy

and

easy

lives.

Among

all

the

inventions，I

think

the

most

useful

one

is

the

mobile

phone.

The

first

mobile

phone

was

invented

for

US

Army

in

1938

in

America.

Until

1973，Martin

Cooper

from

Motorola

Company

invented

the

first

mobile

phone

for

the

ordinary

people

to

use.

Since

then，the

world

has

been

changed

because

of

the

useful

invention.

They

are

used

in

many

ways.

First，they

offer

fast

and

convenient

service

for

communication.

We

can

talk

with

our

parents

or

our

friends

for

a

long

time

on

mobile

phones.

We

can

also

surf

the

Internet

on

them.

That

helps

us

open

up

our

eyes

to

the

outside

world.

And

when

we

are

tired，we

can

listen

to

music

to

relax

ourselves.

Our

life

becomes

more

colourful

because

of

the

invention

of

mobile

phones.

There

is

no

doubt

that

the

mobile

phone

plays

an

important

part

in

our

daily

life.

I

think

we

should

use

it

wisely

so

that

it

will

bring

us

much

more

fun.三阶

写作实战训练

假设你是李华，学校科技节将举办题为“AI

in

our

life”的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示，写一篇英文演讲稿，包含以下内容：AI

in

daily

lifesmartphones，cleaning

robotsThe

influence

of

AImake

work

and

study

more

efficient，help

with

housework，bring

great

convenience

and

progress

to，lose

jobs，depend

on

AI

too

muchYouropinion...注意：1.词数为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear

teachers

and

fellow

students,

As

we

all

know，AI

changes

our

lives

greatly.

With

the

development

of

science

and

technology,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

we

can

see

all

kinds

of

AI

products

in

our

daily

life.

For

example，smartphones

can

make

our

work

and

study

more

efficient

while

cleaning

robots

can

help

with

housework.

They

all

bring

great

convenience

and

progress