Unit 4 History and Traditions -【同步写作课】高一英语单元写作深度指导（人教版2019必修第二册）

必修第二册Unit4单元写作指导与演练Describeaplacethatyoulike单元写作早知道写作任务本单元的写作任务是写一篇推荐信。高中推荐信这一类的文章多变性很强，有的是向某个公司或者大学推荐人才，也有的是向某位朋友推荐大学、活动、书籍、电影亦或是旅游地点等等。常用表达(1)Iamwritingtorecommendtoyou…(2)Iwouldliketorecommendtoyou…(3)Itisagreathonorformetorecommendtoyou…(4)Itakethepleasureinrecommendingtoyou…(5)Ifhecanjoinyourcompany,hewillgivefullplaytohistalent.Andyourcompanywillalsobegreatlybenefited.SoIstronglyrecommend…toyou.(6)Inaword,hewouldbeagoodchoice.Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldliketoconsidermyrecommendation.(7)Ihopeyoucangivehimachance.Ibelievehewillmakeagreatcontributiontoyourcompany.(8)Ihopethatyouwouldtakemyrecommendationintoconsideration/account.单元话题真题展示高考链接旅游景点2021年天津卷推荐信是向有关单位或个人推荐或介绍某人、物、事或活动的专用书信。这类书信使用广泛。信文语言简短准确，语气诚恳热情。Usewhatyouhavelearnttowritealetterofrecommendation.假设你是晨光中学的李津，我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一下国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：1.该地方的基本情况（如名称、地理位置等）2.该地方的特色（如文化、景点等）3.你对该地方的印象和感受。推荐信通常分为三个部分:开头，正文，结尾。所以在写作过程中一般分为三段论。分段是为了让结构变得更清晰，让阅卷老师一眼看出你的思路。也不要分太多段，因为要求的字数较少，分段太多会让文章看起来太散。开头:一般要求开门见山，直入主题。点明写作原因，目的，背景等。正文:一般按照要点扩展，尽量按照要点顺序展开。注意衔接词，以及使用亮点词汇和句式。结尾:可以再次重申主题，也可表达期盼……主要根据具体题目判断。英语应用文推荐信的写作要领：1、文章要得体，写信对象不同，语气也要随之变化；2、文字要简洁，推荐信的目的首先是让收信人简单明了的获取信息，不建议用过长的高级句式结构；3、词汇要高级，在确保简洁明了的让收信人获取信息的同时，为了拿到高分，就必须在词汇上做文章。内容表述第一部分:表明写邮件的目的。KnowingyouarecomingtovisitanancientcityinChina,Iwouldliketorecommend...第二部分:陈述推荐理由。★.…islocatedin...,withthefamous…nearby.★AsoneofthetophistoriccitiesofChina,…hasahistorydatingallthewaybacktothe…Dynasty.★Therearecountlesswell-preservedancientarchitecturesanduniqucoldstreetswhereyoucanexperience…cultureandenjoythetasteofthetraditionalfoodof….people.★Ifyoucomeinspringyouwillbeintimetowitness(亲眼见到)...Ihopeyoucanhaveanunforgettabletripin...第三部分:希望对方旅行愉快。【小试牛刀】DearTom,KnowingyouarecomingtovisitanancientcityinChina,IwouldliketorecommendDaliOldCity.DaliOldCityislocatedinthewestofYunnanprovince,withthefamousCangshanMountainandErhaiLakenearby.AsoneofthetophistoriccitiesofChina,DaliOldCityhasahistorydatingallthewaybacktotheTangDynasty.Therearecountlesswell-preservedancientarchitecturesanduniqueoldstreetswhereyoucanexperienceBaicultureandenjoythetasteofthetraditionalfoodofBaipeople.IfyoucomeinspringyouwillbeintimetowitnessBai'sgreatfestival.IhopeyoucanhaveanunforgettabletripinDaliOldCity.Yours,LiHuaLocation(位置)1.bereferredtoas被称为... 2.bemadeupofconsistof由…组成3.belongto属于 4.atthefootof在…的脚下5.besurroundedby被...围绕 6.astone'sthrowaway一步之遥7.addto添加 8.goround四处走动9.belocated/situatedin坐落在10.giveafulldescription全面描述11.dosomeresearchon做研究Features&Characteristics(特点与特色)1.haveagreatinfluenceon对…有影响 2.befamous/well-known/renownedfor/as因/作为……而出名3.berecognized/regardedas被认为是…4.berich/abundantin盛产5.thebest-knownlandmark最著名的地标6.ahistorictouristdestination历史旅游胜地7.soakup沉浸8.onaspecialdiet特殊饮食9.besimilarto与……相似10.befilledwith充满11.have...incommon与……相同12.relateto与……相关History&Culture(历史与文化)1.haveahistorydatingbackto有一段可以追溯到...的历史2.developstrongtraditionsthatincludemusic,dancing,anddining培养了包括音乐、舞蹈以及美食在内的浓厚传统3.intheeighthcentury在第八世纪 4.payrespectsto向...表达敬意5.afascinatingmixofhistoryandmodernculture历史与现代文化的奇妙结合6.belistedasaUNESCOWorldHeritageSite被列为世界文化遗产名录7.usedtobe过去曾是8.beleftinruins成为废墟9.countlesshistoricsites数不清的历史遗迹 10.aculturalcamp文化营11.ahistoricalwitnesstosth是……历史的见证者 12.passdown传承13.fromgenerationtogeneration代代相传ScenicSpots(景点)1.touristattractions/placesofinterest/scenicspots景点/名胜2.beattractedbythelegendofLochNess_被尼斯湖传说吸引3.sowell-respected如此受人尊敬4.theamountofnoiseattheentranceoftheNationalGallery国家美术馆门口的噪音量5.withitsrollinggreenhillsdottedwithsheepandcattle青山延绵起伏，牛羊星罗棋布 6.stopbyavillagepubandrelaxwithaglassofwineoralocalbeer在一个乡村酒吧停下来，喝一杯葡萄酒或一杯当地的啤酒放松一下7.theroaroftheoceanwavesandcriesoftheseabirds海浪的咆哮以及海鸟的鸣叫8.greetthenewdaywith_theirmorningsong用他们的晨歌迎接新的一天9.astrikingimage一个令人注目的形象10.royalfunerals国葬11.theshortenedname缩写名12.coronation加冕13.lotsofmuseumswithancientrelicsfrom许多博物馆里都有来自……的古代文物14.atraditionalplaceforpublicmeetings召开公众集会的一个传统之地15.reachtheservicedesktoaskforaudioguide到服务台索取语音导览16.militarydefense军事防御17.artcollection艺术品收藏18.congratulationson祝贺19.hometo…的所在地Activities活动1.setoff出发2.heatup加热3.setout出发4.pourinto把……倒入5.getsbnoticed注意到6.meltaway融化7.getthebatterycharged充电8.getpositioned摆姿势9.getthecomputerconnected连接电脑10.recommendsthtosb向某人推荐某物Feelings感受1.experiencelocalcultureandcustomsfirst-hand亲身体验当地的文化和风俗2.alittledisappointed有点失望3.Ihavenoidea…我不知道……4.beeager/surprisetosee/learn/hearthat……渴望看到/了解到/听到……5.positiveattitudetowardslife对生活积极的态度6.inretur作为回报7.notexpecttosee没想到看到……8.beyonddescription无法形容9.excitesandinspiresall让所有人兴奋和鼓舞 10.drivesbcrazy使某人疯狂11.atruefeastfortheeyes一场视觉盛宴12.can'twaitto迫不及待做13.Walkinginthisancientcityislikewalkingintohistory走进这座古城就像走进历史14.……isaplaceyouhavetovisitandtheextraordinaryview……是一个你一定要去的地方，它非凡的美景让你不愿离开15.playabigpartin扮演着重要角色16.beinterestedin对……感兴趣17.afishoutofwater离鱼之水假定你是李华，你的瑞士朋友Michael接到汉语老师布置的任务，要在课堂上向同学介绍一种中国传统文化，他不知从何入手，因此求助于你，请写一封电子邮件回复他，内容包括：1.表示关心；2.提出建议；3.表达期待。注意：1.词数80字左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为推荐信；（2）因两人是朋友关系，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为推荐，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段表示关心；第二段提出具体建议并说明理由（要点2）；第三段表达期待（要点3）。DearMichael,LearningthatyouareatalosswhatChinesetraditionalculturetopresenttoyourclassmates,Irecommendoneforyou.Sojustrelaxandtakeiteasy.Chinesepainting,asoneofthemosttypicaltraditionalcultures,ismytoppriority.DifferentfromWesternoilpaintings,Chinesepaintings,amixofpoetry,calligraphy,paintingandseal,pursuetheharmoniouscoexistencebetweenmanandnature.YoucansurftheInternetandmakeanintroductionoftheoriginanddevelopmentofChinesepainting,anditsstylecharacteristicsaswell.I'msureyourclassmateswillfallinlovewithChinesepaintings.Lookingforwardtoyoursuccess!Yours,LiHua假定你是李华，你的南非朋友Stephan今年暑假来中国旅游，最近中国开通了一条从上海到新疆的高铁专线。你向他推荐这趟专列。内容如下：1.选择高铁的优势；2.沿途的经历（领略自然风光等）；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：高铁high-speedrailline

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