读后续写+画笔下的生命奇迹：一片叶子的救赎+讲义 高三适应性测试（二模）英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整短文。InDecember,anunseendiseasearrivedinavillage.Allywasoneofthevictims.Shelay,barelymoving,inherbedstaringatawalloutofthewindowunderherblanket.Thedoctortookherfather,whowasapainter,asideandclaimed,“Shehasonechancein—letussay,ten.Andthatchanceisforhertowanttolive.Trytoencouragehertothinkmorehopefulthoughts,aboutthefuture,aboutliving.”HerfathertooksomepaperandapenintoAlly’sroomandbeganapendrawing,inanattempttoraiseAlly’sspirits.Ally’seyeswereopen,buttheyweren’twatchinghim.Instead,shestaredoutthewindowandcountedbackwards,“Ten,nine,eight,seven…”“Whatareyoucounting,dear?”askedherfather.“They’refallingfasternow,”repliedAlly.“Threedaysagotherewerealmostahundred.Butnowthereareonlyfiveleftnow.Fiveleavesontheivyvine(常春藤).Whenthelastonefalls,Imustgo,too.”“Oh,Ineverheardofsuchnonsense,”quicklyrepliedherfather.ButAlly’smindwasmadeup.“Iwanttoseethelastonefall.Iwanttogosailingdown,down,justlikeoneofthosepoor,tiredleaves.”“Trytosleep,”saidherfather.Allyclosedhereyesquietly.Watchingherdaughter’spaleface,hewaslostindeepthought.Asapainter,hehadneverproducedamasterpiecehelongedtopaintin40years.Asafather,heevencouldn’thelpherdaughtercheerup.Lookingoutofthewindow,henoticedthattherewasjustoneremainingleaf.What’smore,acoldrainwasfallingmixedwithsnow.“Aretherepeopleintheworldthatarefoolishtothinkthey’lldiebecauseleavesdropofffromanivyvine?ThisisnotaplaceinwhichAllyshallliesick.”Hemadeuphismindtodosomething.Thenextmorning,Allywokeandaskedforthecurtainstobeopened.Oneleafremainedontheivyvine,bravelyholdingoninthewindandrain.“Itwillfalltoday.AndIwilldiewithit.”注意：1．续写词数应为150个左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thefollowingday,Allyaskedagainforthecurtainstobeopened.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afewweekslater,Allyrecoveredcompletelyandthesecretwasrevealed.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：在十二月，一种未知疾病侵袭村庄，Ally不幸染病，生命垂危，医生称她只有十分之一的生存机会，关键在于她自己要有求生欲望。Ally望着窗外的常春藤，认为最后一片叶子落下时自己也将死去。她的画家父亲为了救她，在最后一片叶子掉落的那晚，在窗户上画了一片叶子。这片叶子给了Ally活下去的希望，最终她奇迹般康复，得知了父亲的秘密后，她深受触动，懂得了爱与希望能战胜绝望的道理。伏笔及回应：伏笔：父亲是画家。回应：父亲在最后一片叶子掉落时画了一片叶子，拯救了Ally的生命。伏笔：Ally盯着窗外的常春藤数叶子，认为叶子掉光自己就会死。回应：父亲画的叶子让Ally看到叶子没掉，从而改变了她的想法，重拾求生欲。伏笔：Ally说三天前有近百片叶子，现在只剩五片，且最后一片叶子掉落时自己也要走。回应：这为后续叶子没掉落引发的情节转折做铺垫，突出了叶子对她的象征意义以及父亲行动的重要性。伏笔：父亲思考自己作为画家没有杰作，作为父亲无法让女儿振作。回应：画叶子救女儿成为他人生中的“杰作”，实现了自我价值和对女儿爱的表达。伏笔：窗外风雨交加，只剩一片叶子。回应：风雨中叶子不掉，更加凸显了叶子的坚韧和父亲行为的及时性，也强化了这一情节对Ally心理的影响。续写要点：第一段情感线：Ally从最初的惊讶于叶子还在，到内心受到触动，开始重新审视生命，对活下去有了更坚定的信念，情感从消极向积极转变。第一段故事线：Ally看到叶子依旧挂在枝头，尽管经历了风雨，但依然顽强。这使她开始思考生命的意义，不再一心求死，而是尝试配合治疗，与病魔抗争，身体状况逐渐好转。第二段情感线：Ally在得知父亲的秘密后，内心充满了感动和感恩，对父亲的爱有了更深的理解，同时也为自己重获新生感到庆幸和珍惜。第二段故事线：父亲向Ally坦白是自己画了叶子，Ally深刻意识到是父亲的爱给了她第二次生命。此后，Ally更加珍惜生活，以积极乐观的态度面对未来，也更加懂得关爱家人和身边的人。主旨升华句：Loveisthemostpowerfulmedicinethatcanhealthedeepestwoundsofthesoul.（爱，是能治愈灵魂深处创伤的最强有力的良药。）Hopeisthebeaconthatguidesusthroughthedarkestnightsandleadsustothedawnofanewday.（希望是指引我们穿越最黑暗夜晚并走向新一天黎明的灯塔。）Sometimes,asmallactoflovecancreateamiracleandchangealifeforever.（有时，一个小小的爱的举动就能创造奇迹，永远改变一个人的人生。）Inthefaceofdespair,thepowerofloveandhopecanmaketheimpossiblepossible.（在绝望面前，爱与希望的力量能使不可能变为可能。）Thebondoflovebetweenfamilymembersisunbreakableandcanovercomeanyobstacle.（家庭成员之间的爱之纽带坚不可摧，能够克服任何障碍。）写作示范：示范一Thefollowingday,Allyaskedagainforthecurtainstobeopened.Themomenthereyesfelluponthewindow,aglimmerofastonishmentflashedacrossherface.Thesolitaryleafwasstillclingingtenaciouslytothevine,asifdefyingthemercilesswindandrain.Anewfoundsenseofhopebegantostirwithinher.Shethoughttoherself,"Iftheleafcanenduresuchhardship,whycan'tI?"Fromthatdayon,Allystartedtoeatmore,andafaintblushofvitalityreturnedtohercheeks.Shenolongercountedthedayswithdreadbutwithanticipation,graduallymusteringthestrengthtofightagainsttheillness.Afewweekslater,Allyrecoveredcompletelyandthesecretwasrevealed.Herfather,withtearsglisteninginhiseyes,toldherthetruthaboutthepaintedleaf.Overwhelmedwithemotion,Allyflungherarmsaroundherfather,herheartfilledwithgratitudeandlove.Sherealizedthatitwasherfather'sunwaveringloveandtheglimmerofhopesymbolizedbythatpaintedleafthathadpulledherbackfromthebrinkofdeath.Fromthenon,Allycherishedeverymomentoflife,knowingthatnomatterhowdarkthedaysmightbe,loveandhopewouldalwaysshinethrough.示范二Thefollowingday,Allyaskedagainforthecurtainstobeopened.Asthesunlightfilteredthroughthewindow,hergazefixedontheloneleaf.Itseemedtoradiateamessageofperseveranceandlife.Asparkofdeterminationignitedwithinher.Shewhispered,"Iwillnotgiveupsoeasily.Iwillholdon,justlikethisleaf."Slowlybutsurely,Ally'sspiritbegantorevive.Sheengagedinconversationswithherfather,sharingherdreamsandfears,andwitheachpassingday,herwilltolivegrewstronger.Afewweekslater,Allyrecoveredcompletelyandthesecretwasrevealed.Whenherfatherconfessedtopaintingtheleaf,Allywasdeeplymoved.Sheunderstoodthatinthemostdesperateoftimes,asimpleactoflovecouldbethemostpowerfulforce.Thisexperiencetransformedher,fillingherwithanewfoundsenseofpurpose.Shededicatedherselftospreadingkindnessandhope,believingthateventhesmallestgesturecouldmakeaworldofdifference.ForAlly,lifewasnowapreciousgift,andshewasdeterminedtomakeeverymomentcount,allbecauseofthelovethathadsavedher.范文Thefollowingday,Allyaskedagainforthecurtainstobeopened.Shepeeredthroughtheglasswithtiredbutdeterminedeyes.Herfather’sheartsankashesawthesamesolitaryleafstillclingingtotheivyvine,defyingtheharshweather.Heknewhehadtoactquickly.AssoonasAllyclosedhereyes,heranoutintotherainandsnow,determinedtosavethatlastleaf,ifonlyforhisdaughter’ssake.Heclimbedthetrelliscarefully,shiveringinthecold,andmanagedtosecureapieceofcanvasoverthevinetopr