高考英语读后续写专项突破：亲情故事

高中英语读后续写专项突破一一亲情故事

亲情是世界上珍贵的情感之一，因为每个人表达方式不一样，所以亲情的外在表现

形式也不一样，但是爱是一样的.・・・・・

01

阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Itshardtotalktodadssometimes.Therolesweoftenexpectourfathersto

play—protector,provider—canmakethemseemimpenetrable（不可理角星的］.That'showit

waswithmydad.HecametoCanadaattheageoftenandsettledinanimmigrant

community.Hewasnevermuchofatalker.Herarelydrank,sowedidn'tgettoseehim

loosenupafterafewbeers.Hedidn'ttellstoriesabouthimselfatthedinnertableorwhen

wewentforwalksinthepark.Hewasaprivatepersonandseemedtowanttostaythat

way.

BringingupthemanyquestionsIhadaboutlifebeforeIwasborn-hisearlyhopesand

dreams,lovesandheartbreaks-letalonesharingmyownfeelings,feltliketoomuchforus

tohandle.Ididn'twanttothreatentheintegrity（完整）ofhishardshell.Ihadgottenusedto

it,anditmademefeelsecure.

Butwhenmyrelationshipandcareertookahitayearagoatthesametime,thingshadto

change.Iwasfacingseriousquestionsaboutmyownnature,andIwantedtoknowthathe

hadfacedthem,too.Ineededtoknowhowhehadfoundhisway,becauseIfeltlikeIhad

lostmine.

Inaseveremomentofdesperation,itoccurredtomethatsendinganemailmightbethe

key.Anemailcanbecrafted（精心制作）slowlyandcarefully.Icouldspeakatacomfortable

distanceandgivehimroomtoadjust.He'dbeupinhisoffice—acomfortableplacefilled

withbookshelves,dustyCD-ROMsandpilesofoldnewspapers.Fdbeatmydeskinan

apartment20minutesaway.

SoIwrotetohim.Itoldhimaboutmyregretsandfears,andIaskedhimtoanswer,ifhe

feltlikeit,andtosharesomethingabouthimseltsomethingthatwouldgiveme

much-neededperspectiveonmylife,especiallyonrelationshipandcareer.

Para1:Twoweekslater,hisresponseshowedupinmyemailbox.

Para2:1closedtheemailandstartedtocry.

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的父亲是一个少言少语的人，

作者习惯这样的父亲，也觉得这样很安全。但当作者的婚姻和职业受到打击时，他/她感到

迷失了自我，想到父亲也可能曾经面临这样的问题，于是决定通过写邮件向他求助。

【详解】

1.段落续写

①根据第一段首句内容“两周后，他的回信出现在我的邮箱里”可知，下文可描写父亲

在信里真诚地分享了自己的经历，以及作者的感受。

②根据第二段首句内容“我关了邮件开始哭起来”可知，下文可描写作者哭的原因，以

及庆幸找到了和父亲进行交流的方式。

2.续写线索：受到回信一一父亲分享自己的经历一一对父亲有了更多了解一一哭起来

为什么哭庆幸能和父亲交流

3.词类激活

行为类

①思考：consider/think

②提供：offer/supply/give/provide

③解决：solve/settle

情绪类

①艰难的：hard/tough/difficult

②感激的：grateful/thankful

③高兴的：glad/delighted/pleased

【点睛】

[高分句型l]Whilereading,Igotthesensethatitmusthavebeenreallytoughformy

dadtosettledowninanewcountryatanearlyage.（运用了状语从句的省略）

[高分句型2]IcriedbecauseIwishedIhadopenedupearlierbutwasgratefulitwasn't

toolate.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句，和虚拟语气）

【答案】

Para1:Twoweekslater,hisresponseshowedupinmyemailbox.Itwasascanned

threedocument.Apparently,mydadhadcarefullyconsideredmymessage,reached

backintohismemoryandcraftedaresponse.Intheletter,hesharedhishistoryoflove,

longing,self-doubtfearsandstrugglesinlife.Healsoofferedmesomepracticalsuggestions

onhowtohandlemyrelationshipandcareer.Whilereading,Igotthesensethatitmust

havebeenreallytoughformydadtosettledowninanewcountryatanearlyage.Iwasalso

impressedbythegreatperseveranceheshowedinthefaceofdifficulty.

Para2:Iclosedtheemailandstartedtocry.IcriedbecauseIwishedIhadopenedup

earlierbutwasgratefulitwasn'ttoolate.Icriedbecauseinthemidstofmyownstruggles,

hisletterinstantlyputmeatease.AndIcriedbecauseintheend,itwassosimple:Ijusthad

tohit"Send".We'vesincehadmanyexchanges.Myproblemshaven'tbeenmagicallysolved,

butgettingtoknowmydadbetter-andlearningtolovehimmore-hasmadethetoughstuff

moremanageableandlifesweeter.Itshardtotalktodadssometimes,butI'mgladthatI

foundawaytotalktomine.

02

“HasPriyanotcomehomeasyet?〃Suryaasked.Hehadjustreturnedfromwork.Hewas

acashierintheStateBankofHyderabad,whilehiswife,SharadaalabassistantinReddy

CollegeforWomen.Theirdaughter,Priya,wasaClassXstudentinSaintAnne'sSchool

aroundsixkilometersaway.TherewasadirectbusfromPriya'sschool.

“Sheshouldhavebeenhereby4.30.Itis5:30nowandshestillhasnotcome/'Sharada

replied.HYesterdaytooshewaslate.Infact,sincethelastfewweeksshehasbeencoming

homelate."

"Didyouaskher?"

"Yes,Idid,lastweek."

"Whatdidshesay?"

“Shenumbedsomethingaboutspendingtimewithherbestfriend,thenshekeptquiet.

Youknowsheisnotveryforthcoming.Onedayshewouldbebecomeanengineeror

doctor,"PriyawastoappearfortheClassXexaminationinAprilthenextyear.Thiswasthe

monthofJulyandherstudieshadstartedinrealearnest.Morningsixtoeightshewentfor

MathsandPhysicstuition,andintheeveningseventoeightforChemistry.

Thenextday,SuryahappenedtodiscussPriya'sstrangebehaviorwithhiscolleague,

Durga,whotoohadateenageddaughter.

“Surya,youshouldnottakeitsolightly.Ihaveanidea.Mybrother,Ajay,worksina

DetectiveAgency.Iwilltellhim.Iamsurehewillagreetofollowher.SincePriyadoesnot

knowhim,shewillnotgetsuspicious//

Suryakeptsilentforawhile,finallyagreed.

OnWednesday,Suryagotacallintheoffice.

"Hello!Surya?ThisisAjay?"

"Yes,Ajay.Anynews?”

“Plenty.CanyoucometoArtsCollegeat4.30intheevening?0

“Why?”

“Iwillexplainwhenwemeet.”

Sharpat4.30,SuryaparkedhisscooterinfrontoftheArtsCollegeBuilding.Ajaywas

waitingforhim.nComewithme,“hesaid.Theywentbehindthebuildingandtookapath

whichledtoasmallHanumanTemple.SuryahadbeentherewithPriyaacoupleoftimes

andtheybothquitelikedtheserenityoftheplace.Whentheyreachedtheplace,Ajayasked

himtoquietlylookfrombehindaboulder.

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2,请按如下格式作答。

AsSuryalooked,hewassurprised

“Ileftmypaintingsinthetemple.Iwanttobecomeapainter/1Priyaansweredonthe

sofa.

【答案】

AsSuryalooked,hewassurprised.HesawPriyasittinginthesmallcourtyardinfront

ofthetemple.Therewasacanvasinfrontofherandshewasbusypainting.Afewpaint

bottles,brushesanddrawingsheetswerelyingaround.Besideherwereseveralcanvases,

Suryawasstruckbythebeauty,therawenergy,ofhisdaughter'sart.Thenheleft,

determinednottodisturbher.Butwhydidshespendsomuchtimepaintingatthe

approachoftheClassXexamination?SuryakeptwonderinguntilPriyacamehomethat

evening.nWhyareyoulateagain?Spendingtimepainting?Whereareyourpaintings?'1he

askeddirectly.

“Ileftmypaintingsinthetemple.Iwanttobecomeapainter.Priyaansweredonthe

sofa."Idonotmindstruggling,evenstarvingtorealizemydream.Isitreallythatwrongto

chaseone'sdream?”Struckbythechild'sdetermination,Suryawaslostinthought.They

alwayswantedtheirdaughtertostudyPhysics,Chemistry,Maths,Biology,andbecomean

engineeroradoctor.Theybelievedpaintingcouldn'tguaranteeherbreadandbutterbut

engineeringormedicinecould.Maybeitwastimetochange.

【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Surya发现女儿Priya一直回家很晚，为了弄清

楚女儿的这些奇怪行为，他的同事建议让自己的兄弟A