九年级下册 英语 模块三第五单元《Lesson 5 Writing》课件

Module3Unit5Sport

Lesson5Writing九年级下册—上海教育出版社—英语—模块三第五单元Learningobjectives学习目标1.能运用相关的词汇和句型描写体育经历。2.能根据写作步骤，写一篇短文，介绍自己最喜欢的一项体育运动。3.了解体育精神并树立热爱运动、强身健体的理念。Revision

Skiing:anunforgettableexperience1.Theysawthethicksnowonthetreesasthebusclimbedthroughthemountains.2.Whentheyreachedtheresort,theyquicklyjumpedoutofthebusandplayedwithsnow.3.Theycheckedinatthehotelandsawtheskislopeoppositethehotel.Thefirstday:Shehadaskiinglessonwithayoungcoupleandfellovermanytimes.Thesecondday:Thethirdday:Vanessacoulddoafewrapidruns.Thefollowingday:Vanessakeptskiingandhadawonderfultime.expectantnervouspleasedMyFavouriteSportWhat’syourfavouritesport?WhatWhenHowoften...GuessingGameTrytonamethesporteventsasmanyaspossible.图片来源于网络

basketball图片来源于网络skiingcurlingswimmingskatingbadmintoncyclingtabletennisHowoftendoyouplay/doit?Whodoyouplay/doitwith?Whendoyouusuallyplay/doit?Whathappy/specialmemory/experiencedoyouhaveaboutplaying/doingthissport?MyfavouritesportWhatisit?Doyouhaveanyfavouritesportstars/teams?Step1AnalyzethetopicAnalysisTitle（标题）Person（人称）Tense（时态）

thefirstpersonMyfavouritesportthesimplepresenttensethesimplepasttensethesimplefuturetenseStep2OrganizetheoutlineMyfavouritesportBodyConclusionTopicsentencee.g.Myfavouritesportis…/…ismyfavouritesport.Para.1IntroductionStep2OrganizetheoutlineMyfavouritesportIntroductionBodyconclusionGivedetailsaboutyourfavouritesport(when,howoften,who)Para.2Para.3Para.1YourfavouriteteamsorstarsMyfavouritebasketballstarisYaoMingandheisregardedasageniusbymanypeople.IhopeIcanplaybasketballaswellashedoesinthefuture.Istartedtoplaybasketballattheageof11.IamsointerestedinitthatIplayitwithmyclassmatesafterschooleveryday.Sometimesweplaybasketballtogetheruntilitisdark.Step2OrganizetheoutlineMyfavouritesportIntroductionBodyconclusionPara.2YourmemoryorexperienceofthissportPara.1Para.4Para.3Para.4Para.4Howcanyoudescribeyourmemoryorexperienceofthesport?Lastyear,IwentskiingwithmyparentsintheCanadianRockies.Ithoughtitwasan_____________________formebecauseIhada__________time.Asthebusclimbedthroughthemountains,we______________getoutandplaywiththesnow.Assoonaswereachedtheresort,we_________________________thebus.Thenwecheckedinatthehotel.Thenextday,we______ourskisuitsandgloves,tookourskisandwentoutsideontothesnow.Itmademe__________wearingskisforthefirsttime.Ifoundmyself______________.Thenayoungcouplehadaskiinglessonwithus.Theinstructorshowedussomebasicskills,butIkepton___________.LaterIlearnedto_______________andthenIdidbetterandbetter.I_____________

thatIfinallylearnttoski.unforgettableexperienceweredyingto

feelstrangeunabletowalkfallingoverwaspleasedwonderfulkeepmybalanceputon

tojumpoutofcouldn’twait

Howcanyoudescribeyourmemoryorexperienceofthesport?Payattentiontoverbsandadjectives.expectant

Fillintheblankswithverbsandadjectives.Tobehonest,Ithoughtitwasvery1.d

attheverybeginningoftrainingbecauseIkeptholdingtheballallthetimeanddidn’tknowwhattodonext.Then,thecoachtoldmetheskillsofplayingbasketball.Ilistenedtohimcarefullyand2.d

nottobeleftbehind.Afterthat,I3.s

mysparetimepractising.Afewdayslater,Imadeprogressandfelt4.p

withmyselfwhenIwonamatchwithmyclassmates.That’showIfellin5.l

withbasketball.1.difficult2.decided3.spent4.pleased5.loveTobehonest,IthoughtitwasverydifficultattheverybeginningoftrainingbecauseIkeptholdingtheballallthetimeanddidn’tknowwhattodonext.Then,thecoachtoldmetheskillsofplayingbasketball.Ilistenedtohimcarefullyanddecidednottobeleftbehind.Afterthat,Ispentmysparetimepractising.Afewdayslater,ImadeprogressandfeltpleasedwithmyselfwhenIwonamatchwithmyclassmates.That’showIfellinlovewithbasketball.Trytowritedownyourexperiences/memoriesandshareit.Youmaystartlikethis:

Istartedto...whenIwas...Atfirst,...

Atip:verbsandadjectives图片来源于网络ShowTime图片来源于网络Step2OrganizetheoutlineMyfavouritesportIntroductionBodyConclusionPara.5Summaryandwish

Ilikeplayingbasketballbecauseithelpsmebecomehealthyandstrong.Para.1Para.2Para.3Para.5Myfavouritesportisrunning.(what)DetailsofMyfavouritesport.(when,who,howoften)Thebenefitsofdoingsportsinmymindandmywishes.Myfavouritesport

star.

SampleStructurePara.4Myexperienceofrunning.Howoftendoesherun?Whodoesherunwith?Whendoesheusuallyrun?MyfavouritesportWhatisit?Doeshehaveanyfavouritesportstars/teams?runningeverydayhisclassmatesafterschoolYes,SuBingtianishisfavouritesportstar.Readagainandfindmoredetails.My

favouritesport

Myfavouritesportisrunning.

Istartedtorunfromanearlyage.IamsointerestedinitthatIrunwithmyclassmatesafterschoolevery

day.

SuBingtianismyfavouritesportstar.IhopeIcanbeaprofessionalathletelikehiminthefuture.IrememberwhenIwasyoung,Iwasveryfatandwasoftenlaughedatbymyclassmates.Later,undertheguidanceoftheteacher,Istartedtoexercise.Atschool,Iwonthechampionshipsmanytimesintherunningcompetitions.Afterthat,Iregainedmyconfidenceandneverstoppedrunning.That’showIfellinlovewithrunning.Forme,runninghaschangedmealot.Itcannotonlystrengthenmybody,butalsohelpmebuildupmyconfidence.Ihopeeveryonecanbecomehealthyandstrongbydoingsports.图片来源于网络Usefulexpressionslike...best最喜欢……startto...fromanearlyage从小就开始……beinterestedin...对……感兴趣beaprofessionalathlete成为一名专业运动员laughat...嘲笑……undertheguidanceof...在……的指导下regainone’sconfidence

重获信心fallinlovewith…爱上……strengthenone’sbody使……身体强壮buildupone’sconfidence建立……的信心图片来源于网络CheckListContent1.Keypoints(what,when,howoften,who)2.Richsupportingdetails（拓展内容丰富充实）Accuracy1.Personandtense(thefirstperson;thecorrecttenses)2.Wordsandexpressions(accurate,properandvivid准确，适切，生动）3.Sentencepatterns（rich,completeandclear多样，完整，清晰）Coherence1.Goodorganization(introduction,bodyandconclusion)2.LinkingwordsStep3WriteadraftExpressionsyoumayuse:

Famoussayings:1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.3.Failureisthemotherofsuccess....Step4PolishthewritingStep4PolishthewritingspellingmistakesgrammarmistakespunctuationmistakerunningIwasinwatertookbecamemoreandmoreinterestedinswimmer.taughtgrammarmistakesAtfirstothermistakeWritedownallthecontentUseproperwordsandexpressionsAvoidthesemistakes:grammarspellingpunctuationothersTips:Step4PolishthewritingNow,it’syourturntohaveaself-assessment.CheckListContent1.Keypoints(what,when,howoften,who)2.Richsupportingdetails（拓展内容丰富充实）Accuracy1.Personandtense(thefirstperson;thecorrecttenses)2.Wordsandexpressions(accurate,properandvivid准确，适切，生动）3.Sentencepatterns（rich,completeandclear多样，完整，清晰）Coherence1.Goodorganization(introduction,bodyandconclusion)2.LinkingwordsSummary&Assessment1.learnttousetherelatedwordsandexpressionstodescribetheexperiences/memoriesofthesports.2.beenabletowriteashortpassageaboutthefavouritesportbasedonthewritingsteps.3.understoodthespiritsofsportsandraisedtheawarenessofdoingsports.Inthislesson,wehave…✔✔✔HomeworkPolishyourwritingMyfavouritesport.Thankyou!Module3Unit5Sport

Lesson5Writing（答疑）九年级下册—上海教育出版社—英语—模块三第五单元Howcanyoureviseyourpassagetomakeitbetter？wordsandexpressionssentencepatternscontentwordsandexpressions新颖性多样性贴切性Examples1.Sheisgoodatswimming.2.Itisadifficulttimeforustolearnhowtoplaybasketball.dowellin/beskilledinhard/tough新颖性

多样性

贴切性Exercise1.Ilikeplayingsports.2.Itisgoodforustodosports.Iaminterestedinplayingsports.Iamcrazyaboutplayingsports.Iamaddictedtoplayingsports.Itisbeneficial/wonderful/enjoyable/pleasantforustodosports.sentencepatterns同义转换，时态正确形式多样，长短相宜语态转换句型转换Examples1.WebeatClassOne.Classonewasbeatenbyus.2.Heranfastandwonthefirstprize.Heransofastthathewonthefirstprize.3.Shefeltill,shestilltookpartinthesportsmeeting.Shefeltill,butshestilltookpartinthesportsmeeting.thepassivevoiceadverbialclauseofresultlinkingwords1.Doingsportsishelpfulforus.Wecanmakemanyfriendsbydoingsports.Doingsportsishelpfulforus.

What’smore,wecanmakemanyfriendsbydoingsports.2.Theschoolchosehimasamemberofthebasketballteam.Hewaschosentobecomeamemberofthebasketballteam.3.Theywonthematchinthelastminutes.Itisthemostunforgettableexperience.

Themostunforgettableexperienceisthattheywonthematchinthelastminutes.Exercisethepassivevoicelinkingwordsthepredicativeclauseclausesandlinkingwordsclauses:

attributiveclauses/predicativeclauses/objectclauses...linkingwords:

including/infact/especially/inshort/moreover/inaddition/meanwhile...高级词汇和句式一定要使用合理、得体，能够完成表达任务为目的，不能简单地，不加分别地堆砌所谓的高级词汇和句式。content列举实例增添细节forexamplesuchasforinstance…aswellascomplexclauses...1.Shelikesdoingsports.

Shelikesdoingsports,suchasrunningandswimming.

举例2.IhopeIcanbeabasketballplayeroneday.

IhopeIcanplaybasketballaswellasYaoMingdoesandbeaprofessionalplayeroneday.细节

ExamplesExercise1.Imadesomefriendsinthematch.

Imadesomefriendswhoalsolikeplayingbasketballinthematch.

细节2.Helikesdoingsportsverymuch.

Helikesdoingsportsverymuch,suchasrunningandswimming.

举例Whichonedoyoulikebetter?Iamfondofplayingbasketball.Istartedtoplaybasketballattheageof11.Everyday,Iplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesafterschool.Sometimesweplayittogetheruntilitisdark.MyfavouritebasketballstarisYaoMing,whoisoneofthebestbasketballplayersinChina.IhopeIcanbeassuccessfulasheisinthefuture.Atfirst,Ididn’tliketo