2022年甘肃省酒泉市大学英语6级大学英语六级预测试题(含答案)

（2022年）甘肃省酒泉市大学英语6级大

学英语六级预测试题（含答案）

学校:班级:姓名:考号:

一、l.Writing（10题）

1.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledEnergyCrisis,Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingthe

outlinegivenbelow:

1.能源是当今世界所面临的主要问题之一。

2.能源的重要性

3.如何保护能源

2.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled

ScientificAttitude.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutline

givenbelow:

1.科学态度的实质

2.科学态度的方方面面

3.结论

ScientificAttitude

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteashort

essayentitledWhatIsthepurposeofpunishment.Youshouldwriteatleast

150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow.

1.惩罚的目的；

2.惩罚罪犯也是教育其他人遵纪守法

3.惩恶扬善，减少犯罪。

WhatIsthepurposeofpunishment

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledSelf-helpTravelingofCollegeStudents.Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.大学生出去旅行经常会选择“自助游”

2.分析大学生选择“自助游”的原因

3.我的看法

Self-helpTravelingofCollegeStudents

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledHowtoCultivateTeamSpirit?Youshouldwriteatleast150

words.followingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.闭队精神对人的成长至又重要

2.但现在许多人缺乏闭队精神

3.在我看来……

HowtoCultivateTeamSpirit?

6.Directions:Thefollowingtablegivesstatisticsshowingtheaspectsof

qualityoflifeinfivecountries.Writeacompositiondescribingthe

informationinthetablebelow.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

CNPperheadDailycalorieLifeexpectancyInfantmortalityrates

Country

(2005,$)suppyperheadatbirth(years)pex1000livebizths

Bangladesh■19225263

Bolivia245821076748

Egypt332329466840

Indonesia311765

U.S.A.1877937817911

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteashort

essayentitledMyIdenofPopmusic.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbellow.

1.有人认为流行音乐不能登大雅之堂。

2.有人认为音乐无高低贵贱之分，只有兴趣上的差别。

3.我认为……

MyIdeaofPopmusic

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetitle:HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation?Youshouldwriteatleast

130wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.中国已渐渐步入老龄化社会。（65岁以上的老年人已占全国人口的7%）

2.我认为应如何对待老年人群。（社会关爱与福利制度，家庭温暖，社

区服务……）

3.我的结论。

HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation

9.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthe

topic"TheLimitationsofBookKnowledge1'.Youshouldwritenolessthan

150wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline（givenin

Chinese）below:

1.书本是知识的重要来源。

2.但书本知识具有局限性。

3.因此……

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

compositionbasedonthefollowinggraphwhichshowsthechangesinthe

numberofcollegegraduateswhochosetobeteachersortogointobusiness.

ThesuggestedtitleisToBeaBusinessmanortoBeaTeacher.Youshould

writenolessthan150wordsandyourwritingshouldcontainthefollowing

ideas:

1.大学毕业中选择教师职业的人越来越少。

2.大学毕业和中在大公司里谋职从商的人越来越多。

3.出现这种情况的原因：在大公司工作工资待遇高，发展机会较多，可

二、2.ReadingComprehension（SkimmingandScanning）（10题）

11.

Studentscanfindreportsonanyvirtualtopicinthe.

12.AprilFools'Special:History'sHoaxes

HappyAprilFools'Day.Tomarktheoccasion,NationalGeographicNews

hascompiledalistofsomeofthemorememorablehoaxesinrecenthistory.

Theyarethelies,darned（可恨的）lies,andwhoppers（弥天大谎）thathave

beenperpetratedonthegullible（易受骗的）andunsuspectingtofulfillthat

age-olddesireheldbysometoputthejokeonothers.

InternetHoaxes

TheInternethasgivenbirthtoaproliferation（土曾填）ofhoaxes.E-mailinboxes

arebombardedonanalmostdailybasiswithmessageswarningofterrible

computervirusesthatcauseuserstodeletebenign（良性）chunksofdatafrom

theirharddrives,orofcreditcardseamsthatenticethenaivetogivealltheir

personalinformation,includingpasswordsandbankaccountdetails,to

identitythieves.Othere-mailsgiverisetowry（歪曲的）chuckles,whichis

wherethislistbegins.

BanDihydrogenMonoxide（一氧化二氢）

CityofficialsinAlisoViejo,California,weresoconcernedaboutdiedangers

ofdihydrogenmonoxidethattheyscheduledavotelastmonthonwhetherto

banfoam（泡沫）cupsfromcity-sponsoredeventsaftertheylearnedthe

chemicalwasusedinfoam-cupproduction.

Officialscalledoffthevoteafterlearningthatdihydrogenmonoxideisthe

scientifictermforwater.

"It'sembarrassing,"citymanagerDavidJ.NormantoldtheAssociatedPress.

"Wehadaparalegal（律师助手）whodidbadresearch."

Indeed,theparalegalhadfallenvictimtoanofficial-lookingWebsitetouting

thedangersofdihydrogenmonoxide.Anemailoriginallyauthoredin1990

byEricLechner,thenagraduatestudentattheUniversityofCalifornia,Santa

Cruz,claimedthatdihydrogenmonoxide"isusedasanindustrialsolventand

coolant,andisusedintheproductionofStyrofoam（聚苯乙烯泡沫塑料）

Otherdangerspranksters（爱开玩笑的人）associatedwiththechemical

includedacceleratedcorrosionandrusting,severeburns,anddeathfrom

inhalation.

Versionsofdiee-mailcontinuetocirculatetoday,andseveralWebsites,

includingthatoftheCoalitiontoBanDHMO,warn,tongue-in-cheek,of

water'sdangers.

AlabamaChangesValueofPi

TheApril1998newsletterputoutbyNewMexicansforScienceandReason

containsanarticletitled"AlabamaLegislatureLaysSiegetoPi”.Itwas

pennedbyAprilHolidayoftheAssocimatedPress（sic）andtoldthestoryof

howtheAlabamastatelegislaturevotedtochangethevalueofthe

mathematicalconstantPifrom3.14159totheroundnumberof3.

Theersatz（假的）newsstowwaswrittenbyLosAlamosNationalLaboratory

physicistMarkBosloughtoparody（滑稽地模仿）legislativeandschoolboard

attacksontheteachingofevolutioninNewMexico.

AtBoslough'ssuggestion,DaveThomas,thepresidentofNewMexicansfor

ScienceandReason,postedthearticleinitsentiretytotheInternetnewsgroup

Talk.OriginsonApril1.（Thenewsgrouphostsalivelydebateoncreationvs.

evolution.）LaterthateveningThomaspostedafullconfessiontothehoax.

Hethoughthehadputallrumorstobed.

ButtoThomas'ssurprise,however,severalnewsgroupreadersforwardedthe

articletofriendsandposteditonothernewsgroups.

WhenThomascheckedinonthestoryafewweekslater,hewassurprisedto

learnthatithadspreadlikewildfire.Thetelltalesignsofthearticle'ssatirical

intent,suchastheApril1dateandmisspelled"AssocimatedPress1'dateline,

hadbeenreplacedordeleted.

Alabamalegislatorswerebombardedwithcallsprotestingthelaw.The

legislatorsexplainedthatthenewswasahoax.Therewasnotandneverhad

beensuchalaw.

TVandNewspaperHoaxes

BeforetheadventoftheInternet,andeventoday,traditionalmediaoutlets

suchasnewspapers,radio,andtelevision,havesometimeshoaxedtheir

audiences

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13.BetterKnownasMarkTwain

Thisremarkablemanwenttoalog-cabinschooluntilhewastwelveyearsold.

Thatwastheendofhisformaleducation.Inspiteofthis,hebecamethemost

famousliteraryfigureofhisgeneration.Hereceivedhonorarydegreesfrom

OxfordUniversityandYaleUniversity.Peoplespeakofhimasthebest

knownhumorouswriterofalltimes.Healsobroughtrealismandwestern

localcolortoAmericanfiction.Hemademillionsofdollarsbywriting

articles,shortstories,andbooks.HisrealnamewasSamuelLanghorne

Clemens,butheisbetterknownallovertheworldasMarkTwain.

MarkTwainwasborninasmallMissourivillageneartheMississippiRiver

in1835.Atthattime,AndrewJacksonwasthepresidentofthecountry.

AbrahamLincolnwasstillayoungfarmlaborerinIllinois.Thefirstrailroad

hadbeenbuiltsevenyearsbefore.TheIndustrialRevolutionwasathand.The

economiccollapseofAmericanprosperity,calledthePanicof1837,stilllay

ahead.Thiswasalsotheliteraryperiodlatercalledthe"NewEngland

Renaissance',.

MarkTwainwasnotahealthybaby.Infact,hewasnotexpectedtolire

throughthefirstwinter.Butwithhismother'stendercare,hemanagedto

survive.Hehadbeenborninatinytwo-roomcabin.Eightpeoplelived

togetherthere.Hehadfourbrothersandsisters.Aslavegirllivedwiththem

too.

Asaboy,MarkTwaincausedmuchtroubleforhisparents.Heusedtoplay

practicaljokesonallhis'friendsandneighbors.Thenatureofhisjokesoften

ledtoviolence.Hehatedtogotoschool,andheconstantlyranawayfrom

home.HealwayswentinthedirectionofthenearbyMississippi.Hewas

fascinatedbythatmightyriver.Helikedtositonthebankoftheriverfor

hoursatatimeandjustgazeatthemysteriousislandsandpassingboatsand

rafts.Hewasnearlydrownedninedifferenttimes.Helearnedmanythings

abouttheriverduringthosedays.Helearnedallaboutitshistoryandthe

unusualpeoplewhorodeupanddownit.Heneverforgotthosescenesand

thosepeople.HelatermadethempartofthehistoryofAmericainhisbooks

TomSawyerandHucklebenyFinn.

MarkTwaininheritedhisgeniusforhumorfromhismother.Obviously,he

didnotinherititfromhisfather.Heoncestatedthathehadneverseenasmile

onhisfather'sface.Ontheotherhand,hismotherhadtherareabilitytosay

humorousthingswithperfectinnocence.ThissameabilitymadeMarkTwain

allextremelyhumorouspublicspeaker.

Afterhisfather'sdeathin1847,MarkTwainleftschoolandbecameaprinter's

apprentice.Hismotherfeltthathecouldmakealivingandgetsomeeducation

inthisway.Heworkedfortheprinterasanapprenticefortwoyears.During

thattimehereceivedonlyhisboardandclothesaspay.

By1853,MarkTwainwastiredofMissouri.Hegotanurgetoseetheworld

andstartedoutwithemptypockets.HeworkedasaprinterinSt.Louis,New

York,andPhiladelphia.Then,asaresultofreadingabook,hedecidedtogo

totheupperpartoftheAmazonRiver.Heplannedtomakeafortuneby

collectingandsellingcocoa.Hisonlyproblemwasmoneyforthetrip.That

problemwassolvedinanunusualway.Hefoundafiftydollarbillonthe

sidewalkandleftforBrazilthenextday.HegotasfarastheMississippiRiver

andthenranoutofmoney.

NextMarkTwaindecidedtobecomeariver-boatpilotontheMississippi.He

followedhisnewprofessionforfifteenmonths.Hememorizedalltheturns,

shallowspots,anddangerousrocksinthe1200milesfromSt.LouistoNew

Orleans.Helearnedabouttheprideandresponsibilitiesofthepilots.He

becameanexcellentpilot.However,hislifeasapilotcametoasuddenend.

TheriverwasclosedtonavigationattheoutbreakoftheCivilWar.Thenhe

joinedtheConfederateArmy,butshortly

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14.

Whythepowerofsmalltalkshouldneverbeunderestimated?

A.Becausepeoplemaybeginalonglastingfriendshiporbusiness

association.

B.Becausepeoplemayhaveanicechat.

C.Becausepeoplemayexchangeinformation.

D.A11above.

15.

Cropinsurancecannotbeprovidedbyinsurancecompaniesbecause

doesnotworkinthiscase.

16.Brightcoveprofitsbymakinguseofmediafirms'wishto.

17.

Whenusingadrive-upATM,you*dbetterdriveclosetothemachineaswell

as.

18.

TheancientOlympicGamesoriginatedfromthatwereheldtoshow

respecttheGodsoftheGreeks.

19.

ThebookThePlayofPowerstillthepublicpolicy,althoughnotin

separatechapters.

20.

WhentheMissionstarteditwason.

三、3.ListeningComprehension。0题)

21.(28)

A.Histraininginanartschool.

B.Hismother.

C.Adesiretoearnalotofmoney.

D.ThelifeofacowhandintheoldWest.

22.(15)

A.Misspartoftheperformance.

B.Findtheirscatsinthetheater.

C.Enterthemission.

D.Lookforagasstation.

23.

[B8]

24.

[B4]

25.(31)

A.Toyshavechangedgreatlyoverthecenturies.

B.Toyshaveremainedmostlythesame.

C.Toyshavebeenspreadintoallthecountries.

0.Variationsdevelopedgraduallyduringtheyears.

26.(40)

27.听力原文：M：IwasshockedwhenIheardyou'dfinishedyourresearch

projectawholemonthago.

W：HowImanagedtodoitisstillamysterytome.

Q：Whatdoesthewomanmean?

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A.She'snotsurehowshehadfinisheditsoearly.

B.Shewasn'tabletomanagetheprojectwell.

C.She'snotsurehowtosolvethemystery.

D.Shedidn'tthinkitwasshocking.

28.(25)

A.Apetdog.

B.Thesonofthecouple.

C.Apetcat.

D.Thcman'syoungerbrother.

29.SectionB

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear3shortpassages.Attheendofeach

passage,youwillhearsomequestions.Boththepassageandthequestions

willbespokenonlyonce.Afteryouhearaquestion,youmustchoosethebest

answerfromthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD.

听力原文:Miceingeneralarenotwell-liked,butamousenamedMickey

haswontheheartsofmillions.MoviesaboutMickeyMousehavebeen

popularwithaudiencesalmosteverywhereformorethanseventyyears.

WaltDisney,whocreatedthislovablecartooncharacter,wasborninChicago

in1901.LaterhisfamilymovedtoafarmnearKansasCity,whereWalt

workedforatimeasanewsboy.Butwhathereallyenjoyedwasdrawing

pictures.

WhenWaltwentbacktoChicago,hestudiedcartooningattheChicago

AcademyofFineArts.HiseducationwasinterruptedwhenWorldWarI

beganin1914.Thoughhewasnotyetoldenoughtojointhearmy,hewanted

tohelpinsomeway.HejoinedtheRedCrossandwenttoFrance,wherehe

stayeduntilthewarwasover.

Afterthewar,DisneyreturnedtoKansasCitytoworkforacompanythat

madefairystorycartoons.Thiswasthekindofworkhelikedbest.Hemade

uphismindtofindbetterwaysofmakingthecartoonsmove,sothatthe

cartooncharacterswouldseemalive.Heboughtanoldmoviecameraand

madeafewfilmsinhisgarage.In1923hejoinedhisolderbrother,Roy,in

Hollywood,California,wheretheysoonsetuptheirowncompany.

Soundwasjuststartingtobeusedinmovies,andDisneybelievedithadgreat

possibilities.Hequicklyaddedsoundtohiscartoons.WhenhemadeMickey

Mousetalkonthemoviescreen,audiencesweredelighted.Mickeybecamea

greatsuccesswithbothyoungandold.

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A.Tellingstories.

B.Drawingpictures.

C.Deliveringnewspapers.

D.Joiningthearmy.

30.(24)

A.Hewouldbuyhimahouse.

B.HewouldbuyhisparentsahouseinUSA.

C.Hewouldsavesomemoneyinthebank.

D.Hewouldconsumeallthemoneyhehad.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3题)

31.

Asaresultoftheenclosuresofthe17thand18thcenturies,

32.

Howcanwemakeourcountrycaringandjustaccordingtothepassage?

33.WhichofthefollowingistrueabouttheWorldDigitalLibraryaccording

tothepassage?

A.AteamattheLibraryofCongressinWashingtondevelopeditswebsite

alone.

B.Librariesandinstitutionsinmostcountrieshavecontributedtothelibrary

sofar.

C.A11documentsandtheirexplanationsinthelibraryareinsevenofficial

languages.

D.YoucanlearnfromthelibraryaboutBritishpoliticsandeconomy1000

yearsago.

五、5.ErrorCorrection。题）

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六、6.ErrorCorrection。题）

37.

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参考答案

1.EnergyCrisisOneofthemainproblemstheworldisfacingtodayisthe

energycrisis.Theworldhasconsumedtoomuchenergydailyparticularlythe

westofEuropeandNorthofAmericausethelargermountofit.Fuelswhich

areusedtoproduceenergyatthemomentseemtonmoutsoon.Wearemuch

worriedaboutapossibleenergycrisisasweexperiencedtheonethatoccurred

in1970sandcausedusthegreatpanic.Manysuggestionshavebeenmadein

termsofenergyconservation.Someofthemarenotverypracticalbutothers

coldbeusedsuccessfully.Energyisknowntobeofgreatimportancetoour

existence.Wecanhardlyimaginehowwecouldsurviveinthisworldwithout

energy.Noenergymeansthatallvehiclessuchascarstrainsbusesplanesand

shipsthatneedoiltoworkwouldbeunabletonm.Theworldwouldbedark

anddead.Sotopreventtheenergycrisisitisofnecessitytoconserveall

sourcesofenergyassomepeoplesuggest.Butgreatsourcesofenergyare

neededifgovernmentswanttodevelopindustryandmakelifemore

comfortableandmostoftheenergyisconsumedinindustry.Itishowever

difficulttosuggestanypossibleenergyconservationinindustrybecause

manyofthesuggestionswouldmeanthatsomepeoplewouldlosetheirjobs.

Obviouslyconservationisnotgoingtobethegoodanswertotheenergycrisis.

Oneofthepossiblesolutionsistousetheforcesofnatureforexamplethe

windtheseatheriverandthesun.Itisstrangetothinkthatthesesourcesof

energywereusedlongagoforwindmillsandwatermillsbutthenwerealmost

forgotten.Surewecanseeagaintheseforcesasgreatpotentialformsof

energy.EnergyCrisisOneofthemainproblemstheworldisfacingtodayis

theenergycrisis.Theworldhasconsumedtoomuchenergydaily,particularly

thewestofEuropeandNorthofAmericausethelargermountofit.Fuels

whichareusedtoproduceenergyatthemomentseemtonmoutsoon.Weare

muchworriedaboutapossibleenergycrisis,asweexperiencedtheonethat

occurredin1970sandcausedusthegreatpanic.Manysuggestionshavebeen

madeintermsofenergyconservation.Someofthemarenotverypractical

butotherscoldbeusedsuccessfully.Energyisknowntobeofgreat

importancetoourexistence.Wecanhardlyimaginehowwecouldsurvivein

thisworldwithoutenergy.Noenergymeansthatallvehiclessuchascars,

trains,buses,planesandshipsthatneedoiltoworkwouldbeunabletonm.

Theworldwouldbedark,anddead.So,topreventtheenergycrisis,itisof

necessitytoconserveallsourcesofenergyassomepeoplesuggest.Butgreat

sourcesofenergyareneededifgovernmentswanttodevelopindustryand

makelifemorecomfortable,andmostoftheenergyisconsumedinindustry.

Itis,however,difficulttosuggestanypossibleenergyconservationin

industrybecausemanyofthesuggestionswouldmeanthatsomepeople

wouldlosetheirjobs.Obviously,conservationisnotgoingtobethegood

answertotheenergycrisis.Oneofthepossiblesolutionsistousetheforces

ofnature,forexamplethewind,thesea,theriverandthesun.Itisstrangeto

thinkthatthesesourcesofenergywereusedlongagoforwindmillsand

watermillsbutthenwerealmostforgotten.Surewecanseeagaintheseforces

asgreatpotentialformsofenergy.

2.ScientificAttitudeInmodemsocietyscienceandtechnologyhasbecomeso

importantthatithasattractedmoreandmorepeopletoembarkthecareerof

scientificresearch.HoweveronequestionmustbefaceddiScientificAttitude

Inmodemsocietyscienceandtechnologyhasbecomesoimportantthatithas

attractedmoreandmorepeopletoembarkthecareerofscientificresearch.

However,onequestionmustbefaceddi

3.WhatIsthePurposeofPunishmentWhatisthepurposeofpunishment?

Onepurposeisobviouslytoreformtheoffendertocorrecttheoffendersmoral

attitudesandanti-socialbehaviorandtorehabilitatehimorherwhichmeans

toassisttheoffendertoreturntonormallifeasausefulmemberofthe

community.Punishmentcanalsobeseenasawarningbecauseittellsother

peopleofwhatwillhappeniftheyaretemptedtobreakthelawandso

preventsthemfromdoingso.Howeverathirdpurposeofpunishmentlies

perhapsinsocietysdesiretoteachtheoffenderalessonwhichbasicallyand

actuallymeansrevenge.Inotherwordsdentwefeelthatawrongdoorshould

sufferforhismisdeeds.Theformofpunishmentshouldalsobeconsidered.

Ontheonehandsomebelievethatweshouldmakethepunishmentfitthe

crime.Thosewhostealfromothersshouldbedeprivedoftheirownproperty.

Forthosewhoattackothersseverepunishmentshouldbeused.Murderers

shouldbesubjecttotheprinciple"aneyeforaneyeandatoothforatooth'1

andautomaticallyreceivethedeathpenalty.Ontheotherhanditissaidthat

suchviewsareunreasonablecruelandthatweshouldshowamorehumane

attitudetopunishmentandtrytounderstandwhyapersoncommitsacrime

andhowsocietyhastoenablehimtolivearespectablelawabidinglife.What

IsthePurposeofPunishmentWhatisthepurposeofpunishment?One

purposeisobviouslytoreform,theoffender,tocorrecttheoffendersmoral

attitudesandanti-socialbehavior,andtorehabilitatehimorher,whichmeans

toassisttheoffendertoreturntonormallifeasausefulmemberofthe

community.Punishmentcanalsobeseenasawarning,becauseittellsother

peopleofwhatwillhappeniftheyaretemptedtobreakthelawandso

preventsthemfromdoingso.However,athirdpurposeofpunishmentlies,

perhaps,insocietysdesiretoteachtheoffenderalesson,whichbasicallyand

actuallymeansrevenge.Inotherwords,dentwefeelthatawrongdoorshould

sufferforhismisdeeds.Theform.ofpunishmentshouldalsobeconsidered.

Ontheonehand,somebelievethatweshouldmakethepunishmentfitthe

crime.Thosewhostealfromothersshouldbedeprivedoftheirownproperty.

Forthosewhoattackothers,severepunishmentshouldbeused.Murderers

shouldbesubjecttotheprinciple"aneyeforaneyeandatoothforatooth'1

andautomaticallyreceivethedeathpenalty.Ontheotherhand,itissaidthat

suchviewsareunreasonable,cruelandthatweshouldshowamorehumane

attitudetopunishmentandtrytounderstandwhyapersoncommitsacrime

andhowsocietyhastoenablehimtolivearespectable,lawabidinglife.

4.Self-helpTravelingofCollegeStudents[1]Whencollegestudentsplana

journeytheyusuallypreferself-helptravelingtothetourarrangedbyatravel

agency.[2]TherearesomereasonsforcollegestudentschoosingSelf-help

TravelingofCollegeStudents[1]Whencollegestudentsplanajourney,they

usuallypreferself-helptravelingtothetourarrangedbyatravelagency.[2]

Therearesomereasonsforcollegestudentschoosing解析：本文是“现象・

原因分析-自己的看法”类作文。对于大学生自助游的原因分析是本作文

的难点。范文给出厂三个方面的原因：自助游省钱；更有趣；更自由。

对于每一个原因，范文也都户以扩展，都是“主题+扩展”的结构。读者在

自己写作时，重点也是要训练自己分析问题的能力。大学生选择自助游,

还有别的原因吗?如何用英语表达出来?比如：自助游更有挑战性；通过

自助游，可以培养学生自己的策划能力；可以拥有个性化的旅游线路,

得到其他游客没有过的经历；等等。说到“我的看法]可以表示支持,

也町以表示部分支持，甚至可以表示反对。无论是什么态度和看法，都

应该给出理由——即使是对第二段提到的理由总结一下也可以。

[1]介绍现象，以oulline第1点为依据。

[2]用以引出原因的常用句型。

[3][5][7]onereason...anotherreason...thethirdreason…层次分明。

[4]对[3]加以扩展，[6]有[5]加以扩展。[4]和⑹使用不同的句子结构,

使句式富于变化。

⑺同样是prefer,本句用prefer…ratherthan,与⑴的prefer…to有同有

异。

|8]提出自助游是goodchoice的看法。

[9]对网给予支持，也是前面一段话的小结。

5.HowtoCultivateTeamSpirit?[1]Teamspiritisamustforthegrowthof

everyone.Withoutteamworknoindividualorgroup(acompanyaninstitute

orevenacountry)canachieveanything.[2]HoweverHowtoCultivateTeam

Spirit?[1]Teamspiritisamustforthegrowthofeveryone.Withoutteamwork,

noindividualorgroup(acompany,aninstituteorevenacountry)canachieve

anything.[2]However,解析：本篇作文标题是“HOWtoCultivateTeam

Spirit?”，这也就是文章的主旨，写作时应该重点围绕“如何”加1以阐述。

所以outline中的前面两点(团队精神的重要性以及许多人缺失团队精神)

虽然必不可少，但不能太费笔墨。

当然，本文的难点也正是就“团队精神的培养''提出几条建议。这需要考

生充分发挥自己的主观能动性，各显神通：样文给出两条建议：首先，

我们要从思想上认识到个人力量是有限的；其次，要在行动上积极参与

社会活动、考生在处理类似问题时，也不妨从“思想”和“行动”的角度来

思考。

Analysis

[1]文章开头，往往只需用英语复述outline中的含义即可。主题句+支

持句”的结构很清楚。

⑵对于outline提到的“缺乏团队精神”的现象做简要描述，用too

individualistictobecooperative说明其原因及表现方式。

[3]可以说是文章的主题句，以问句的形式出现。

⑷[5]只打算写两点时，注意用适当的信号词表示这两点。First…和

Furthermore可以表示两者之间的递进关系。

16]引用名言说明应该团结(也就是要合作)的道理，具有较强的说服力。

6.Thetableusesfourbroadeconomicindicatorstoshowthestandardofliving

infiveselectedcountriesin2000includingboththemostdevelopednationin

theworldandsomeofthemuchlessdevelopednations.Ascanbeseenfrom

thestatisticstheU.S.A.—oneoftherichestcountriesintheworld—hadthe

highestGNPanddailycalorieintakethelongestlifeexpectancyandthe

lowestinfantmortalityrate.Theotherdevelopingcountrieshada

considerablylowerqualityoflife.EgyptIndonesiaandBoliviaweresimilar

intheirrangeofindicatorswithEgypthavingthehighestqualityoflifeamong

thethree.HoweverEgypfsinfantmortalityratewasslightlyhigherthan

Indonesia'sat40deathsper1000comparedto31inIndonesia.Bangladesh

hadbyfarthelowestqualityoflifeinalltheFourindicators.ItsGNPwas

onlyaboutone-fortieththatoftheU.S.A.Thefigureintermsofthedaily

caloriesupplyperheadinBangladeshisthehalfofthatinU.S.A,andits

infantmortalityrateWas6timesgreater.Inconclusionitcanbeseenfrom

theeconomicindicatorsthatthefourdevelopingcountrieshavealOngway

togobeforereachingthe