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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Inabustlingcity,therelivedayoungwomannamedLily.Lilywasshyandoftenfounditdifficulttomakefriends.Shewouldwalkthroughthecrowdedstreets,feelingasenseofisolationamidsttheseaofpeople.Herdayswerespentmostlyalone,readingbooksinquietcornersofcafesortakinglongwalksinthepark.Sheyearnedforcompanionshipbuthershynessheldherback.Oneday,asshewasbrowsingthroughabookstore,shecameacrossanadvertisementforasocialeventatalocalcommunitycenter.Theideaofattendingsuchaneventfilledherwithtrepidation.Shedebatedwithherselfforhours,imaginingallthepossiblescenariosthatcouldgowrong.Butasmallvoiceinsideherurgedhertotakeachanceandbreakfreefromhershell.Finally,aftermuchinternalstruggle,shedecidedtoovercomehershynessandattend.Asshewalkedintotheroomfilledwithpeople,herheartpoundedwithnervousness.Thenoiseandchatterseemedoverwhelming.Shefoundaquietcornerandsatthere,observingothers.Herhandswerefidgety,andsheconstantlyquestionedherdecisiontobethere.Suddenly,afriendlywomannamedSarahapproachedherandstartedaconversation.LilywashesitantatfirstbutsoonfoundherselfengagedinapleasantchatwithSarah.Theydiscoveredtheyhadcommoninterestsinbooksandmusic.Astheeveningprogressed,Lilybegantorelaxandenjoythecompany.Sherealizedthatmaybesteppingoutofhercomfortzonewasn’tsobadafterall.TheeventendedwithLilyfeelingaglimmerofhopeandanewfoundsenseofcourage.Shehadtakenasmallsteptowardsbreakingfreefromherisolation.Littledidsheknowthatthisencounterwouldchangeherlifeinwaysshecouldn’tyetimagine.注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;(2)请按如下格式作答。Aftertheevent,LilyandSarahexchangedcontactinformation._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Astimepassed,Lily’slifechangedsignificantlybecauseofthisnewfriendship._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:在繁华都市中,害羞的莉莉常感孤独,难以交友。她偶然看到社区中心社交活动广告,经内心挣扎后参加。活动中,友善的莎拉与她交谈,她们发现彼此在书籍和音乐上有共同兴趣,莉莉逐渐放松并享受陪伴,活动结束时莉莉有了希望与勇气,这次相遇将以意想不到的方式改变她的生活。伏笔以及回应:伏笔1:莉莉性格害羞且孤独,与后文她克服困难参加活动形成对比,续写中她会因友谊而逐渐改变性格。伏笔2:看到活动广告时内心的挣扎,预示着参加活动对她来说是重大突破,续写中她会珍视因这次突破而获得的友谊。伏笔3:活动中莉莉坐在角落观察他人且手不安,体现她的紧张,与后文放松享受形成转折,续写中她会在友谊里变得更自信从容。伏笔4:莎拉主动搭话且交流愉快,为她们后续友谊发展做铺垫,续写中会有更多深入交流与相互影响。伏笔5:活动结束莉莉有新希望与勇气,暗示友谊将推动她生活产生积极变化,续写中会具体展现生活变化情况。续写要点:第一段:情感线:兴奋与期待,对新友谊充满憧憬,又有一丝不安,担心友谊能否长久维系。故事线:莉莉与莎拉互留联系方式后,当晚就迫不及待地给莎拉发消息,分享活动后的感受。她们约定周末一起去一家小众书店,寻找一本她们都感兴趣但难寻的旧书。莉莉在等待周末的过程中,不断思考与莎拉的对话,满心欢喜又有些忐忑。第二段:情感线:感激与幸福,因友谊带来积极改变而感恩,变得开朗乐观,对未来充满信心。故事线:莉莉在莎拉的鼓励下参加了读书分享会,起初紧张,但在莎拉陪伴下逐渐放松并积极发言。她们还一起学习乐器,莉莉在莎拉帮助下克服困难,技艺渐长。莉莉开始主动与他人交流,社交圈不断扩大,不再是那个孤独害羞的女孩。主旨升华句:“Asingleactofsteppingoutofone'sshellcanopenthedoortoaworldoffriendshipandself-discovery.”(一次走出自我保护壳的行动可以打开友谊和自我发现的大门。)“Truefriendshiphasthepowertotransformtheshyestofsoulsintoconfidentindividuals,readytoembracelife'sadventures.”(真正的友谊有力量将最害羞的灵魂转变为自信的个体,准备好迎接生活的冒险。)“Inthejourneyoflife,achanceencounterandtheresultingfriendshipcanbetheguidinglightthatleadsusoutofthedarknessofisolation.”(在人生旅途中,一次偶然相遇和由此产生的友谊可以成为引导我们走出孤独黑暗的明灯。)“Thecouragetoovercomeshynessandconnectwithothersisthefirststeptowardsamorefulfillingandenrichedlife.”(克服害羞并与他人建立联系的勇气是走向更充实和丰富生活的第一步。)“Friendship,bornfromamomentofbravery,canrewritethenarrativeofourlives,paintingitwithcolorsofjoyandgrowth.”(源于勇敢瞬间的友谊可以改写我们生活的故事,用喜悦和成长的色彩描绘它。)写作示范一:Aftertheevent,LilyandSarahexchangedcontactinformation.Thatverynight,LilysentatexttoSarah,expressinghowmuchshehadenjoyedtheirconversation.Sarahrepliedpromptly,andtheymadeplanstovisitaquaintbookstoreontheweekend.Lilywasoverjoyed.Shespentthenextfewdaysinastateofeageranticipation,constantlythinkingaboutthetimetheywouldspendtogether.Astimepassed,Lily’slifechangedsignificantlybecauseofthisnewfriendship.SarahencouragedLilytojoinabookclub.Atfirst,Lilywasextremelynervous,butwithSarahbyherside,shegraduallybecamemoreconfidentandstartedsharingherthoughtsandinsights.Theyalsotookuppaintingclassestogether.Lilydiscoveredahiddentalentwithinherself.ThankstoSarah,Lilywasnolongertheshy,isolatedgirl.Shehadbecomemoresociableandwaslivingamuchhappierandfulfillinglife.写作示范二:Aftertheevent,LilyandSarahexchangedcontactinformation.Lilycouldn'twaittoreachout.Theytalkedonthephonethateveninganddecidedtogotoalocalmusicconcertthefollowingweek.Lilywasbothexcitedandabitnervous.Shecarefullychoseanoutfitandpreparedherselfmentally.Astimepassed,Lily’slifechangedsignificantlybecauseofthisnewfriendship.SarahintroducedLilytohergroupoffriends.Lilywasinitiallyhesitantbutwaswelcomedwithopenarms.Shestartedgoingongrouphikesandpicnics.Lilyalsobecamemoreassertiveinexpressingheropinions.SheevenvolunteeredtoorganizeacharityeventwithSarah.Hershynesshadbeenreplacedwithanewfoundconfidenceandazestforlifethatshehadneverexperiencedbefore.【答案】Aftertheevent,LilyandSarahexchangedcontactinformation.Theypromisedtomeetupagainsoon,andLilyfeltasenseofexcitementshehadn'texperiencedinalongtime.Overthenextfewweeks,theymetregularly,exploringnewcafes,attendingbookreadings,andeventryingoutamusicconcerttogether
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