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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Wehadaniceandlaid-backSaturday.Wetookthekidstotheparkhavingagreattimeduringthedayandweorderedpizzafordinner.AfterIgotthekidsintobed,Iwenttothekitchentogetadrinkformyself.ThatwaswhenIunintendedlylookedoutofthewindowtoourneighbor’shouseacrossthestreet.Tomysurprise,itwascompletelydark.Ourneighborwasanolderwoman,Mrs.Biddle.Shewasthekindofwomanwhokepttoherself.Shelivedinabighousebyherselfandrarelyleftexcepttogogroceryshopping.Hersonwouldvisitfromtimetotime.AlthoughIhadattemptedtogetclosetoher,allmyeffortstobeneighborlytowardherfailed.Itriedtostrikeupconversations,butshewouldcutmeshort.Oftentimes,ifshesawmewalkingtoherhouse,itwasobviousfromtheexpressiononherfacethatshedidn’twanttobebothered.Shewouldhurryinsidetoavoidme.Nowlookingatherhouse,Ithoughtitwasoddthatallherlightswereoff.Mrs.Biddleneverwentoutatnight.Asamatteroffact,shewasanightowllikeme,withherlightsusuallyburningwaypastmidnight.That’swhenithitme:Ihadtogoovertoherhouse.Iknewsomethingmustbewrong.Concernedabouthersafety,Iwalkedacrossthestreetandrangherdoorbellseveraltimes.Therewasnoanswer.Withagrowingdesire,Itriedpeekingthroughherwindow,buthercurtainsweredrawn.IwentbacktoherdoortoringthebellagainwhenIheardsomethingstirinside.“Mrs.Biddle?”Icalledoutloudly.ThenIheardasmallvoice.Icouldn’tmakeoutwhatshewassaying,butIknewitwasMrs.Biddle,andsheneededhelp.注意：1．续写词数应为150个左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Runningbacktomyhouse,Itoldmyhusband,Harold,whathadhappened.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thenextday,wewenttothehospitaltovisitMrs.Biddleagain.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意在一个闲适的周六夜晚，“我”发现对面邻居家Mrs.Biddle的房子漆黑一片，这很不寻常，因为她通常是个夜猫子且很少外出。“我”回想起之前试图与她友好相处却屡次被拒的经历，但此刻还是出于担忧前去查看。敲门无人应答后听到屋内有动静，确定她需要帮助，故事在此处续写，讲述“我”和丈夫如何救助Mrs.Biddle以及这一事件对彼此关系产生的积极影响，展现邻里之间从陌生隔阂到温暖互助的转变过程，突出关爱与善意能打破隔阂的主题。故事分析伏笔与回应：伏笔：Mrs.Biddle性格孤僻，很少与邻居交流，对“我”的友好举动很冷淡。

回应：“我”在发现她房子异常黑暗后，依然不顾之前的冷漠对待，选择去关心她，为后续帮助她的情节做铺垫，体现“我”的善良和热心，同时也为Mrs.Biddle态度的转变埋下伏笔。伏笔：Mrs.Biddle通常是个夜猫子，夜晚灯光常亮至午夜以后。

回应：当看到她家漆黑一片时，“我”敏锐地察觉到异常，这成为“我”决定去查看情况的关键原因，推动了故事的发展，使情节发展合情合理。伏笔：“我”之前多次尝试与Mrs.Biddle亲近却失败，表明两人关系疏远。

回应：这次意外事件打破了隔阂，让“我”有机会真正走进她的生活，帮助她，进而改变了彼此的关系，从陌生走向友好，突出了善良和意外事件对人际关系的影响。伏笔：Mrs.Biddle独自居住在大房子里，且儿子只是偶尔来看望。

回应：这解释了她为何容易陷入无助的境地，也为“我”作为邻居的关心和帮助提供了合理性，同时暗示她可能内心孤独，为后文她态度的转变和与“我”建立友谊做了铺垫。伏笔：“我”看到Mrs.Biddle家异常黑暗后内心的担忧，以及听到屋内微弱声音的细节描写。

回应：促使“我”更加坚定地要帮助她，引发后续叫丈夫、叫救护车等一系列救助行为，强化了故事的紧张感和情感张力，突出了邻里之间的关爱之情。续写要点：第一段：Runningbacktomyhouse,Itoldmyhusband,Harold,whathadhappened.Haroldimmediatelycalled911andwerushedbacktoMrs.Biddle'shouse.Whilewaitingfortheambulance,wemanagedtogetintouchwithherson.Whentheparamedicsarrived,theycarefullycarriedMrs.Biddleoutonastretcher.Weaccompaniedhertothehospitalandstayedwithheruntilhersonarrived.Shewasdiagnosedwithabrokenhipandwasinneedofsurgery.第二段：Thenextday,wewenttothehospitaltovisitMrs.Biddleagain.Shewasinbetterspiritsandwasverygratefultous.Sheapologizedforherpreviouscoldnessandexplainedthatshehadbeengrievingthelossofherhusbandandhadshutherselfofffromtheworld.Fromthatdayon,Mrs.Biddlebecameadifferentperson.Shewasmoreopenandfriendly,andwedevelopedaclosefriendship.Shewouldofteninviteusoverforteaandsharestoriesaboutherlife.Ouractofkindnesshadnotonlysavedherbutalsotransformedbothourlives.情感线：起初，“我”对Mrs.Biddle因她的冷漠而有些失落，但仍保持友好的初心；发现她可能遇到危险时，“我”充满担忧并果断采取行动；救助过程中焦急等待；在医院看到她好转后欣慰；之后Mrs.Biddle态度转变，我们建立友谊，彼此温暖，情感从陌生隔阂到关心、欣慰再到友好亲密，体现了善良和帮助能融化人心的主题。故事线：周六晚上，“我”发现Mrs.Biddle家漆黑异常。回忆起之前与Mrs.Biddle交流不畅，关系生疏。“我”前往查看，敲门无人应后听到屋内声音，确定她需要帮助。“我”回家告知丈夫，丈夫打电话叫救护车，联系其儿子。救护车送Mrs.Biddle去医院，“我”和丈夫陪同。续写部分，第二天去医院看望，关系改善。主旨升华句：Asingleactofkindnesscanbreakdownthewallsofindifferenceandbuildbridgesoffriendship.（一个小小的善举可以打破冷漠的高墙，架起友谊的桥梁。）Inthefaceoflonelinessandisolation,ahelpinghandisthewarmestlightthatcanpenetratethedarkestheart.（在孤独和孤立面前，一只援助之手是能穿透最黑暗心灵的最温暖的光。）Sometimes,thepeoplewethinkarethehardesttoreacharetheoneswhoneedourkindnessthemost.（有时，我们认为最难接近的人恰恰是最需要我们善意的人。）Trueneighborlinessliesnotinhowclosewelive,butinhowquicklywerespondtoeachother'sneeds.（真正的邻里关系不在于住得有多近，而在于我们对彼此需求的回应有多快。）Thepowerofkindnessislimitless;ithastheabilitytotransformlivesandcreatebondsthatlastalifetime.（善良的力量是无限的；它有能力改变生活，建立起持续一生的纽带。）写作示范第一篇

Runningbacktomyhouse,Itoldmyhusband,Harold,whathadhappened.Haroldsprangintoaction,dialing911withoutamoment'sdelay.WedashedbackacrossthestreettoMrs.Biddle'shouse,ourheartspoundingwithworry.Whilewaitingfortheambulance,ItriedtocomfortMrs.Biddlethroughthedoor,assuringherthathelpwasontheway.Whentheparamedicsfinallyarrived,theyskillfullyenteredthehouseandfoundherlyingonthefloor,weakandinpain.Wefollowedtheambulancetothehospital,whereshewasrushedintotheemergencyroom.Hersonwasinformedandwasonhisway.Thenextday,wewenttothehospitaltovisitMrs.Biddleagain.Shegreeteduswithawarmsmileandtearsinhereyes.Sheexpressedherdeepgratitudeforourkindnessandapologizedforherpastaloofness.Sherevealedthatshehadbeenstrugglingwithgriefandlonelinesssinceherhusband'spassing.Thisincidenthadmadeherrealizetheimportanceofhumanconnection.Fromthenon,ourrelationshipblossomed.Wewouldcheckonherregularly,bringhermeals,andshewouldsharewithusthewisdomofheryears.Ouractofreachingouthadnotonlysavedherlifebutalsoenrichedourown,teachingusthatkindnessisalanguagethatcanhealeventhemostwoundedhearts.第二篇

Runningbacktomyhouse,Itoldmyhusband,Harold,whathadhappened.Haroldimmediatelygrabbedhisphoneandcalledforemergencyassistance.WehurriedbacktoMrs.Biddle's,ourmindsfilledwithconcern.Aswewaited,wetriedtofindawaytogetinside,fearingtheworst.Whentheambulancearrived,theparamedicsquicklyassessedthesituationandcarefullytransportedMrs.Biddletothehospital.Weaccompaniedher,holdingherhandandofferingwordsofcomfort.Thenextday,wewenttothehospitaltovisitMrs.Biddleagain.Shelookedmuchbetterandwasvisiblytouchedbyourpresence.Sheopeneduptousaboutherlife,herlosses,andherfears.Welistenedattentively,andinthatmoment,abondwasformed.Shethankedusagainandagain,promisingtobeabetterneighbor.Inthedaysthatfollowed,Mrs.Biddlebecameanimportantpartofourlives.Welearnedthatkindnesshasthepowertobreakdownbarriersandcreatebeautifulrelationships.Itwasalessonwewouldcherishforever,knowingthatasimpleactofcaringcanchangelivesinthemostprofoundways.

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Runningbacktomyhouse,Itoldmyhusband,Harold,whathadhappened.Wecalled911andwenttoMrs.Biddle’housewaitinganxiouslyoutside