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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。MynameisFauna,butMomandDadsometimescallmeMagpie,sinceItalkalot.Theycallme“animalmagnet,”too;becauseanimalslikeme.Idon’tmindatallbecauseIlikethem,too.Infact,whatIreally,reallywantisapetofmyown.Mydadhasapetfish,andIlikeitalot

—butIwouldstilllikeapetthat’sallmine.“Please?Iaskedmyparents.“Prettyplease,withcherriesandchocolateandwhippedcreamontop?”“We’llsee!”“I’llwalkitandfeeditandbrushit....well,unlessithasscalesorsomething.ThenI’llpolishthemrealnice.”“We’llsee.”Finally,though,“we’llsee”wasupgradedto“soon.”“Let’sdosomeresearch,”saidDad,“andseewhatkindofpetisbestforyou.”“Andkeepyoureyespeeled,”saidMom.“Youneverknowwhenanopportunitywillcomealong.”Onedidcomealong.IwasonmywayhomefromschoolwhenIsawaunicorn(独角兽)standinginbackofBakerTrembly’sshop.Hewasnibblingstalebiscuitsoutofthetrashcan.Ithoughthemightbeawildunicorncomeintotown,buthetrotted(小跑)rightuptomewhenIheldouttheappleIhadinmybackpack,leftoverfromlunch.“Itfollowedmehome!”Itoldmyparents,afterImanagedtoleadtheunicorntoourfrontgate.“CanIkeepit?”“Ihopeyouwerecareful,”saidmydadwithafrown.“Unicornscanbedangerous.”“Notthisone!He’sverysweet.Andhe’sjustwhatIwant!.Icankeephim.inthegarden.”“Hedoeslooksweet,”saidmymom.“Let’scheckhistags(标牌).”Tags?Ihadn’tevennoticedhisthinsilvercollar,I’dbeensoexcited.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:Fauna非常想要一个属于自己的宠物,父母说要做些研究来确定哪种宠物适合她,还让她留意机会。一天Fauna在放学回家路上看到一只独角兽在吃BakerTrembly商店后面垃圾桶里的饼干,她用午餐剩下的苹果把独角兽引到了自家前门,请求父母让她养这只独角兽,父母发现独角兽戴着有电话号码的银项圈,故事由此续写。5处伏笔及续写中的回应伏笔:Fauna一直渴望有一个属于自己的宠物,这为她发现独角兽后极力想留下它做铺垫。回应:当得知独角兽可能有主人时,Fauna内心从期待转为失落,但最终在与独角兽主人的交流中学会了理解和成全,体现了她在追求宠物过程中的成长,也呼应了她对宠物的渴望,使情感线更加丰富。伏笔:父母提到要做研究确定适合Fauna的宠物,暗示宠物的选择并非随意,需要考虑多方面因素,这为独角兽有主人且需要归还这一情节做了伏笔。回应:独角兽有主人这一事实符合父母所说的要慎重选择宠物的理念,同时也教育了Fauna不是所有喜欢的动物都能成为自己的宠物,推动了故事的发展和主题的深化。伏笔:Fauna用苹果轻易地将独角兽引到自家前门,显示出独角兽对食物的需求和它可能不太怕人的性格,这为后面独角兽与主人的关系以及它走失的原因做了暗示。回应:独角兽主人Sari提到独角兽是因为被食物吸引而走失,与前文Fauna用苹果引它的情节相呼应,使故事逻辑更加连贯,也解释了独角兽出现在这里的原因,丰富了故事细节。伏笔:Fauna一开始没有注意到独角兽的银项圈,体现了她的兴奋和粗心,同时也为后续发现项圈上的电话号码以及联系主人的情节设置了悬念。回应:发现电话号码后联系主人,推动了故事向归还独角兽的方向发展,解开了之前独角兽身份不明的悬念,使故事节奏紧凑,情节跌宕起伏。伏笔:父母对独角兽的态度比较谨慎,担心其危险性,这为后面他们支持Fauna归还独角兽做了铺垫,也体现了父母在教育孩子过程中的理性和责任感。回应:父母在整个过程中引导Fauna做出正确的选择,帮助她理解宠物所有权和责任的重要性,使故事不仅是关于宠物的故事,更是Fauna成长的故事,深化了文章的内涵和教育意义。续写要点情感线:第一段:Fauna看到项圈上的电话号码时,心情瞬间变得复杂,既有些失望,因为可能无法留下独角兽,又有些好奇和担忧,担心独角兽的主人会责怪它乱跑。她怀着忐忑的心情拨打了电话,等待主人的到来,此时她对独角兽的喜爱和不舍愈发强烈,但也知道应该做正确的事。第二段:当Sari说她和独角兽从未分开过时,Fauna看到了他们之间深厚的感情,心中的不舍逐渐转化为理解和成全。虽然难过,但她也为独角兽能回到主人身边而感到欣慰,感受到了一种超越个人喜爱的大爱,完成了从单纯的渴望拥有到学会放手和祝福的情感升华。故事线:第一段:Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.Itookadeepbreathanddialedthenumberwithtremblinghands.AwomannamedSariansweredthephone.ItoldherIhadfoundherunicorn.Shesoundedveryrelievedandsaidshewouldcomerightover.Whilewewaited,Istrokedtheunicorn'smaneandwhisperedtoitthatitsownerwascoming.Theunicornseemedtounderstandandnuzzledmyhand.WhenSariarrived,sheranuptotheunicornandhuggedittightly.第二段:“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”Shethankedmefortakingcareofhimandtoldmehowhehadgottenlostwhilefollowingthesmelloffood.IfeltapangofsadnessknowingIcouldn'tkeephim,butseeingthejoyonSari'sfacemademerealizeitwastherightthingtodo.AsSariledtheunicornaway,Iwavedgoodbyewithasmile,eventhoughthereweretearsinmyeyes.Iknewthatoneday,Iwouldfindtheperfectpetforme,anditwouldbemineintherightway.主旨升华句Trueloveisnotaboutpossession,butabouttheabilitytoletgowhenit'snecessary,allowingtheoneswecareabouttobewheretheytrulybelong.(真正的爱不是占有,而是在必要时放手,让我们所关心的人回到他们真正属于的地方。)Sometimes,themostdifficultchoiceswemake,likegivingupsomethingwedesire,aretheonesthatteachusthegreatestlessonsaboutresponsibilityandkindness.(有时,我们做出的最艰难的选择,比如放弃我们渴望的东西,正是那些教会我们关于责任和善良的最重要课程的选择。)Inthejourneyoflife,wemayencountermanytemptations,butitisourabilitytomaketherightdecisions,evenwhenithurts,thatdefinesourcharacterandshapesourfuture.(在人生的旅途中,我们可能会遇到许多诱惑,但正是我们即使在痛苦时也能做出正确决定的能力,定义了我们的性格并塑造了我们的未来。)Thepathtomaturityisoftenpavedwiththebittersweetexperiencesoflettinggo.Itisthroughtheseactsthatwelearntocherishthethingsthataretrulymeantforusandgrowintobetterversionsofourselves.(通往成熟的道路往往是由放手的苦乐参半的经历铺就的。正是通过这些行为,我们学会珍惜真正属于我们的东西,并成长为更好的自己。)Loveandkindnessextendbeyondourowndesires.Whenwechoosetodowhat'srightforothers,wenotonlybrightentheirlivesbutalsodiscoverthebeautyandstrengthwithinourselves.(爱和善良超越了我们自己的欲望。当我们选择为他人做正确的事情时,我们不仅照亮了他们的生活,也发现了自己内心的美丽和力量。)写作示范第一篇Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.MyheartsankalittleasIrealizedtheunicornprobablyhadanowner.Ishowedthetagtomyparents,andwedecidedtocallthenumber.Awomananswered,andshesoundedfrantic.Shesaidherunicornhadgonemissingandshehadbeensearchingeverywhere.Itoldherwherewewere,andshesaidshe'dberightthere.Whilewewaited,Igavetheunicornsomemoreapplesandtalkedtoitsoftly.Itolditthatitsownerwascomingandthatithadbeenverybrave.Whenthewomanarrived,sherushedovertotheunicornandhuggedittightly.“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”Shethankedmeprofuselyfortakingcareofhimandtoldmehowhehadmanagedtoslipaway.IfeltabitsadthatIcouldn'tkeeptheunicorn,butseeingthehappinessonSari'sfacemademefeelbetter.MyparentsputtheirarmsaroundmeandtoldmethateventhoughIcouldn'thavethisunicorn,therewouldbeotheropportunitiesformetogetapet.Inodded,realizingthatsometimes,doingtherightthingmeanslettinggoofwhatwewant.AndIknewthatwhenthetimewasright,Iwouldfindtheperfectpetthatwasmeantforme.第二篇Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.Iwashesitanttocallatfirst,fearingthatIwouldlosethechancetokeeptheunicorn.Butmyparentsencouragedmetodotherightthing.Idialedthenumber,andaladynamedSaripickedup.ShewasoverjoyedtohearthatIhadfoundherunicorn.Shetoldmethathewasveryprecioustoherandthatshehadbeenworriedsick.Aswewaitedforhertoarrive,Isatwiththeunicorn,pettingitgently.WhenSarishowedup,shehadtearsinhereyes.“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”Sheexplainedhowtheunicornhadgottenoutbyaccident.Icouldseethestrongbondbetweenthem.Althoughitwashard,IknewIhadtogivetheunicornback.Sarithankedmeagainandagain,andsheevengavemeasmallunicorncharmasatokenofhergratitude.Astheywalkedaway,Iwatchedwithamixtureofsadnessandhappiness.Ilearnedthatsometimes,thethingswelovethemostaren'talwaysmean

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