读后续写+200+米赛道之殇与悟：母亲微笑的真谛探寻+讲义 高二10月月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。TheSmileIfthereisanythingthatIcouldrememberdistinctlytilldateinmylife,itismymother’ssmile.Itwashersmilethatmademegetreadytoschool,gowithconfidencetofaceallmychallengesatschoolandbesuccessful.Hersmiledidallthemagic.Iwasingrade7andwasthetopperofmyclassinacademics,sports,speechcontests,singing,music….FriendssurroundedmeeverywhereandIwasthestaroftheschool.Everyonewhometmyparentsalwayshadthesewordstosay,“Youhaveaverytalentedchild.Youareverylucky.”IwasfilledwithhappinessandprideandIknewthatIhadmademyparentsveryhappy.MyambitionsgrewandIwantedtohavenothingbutthebestinmylife.Thingswerefineuntiloneday.IcamebackhomewithanawardIwonintheelocution(朗诵)competitionatschool.Filledwithpride,Igaveittomymotherandwaitedforherbeautifulsmile.Shesmiledandcongratulatedmeandasked,“Didyourfriendsparticipateinthecompetition?Whatweretheirpositionsinthecompetition?”Iwasalittleannoyed.Infact,Idonotevenrememberwhowassecondandthirdorwhoparticipated.ItoldherthatIwasverytiredanddidnotremembereverything.Istartednoticingachangeinmymother,especiallyhersmile.ItwasnotthesamelovelysmilethatIusedtosee.Oneday,whenIwasgettingreadyforthesportscompetition,sheaskedwhyIwasnotpracticingwithmyfriends.ItoldherthatIwasmeanttobethefirstandIhadnobusinesstobewithfriendswhoarenotambitious.MymotherpatientlytoldmethatIhaveforgottentoenjoythesimplelittlethingsinlifelikelaughingandsmiling,spendingtimeandhelpingmyfriendsintheirdifficulty,beingtheirsupport.Shesaidthatahumanbeingbecomesagoodpersonnotwiththeirsuccessbutwiththelovethathe/sheshareswithoneanotherandbyachievingtogether.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Iwasonthetrackfieldthenextdayatschool,readytorunthe200mrunningrace._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Irealizedtheywerecheeringnotforthewinnersbutformyfriendandme._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：作者在学业、体育、演讲比赛等多方面都表现出色，是学校的明星，习惯了母亲因自己的成功而露出的微笑。但一次在赢得朗诵比赛后，母亲的反应让作者开始察觉到母亲微笑的变化。母亲指出作者只追求成功，忘记了享受生活中的小美好、帮助朋友等，这让作者有所思考。伏笔与回应：伏笔：母亲在作者赢得朗诵比赛后询问朋友参赛情况，与之前单纯为作者成功而笑不同。回应：在后续比赛中作者开始关注朋友，意识到友谊的重要性，这是对母亲提醒的回应。伏笔：母亲提到作者忘记享受生活小美好和帮助朋友等。回应：比赛中作者帮助摔倒的朋友一起完成比赛，体现了对母亲话语的领悟。伏笔：作者习惯以自我为中心追求成功，忽略朋友。回应：在赛场上看到朋友摔倒后毫不犹豫地返回相助，改变了只看重输赢的心态。伏笔：作者之前认为自己只要追求最好，无需与不够有野心的朋友相处。回应：比赛后与朋友开心交流，理解了友谊比输赢更重要，不再轻视朋友。伏笔：母亲说人因分享爱和共同成就才成为好人。回应：作者和朋友一起完成比赛后感受到大家的欢呼，明白了共同成长和友谊的珍贵，呼应母亲的教诲。续写要点：情感线：从比赛前的自信满满到看到朋友摔倒时的担忧与坚定，再到完成比赛后的释然与喜悦，最后领悟到友谊和共同成长的珍贵而感到温暖。故事线：在200米跑步比赛中，作者看到朋友摔倒，放弃争胜返回扶起朋友，两人一起跑向终点，得到同学们的欢呼，之后作者与朋友开心交流，深刻理解了母亲话语的含义。主旨升华句：Truesuccessliesnotinwinningalone,butinsharingthejourneywithfriends.（真正的成功不在于独自获胜，而在于与朋友共享旅程。）Thebeautyoflifeisnotaboutreachingthefinishlinefirst,butaboutholdinghandsandcrossingittogether.（生活之美不在于率先冲过终点线，而在于携手共同跨越。）Friendshipisthemostpreciousmedalthatshinesbrighterthananyvictory.（友谊是最珍贵的奖牌，比任何胜利都更加闪耀。）It'snottheindividualachievementthatdefinesus,buttheloveandsupportweofferandreceiveinfriendship.（定义我们的不是个人成就，而是在友谊中给予和接受的爱与支持。）Intheraceoflife,thegreatesttriumphisthebondoffriendshipwebuildandcherish.（在人生的赛跑中，最大的胜利是我们建立并珍惜的友谊纽带。）写作示范一：Iwasonthetrackfieldthenextdayatschool,readytorunthe200mrunningrace.Asthestartinggunfired,Idashedforwardwithfullspeed.Buthalfwaythroughtherace,Iheardascream.Iturnedmyheadandsawmyfriendhadfallenheavilyonthetrack.Withouthesitation,Istoppedandrushedbacktohim.Hewasinpain,hisfacetwisted.Ihelpedhimupandsaid,“Let'sfinishthistogethe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