2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+马克助力失明妻子走出黑暗+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习马克助力失明妻子走出黑暗1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Duetoamedicalmisdiagnosis(误诊),Susan,34,hadbeenleftsightless,andwassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarkness,anger,frustrationandself-pity.Andallshehadtodependonwasherhusband,Mark.MarkwasanofficerandhelovedSusanwithallhisheart.Whenshefirstlosthersight,hewatchedhersinkintodespair.Hewasdeterminedtohelphiswifegainconfidencetobecomeindependentandreturntohernormallifeagain.Buthowwouldhedothat?4续写原文Susanusedtotakethebustowork,butnowshewastoofrightenedtofacethewholeworld.MarkdecidedtoconvinceSusantotakethebusagain.Perhapsonedayshecouldenjoyacitytourallbyherselforbuysomedailygroceryinthesupermarketthreestopsaway.Butshewasstillsomoodyandsensitive.Howwouldshereact?Oneday,Marksummoneduphiscourageandsaid“Honey,lifeshallmoveon,let’strytakingthebusasthefirststep,OK?”Justashepredicted,Susanwasscaredattheideaoftakingthebusonherown.“I’mblind!”sherespondedbitterly.“HowamIsupposedtoknowwhereIamgoing?Ifeellikeyou’reabandoningme.”5续写原文Mark’sheartbrokehearingthesewords,butheknewwhathadtobedone.HepromisedSusanhewouldridethebuswithheruntilshegotthehangofit.Andthatwasexactlywhathappened.Forawholeweek,MarkaccompaniedSusanonthebus.Hetaughtherhowtorelyonherothersenses,specificallyherhearing,todeterminewhereshewasandhowtoadapttohernewenvironment.Hehelpedherbefriendthebusdriverswhocouldwatchoutforher,andsaveheraseat.Finally,Susandecidedtotrythetriponherown.Markencouragedheranddecidedtocontinuewatchingoutforheruntilshegotoffthebus,onlyinsecret.6段首句Paragraph1：Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop.Paragraph2：Sheaskedthedriver,“WhydoyousaythatI’mverylucky?”7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了34岁的苏珊因医疗误诊失明后，陷入了黑暗、愤怒、沮丧和自怜的情绪中，生活完全依赖丈夫马克。马克作为一名军官，深爱着苏珊，决心帮助她重获自信与独立，回归正常生活。他首先鼓励苏珊重新乘坐曾经熟悉的公交车，尽管苏珊起初因失明而恐惧、抵触，觉得马克在抛弃她，但马克坚持陪伴苏珊坐了一周的公交，教她利用听觉等其他感官来适应新环境，还帮她与司机交好。最终，苏珊决定独自尝试乘坐公交，马克则在暗中守护，故事展现了这对夫妻在困境中的爱与勇气，以及苏珊努力走向独立的过程。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop.借助着盲杖，苏珊一步一步缓缓地朝着公交站挪去。每走一步，她都先用盲杖小心翼翼地探探前方的路，确保没有障碍物。清晨的阳光洒在身上，带来一丝暖意，微风轻轻拂过她的脸颊，可她却无心感受这美好。过往行人匆匆的脚步声和交谈声传入她的耳中，让她愈发紧张。她紧紧握着盲杖，指节都因为用力而泛白，心中既害怕又期待。这是她第一次独自出门乘坐公交，对未知的恐惧让她的心跳急剧加速，但想起丈夫马克的鼓励和自己想要独立的决心，她深吸一口气，努力让自己镇定下来，继续朝着公交站的方向前进。终于，她听到了公交站那熟悉的嘈杂声，知道自己快到了，脚步也稍微加快了一些。11续写思路分析Para2：Sheaskedthedriver,“WhydoyousaythatI’mverylucky?”苏珊上了车，找了个座位坐下后，便听到司机笑着对她说：“姑娘，你可真是个幸运的人。”苏珊不禁疑惑，自己失明后生活充满了艰辛，怎么会是幸运的呢？于是，她忍不住问道：“为什么您说我很幸运呢？”司机从后视镜里看了看她，眼神中透露出一丝温暖，说道：“我每天在这路上开车，见过太多行色匆匆、满脸疲惫的人，他们虽然看得见，却好像对周围的一切都视而不见，被生活的压力压得喘不过气。而你，虽然看不见，但你却比他们更懂得感受生活。你能听到鸟儿的歌声，能闻到花儿的芬芳，而且……”司机停顿了一下，接着说，“你还有一个默默守护着你的爱人。这几天，有个男士总是悄悄地跟在你后面，眼神里满是关切，我猜那一定是你丈夫吧。有这样一个人在身边，你难道不幸运吗？”苏珊听后，心中涌起一股暖流，眼眶也微微湿润了，原来自己一直被爱包围着，也许自己真的是幸运的。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop.Themorningairwascrisp,carryingwithitthefaintscentofbloomingflowersfromanearbygarden,whichshecouldfaintlydetect.Asshestoodthere,thetipofhersticktappinggentlyontheground,shelistenedintentlytothesoundsaroundher.Thehustleandbustleofpeoplegoingabouttheirdailylivesfilledherears-hurriedfootsteps,snippetsofconversations,andtheoccasionalhonkingofacarinthedistance.Shetookadeepbreath,tryingtocalmthebutterfliesinherstomach.Herheartpoundedwithamixtureofnervousnessandanticipation.Thiswasherfirsttimeattemptingthisjourneyalone,andeverylittlenoiseseemedamplified.ButshewasdeterminedtoprovetoherselfandtoMarkthatshecoulddothis.Shestraightenedherback,adjustedhergriponthestick,andwaitedpatientlyforthebustoarrive,hersensesonhighalertforanysignofitsapproach.14范文呈现Sheaskedthedriver,“WhydoyousaythatI’mverylucky?”Thedriver,amiddle-agedmanwithakindfaceandawarmsmile,glancedatherthroughtherearviewmirrorashepulledawayfromthestop.“Well,miss,”hebegan,hisvoicefilledwithgenuinekindness,“mostdays,Iseepeoplerushingaround,alwaysinahurry,butneverreallytakingthetimetoappreciatethesimplethings.Butyou,youseemtobelivinginthemoment,relyingonyourothersensestoexperiencetheworldinawaythatmanyofusforgetto.Youhaveastrengthaboutyouthat'srare.Andontopofthat,”hepausedforamoment,chucklingsoftly,“youhavesomeonewholovesyousomuchthathe'sbeensecretlywatchingoveryoueverystepoftheway.That'sakindoflucknoteveryonehas.”Susanwastakenabackbyhiswords.Shesatbackinherseat,asmallsmileplayingonherlipsasshethoughtaboutMark.Maybeshewaslucky,inmorewaysthanshehadrealized.Asthebusrumbledalongtheroad,shefeltanewsenseofpeaceandgratitudewashoverher.15升级版范文呈现Withtheindispensableaidofherwalkingstick,Susanpainstakinglymadeherwaytothebusstop.Thegentlemorningbreeze,carryingwithitthedelicatefragranceofthebloomingflowersfromtheadjacentgarden,caressedherfaceeversosoftly.Standingthere,thetipofherstickrhythmicallytappingontheground,shelistenedattentivelytothesymphonyofsoundsthatenvelopedher.Thehurriedfootstepsofthepassers-by,thefragmentedconversationsthatfloatedby,andtheintermittenthonkingofcarsinthedistanceallreachedherears.Nervousnessandanticipationintertwinedwithinher,causingherhearttopoundvigorously.Thisbeinghermaidensoloattemptatthisjourney,everytriflingnoiseseemedmagnified.Yet,withunwaveringdetermination,sheresolvedtoproveherselfandMarkwrong.Straighteningherpostureandtighteninghergriponthestick,sheawaitedthearrivalofthebuswithbatedbreath,hersensessharpenedtodetectanysignofitsimpendingarrival.16升级版范文呈现Sheinquiredofthedriver,“WhydoyouassertthatIamextremelylucky?”Thedriver,amiddle-agedmanpossessingabenevolentcountenanceandagenialsmile,glancedatherthroughtherearviewmirrorashemaneuveredthebusawayfromthestop.“Well,miss,”hecommenced,hisvoiceimbuedwithsincerekindness,“onmostoccasions,Iwitnesspeoplescurryingabout,invariablyinarush,yetseldomtakingthetimetocherishthesimplepleasures.However,you,byre