【课件】高一读后续写写作之无灵主语表达情绪课件

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HowtoexpressfeelingswithinanimateSubjects(无灵主语)Iwasveryexcitedbutalsoquitenervous.XieLeiwasconfusedbecauseshethoughtsheknewless.Myambitionistosetupabussiness.Successboostedmyconfidence.Leadin主语：人——有灵主语(animatesubject)主语：无生命力的东西——无灵主语(inanimatesubject)Howmanyemotionsdoyouknow?Whatarethey?积极类情绪：开心happinessdelightjoypleasure激动thrillexcitement放松reliefrelaxation热情passionenthusiasm自豪pride满意satisfactioncontentment惊讶surpriseshockamazementastonishment同情sympathy消极类情绪：伤心sadnesssorrowgrief绝望desperationdespairhopelessness失望depressiondisappointmentfrustration生气angerragefuryirritation焦急worryanxiety疲惫exhaustionfatiguetiredness害怕scarefearfrighthorrorterrordread困惑confusionpuzzlement嫉妒envyjealousy后悔regret羞愧shame尴尬embarrassment孤独loneliness

(1)他焦虑万分，肝肠寸断。_________________torehimintopieces.(2)我气的说不出话。___________________________choked

me.(3)他们对此很满意。_______________________seizedthem.(4)我惊讶得说不出话来。_______________________deprived

（剥夺）meofmypowerofspeech.Fillinthegapandsummarize句式1：描述情感时，可以使用____________+动词+其他

常见的谓语动词有：

。

tear，choke，seize，deprive，ruleWorry/AnxietyAnger/Rage/Fury/IrritationSatisfaction/ContentmentSurprise/Shock/Amazement表情感类名词一种绝望感击败了她。(despair绝望)

.一阵怒气席卷了我的母亲。

.常见谓语动词还有：

grip（控制）sb,overwhelmsb(充溢，压倒)，strikesb,hitsb,catchsb,surroundsb,comeoversb(支配，影响),creepoversb（不知不觉地产生）,sweepoversb（席卷),wellupinsb（涌入),takepossessionofsb（占有）aburst/wave/surge/sense/flushof+表情感状态的名词+动词+sb.表“某人感到...”或“一阵/一种...向某人袭来”。Asenseofdespairdefeatedher.Awaveofangersweptovermymother.mindheartfacesbodypalmvoicetearssmilemy_____wasbeatingwildly...my_____weretrembling/shaking...my

_____turnedpale...my_____grewsweaty...my_____wentblank...

_____welledupinAnni’seye.._____crumpled(弄皱)hisface...abright,sweet_____interruptedus.Matchandsummarize句式2：_________________________________+动词+其他表示身体部位/泪水/笑容的名词当主语表示身体部位/泪水笑容时，常见的谓语动词有：

。

beat，tremble，turn，grow，wellup,crumple当表示身体部位/泪水笑容的名词时，常见的谓语动词还有：lightup，brighten，linger（继续存留），crumple（弄皱），streamdown，flash我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。

.他笑得一脸皱纹。

.笑声在房间里萦绕。

.SmilecrumpledhisfaceHerfacebrightened/litupwhenIgaveherthepresentLaughterlingeredaroundtheroom1.LastFriday

witnessedanEnglishspeechcontestinourschool.上周五我们学校举办了一场英语演讲比赛。2.Thetown

boastsabeautifullake.

这个镇引以为荣的是有个美丽的湖。

3.Deadsilencesuddenlyfell.死寂突然降临。句式3.____________+动词+其他地点/时间/场景常见的时间/地点/场景类名词：silence，hush安静沉默；dusk黄昏；dawn黎明破晓；morning；afternoon；night；等等。常用的谓语动词有：witness(见证）,boast（有引以为荣的事物）;see看见；find发现；fall降临进入；等等。Ahushfellupontheclassroom._________________教室一片寂静。Thethickfogblanketedthefield.浓雾笼罩着整个大地。Anearthquakecamelikeathiefinthenight，withoutwarning.地震到来，犹如夜贼，不作预告。Therainpreventedtouristsfromenjoyingthefullmoon.雨使得游客无法欣赏到满月。句式4：___________________________+动词+其他表示自然现象的名词1.突然下了一阵雨，风停了。Asuddenshower_______thewind.2.这个城市刚下过一场大雨。Aheavyrain________

thecity.killedvisited常见的自然现象名词：sun,sunshine,moon,moonlight,fogmist,rain,earthquake等等。常见的谓语动词：blanket覆盖；come；bring；prevent妨碍，阻止；strike打击侵袭；threaten威胁/即将来临；等等。Aterriblethoughtsuddenlystruckme.我突然想到一个可怕的想法。Thesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror.想到这个情景我心中充满了恐惧。句式5:主语是表示______________的名词+动词+其他思考/行为动作常见的人物行为词汇有：sight，thought，glance一瞥，look，idea，feeling，walk等等。常见的谓语动词：overwhelm压倒；strike打击侵袭；arouse唤起；remind想起；fill...with充满...；change改变；bring带来；等等。1.Thethoughtofseeinghersonverysoon______________________________________________想到不久就要见到她的儿子，她心中感到十分快乐。filledherheartwith

greathappiness.InanimateSubjectsAnimateVerbsTime/Place/SceneEmotion

courage/luck/confidenc/panic/fright/excitement/regret/sorrow/joy…NaturalphenomenaBodypart/Voice/ExpressionActionsight/thought/glance/idea/Summarysee/witness/find/bring…desert/leave/abandon/seize/conquer/strike/hit/takeholdof/flood/wash(over)hit/blanket/come/prevent/visitbright/lightup/wellup/linger/flash/crumplebring/remind/tell/frighten/strike/hit/occur/arouse…1.(2021年全国I卷)早餐的香味弥漫在厨房的空气中。Thesmellofbreakfast_______theairinthekitchen.2.（2021年全国I卷）突然之间，双胞胎的脸亮了起来，他们的头坚定地点着。Allofasudden,thetwin’sface________withtheirheadnoddingfirmly.3.(2022八校联考)一见到他的老朋友，一种幸福的感觉席卷了他。Atthesightofhisoldfriend,awaveofhappiness______________him.Applicationfi