（高考英语作文炼句）第64篇老师译文笔记

PAGEPAGE11.考虑到竞争在我们生活中无所不在,而且竞争甚至能使我们到达成功的顶峰,那么让每个孩子在他们受教育过程中培养竞争精神是至关重要的.Giventhat

competitionpervadesourlives

(1.竞争在我们生活中无所不在)andcaneventakeusto

thepinnacleofsuccess(2.成功的顶峰),itisimportantthateverychild

developacompetitivespirit

(3.培养竞争精神)aspartofhisorhereducation.

1-竞争在我们生活中无所不在competitionpervadesourlives注意pervade是及物动词.

词典释义：pervadeUK

[pə'veɪd]

US

[pɚ-]

formal

verb

transitive

■Whenqualities,characteristicsorsmellspervadeaplaceorthing,theyspreadthroughitandarepresentineverypartofit

(特性或气味)渗透,弥漫,充满

•Thefilmisareflectionoftheviolencethat

pervades

Americanculture.这部电影反映了充斥于美国文化中的暴力.

外刊例句：HewasnotencouragingstudentstogotoAmerica,heinsists,justofferingthemanalternativetouchimuki,orthecultureoflookinginward,whichpervadesJapan.

()他坚称自己并非在怂恿学生去美国留学,只是给他们提供选择,选择去感受与日本盛行的内向文化不同的文化环境.

替换表达：competitioniseverywhereinourlives

2-成功的顶峰thepinnacleofsuccess

词典释义：pinnacle['pɪn.ə.kl]

noun

SUCCESS

成功

countableusuallysingular

■themostsuccessfuloradmiredpartofasystemorachievement

极点;顶点,顶峰

•Bytheageofthirty-twoshehad

reached

thepinnacle

of

hercareer.她在32岁时事业达到巅峰.

外刊例句：Seventyyearsago,gettingmarriedwas

thepinnacleofsuccess

forawoman.()在70年前,结婚就是女性的巅峰成就.

替换表达：theheightofsuccess

3-培养竞争精神developacompetitivespirit

词典释义：

competitiveUK

[kəm'pet.ɪ.tɪv]

US

[-'petˌ.ə.tˌɪv]

adjective

ADVANCED

■involvingcompetition

竞争的;竞赛的

•competitive

sports竞技体育•ahighly

competitive

industry竞争激烈的行业•Actingisvery

competitive

-you'vegottoreallypushyourselfifyouwanttosucceed.演艺界竞争非常激烈——想成功就必须拚命努力.

ADVANCED

■wantingverymuchtowinorbemoresuccessfulthanotherpeople

好竞争的;好胜的

•You'revery

competitive

-it'smeanttobeafriendlymatch!

你太争强好胜了——这本来是场友谊赛!•Icouldneverplayteamsports-Ilackthe

competitive

spirit

(=astrongwishtobeatothers).我可能永远都不适合参加团体运动项目——我缺乏竞争意识.

外刊例句：A

competitive

spirit

issomethingSouthKoreanspridethemselveson.

()韩国人以竞争精神自豪.

替换表达：Itisimportantthatweencouragecompetitivenessamongchildren

2.那些不知道如何有效利用时间的学生可能会在学业中遇到很大困难.相反,那些把学习任务放在首位,合理安排时间并且避免拖延的学生肯定会在成绩上取得稳步突破.Studentswhodonotknowhowtousetheirtimeefficientlyarelikelytofaceanuphillbattleintheirstudies.Conversely,thosewho

prioritizetheiracademiccommitments(1.把他们的学习任务放在首位),scheduletheirtimeand

avoidprocrastination

(2.避免拖延)arecertainto

makesteadygainsin

(3.在……上取得稳步突破)theirgrades.

1-把他们的学习任务放在首位prioritizetheiracademiccommitments

词典释义：prioritizeinBRIT,alsouse英国英语亦用prioritise1.VERB动词

优先考虑;给…优先权

Ifyou

prioritize

something,youtreatitasmoreimportantthanotherthings.

【语法信息】：Vn•Thegovernmentisprioritisingtheservicesector,ratherthaninvestinginindustryandproduction.政府将优先投资服务行业,而非工业和生产行业.

commitment

ESSENTIAL

countable

■somethingthatyoumustdoordealwiththattakesyourtime

必须做(或处理)的事情

•family/work

commitments家庭义务／工作任务•I'vegottoomany

commitments

atthemomenttodoaneveningclass.我眼下要做的事情太多,没时间晚上上课.•Childrenaresucha

commitment.照顾孩子真费精力.

外刊例句：Othersbalancepersonalinterestswith

academiccommitments.

()其他人在个人兴趣与学习任务中取得了平衡.

替换表达：placetheiracademiccommitmentsfirst

/giveprioritytotheirstudies

2-避免拖延avoidprocrastination

词典释义：procrastinateUK

[prəʊ'kræs.tɪ.neɪt]

US

[proʊ-]

verb

intransitive

■tokeepdelayingsomethingthatmustbedone,oftenbecauseitisunpleasantorboring

拖延,耽搁

•IknowI'vegottodealwiththeproblematsomepoint-I'mjustprocrastinating.我知道迟早得解决这个问题——我只是在拖延时间.

外刊例句：LawyersadvisedthecompanythatMrTrumpwould

procrastinate

withexpensivelitigation,ashehaddonemanytimesbefore.

()律师劝告该公司,特朗普会像之前处理类似案件一样,延后其昂贵的控告.

3-在……上取得稳步突破makesteadygainsin

词典释义：steady['sted.i]

adjective

GRADUAL

逐渐的

IMPROVER

■happeninginasmooth,gradualandregularway,notsuddenlyorunexpectedly

稳步的;持续的;有规律的

•Theprocessionmovedthroughthestreetsata

steady

pace.队伍稳步穿过街道.•Ordersfornewshipsarerising,afterseveralyearsof

steady

decline.新船的订单数量经过几年的持续下降之后开始增加了.•Overthelast10yearshehasproduceda

steady

flow/stream/trickle

ofarticlesandpapers.过去十年,他连续发表了一系列文章和论文.•Progresshasbeen

slowbut

steady.进展虽然缓慢,但却也在稳步向前.

外刊例句：Butsincethe19thcentury,theruleoflawhasbeenmaking,andcontinuesto

make,steadygains.

()然而,法律条例自19世纪以来,就一直稳步完善.

替换表达：toprogresssteadily

3.精通时间管理的学生会有充足的时间精力去培养和巩固他们和同龄人之间持久的关系.这些关系在学生毕业后会变成有价值的职业和商业人际关系网络.Students

well-versedin

(1.在……方面精通的)timemanagementwillhaveampletimeandenergytofosterandsolidify

lastingrelationships

(2.持久的关系)withtheirpeers.Theserelationshipscanbecome

avaluablenetworkofprofessionalandbusinesscontacts

(3.职业和商业人际关系网络)afterstudentsgraduatefromuniversity.

1-在……方面精通的(be)well-versedin

词典释义：well-versedUK

[ˌwel'vɜ：st]

US

[-'vɝ：st]

adjective

■knowingalotaboutsomething

精通的;熟知的

•Hewas

well-versed

in

modernhistory.他精通现代史.

外刊例句：He

iswellversedin

workingwithinAmerica’straditionalalliancesystems.()他精于在美国传统的人际关系体系中工作.

替换表达：specializein/excelat

2-持久的关系lastingrelationships

词典释义：lastingUK

['lɑ：.stɪŋ]

US

['læs.tɪŋ]

adjective

■continuingtoexistforalongtimeorforever

持续的,持久的,永久的

•Fewobserversbelievethatthetreatywillbringa

lasting

peace

totheregion.没有几个观察家认为该条约会给该地区带来持久的和平.•Didanyofyourteachersmakea

lasting

impression

onyou?

有没有哪位老师给你留下了深刻的印象?•Thetabletsmakeyoufeelbetterforawhilebuttheeffectisn't

(long-)

lasting.这种药片能让你感觉好一些,但药效不会持久.

外刊例句：Thegreenpaperwillassertthatchildren'swelfareisnotnecessarilybestprotectedthroughmarriage,butinsteadthrough"stableand

lastingrelationships

betweenparents".

()该绿皮书将明确：父母的婚姻无法给孩子提供不可或缺的优质福利保障,相反,其"稳定且长久的关系”可以.

替换表达：long-term/stable/enduring

relationships

3-职业和商业人际关系网络avaluablenetworkofprofessionalandbusinesscontacts

词典释义：

contact10.N-COUNT可数名词

熟人;有用的社会关系

A

contact

issomeoneyouknowinanorganizationorprofessionwhohelpsyouorgivesyouinformation.•Their

contact

intheUnitedStatesEmbassywascalledPhil.他们在美国大使馆的熟人叫菲尔.

外刊例句：AbdullahusedtoworkinAleppoandhad

awidenetworkofbusinesscontacts

inSyriaandIraq.()阿卜杜拉曾在阿拉玻工作,在叙利亚和伊拉克有着广泛的人脉.

学生错误表达：valuablecareerandcommercialrelationshipsites点评：site是"场所,网址”,不能用来指"人际关系网络”.

4.逆境可以使人们以积极的眼光看待生活,使他们更少花时间去关注无关紧要的事情,以及让他们珍惜每一天.例如,从致命的自然灾害中得以逃脱的幸存者会感恩他们能得以幸存.Adversitycanenablepeopleto

seelifeinapositivelight(1.以积极的眼光看待生活),spendlesstimeworryingabout

trivialmatters(2.无关紧要的事情),andcherisheveryday.Survivorsofdeadlynaturaldisasters,forinstance,willbethankfultohave

escapedwiththeirlives(3.得以幸存).

1-以积极的眼光看待生活seelifeinapositivelight

词典释义：

light

Awayoflookingatorconsideringamatter;anaspect：眼光,角度：观察或考虑事情的方式;角度：sawthesituationinadifferentlight.从另一个角度观察形势

外刊例句：Todaycompetitionauthorities

see

Uber

inapositivelight,becauseitbringsmoretransportoptionstocity-dwellers.

()竞争管理机构现在以积极的眼光来看待Uber,因为它给市民带来了更多出行工具选择.

替换表达：seelifeinapositiveway

/takeapositiveviewoflife

2-无关紧要的事情trivialmatters

词典释义：trivial['trɪv.i.əl]

adjective

ADVANCED

■havinglittlevalueorimportance

微不足道的,琐碎的;没有价值的

•Idon'tknowwhyhegetssoupsetaboutsomethingthatis

utterly

trivial.我不明白他因何为芝麻大的事也如此烦恼.•Sexualharassmentintheworkplaceisnota

trivial

matter.工作场所的性骚扰可不是件小事.

ADVANCED

■describesaproblemthatiseasytosolve

容易解决的,不费吹灰之力的

•Gettingcomputerstounderstandhumanlanguageisnota

trivial

problem.令电脑懂得人类语言可不是一个容易解决的问题.